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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]
Nalik - The dark-blue font on the black background is a bit difficult to read... Also
...along with a smattering of colt's and foals.
I believe the term you are searching for is fillies. Foal is the general term for a young horse. Filly/colt is more specific. Ra'eesah - I must warn you about your godmodding. When you describe another character's action, you set them in a path they may not have chosen for their character. For example, when you state that Nalik helps you up, he may have been wanting to laugh at you and continue walking – speaking hypothetically here – but your post locked him into a specific action for the sake of cohesive writing. You really need to give your threading partner the chance to reply in their own way so that their character develops as much as yours does. Because you pretty much dominated interactions, I did not award any Socialization points.
Now that I have been mean, I can be nice. I really enjoyed this thread, you two! It is a lot of fun seeing how Ra'eesah struggles with her lack of Strider, and how she somehow manages to stay positive. The dynamic between Nalik and Ra'eesah is also quite adorable. Keep up the good work! Have any questions, comments, or concerns? Feel free to message me.
by Praetorian on August 3rd, 2013, 2:23 am 
