Solo Swordplay for the Painfully Inept

Anna tries to get the hang on bladecraft.

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An undead citadel created before the cataclysm, Sahova is devoted to all kinds of magical research. The living may visit the island, if they are willing to obey its rules. [Lore]

Swordplay for the Painfully Inept

Postby Annalisa Marin on December 20th, 2013, 11:18 pm

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This felt strange if Anna were being entirely honest with herself, actually that was an understatement. It felt downright weird to be standing outside the Citadel like this, facing an inanimate object like it was some kind of enemy to be felled. If Amaryllis could see her like this she'd probably die from laughter, actually that would probably be true for anyone who saw Anna standing out in the cold trying to get an awkward hold on her sword. Nuit were fragile creatures and humans were far more able to improve physically, Anna knew her body could easily become a deadly weapon if honed correctly. That still didn't change how ridiculous this was.

The tall woman stood some distance away from the Citadel proper, facing one of the trees that lined the path that led down to the Harbor. Her cloak was folded off to the side and her dagger laid atop it, to be used later. Her hair was up in its normal ponytail and other than the slight dark rings around her eyes she looked the picture of good health. The Sorceress held in her gloved hands a longsword, its tip facing towards the ground and its blade sharp and ready for use at a moment's notice. Rather it would be, if Anna knew the first thing about swords or rigorous physical activity. Which she unfortunately did not.

Right. So how do I hold this thing again? She wondered, adjusting her grip on the weapon.

It felt so heavy in her hands, its weight a foreign thing to her. She dealt in Djed manipulation, not swinging around a pigsticking sword like some uncouth barbarian. With a few errant gestures she could summon firestorms, fell men by the dozens, burn entire buildings to ash and dust. Compared to that, what was in a sword that could possibly compare?

In the end it came down to self defense and the need to learn some form of combat oriented techniques. She doubted she'd ever be a swordsmaster of legend and didn't particularly desire to be such a thing, however if she was going to survive the Heartlands she needed every advantage she could gain. Magic could do much, but why waste her Djed reserves when a blade could dispatch a threat just as easily?

Anna lifted the sword up out before her, adjusting her grip so that both hands had a somewhat firm grip on the hilt of the weapon. Again the weight of the weapon caught her off guard, her arms faltering slightly as she held the blade. She supposed that this was a good first step at least, she knew what end to hold and which to point away from her. For a perfectionist such as herself her ineptness here was rather embarrassing.

Right. So I've got a good grip, now what? Do I just start swinging? She thought, glancing at the tree that was to be her target.

With a mental shrug Anna drew the weapon back and slashed it into the side of the tree, still in her awkward stance. She regretted immediately when it jarred her arm rather painfully, steel meeting unyielding bark. Not only that but her poor stance nearly caused her to unbalance herself, her body not being able to compensate for the momentum of the weapon and her arms halting so suddenly.

She grimaced, rolling her shoulders in an attempt to right herself. That hadn't gone as planned, so obviously her balance had been off. Perhaps if she tried to right her stance, something like her Reimantic stances, the question was which one to use here?

When it came to Reimancy Anna had identified that each element possessed a different style and different primary use, as such she often held different stances and gestures for each one. Earth tended to be unyielding and defensive, air flighty and evasive, and fire was powerful and destructive. It helped to keep her focus and to keep herself centered on the element she sought to manipulate. Considering that her weapon possessed a primarily offensive use it seemed best to try and incorporate her fire stance.

Anna moved her feet apart, centering her body and moving one foot ahead of the other. Her blade was brought out before her again, but this time it felt a little better. It seemed her little theory had been accurate so all that remained was to try again. She smirked as she drew the weapon back and held it there for a moment as she lined up her strike. Then she swung it in a side slash.

