Solo Ablation

A ice melting expedition doesn't go as planned

(This is a thread from Mizahar's fantasy role playing forum. Why don't you register today? This message is not shown when you are logged in. Come roleplay with us, it's fun!)

The westernmost tip of Kalea, Wind Reach is home to an amazing group of people and their giant eagle mounts. [Lore]

Ablation

Postby Azira on January 19th, 2014, 8:27 pm

Image

39th Winter 513AV

It was unusual for her to volunteer for something but Azira needed a change. She was beginning to feel as if she could do nothing for the city. Her attempts at hunting had been pitiful, what little she had caught not fit for much and it wasn’t like she caught game with any sort of frequency. So she’d decided to do something that would definitely have results. Volunteering to fetch water had seemed like a good idea to her and she had some free time so why not actually do some good for the city. Wind Reach needed clean, uncontaminated water. The huntress knew only too well what the contaminated water could do and she’d been lucky; she hadn’t died. It seemed like the perfect opportunity to give something back to the community.

The huntress had headed out early with a group of Avora and Chiet to the nearest glacier, a group of Endal giving them a lift out to the site. The air was crisp, fogging the breath of the Inarta as they set about positioning their equipment. Fires were set up and coaxed into being a short distance from the wall of ice, holders for pots were set up so that they could be held over the fire for melting. Empty containers were placed near the fires ready to receive the melted water. Pickaxes were handed out to every member of the party so that they could chip away at the glacier. They had come fresh from the forge, undirtied by mining as of yet but when the ice party were done with them, they’d be heading to the mines to replace the old tools. Chipping pieces of ice off and melting them had been deemed the most efficient way to get water and so that’s what they began to work at.

The pickaxe felt heavy and strange in the hands of the huntress. Her arms were strong from archery and from lugging kills around but yet it was a struggle for her to use the tool. Azira couldn’t help but wonder how the Dek and Chiet working in the mines managed to swing the heavy tool for bells at a time. Each swing made her muscles scream in agony, each hit into the ice face sent shockwaves and pain up her arms and into her shoulders. It wasn’t long until swinging the pickaxe was an effort. Her arms were going to be killing her for days afterwards and it was certain that by the end of it all she’d be absolutely exhausted. The painful and exhaustive task made her think of what Lavira had told her about the miner Dek and it was only now that she could understand the Endal’s words about the harsh conditions for such Dek. She could easily imagine them just sleeping wherever they dropped, too exhausted to do anything else.

Her struggle with the pickaxe must have been obvious because a neighbouring worker came to talk to her to offer a suggestion.

”Uh no offence or anything but you look like you can’t manage this,” he called over the din of metal striking ice. ”Maybe you’d be better off starting the melting before your arms drop off,” he suggested, smiling. Azira gave him a sour look. She didn’t like the idea that she was incapable of such labour and she didn’t want this man to point it out as fact. A glance behind him showed that he’d made a fair dent in the ice already, pieces of ice piled at the bottom of the glacial face where he had been working. He was only panting a little bit as if the work wasn’t a great effort for him. He was young, only a few years older than herself perhaps and he was obviously strong from whatever work he usually did. The other workers weren’t doing quite as well as him but they were certainly doing better than the huntress.

The young woman’s face softened and she let out a sigh of resignation, dropping the pickaxe from her aching grip. Rubbing her arms to try to take some of the soreness out of them, the teen managed a small smile for the young man. ”Thanks, I think your right, unfortunately,” she told him, stepping around him to retrieve the ice from where he was working. He moved to help her, gathering the ice together and piling it in her arms. He really had made a good dent already. ”Ah don’t worry about it. It’s hard work and there aren’t too many able for it. The others are struggling a bit too,” he explained, nodding in their direction.
Finding her arms too full to carry anymore, the Avora moved to the fires to dump off the ice that she had already. Dropping the ice a short distance from the fire, she picked up more manageable bundles of it to place in the pots, cramming the frozen substance into each pot until no more could fit. When all of the ice had been gotten rid of, she returned to the glacier for more. The young man had obviously been awaiting her return because he hadn’t set to work again yet, instead grouping the ice chunks together to make things easier for her. When she drew level with him, she found a hand thrust out for her to shake and she took it without thinking.

”I’m Noren by the way,” he offered along with the handshake. His grip on her hand was firm but not tight as they shook hands. ”Azira. Their hands separated, his falling to his side as the huntress set about gathering again. He quickly bent to help her, something that she resented in a way. Did he think her incapable of picking ice up as well? Noren also seemed very eager to make conversation, something that Azira hoped he’d get out of soon.

