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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Carving a Niche

Postby Kirsi Winterflame on December 1st, 2013, 3:55 am

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Timestamp: 53rd of Fall, 513AV
The doorway to the workshop inspired a host of unwanted memories. Unmitigated disaster. That was the term Kirsi would use to describe her last venture into the work shop . Garob had requested she make some drinking glasses; a simple task had turned amazingly frustrating, depressing, exciting, painful and ultimately ended with nothing tangible to show for her efforts.

Today would be different.

The day prior, Kirsi had mustered up the courage to approach Garob with her plans for business ownership. The words had rushed out hurriedly, apprehensively, as Kirsi’d searched for all valid arguments in her favor. After minimal discussion, Vantha and Eypharian had come to mutual agreement regarding her generally unskilled and uninspired clay sculpting techniques. Garob had sighed a bit, looked at Kirsi consideringly, and taken precious nervous chimes – at least Kirsi had been nervous – before nodding his head slowly. Acknowledging that she did, in fact, seem to be truly awful at creating items from clay, he had suggested she simply stick to decorating and customizing pieces that he himself had already formed.

Kirsi couldn’t withhold the giggle, remembering the old potter’s nonplussed expression as she’d hugged him enthusiastically. The worry that he might simply let her go had been very real, especially when she’d told him of her intention to work only long enough to save up the mizas for her own shop. Instead, Garob had been supportive and interested, asking what she’d planned to sell, where she thought her business might fit within the city. When she mentioned the possibility of beads and brooches and jewelry, he had even suggested she look into the clothing district as a logical location.

Though she’d been startled by the suggestion, especially after her conversation earlier in the season with Rosela – a clothier and regular customer of Garob’s – it seemed there had been no double meaning. Garob either did not know or did not care that she had attempted to set up business ties with one of his patrons. She’d felt a pang of guilt at the realization, but ultimately decided not to mention that circumstance and to let well enough alone. Garob knew of her plans and was willing to let her work in her best capacity with him until she was able to branch out on her own. That was good enough for Kirsi, and she’d spent the remainder of the day grinning and humming her way about the shop.

Her good humor had carried over to this morning, and had only grown better when Garob had greeted her with a request for some carved brooches. She’d practically floated into the work room at the back of the Terra Cottage and happily inspected the rows of drying brooches on the bench. Her spirits dampened slightly when she realized the full volume of carving she would be doing this morning.

Garob had been busy in the wee hours, and row upon row of identical oval brooches lined themselves up like good little soldiers awaiting orders. Awaiting carving. There was little chance that Kirsi would get to the last of them before they had dried into hardened, undecorated forms. But, rather than despair, the Vantha simply cast about the shop for a way to keep the creations moistened enough to work with. Dropping them into water would have progressively disastrous results; eventually the clay would become slimy, sticky lumps of mess and Garob’s work would have been wasted.

Eyebrows raised, Kirsi allowed herself to feel a bit proud that she had absorbed that much information in passing. She wasn’t sure when the information would become useful again, but it was there, stored away in her mind, should she ever go completely insane and take up sculpting and pottery in her spare time.

There! Hanging from the corner of a shelf was an old scrap of cotton; soaked in water and laying atop the waiting brooches, the cloth would keep the pieces wet enough to remain pliable for bells. Well-pleased with herself, Kirsi snatched up the cloth, wetting it from the pitcher on the bench, and laying it gently in place before seating herself in front of the remaining pieces.

Sadly enough, they were all the same size and shape, inspiring very little in the way of design. Large ovals, as long as her finger and three times as wide, stared up at her blankly. No matter; Kirsi would decorate each one in a theme, something swirly and not too feminine, that would appeal to men and women equally. The challenge was one of time, and so Kirsi wasted no more on plotting and daydreaming. Removing a small chisel from her pack, she began to carve.

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Carving a Niche

Postby Kirsi Winterflame on December 5th, 2013, 4:33 am

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Starting modestly, Kirsi ran her chisel lightly around the outside of the brooch in her hand. One of the benefits of working with clay was that she could trace in her design and get a feel for the finished product before fully committing to it. Although she was carving without a hard and fast plan, the shape of the brooch itself would lend structure to the finished product. Looping curls around the border formed an abstract design that could be interpreted in many different ways. Kirsi held the barely-begun piece aloft, peering at it from every angle.