As before the action jarred her arms, but the tree didn't have so much as a petching dent in it. That wounded her pride a little as she had swung with all her strength that time. Her stance had prevented her from slipping up again, but still she was obviously doing something wrong. The question was, what was it exactly?
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Postby Annalisa Marin on December 20th, 2013, 11:59 pm

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Anna was reexamining her situation as she rolled her shoulders, staring at her inanimate opponent rather than focusing on her blade itself. It was the problem here at the moment, for her sword was certainly sharp enough to do the desired functions. Something about the tree was foiling her efforts to damage it with perfectly good steel and Anna intended on finding out exactly what it was. Like a commander examining a map before charging into battle Anna strode up to the tree and examined the tree closely. Her grey eyes swept over the bark and drank in every bit that she could, looking at this situation from a tactical stand point.

I'm staring at a tree like its a real opponent to be conquered. Ha! I really am mad. She thought with a slight giggle.

The point where her blade had made contact was the first point of interest for her initial assessment of the damage was actually incorrect. There was a tiny mark on the bark of the tree, two of them actually but they hardly seemed good enough for her tastes. Anna placed a gloved hand on the tiny marks, running her fingers over the insignificant wounds. Her index finger caught a jagged edge of one of the marks and ended up peeling some of the bark off.

Anna raised an eyebrow at the sight, funny her hands caused more harm than the sword had. She'd have better luck just trying to peel all the bark off of the tree for all the good her sword was... doing... her. Wait, peeling the bark.

The Sorceress placed her fingers on the other mark and peeled away a little of the bark again, a light seeming to go off in her head. She'd been approaching the situation all wrong, rather than hitting the tree head on she should try to peel away the skin. Diagonal slices rather than horizontal ones were the way to best this opponent. Wasn't it amazing what a bit of logic and reason could do for one? She was still positively insane of course but madness took many forms.

Anna took a few steps back and started to ready her sword before remembering that she still needed to adopt her ready stance. Carefully the tall woman fell back into the stance, holding the blade out before her once more. She drew her arm back and brought the weighty weapon down in the diagonal slice, her limited muscles flexing and tightening at the action. The blade bit into the side of the tree once more, only this time it peeled into the skin of the wood and caused some of it to split. This warranted a grin from her as she noted her work with some pleasure, now she could actually start to make some progress here.

The woman had some slight difficulty in getting her blade out from the spot in the tree it was wedged in, giving it several tugs before finally getting it out. Once it was out she started to swing it down again, only noting that she had fallen out of the correct stance again. So she lowered her sword and righted her legs, making certain her feet were positioned correctly.

Once she was sure of this the Sorceress drew back her blade and swung it down in the same downwards diagonal motion as before, her muscles flexing again with the movement and the rest of her body clenching up. The blade made contact and split into the wood once more with a resounding thump, some fragments of bark bouncing harmlessly off of Anna's clothes.

She jerked the weapon out again and prepared for another swing, after all repetition was the foundation of perfection in her opinion. To get truly good at something one had to really work at it over and over again until it was encoded into your very being. That had been how she'd started her magic, simply going through the easy motions until they posed no challenge and required no effort. Handling this beaten piece of metal was no different.

The tall woman drew it back again and swung it again, definitely starting to feel something for her efforts. She wasn't exhausted yet but her arms were starting to feel the effort required by just keeping proper hold on the sword. Not only that but she always needed to be aware of her stance, as getting thrown off balance would prove rather humiliating.

She jerked the blade out and readied herself again, swinging down diagonally again after doing a double take of her stance. Had it actually once been this difficult for her to utilize Reimancy? It was actually a little hard to believe considering her power at this stage neared legendary heights. Starting a new discipline was certainly difficult.

