Ragathorn

[Ragathorn]

Character Name Appearance Race: Human mixed with Jamoura Gender: Male Age: 413 years old Birthday: 1st day, Winter, 100AV. Birthplace: The Spires Appearance: An unusual mix by most standards, Ragathorn was born from a Jamoura male who bread with a human/Jamoura mix (who was likely the offspring of a similar couple). This leaves his heritage to be mostly that of Jamoura and only a small percentage human. This unique mix created a towering 7'6" man, hairy and primitive in appearance but with a slightly brown flesh as opposed to the blackish flesh of his ancestors. Character Concept His movements and mannerisms mostly come from his human side, while his knowledge and love of learning come from his Jamouran background. He is very humanized in his dealings and speaks the common language very fluently. While the irony is not lost on him, he still holds some resentment toward humans for their destruction of the forests and attacks on his ancestors so long ago but this is more of a joke to him than anything. This bit of resentment may cause him to chuckle when a human declares his love for the woods or speak up when a human declares themselves peaceful. Ragathorn has a love for gardening and specifically dealing in plant/flower genetics. He also enjoys fuels and combustibles. After growing up in the Spires being, outcast for his human side, Ragathorn went searching for a new place to call home. He chose Mura because of their love for all things art and gardening, as well as, their fairly temperate climate and available living space. Character History We all know the tale of the Jamoura, killed by humans in the early days before the Valterrian. At some point, during that time, it's expected that a human female and a male Jamoura fell for each other and birthed a mixed baby. That mixed child grew up as an outcast of the Jamouran society but, because they are a caring group, they still nourished it. This mixed child is thought to be Ragathorn's ancestor though, he's never been able to find this person or his parents as they left him for society to raise. His caretakers had informed him of his father and his mother, though, so he has a small knowledge of them. He grew up learning like his fellow Jamourans but outcast, as his ancestors had been, for his mixed blood Language Fluent Language: Common Poor Language: Kontinese Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Gardening 20 20 Competent Plant genetics 10 10 Novice Wilderness Surival 10 + 10RB 20 Competent Knowledge of combustibles 5 5 Novice Trade with Tourists 5 5 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of Mura Geography Lore of History of Jamoura Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple White Shirt -Simple Black Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Brown Trench Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Trowel of an unknown extremely hard metal brought from the Spires Housing Location: Mura House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Which I'll be heading over to the Taviasa City Officials to request. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• Human, Mixed any combination of the following; Human, Benshira, Drykas, Inarta, Svefra, Vantha, or other Human, Mixed. If it is of any other race combination that is possible it would be a "Mixed Blood" child. Please correct this on both your CS and your Account Race.
• As per the Mixed Blood it is not possible for Jamoura to breed outside of their own race. Please correct this throughout all of your CS, including your history and concept.
• Novice skills are 1 to 25 EXP, whilst Competent are 26 to 50 EXP.
• Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.
• The skills; "Knowledge of combustibles" and "Trade with Tourists" are not valid skills. The first would be broken down into separate lores, whilst the other is a mixture of several skills that would aid in trade processes. Please look at the Skill list for possible idea alternatives.
• Plant genetics is also not a skill, however a close relation would be the skill Botany.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch

[Ragathorn]

Thank you for checking out my sheet crosspatch! I'm hearing all you're saying and will fix that all ASAP. My only concern is the race. My concept was that he would be sort of an educated humanoid ape look. I was going to go straight Jamoura until I noticed that they are very slow due to living for long periods of time. I'm kind of stuck at this point. Do you have any thoughts on how I could make this happen or should I go ask in a character development post?

[Ragathorn]

Gotta say though, you're doing to Ragathorn exactly what society has done to him! He can't help it he's different! Haha

[Ragathorn]

In all seriousness though, I am kind of broken hearted with this. I basically have to drop this whole character if I can't get this worked out. I should've read the mixed breed race page I didn't realize there was one...