”I’m a blacksmith in case you hadn’t guessed. That’s why this isn’t too hard on me. I’m used to hammering at things. I thought you might have recognised me actually but I guess not.” The huntress had nearly dropped her load, her eyes finding his slowly. A blacksmith. Like Lorthen would have been. She had to ask, she didn’t have a choice in the matter.

”Why would I recognise you?”

x
4 out of 5 active threads

Image
User avatar
Azira
Prodigal Daughter
 
Posts: 923
Words: 907811
Joined roleplay: August 31st, 2013, 3:43 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Human, Inarta
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 3
Overlored (1) 2014 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)
2013 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)

Ablation

Postby Azira on January 19th, 2014, 8:30 pm

Image

The blacksmith laughed. It must have been her expression, though she couldn’t imagine how she must look. She probably looked as if she’d seen a ghost.

”Don’t look so worried, it’s not like I stand out that much and I doubt you’d have noticed me. You were pretty distracted when you used to hang around. You used to have a thing with that apprentice, Lorthen. I thought it was you but I wasn’t sure until you told me your name. I thought you two were very... attached,” Noren explained. He was talking about it as if it was a perfectly normal conversation for them to be having. The huntress certainly didn’t think it was normal, or pleasant and it was conversation that she wanted to avoid at all costs.

Hurrying away with the ice that she had, Azira tried to quash the urge to cry. Nobody knew about Lorthen and her. After what had happened between them, she’d been careful never to mention him again, to avoid places where she’d used to go with him. It was as much to stop the ache in her chest that would arise in such places as it was to allow people to forget her. More than three years should have been long enough but apparently it wasn’t. Someone had remembered, someone had made the past return. And he’d been so casual about it.

Emptying melted ice into containers, she refilled the pots with fresh ice to melt and tried to keep herself busy as long as possible. She didn’t want to go back to where the blacksmith was. She’d spent long enough running from her past and she wasn’t going to let it catch up with her just yet. So instead, she moved up and down the line of workers, collecting their ice as the cacophony of pickaxes sounded upon the glacier.

Noren wasn’t to be easily avoided however, as after half a bell, he carried his own ice over to the fires while she was working there. By the time she registered his presence, it was too late to make her escape so she pretended not to notice him instead.

”If I said something to offend you before then I’m sorry.” His tone was one of uncertainty and confusion but she wasn’t going to give him an explanation for her behaviour. He continued on, obviously hoping for some sort of response. ”If it was because I mentioned Lorthen... well, you two were close, I didn’t think anything strange about bringing it up. I’m sure you know he ended up a Dek but I suppose you must know what he is too. That’s why you don’t want to talk about him. I mean, if I was you, I wouldn’t want to admit that I went out with someone that sick...”

Azira stared at him blankly. She had no idea what he was talking about. She’d never thought the word ‘sick’ was applicable to him at least not until what he’d tried to do to her. What was Noren on about? Did he know what had almost happened to her? The idea that he might know made her stomach churn and the blood drain from her face. He must have realised his mistake because the blacksmith tried to rectifying by telling her to forget it. How could she forget what he’d just said? The ice was forgotten for the moment, the substance having melted already and begun to boil with no one to see to it.

”What do you mean by ‘someone that sick’?” the teen asked hoarsely. The blacksmith looked a bit uncomfortable as if he was reluctant to talk about the subject more. The way she looked at him might have spurred him into his explanation.

”Well, there were always rumours in the forges that he liked women, a lot. Nobody would have thought anything strange of that except that his interest was a bit extreme. I found him one day in the forges after work was done. I’d forgotten something and I found him with a Dek girl. Nothing wrong with a bit of Dek diving but... he was more interested in her pain than in her body,” he mumbled, looking uncomfortable. ”And once, I was in the Infirmary for something, don’t even remember what now, but there was a girl there, an Avora who I’d seen Lorthen with before. She’d been drugged and... tortured but she had no idea who’d done it to her. I could make a guess but I had no proof and to be honest, the petch scared me so I didn’t report it. He had it coming to him when he had his accident... Sorry, maybe I shouldn’t have...” he trailed off but Azira was already moving away, getting away from where the others were working.