Did the shape of the curve look more like a wave or the wind? Perhaps the drifting snow? It was, after all, nearly winter and people would be looking at these elements with an eye to seasonal clothing. Or maybe it looked like nothing. Maybe it would end up as nothing more than a frothy abstract design, completely open to the interpretation of the wearer. Art didn’t have to be strict, after all, and some of the best carvings Kirsi had seen had been merely suggestive of a design. Maybe these swirls were the hair of a woman, blowing in the breeze while walking along a peaceful beach? A shake of her head and a small chuckle dismissed the last thought as entirely too whimsical for Garob’s liking. The Eypharian would want to know what he was looking at, not be subjected to Kirsi’s giddy fancies.

In any case, whimsy was unusual in the pottery work shop and Kirsi was unused to its effects on her carving. Already the carver could tell that extra focus would be required to avoid any silly missteps in the routine carving she would do. If her imagination ran away with her while carving, there was no telling what Garob would end up with.

So, with renewed concentration, Kirsi retraced her initial lines on the brooch, pressing down to imprint them fully onto its surface. With clearer definition, the lines began to resemble cresting waves; a fitting subject for a city bordered and bisected by water. For interest’s sake, Kirsi added a small hint of sun near the top, rays stretching lightly to kiss the curling strokes of water as they flowed across the bottom of the brooch. A deeper line here, a more defined curve there and almost before she knew it, the brooch was finished. Kirsi tucked it under a corner of the dampened cotton and picked up the next piece.

It really was only a matter of a few chimes to complete one brooch and Kirsi felt a moments’ gratitude. The process would still be time consuming and tedious by the finish, but there were enough ideas floating around in her mind that carving quick little scenes on the brooches would prove no great difficulty. But before switching themes, the carver elected to exhaust all variations of the current one and so began to carve more waves curling over the lower half of Garob’s brooch. Several more would be finished in this particular design, all to be placed underneath the sheltering cotton cloth until Garob was ready to fire and glaze them for sale.

It was gratifying to know that Kirsi would see these small items on the sales floor within days and be selling them to Garob’s patrons in no time. She flipped the cloth up to inspect her finished pieces and smiled slightly. It wasn’t challenging work, carving simple designs onto small surfaces, but the end result was what she’d hoped for: beautiful, but not feminine. Defined and relevant to the customers without being fussy or overworked. If Garob could be convinced to dress these in multiple colors when glazing, the appeal would be broad, indeed. Unfortunately Garob often preferred a speedy finish to what he termed ‘fluffy’ merchandise – anything not wholly utilitarian. But perhaps if she mentioned Rosela in combination with the glaze? A reasonable assurance of sales might be enough to sway him to spend a bit more time on the pieces.

Kirsi resolved to work the clothier’s name into conversation when showing Garob the finished carvings.

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Carving a Niche

Postby Kirsi Winterflame on December 5th, 2013, 4:59 am

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Flexing her fingers, Kirsi sighed quietly. Her attention was lured away again into thoughts of her future business. She would have a small shop, with living quarters above – it would mean moving out of her upstairs room here at the shop, but there would be no reason to remain once she’d left Garob’s employment. Brow furrowed, Kirsi suddenly realized that she would have to pay someone to help move her new furniture into… Wherever she ended up moving to. Maybe she should leave it behind? Perhaps Garob would like to purchase it for the next occupant? If not, he might still consent to letting her leave it there.

”Enough; carve,” she admonished herself; her voice sounded loud in the empty room, and she automatically looked around apologetically, knowing she was alone. Not for the first time, Kirsi lamented the fact that she hadn’t made any close women friends in Riverfall. Her news was fairly bursting out of her, and the carver had no one with which to gush and chatter about all the silly plans and lofty ambitions she was thinking of.

Setting down the chisel, Kirsi picked up a gouger; it wasn’t the smallest, but nearly so, and it created uniform and even ‘v’ marks with ease. ”I could always tell Jorin,” she mused to herself, applying the tool to the surface of a fresh brooch. A line of ‘v’s indented down the middle with just a few quick movements before this brooch, too, was held aloft and inspected carefully.

”He wouldn’t be as excited as I am, surely, but… I could tell him. I think I like this better upside down,” jumping from Jorin to carving practically midsentence, Kirsi flipped the brooch over. Upside down, the small chevrons looked like lines of trees, or small mountains stacked one atop the other. Reversing the piece once more, Kirsi applied the gouger in the opposite direction, ending with alternating lines of chevrons covering the surface of the brooch.

”Masculine. Definitely a brooch for a man,” Kirsi set it aside and reached for another, applying the same treatment to it. ”But men need brooches, too. Besides, Garob might like this pattern better. Oh, petch!”

Frowning as she felt the gouger against her finger, she held the brooch up to the light, noting the spots where she had gotten distracted and poked the gouger clear through the clay form. There was really no fixing it, the holes spanned the surface of the piece. Rather than wasting it, however, Kirsi carefully placed the gouger into the original indentations, pressing gently until the holes were as uniform as the chevrons. The result was… Interesting. Not beautiful, and Kirsi certainly wouldn’t be replicating the look again soon – at least not on purpose – but not entirely unattractive, either. Someone might be interested in it. She hoped.

Realizing that she hadn’t been paying very close attention for the past few chimes, Kirsi began inspecting the other pieces she had just completed, searching for wayward holes. Using the gouger to fix the ones she found, and there were several, Kirsi could only hope that the perforated pieces would be modestly decent sellers. The thought occurred to her that she was equally bad in the work shop when she was happy as when she was upset. This new business of hers could not come soon enough!

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Carving a Niche

Postby Kirsi Winterflame on December 5th, 2013, 5:49 am

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2 Bells Later
Kirsi rolled her shoulders, easing some of the tension from them. She’d been carving most of the morning, warring with her own excitement and the need to provide Garob with carefully crafted work for his shop. It had come as no surprise that bouncing with energy was counterproductive; what had been surprising was how difficult it had been to remain set to her task.

Still, beneath the cotton cloth that had been wet and re-wet through her endeavors, lay rows of freshly carved brooches ready for Garob’s masterful hand to complete. In her hand, she held the final brooch, and Kirsi was determined to make it the most beautiful of the lot. She had depicted waves and trees and wind and even vines and starry skies in the previous brooches, and was fast running out of fresh ideas, despite her best intentions.

So, staring hard at the unmarked surface of the brooch, Kirsi concentrated not on Riverfall and its citizenry, but rather on herself. A Vantha in Riverfall, newly come to a plan for her future, uncomfortable within the confines of her current role. But what to represent all that? Nothing came to mind, despite her efforts, so Kirsi switched tactics. What did Riverfall and Avanthal have in common? Vantha and Akalak? Wood and clay? It must be something that would resonate, with the carver and the customer. Barring that, it must be something that could be interpreted as such. Kirsi desperately wanted to create a showpiece, for her own pride and to thank Garob for his understanding. Perhaps that was it? Something that recognized the Eypharian and his culture instead of her own.

With care and intense concentration for the first time that morning, Kirsi began to chisel at the brooch. It would be difficult to capture the imagery she had in mind in such a small space. Slivers of clay peeled up, curling away and falling to the bench below as Kirsi searched for the image inside the clay and attempted to bring it to life. Small stones around the border, growing up one curved side and breaking away to reveal a woman surrounded by… A grin spread unbidden across her face and she began to etch in small pots around the woman. They were terra cotta, though she supposed few would know it. As for the woman – four arms spread to the sides, two hands resting on the ‘stone’ wall and two more hovering near the pots. It was small and lacking in details that would only have cluttered the surface. Facial features were all but nonexistent, only a hint of a smile and two closed eyes implying contentment, and Kirsi’s hand shook as she carved in the final curve of a pot before abandoning her tools and inspecting the finished product.

An Eypharian woman, a stone wall and a pile of pottery. It was almost more than the brooch could hold, yet Kirsi was pleased with the result. It had been careful work, taking many chimes more than the other pieces had, and demanding complete focus. Surely Garob would have nothing to complain about; on the contrary, the carver hoped that he would be pleased with her effort to acknowledge Garob’s own place in Riverfall. In any case, it was done and she was done; slipping the brooch into the rows she had fashioned earlier that morning, Kirsi set about cleaning her tools and packing them away.

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Carving a Niche

Postby Caelum on December 6th, 2013, 7:52 pm

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