The question was how many repetitions should she do for this little session? Thirty more sounded like a reasonable number to her, just enough to loosen her up and get her used to the idea of swinging around a sword. Now doubt her arms would feel like lead at then end, but such was the price of perfection and for training. This was but a new field of study to her, one that would be learned well enough soon.
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Postby Annalisa Marin on December 21st, 2013, 2:59 am

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The Sorceress jerked her blade from the wood once more, her arms feeling rather tired at this point as she struck again and again in the same place by the same means. She wasn't even at twenty strikes and she was feeling tired, she didn't know how those muscle bound mercenaries did it all day. Anna preferred to use magic over weapons of convention, it was far more deadly anyway and certainly more destructive. Perhaps tomorrow she'd have a fun little rampage on the Prairie, kill a few beasts and make Riyanna's job just a little bit easier.

The blade came up again and with gritted teeth it was brought down on the tree, wood chips flying as her breath started to get a little more heavy. Right, that was twenty strokes only ten more to go at her count which was a blessing. She jerked the blade back out and noticed that she'd moved out of the proper stance once again, so she adjusted herself before drawing the blade back and striking downwards again.

Her arms were starting to wobble slightly and each strike was taking more and more effort but she wasn't going to just stop, her pride wouldn't allow it. Either her arms were going to go sailing away from a swing or she was reaching thirty, there was nothing else that was acceptable. Admittedly, learning to draw Glyphs with her feet would be kind of a pain, but still she wasn't letting up.

As she yanked it out she thought of a fun little game, imagining that the tree was someone else and then imagining murdering them for various discretions. When she brought the blade down next time it was on Daren's neck in her mind, gods what she wouldn't give to have his blood spray across a room. A manic grin was on her lips as she imagined his demise with sadistic relish. Celeste, for all her intelligence, was stupidly naïve by being uncomfortable with such things. Violence could solve a great deal of problems and while there were many Anna had harmed that didn't deserve it, Daren deserved every single torment and then some.

She jerked the blade out and brought it down again, this time on that petching hypnotist that had tried to kill her outside the Temple of Uldr. She hoped whatever fate he had met there was unpleasant beyond imagining, it would serve him right for being stupid enough to go to the god of Undeath. The god of weaklings, of filth, of the pathetic. The very nature of undeath was a weakness, though its disruption of the natural order served Rhysol. In that she could tolerate it.

The next strike was on that stupid petching slave Osd Messer, and as she did she hoped that he'd made the weapon. What a rich irony that would be, the creator killed by his own creation. Anna loved when things came full circle, and when he made the mistake of stepping outside of the Forge she would be waiting. No golem's would save his miserable hide next time.

She jerked her blade out again and stroked downwards in vindictive rage as she remembered those petching golem's. The woman vowed to create a spell strong enough to turn those automatons into scrap metal, or banish them to the Void. Whichever came first. This whole sword thing was actually very therapeutic as she reflected on it. She'd need to do this more often. There was just something about feeling a blow land on something that felt really good.

Finally Anna reached thirty strokes of her blade and stopped, knowing that she could do no more without tearing a muscle. She dropped her sword and started massaging her shoulders, her arms feeling like leaden weights. By Rhysol, this might be therapeutic but it made her feel petching terrible. Her breathing was heavy and she could feel a light sheen of sweat starting to form. She hadn't even been at this that long, some warrior she was shaping up to be. Ah, well, everyone had the niche in life. Some were good at swinging a sword, others were good a creating firestorms with a flick of their wrists. To each their own.

The tall woman sighed raggedly as she picked up her sword and looked at it, thinking seriously to herself. Was this a path that was meant for her, that of a warrior? Probably not but was it even worth the effort when she could master the meta-physical so much easier? Something to ponder when she was less tired perhaps. Best to simply head back to the Citadel and reflect on this matter there.
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Swordplay for the Painfully Inept

Postby Strange on January 20th, 2014, 5:33 am

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This was quite a nice little thread. I love how you came at that weapon exactly like a wizard. Absolutely no attempt to be normal about it Anna just dove right in and almost fell flat on her behind. Then you took your reimancy and you applied it to good effect. Quick, smart thinking from Anna there. She might never be a warrior but she'll always be innovative and dynamic at least.

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