Sliding down a snowy slope, the girl didn’t get much further. Falling to her knees, she threw up, staining the snow before her as her stomach rebelled. Such a thing to tell her! It was something that should have remained secret, something she would have been better off not knowing. Lorthen had always seemed so lovely and caring but that made the fact that he was really a monster worse. Such a dark and horrible thing to tell her. In a way though, she realised that she’d had a lucky escape. Very lucky.

x
4 out of 5 active threads

Image
User avatar
Azira
Prodigal Daughter
 
Posts: 923
Words: 907811
Joined roleplay: August 31st, 2013, 3:43 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Human, Inarta
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 3
Overlored (1) 2014 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)
2013 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)

Ablation

Postby Azira on January 19th, 2014, 8:31 pm

Image

When the teen was able to stomach it, she clambered back up to where the fires were. One of the Chiet women was seeing to the overflowing pots that Azira had left unattended. Sheepishly, the huntress set to helping her, hoping to busy herself enough to forget. The Chiet didn’t try to speak to her, something that Azira was glad of though she didn’t know if it was because the woman was quiet or if she was wary of speaking to one of the Avora. It didn’t matter to her anyway, she didn’t care.

A shadow passed overhead and the huntress glanced up to see a Wind Eagle fly over the work site. The Endal were busy hunting but their eagles were keeping an eye on those working by the glacier. Avalanches were a very real danger and so they were making sure they were safe. The bird swooped above them and then was gone, back to its own business. She watched it enviously as it faded from view. It looked so carefree flying up there while she was left damaged and weighed down by bitterness. She could never been a Wind Eagle of course like that Kelvic that she’d met but she could maybe be an Endal someday. That was a ridiculous idea and opened up another avenue of pain, one that had been well traversed by her. She would never achieve the status of an eagle rider and so it was a hopeless and worthless dream for her to have.

The cracking sound shattered her thoughts, her eyes turning to the glacial face. A pickaxe had hit the wrong spot in the ice and had wedged deep, cracking the ice above and below it. The crack was still growing, the ice splintering and groaning as the workers watched. All work had stopped and the one who had made the fatal wound had only managed to take a few steps back before becoming transfixed by the sight. It was something that they couldn’t look away from though perhaps if they’d had some sense, they might have tried to get away from what was obviously an ominous sign. But the web of hairline cracks and the way the newly exposed ice glinted in the light made them stare.

When the cracking stopped, the groaning didn’t. It was more of a growl, a menacing sound that increased in volume to more of a rumble. That was when the snow started to ooze over the glacier. Ooze would suggest a slow movement, something that it certainly wasn’t but to them, it seemed to take an eternity for the first wave of snow to clear the top and spill down the sides. When that happened, everything seemed to speed up. It was then that the spell was broken and panic set in, the Inarta scattering, running in different directions as they tried to escape the avalanche.

Azira was no different. She’d had the advantage of being a further away from the ice face when the snow came over. Some of the other Inarta were buried instantly under mounds of white powder but some of the luckier ones had reacted fast enough to actually try to get away, getting swept down the slope instead. The huntress got caught in the slide as she was tumbling down the slope she’d slid down earlier. Somehow, she remembered to curl into a ball to protect herself but still snow pressed down on her, surrounded her, seemed to squeeze and suffocate her even as it continued to move.

Then it stopped.

x
4 out of 5 active threads

Image
User avatar
Azira
Prodigal Daughter
 
Posts: 923
Words: 907811
Joined roleplay: August 31st, 2013, 3:43 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Human, Inarta
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 3
Overlored (1) 2014 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)
2013 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)

Ablation

Postby Azira on January 19th, 2014, 8:33 pm

Image

The end of the movement brought no relief, only silence. The full weight of the snow settled on Azira who immediately began to panic. She was curled in on herself, unable to move more than a few inches without pushing against dense white powder. She could squirm but she couldn’t unwrap herself, couldn’t dig herself out, find air. Breathing was suddenly impossible. She was suffocating, gasping for air, the air in the small space not enough for her. Her lungs were being crushed, no air could get in and she was going to die, the young woman knew it. She was going t die in that little hole. She’d freeze in there, suffocate, starve, she wasn’t sure how but she would die.

Thoughts fired in her head, disjointed, nonsensical. She couldn’t manage to think straight, didn’t know how to think straight. All she could do was panic, panting under the snow to try to get oxygen into herself. It was an effort to try to regain control of herself, and eternity of choked breaths before her thoughts could assemble into some sort of coherency. Could she definitely not move? Wriggling did little to help, loosening a bit of snow from the wall of material packed around her. She couldn’t unwrap herself, certainly couldn’t dig herself out.

How would someone know where she was? She could hear nothing, had no idea if there was even anyone working to dig people out of the avalanche. An eagle had only just passed over the site just before the avalanche so surely no one would be checking on them for awhile yet. Unless the raptor had still been near enough to see. She prayed that it had.

