Flashback [Clawstone Estate] Origins

Bael recounts his life story to a ten year old Jay.

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This lazy agricultural settlement rests on the swampy shores of the Middle Suvan at the delta of The Kenash River. The River's slow moving bayou waters have bred a different sort of people - rugged, cultured, and somewhat violent. Sprawling plantations of tobacco and cotton grow on the outskirts of the swamp in the rich Cyphrus soils, while the city itself curls around the bayou and spawns decadence and sins of all sorts. Life is slower in Kenash, but the lack of pace is made up for in the excesses of food and flesh in a city where drinking, debauchery, gambling, slavery, and overbearing plantation families dominate the landscape.

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[Clawstone Estate] Origins

Postby Jay Ackina on April 2nd, 2014, 7:39 pm

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Day 13 of Spring in the Year 500 AV


“Sword up! Don’t let the point dip when you are in your guard stance!” Bael’s voice rang out as Jay circled him warily. Jay shifted his feet, forcing his legs a little wider so he could improve his balance. Sweat covered his brow, the wooden replica of a long sword, wavering in the air, arms straining from swinging the weapon. Another sword whipped through the air and cracked hard against the ten year old’s weapon. It jerked to the side and before Jay could recover, Bael’s wooden sword was pointed at the boy’s throat.


“Dead.”


Jay glared at him, ignoring the sword at his throat, panting heavily. “Not fair! You are way stronger than me!” He batted the tip of the fake sword away from his face with his weapon and walked away from the arena, next to the Ackina Planation Estate, towards a bench and a pitcher of water. He leaned the sword against bench and poured himself and Bael a glass. His trainer strode across the arena towards the boy, seeming as fit as ever, no sign of exertion showing. Jay offered the former mercenary the cool beverage and the man accepted it without a word. Bael sat down on the bench and looked at him coolly.


“Combat isn’t fair, Jay. Someone will always have an advantage over you. The key is to figure out where their weakness is and exploit it. If someone is stronger than you, then make up for it in speed and agility. If they have a longer reach, then figure out how to get inside of it. It’s all an elaborate game and each match, the rules change. You have to figure out what they are.”


Jay nodded still peeved but listening closely to his instructor. A mischievous light danced in his brown eyes as he tried to hide a small smile from giving him away. “How would someone beat you?”


Bael grinned, “That’s for me to know and you to find out. Now hop to, we are going to work on your footwork.” He stood and got ready to head back into the arena but Jay stopped him. Bael turned and saw a look he couldn’t quiet decipher. The boy seemed to struggle, a look of puzzlement on his face. He finally looked up, his thoughts rushing out in a torrent of words, innocence shining from his soft, brown eyes.


“Bael, where did you come from? How did you learn to fight? You haven’t told me anything since you came here…” Bael looked at the boy, his words tugging at the man’s heart. Over the past three years since his forced captured, the small boy had wormed his way into the older man’s life. The boy didn’t have any parents, none that he knew of at any rate. Bael nodded slowly, setting down his sword and sitting down on the bench. Jay, seeing his teacher was going to share a story, sat down in front of him excitedly.


“Three years ago, I had been on a long twenty day journey to Kenash. I was a mercenary back then, riding atop of my horse, exhaustion plain on my face. I had been hired to protect a caravan of Konti slaves bought from a man named Haev Provedan. who ran a slaving organization in Riverfall called the Rattling Chains. I had been hired there to travel along the coast with the Kenash slavers and protect them and their “wares” from any threat that may spring up along the way.” Jay watched the man’s facial expressions, the distant look in his eyes as he recounted the events. He interrupted the man before he could continue.


“Mercenary? What’s that?”


Bael blinked, brought back from the past. “They are swords for hire to protect people or hunt people down.” Jay looked at him in wonder, images of adventure and mystery flashing through his mind. “Did you kill anyone?”


Bael looked at him solemnly, debating on whether or not he should be truthful. Something inside him told him to be honest with the boy. "Yes, Jay. I have. But you need to understand something. Human life is sacred. You aren’t a god, you don’t get to chose who lives and dies. That kind of power can ruin a person. Remember that because one day you will be forced to take a man’s life.”


Jay stared at him, his innocent face meeting the mercenaries gaze. Bael looked at him, his heart strings tugging again because he knew that the innocence would one day be stripped away from the boy. All he could do was prepare him for it. He shook himself from the thoughts and continued his story.


“My hand rested on the hilt of my long sword, my other holding the horse’s reigns as the animal plodded along the dirt road behind the convoy of slaves. The small group was entering a clearing up ahead and would be making camp for the evening before continuing onto the last leg of our journey to Kenash.”


“I was lost in thought as a cry of pain rose up ahead and I was jerked from my thoughts. I looked up and saw one of the slavers hitting a small slave woman across the back with a small pouch of something, most likely soap. I knew it was a popular form of beatings among slavers because it inflicted pain without leaving any bruises on the victim. I spurred my horse forward and forced the animal into a canter.”


“I had seen that sort of behavior before, slavers mistreating their slaves when the owners weren’t around. It was a practice I didn’t tolerate. I brought the animal to a stop directly in front of the slaver. The man was forced to take a step back, startled, as the animal loomed over him. The slaver turned towards the mercenary, a look of fury upon his face as he was interrupted.”



Jay watched as a dark look came over the man sitting in front of him, anger starting break through his calm demeanor. The boy had never seen Bael angry before. He wasn’t sure if he should be scared or in awe.


“I swung my leg over the horse and dropped to the ground, slinging the reigns over the horse. ‘What is the meaning of this? Why are you beating this woman?’


“The slaver glared at me, a large scar stretching across his face. ‘What business is it of yours? Back off you petching shyke.’ He turned and lifted the bag, intending to continue beating the woman but I whipped out my hand and wrapped around the man’s cocked wrist.”


“’I don’t think so,’ I said. The scar faced slaver looked up incredulously at me and then down at his entrapped wrist. The Kenash man tried jerking his arm free but couldn’t. The slaver’s face turned bright red with rage.”
Jay interrupted again, questions swirling in his little mind.


“Why was he hitting her? Was she breaking the law?” His inquisitive eyes peered up at the former mercenary.


“No, Jay. She wasn’t. Some people, like this slaver, are just very mean people and like to hurt others. Just because one person has power over another doesn’t mean they are given permissions to abuse it or them. Don’t forget that. You need to stand up for those who can’t defend themselves, okay?” Jay nodded and Bael continued his story.


“The slave spat and growled as he tried to free himself. ‘Let go of me or I will have the rest of our guards rip you to pieces. You’re here to protect us not to tell me what do to!’ Spittle flew from the man’s mouth as he continued to try and wrestle his hand free from my grip.”


“’I am here to protect you and your slaves. Even if that means protecting them from you. Just because you are in charge of them does not give you the right to hurt them. They are people just like you and me.’ I released his grip from the slaver and crouched down beside the Konti who lay cowering on the ground and I offered her my hand.”


“’Are you alright? That man won’t hurt you anymore. Here, let me help you up.’ The woman looked up from underneath her arms shyly, not sure whether or not to trust me. She hesitantly took my hand and allowed me to help her up. After I made sure she was okay, I rounded on the slaver who had been beating the woman.”


“If I see you touching her or any slave like that again, you will regret it. I promise you that.’ I left the thinly veiled threat hovering in the air and without another word, turned, swinging one leg over my horse and kicked the animal in the sides, coaxing it forward. The slaver with the scar across the face yelled back at me angrily.”


“Watch your back! You’re going to be sorry! I promise you that!’ I ignored him, not bothering to respond and kept moving towards the camp ahead as the slaver kicked the dirt angrily. At that point, I should have expected retaliation but for some reason it didn’t even cross my mind.”


"Later the next day, we were about to enter the town limits when a small group of Kenashians met us. One started to call the non-citizens together and was going to tell us something about the rules but was stopped as the scar faced slaver whispered something in his ear. I wasn't close enough to hear what was said but it seemed like some sort of agreement had been made when they shook hands. The man seemed to change his mind and waved us non-Kenashians away. The slaver grinned at me and I knew something was up. I just didn't know what."



Bael sighed as he recounted the tale. Jay leaned forward on his hands, eager to hear what happened next. The former mercenary stood. “Alright, time to get back to training.”


“No! Not yet! What happens next?! Please, please, pleeeeease! Just tell me a little bit more.” Bael turned and looked at the young boy. He could almost see the adventures that the boy spun in his head, the glorified sword fights, the hero saving the day. If only real life were that simple. The man relented.


“Okay fine. Just a little bit more…”

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[Clawstone Estate] Origins

Postby Jay Ackina on April 2nd, 2014, 9:52 pm

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Jay looked at his combat instructor. They had been together for two years. The little Ackina boy realized how little he actually knew about the man. He was enraptured by the tale the gruff looking figure spun. He rested his small chin on his little hands, eyes wide. The story Bael told of his life made him want to jump up and run around waving his sword in the air. But he knew the mercenary would scold him and tell him that a sword was not a toy. It was for protection. He sighed inwardly, but secretly planning to sneak off later and play with it when Bael wasn’t looking.


Jay’s attention was taken back by the large man as he rested both of his hands atop of the pommel of the wooden sword, point digging into the grass. Bael began to recant the next part of his story to the mesmerized child.



“A month later after that incident, I was in my bed in the Traveler’s Inn. I had been spending the last month enjoying a break from my constant work, especially after the lengthy journey from Riverfall.”


“I wasn’t very comfortable in Kenash. Had I been able to choose a different location to spend my free time I would have jumped on the chance. But travelling alone is dangerous and not worth the risk of leaving just because I felt like it. My best bet was to get another job in the city that would take me somewhere else. But so far there hadn’t been any caravans heading out, none that I knew of at the time.”



Jay interrupted him with his usual curiosity, trying to pump the instructor for information. The man was rarely open about his past life and Jay wanted to know as much as he could before the warrior changed his mind. “Why don’t you like Kenash?”


Bael looked around; making sure no one else was in earshot. Seeing that it was just the two of them, he leaned in, lowering his voice. Jay, sensing something important was about to be said, wiggled closer.


“Don’t repeat this to anyone okay? Here’s the truth, I am not a fan of slavery. I understand the principle of it but the idea of stripping someone’s freedom away from them is wrong. I didn’t realize how vital it was for the land owners to own slaves. I’m frustration by how some of the Dynasty families treat their slaves. I believed that all human life is equal, titles and power is manmade. It should not dictate how one human treated another.”


Jay sat listening quietly, struggling to understand what the man was saying. He had grown up with slaves around him his entire life. He saw nothing wrong with them. Morrison told him that without slaves they could not have nice things and without them, they would be living in the forest with the bad Rujaro. Jay knew that sometimes the slaves were beaten if they broke the law but he had never seen them treated harshly on their plantation. Maybe Bael was talking about other families. Jay, nodded, that must be it.


The ten year old thought he should tell one of the Ackina members what Bael had said but he promised the former mercenary that he wouldn’t. And Bael always told him to be a man of his word. He wanted to impress him so he would stay quiet. Bael, oblivious to the thoughts swirling in the little boy’s mind continued his history.



“While I was getting ready to go to bed, I was disturbed by the sound of a knock at my door. I was confused because I’ve never had visitors before and I didn’t meet anyone while I was in Kenash. I got to my feet and crossed the room. When I opened the door, the scar faced slaver was waiting for me.”


“I recognized him and I was instantly wary of why he was here. ‘What do you want.’ I said. It was more of a statement than a question as I looked at him with distaste. The shifty way the slaver looked at me caused my stomach to churn uncomfortably. Something wasn’t right.”



Jay couldn’t help himself, completely caught up in the story. “What was it??! Why was he there??“ Burst out of him and he quickly clamped both hands over his mouth in case Bael decided to stop telling the story because of his outburst. Bael smiled a little but continued on.


“The slaver looked at me and said, ‘Ahh you recognize me. Good. This will be much more satisfying now.’ I saw the look of triumph on his face and knew something was about to happen. Before I had the chance to back up towards my weapon, the scar faced man stepped back and the room filled with four, armed men. They quickly overpowered me and wrestled me to the ground, binding my hands. They pushed me out of the door. The slaver lifted a hand, bringing the men to a halt. He shoved his face into mine and sneered.”


“I told you, you were going to pay. You are being charged with breaking the law.’ He smirked at my confusion. ‘All non-citizens have thirty days to remain in the city. After that time, you must either become a freeborn or leave the city. If you don’t do either you get enslaved. It’s in the law, weren’t you told?’ The slavers snapped his fingers and feinted surprise. ‘Ooh! That’s right! Looks like someone forgot to mention that little detail to you. That’s what happens when you piss off the wrong people.’ It all came flooding back to me. The slaver had made a deal with the greeter of Kenash. He was supposed to inform us of the law but didn’t because the man was paid off.”



Jay saw as Bael shake his head, frustrated with what happened. Jay understood the Kenash law. They were taught them all from a young age. But those same laws didn’t actually apply to him because he was Dynasty born. They lived by their own set of rules on their plantations. Jay felt a little bad for Bael but couldn’t think of a way to comfort him. Bael sighed but continued.


“The slaver grinned evily at me and addressed the four men who held me from escaping. ‘Take him to the Braking Room and soften him up a little. Then clean him up and throw him in one of the stalls.”


Bael looked at Jay solemnly. “I don’t know if you know much about the Braking Room, but that’s where slavers take the unbroken slaves and beat them. They don’t like defiance and if they can, will try and beat it out of you.”


Bael said it so grimly; Jay felt a shiver run down his back. He had never heard of the Braking Room before. He wondered if that's where some of the man's scars came from. But Jay scoffed inwardly, no one would want to buy a broken slave. If he hadn’t trusted Bael, he would have assumed he was lying.


But Bael didn’t lie. Something had to give. Jay wrestled back and forth between what he had learned growing up as a Kenash and what this outsider was telling him. He wasn’t sure who to believe. So he pushed it away for now.



“The slaver growled at me, “Welcome to your new home, slave. Next auction, you’ll be meeting your new family. And that is how I began a slave for the Ackina Dynasty.”


The slave sat quietly on the bench. The story of Bael’s life rocked the little Ackina boy. He would never had believed any of it to be true if he hadn’t seen Bael fight and got to know him to back up his story. Morrison had bought the former mercenary three years prior but only after the slave had proven to be reliable, did the Head of the Plantation reveal why he had purchased him.


Morrison wanted Jay to become the family Bounty Hunter. But he needed training first. That is where Bael came into play. When Jay first met Bael he was intimidated by the gruff looking man. His bulky physic, rock hard from years of training and combat made the young boy shy away from him. But when Jay learned Bael would become his combat instructor, his interest was sparked.


Now, two years later, Jay adored the man. After he had gotten over his initial fright, he had learned to trust and admire his tutor. While Bael was only a slave, Jay began to think of him as more than just another one of the slaves. Bael had become his guardian, his mentor, his friend.


And he wouldn’t have had it any other way.

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[Clawstone Estate] Origins

Postby Jay Ackina on April 7th, 2014, 4:31 am

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“Alright, story time is over; back on your feet. We are going to work on your footwork. It’s horrid.” Bael said gruffly as he stood to his feet, wooden long sword gripped in his hand. Jay sighed but got to his feet as well. His thoughts were awhirl as he processed all that he had heard. Bael’s skill with a sword, his ability to track and extract information from people, it all began to make sense. He had done all that for a living.


The ten year old quickly returned to the arena, looking at Bael in a whole new light. The boy knew the man was more than he first appeared. He may have been a slave but he had a spirit of defiance about him that Jay admired. None of the other slaves acted the same way as Bael did.


The mercenary’s sword whipped through the air and rapped the boy across his fingers. Jay yelped in pain and dropped his sword.
“Hey! That hurt! I wasn’t ready!” Jay scowled at Bael, his fingers throbbing painfully.


“Then stop daydreaming and focus.” Bael swung his fake sword around him and Jay growled menacingly, his high pitched voice making him sound more like a whining dog. He held the sword with both hands in front of him. In a burst of motion, Jay lunged forward, sword swinging through the air.


Bael met the weapon with his, wood clashing together with a dull thud. He knocked it to the side and swept the blade through air towards the boy. Jay brought his sword up to deflect it and attempted to step backwards out of the way of the strike. But he stepped back onto his other foot and tumbled to the ground. Before he could get up, he looked up to the tip of the sword pointing at his throat.



“Dead.”


“I tripped.”
The sword point was removed and Jay jumped to his feet. Bael eyed him, his green eyes boring into the youth. He brought his wooden sword up again in a defensive position.


“Like I said, we are going to work on your footwork. Keep both feet shoulder width apart, knees bent and weight on the tips of your toes. Never put more weight on one foot rather than the other because you need to be able to pivot at any moment. Practice pivoting when I attack.”


Jay concentrated hard. He spread his legs just as his instructor told him, bouncing slightly on his toes. Bael swung his sword diagonally through the air, in a downwards motion, marginally slower than one would in an actual fight. Jay watched as the blade descended through the air towards him. He needed to get under the blade.


The boy transferred his weight to the ball of his right foot and shoved off the ground with his left, ducking as he dodged the blade and retaliated, swinging his mock sword in an upper cut motion. Bael snapped his sword up, catching the wooden sword on the edge of his, easily knocking it to the side.



“Very good. You always need to stay vigil and watch your opponents body language. That will give you a split second to know where the attack will be coming from prior to the actual strike. If you are fast enough, you can out maneuver him and hopefully, beat him. Now again.”


Jay brought the wooden sword back into a guarded stance, waiting for Bael to attack. The boy narrowed his eyes, watching the man’s body for a hint as to where he might strike next. He glanced down at Bael’s feet and then up at his arms, waiting for the slight shift in his stance to indicate his next movement. When it came, Jay was ready.


A split second before the former mercenary moved, Jay saw the man’s shoulder tense and the muscle in his forearm twitch. The boy transferred his bodyweight to his left foot just as the sword lashed through the air. He shoved off the ground with his right foot and dodged the sword point. Jay gripped the wooden longsword with both hands and swung it, intending to smash it into Bael’s stomach.


Bael jumped backwards, once again avoiding the blow but instead of continuing the fight, he lowered his weapon and nodded once.
“I think you are getting the hang of it. Between a long winded story and our previous workout, I think that’s enough for one day.” The slave turned and walked towards the bench and threw back the rest of the water in his glass before walking back towards the estate.


Jay watched him as he departed, mind churning. The Ackina had began to see the man in a new light, after hearing his story, how he had come to Kenash and been enslaved. Yet somehow, the man remained unbroken. Very few people could claim that. The boy wondered what else the former mercenary held under that armor of gruffness and hidden strength.


Only time would tell.

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[Clawstone Estate] Origins

Postby Stefan on April 8th, 2014, 12:08 am

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Name:Jay Ackina

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Lore:
  • Combat: Practicing with a wooden weapon
  • Combat: Exploiting weakness
  • Mercenaries: Swords for hire
  • Bael's story
  • Some people are just mean
  • Swords: They're not toys
  • Kenash: Laws
  • Kenash: The Braking Room
  • Longsword: Footwork



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