[Note by Kraken] Saori Mithi

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Saori Mithi

Postby Saori Mithi on November 26th, 2012, 1:53 am

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Physical Description
Name: Saori Mithi
Gender: Female
Race: human mixed
Age: 16
Birthday: Winter 495 AV
Caste: Avora


Character Concept

Physical Description

Saori is fairly regular sized for an Inarta, standing at 5’1”, with very long Auburn hair. Her hair is straight, and often seen to be pulled back in one long braid reaching just past her shoulder blades, a feathery fringe, too short to be tied back, always sits at the front. The braid is intertwined with feathers and beads in intricate designs. Her body is fairly fit and toned, and her eyes, bigger than most, are green, with yellow peeking out from behind her pupils. Her features are soft and feminine with plump, pink lips and a dimpled chin. When angered, the glare she can give is fierce, despite any first impressions, Saori is not one to be trifled with. Saori is also physically fit. Her muscles are firm and she has the beginnings of a six pack. He legs are strong and she is a fast runner and can pack a punch.


Personality
Saori is very proud. She has an unwavering sense of composure and has a much slower fuse than many from her race. When she is mad, however, she will be blunt, and stubborn, unwilling to back down, or take anything she has said back. Normally this would be a negative trait, but Saori takes great care to say things that she means and wont regret saying, weather she is angry or calm. Saori, similar to many within her race, have been know to discard all social niceties, as this was how she was brought up. She can also be a bit distant, especially when she has a lot on her mind. One of her nervous habits is to pace, as if she can’t bare to be still for too long a time. She enjoys a good laugh, and can become a bit of a clown when she is comfortable with another.


Ethics
Growing up, Saori seemed like the least likely candidate for who she dreamt about becoming, an Endal, however, this was only because she was shy, and kept to herself as a child, not willing to showcase herself and her abilities. But as she grew, and became independent, she shared her intelligence and thoughtfulness more often, and took down the walls she put up to block people from getting to know her. Saori is very kind and values selflessness, and putting others before herself. She has strong opinions about how the town in run and will break laws, if it means doing what she thinks is right. She values trust and loyalty, and is very much a team player, as well as a talented individual. She believes whole-heartedly that, weather a person is talented, or untalented, Smart or slow, they should still be treated with fairness. She also believes in destiny, and will stop at nothing to find hers.

Likes
Saori enjoys good company and friends she can trust. She likes the feeling of knowing when someone has her back. She enjoys a good story, and her large hazle eyes would always fill with childish awe, no matter her age, at the telling of a good story. She likes to be up and moving, and does not spend much time ideally doing nothing. Even when she is ill, she will try to find something to do with herself rather than just lay in bed.

Dislikes

Saori hates people who violate her personal ethics. She has an immediate dislike for anyone that would treat a lower class like they didn’t deserve to live. She also dislikes laziness, and people who can just sit and do nothing in their spare time boggles her to no end. She hates double-crossers, and people who betray her trust. She has a dislike for anyone who bothers or badgers her when she is trying to think, or when she is trying to distance herself from others. Being an Inora, she has a loathing for anyone who would dare to hunt a bird, or harm one in any way, as she believes they are sacred.

Character History

The fact that Saori is half-human makes he a little different than others. It is also the reason Saori has a much slower fuse than many from her race, and it is also the reason why she was such a shy, and dependant child. Her situation was very unusual, something that most believed would never happen in a million years. Saori was a child, born to a victimized Dek woman, and the result of an evil human man, whom Saori had never met. Her birth was not a planned one, but her future seemed to be. She was born, pupils rimmed with gold, head full of knowledge, hair like fire and from a mother who, despite the lead up to her birth, loved her dearly. At her birth, her ears were pierced and she was given a beautiful pair of the most expensive gold earings that only the highest of the high could afford. Her mother had stolen them when they were dropped. The unknown high class member had dropped one, and when she couldn’t find it, took the other out as well, discarding it in the snow rather than waste her time digging around for the other. Saori’s mother had picked them up and given them to her as a baby. Saori had grown very close to them and they would later become all that remained of her mother and her past.

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Although her mother was functional and full of goodness, there were reasons for her social class. She suffered from anxiety and severe depression. She used to be a commoner before the human, of whom she still does not know the name of visited her modest home in Wind Reach, but once that happened she stopped turning up for work at the youth center, and she lost her job, and could no longer afford her home. She became a Dek but birthed a future Endal. It was fortunate that a kindhearted cook called Baiz gave her a job. She would work hard in his kitchens and washrooms all day long and in return he let her, and her baby sleep in his house, This way she was able to keep her until she turned eight.

Saori learnt her kindness and selflessness and sympathy and respect for people of all social statuses from looking after her mother. She didn’t talk to anyone else and often had to help her mother with the chores she was too depressed to do well enough, and talk to her when she was unstable. Saori also picked up her pacing habits from her mother.

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Saori lost her mother before she turned seven. She took her own life one day and Saori was whisked off to a nursery where she finally got up some people skills, managing to make some friends and build up her confidence.

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After she was shifted yet again, to the youth sector at the age of eight, Saori was much to old for her years. She was also determined to make something of her life. She would never go down so weak, like her mother did, she would challenge herself. Become the greatest of the great. She would protect the village atop a wind eagle. She developed a sense of pride, and became a very individual, independent young girl who devoted every second to building the skills she needed to achieve her ambition. She practiced bird keeping, she acquired a long bow and learnt archery, and learned combat, and readiness skills. She was not the best, but she was bright, and very stubborn. If she fell she would get back up. If she failed she would try again. When things got difficult, she would remind herself of her goal, and how her mother had taken her own life, and then she would get back in the game with more focus than before. People could she that Saori was not naturally the best, and they teased her when she failed, but this did not faze her. She was accustomed to working by herself, so the words of others could not touch her. All the while saori was working in the kitchens, having a job with the chef that had once housed her and her mother. She learnt a great deal of cooking, and because of where she worked, she always had enough to fill her belly.

People eventually began to recognize her hard work and skills and she was allowed to begin learning falconry at the age of 15, all the while hoping that she could one day bond with one of the great birds.


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Beaded Vinati
-Beaded Bryda
-Simple Undergarments
-Katinu
-Leather ancle boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Glass)
-Brush (Glass)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-A Pair of stolen earrings made from gold and silver (Heirloom)
-38 Pinions
Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 Pinions 100 Pinions
Long Bow -30 Pinions 70 Pinions
long Bow Arrows (40) -2 Pinions 68 Pinions
Leather Armor -10 Pinions 58 Pinions
Quiver -20 Pinions 38 Pinions



Skills, Lores, Gnosis, Languages, home


Skills:
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Practiced Languages:
Nari - Fluent
Common – Basic
Fratava - Poor

Lores:
Lore of History of Wind Eagles
Lore of the effects depression

Genosis
(none)

Home

1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table
Last edited by Saori Mithi on November 28th, 2012, 6:39 am, edited 8 times in total.
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Saori Mithi

Postby Kraken on November 28th, 2012, 2:22 am

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Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Lovely character sheet, Saori! I really liked all of the detail you went into, and how thoroughly you fleshed out your PC. Now, I just have some notes for you to address before moving on.

  • Race: Since your PC is part Inarta and part regular ol’ Human, your official race would be “Human, Mixed" because Inarta are a subrace of human. Please adjust this in your profile via User Control Panel --> Profile.
  • Birthday: If your PC is 16, she would be born in Winter 495 AV and would be turning 17 next season. At the moment, you have a tiny typo stating that she was born in 422 AV.
  • Gender: While it may seem obvious, we do ask that you explicitly include your PC’s gender in your character sheet.
  • Caste: I would recommend explicitly stating your caste in your CS. Remember – if your PC is of the Avora or Endal caste, you will need to PM Phoenix for permission.
  • History: I don't believe that Inarta discriminate against half-Inarta, so you may want to consider adjusting the following in your history:
    Saori's History :
    No one knows this, Saori, despite her Inarten looks, she is actually halfhuman. In fact, there have been many humans in her family history. This is something that was kept from her for many years, and is now something she keeps hidden. It is also the reason Saori has a much slower fuse than many from her race, and it is also the reason why she was such a shy, and dependant child. Her situation was very unusual, something that most believed would never happen in a million years.
  • Possessions: Shoe-wise, you can start with either low-slung sandals or leather ankle boots. If you would prefer to start with knee length boots, you will need to deduct the price from your ledger.
    • As well, please deduct the price of black mittens and a scarf from your ledger. You can find appropriate prices on the Price List.
  • Heirloom: Is “A Pair of stolen earrings made from gold and silver” your heirloom? If so, please explicitly state this on your CS.
  • Skills: Don’t forget to include your PC’s racial bonus in your skill set. The Inarta racial bonus is: +10 Falconry, +10 Weapon: (any one Bow of choice), or + 10 Glassworking.
    • As well, if you could adjust your skills so they are a bit more clear as to where the points came from, that would be wonderful. See “Proper Skill Setup,” below.
    Proper Skill Setup :
    After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.

    Examples

    Skills Exp Total Proficiency
    Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master
    Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice
    Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert
    Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice
    Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice
    Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice
    Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master


    SP = Starting Points
    RB = Racial Bonus Points
    XP = Earned Experience Points


    Example 2:

    Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
    Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
    Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
    Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
    Sewing: 13/100
    Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
    Acrobatics: 85/100


    Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
  • Lore: If you could stick to simply, “lore of the effects of depression”, rather than broadening it to all mental illnesses, that would be wonderful.
Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!


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