She prayed to Morwen to have mercy, to not claim Azira in her icy embrace but the Queen of Winter could be cruel and the huntress doubted that she would take pity upon her. It was all that she could do though, pray to individual gods in the hope that one of them would choose to save her. Syna, she asked to melt the snow, to save her. Ivak, she hoped would disturb the snow so that she would be free but her prayers seemed to fall on deaf ears. No god would intervene to save her. She had no idea how long she was curled in that position, no idea how long the cold was seeping into her bones, her joints, stiffening them, freezing them.

When snow shifted and air seeped in, the young woman had no idea what was happening. She was exhausted and oxygen deprived and didn’t know that someone was digging her out. When snow rained down on her face, on her body and then began to clear above her, the Avora could only stare blankly upwards at the wet nose that was thrust in her face. More snow was moved and then strong hands grabbed her and lifted her upwards. Her eyelashes fluttered as wind brushed her face and awareness came back with it. She was safe! She was going to survive!

x
4 out of 5 active threads

Image
User avatar
Azira
Prodigal Daughter
 
Posts: 923
Words: 907811
Joined roleplay: August 31st, 2013, 3:43 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Human, Inarta
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 3
Overlored (1) 2014 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)
2013 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)

Ablation

Postby Azira on January 25th, 2014, 6:16 pm

Image

It had begun to grow dark and so she’d been buried for quite awhile. A large fire had been built and there were a few people gathered around it. There were more people moving around on the snow with a few dogs, searching for survivors. The group around the fire was a small one and she wondered if they were the only ones who’d been dug out so far or if there had been others who hadn’t been so lucky. It didn’t bear thinking about but it was hard not to when she was deposited in the circle of warm light with only the faces of the survivors to stare at.

A blanket was wrapped around her and she hugged it to her gratefully, glancing around to look at her saviour for the first time. A man in his 30s, she’d say, older than Kovac but pure Inarta, the hair on his head a vibrant shade of red. She offered him a weak but grateful smile and then he was gone to help in the rescue efforts once more. The huntress watched him go, her eyes drifting away to take in the busy scene as a whole. So many people scurrying about working to dig people out with gloved hands or being dragged about by dogs sniffing eagerly at the snow. There was nothing that Azira could do to help though, she was still too cold, too tired and stiff. She’d be more of a hindrance than a help if she tried anything. Everything seemed to be well organised though with a few Endal overseeing the whole operation so hopefully the others would be rescued quickly.

The young woman had no idea how many people might be buried, no idea how many people there had been to begin with. There had been a number of work parties carried out to the site, countless Avora and Chiet. There had been so many volunteers, many of them glassworkers who had been bored in the Forges or who felt useless there. How many of the skilled Avora had there been? How many had been lost? The idea was frightening to think about but she found herself worrying about it. She had never afforded glassworkers much thought but now she knew one and she knew how bored Syveris had been in the Forges, how useless she’d felt. Could she have volunteered for this work without Azira knowing? Yes, she easily could have done so and the huntress wouldn’t have seen her here.

Now the huntress turned her eyes towards those that had been rescued, examining them to see a familiar face. There was no guarantee that Syveris was even at the glacier in the first place so if she wasn’t around the fire then there was no need to panic but yet still she worried. When she spotted the familiar features, recognisable even in shadow, the teen sighed with relief and made an effort to move to the girl’s side.

"Syveris!”

x
4 out of 5 active threads

Image
User avatar
Azira
Prodigal Daughter
 
Posts: 923
Words: 907811
Joined roleplay: August 31st, 2013, 3:43 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Human, Inarta
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 3
Overlored (1) 2014 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)
2013 Mizahar NaNo Winner (1)

Ablation

Postby Memento on February 10th, 2014, 3:08 pm

Image
GRADES
Azira

Skill XP
Body Building 1
Interrogation 2
Observation 3
Socialization 1

Lore:
  • Lore of Self: Not suited to work with the pickaxe
  • Noren: Blacksmith
  • Lorthen: Sadist
  • Avalanche: Curl into a ball for protection
  • Avalanche: Burried alive

Notes: What a terrible secret this was, and it must have been truly a shock for Azira. Interesting thread, I really liked the way you included information about Lorthen.


If you have any questions about your grade, or think I've missed something, please PM me.
User avatar
Memento
Made of memories
 
Posts: 45
Words: 21717
Joined roleplay: January 26th, 2014, 7:17 pm
Location: Wind Reach
Race: Staff account
Office


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests