We were talking about you. I mean everything you write seems correct on the surface, but I disagree with just a part of what you say, which gets me confused you see. It just makes me wander how much rp experience you have and how much of your thoughts are good insight and how many of them are just bulls shit your making up.
That's why I wanted to know a little more about you, the writer, before looking at your character, because depending on how you answer certain questions I can formulate whether you know what your doing or not, then I can come back and give you a proper scrap post
Imass
Edit... Sorry for another edit, but I misspelled something