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Strengthening the Body and Weakening the Arm

Postby Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 17th, 2014, 3:45 am

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5th of Winter, 507 AV

"Again boy! You'll never prove yourself a man to the others, not if you can't even take one punch from little ole' Zo'os," the blue armed swordsman spat as he rolled his shoulders, bastard sword held leisurely in his bristling stone hand.

Raien gritted his teeth in response, as he hauled himself off the ground, hefting the massive blade Zo'os had loaned him, up with both hands as he straightened his legs. Staggering as he willed all three to form a somewhat shoddy stance.

It wasn't that he thought his mentor was torturing him on purpose. The Vizerian had always been a hardass when it came to training, and even while the generally sudden switch from father-figure to strict master was always a little unnerving, for Raien the effect had greatly diminished these last few seasons.

No, it was the fact that the man held nothing back, ever. Zo'os fought him like he was any other Isur, trained or otherwise. Though while this was related to the cause of his irritation, it wasn't in of itself the source.

Rather, it was the fact that he wasn't any other Isur that irked him to his core. It was the fact that every single blow Zo'os dealt out, not only hit, but left overwhelmingly large bruises, that caused him no small amount of mental anguish. He was being recognized as an Isur, treated like one. It was everything he'd ever wanted, strived for.... and he couldn't keep up, he, his body, his bones, they just couldn't take it.

"But I have to," Raien thought as Zo'os approached. The burly man closing the gap as if he were a famished apex predator, graceful, confident, knowing, and ready to spring upon his target at a moments notice. "My master, Zo'os, he believes in me. I have to!"

Raien charged, and while it wasn't nearly as graceful as Zo'os's own approach, it was fast, and it was most certainly aggressive. Aggressive enough it seemed, to unnerve his teacher, who quickly repositioned his massive legs into a defensive stance. Barely moving in time to catch a downswing of his student's blade with his own steel.

"He hadn't expected such aggression from me," Raien realized with a self-satisfied smirk. He hadn't hit, but he'd gotten closer this time, closer than he'd ever gotten before. Still.... Zo'os was smiling as well. Raien noted. Before his teacher startled him further, by beginning to laugh a throaty crescendo, as he started to speak.

"With a temper like that," the older man began, removing his right hand from his blocking blade in a flash. "We might make a man out of you yet," as the words tumbled from his teacher's mouth, Raien barely caught the movement in time. Willing his own right arm away from his blade's hilt, in a frantic rush to intercept his mentor's fist, trying desperately to protect his otherwise unguarded ribs.

Forearm and fist assaulted each other, flesh collided violently with flesh, and dense bone cracked against it's comparatively flimsy counterpart. Raien let out a startled gasp as he absorbed the brunt of the attack, and as he saw what he saw.

He'd managed to block the fist, but he'd done exactly what Zo'os had wanted as well, he realized, his crystalline eyes growing wide as the other man's blue arm, and sword began to move in tandem almost immediately after Raien blocked the punch. Pushing down,and finding little resistance with only one mortal arm supporting it, Zo'os easily knocked his pupil's sword aside with his own. Sending Raien's left arm and blade flying behind him, upsetting his stance, and leaving him entirely open to retaliation once more.

And yet, his opponent was not done. Apparently determined to take advantage of the openings it had helped create, Raien found that the very same hand he had just deflected, came flying up in an uppercut, connecting with a staggering force with his chin. Tipping his head back, and sending pain through and without the base of his skull. Right before he felt another, even harder hit slam into his helplessly defenseless chest.

And there it was, a single combo was all it took. The young-half Isur was sent spiraling into the cold stone beneath him. Bastard sword flying far out of reach, as his head cracked against the hard floor.
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Strengthening the Body and Weakening the Arm

Postby Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 17th, 2014, 5:45 am

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"Wake up lad we're hardly done yet," Zo'os yelled. Raien's mind came to with with a start. Body following soon after ,stiff, soaked, and confused, his chest shot up momentarily as he gasped both of out surprise and to take in air. And then eased, somewhat less panicked, back down to it's previous position.

Before, a few ticks having passed, and Raien given time to wake somewhat, crooned up his pained neck, wide blue eyes darting around simultaneously as his head began to rise. Scanning and glancing first over the half-washed off bootprint on his chest, and then up to a bucket-wielding Vizerian clansman.

"You've got to be kidding me," said the young, pained, and obviously disgruntled half-breed, as he sighed and laid his head back down. The small movement sending surprisingly potent spasms of pain through... well everywhere.

"You'd do well to bet that I'm not," Zo'os replied, slight-aggravation plain in his voice. As he tossed the bucket aside, and began closing the few feet between him and his pupil.

"Wait, I can get up on my own!" Raien gasped, arguing halfheartedly as his blue-armed, and much burlier teacher lifted him up by his wrist, and a few moments later, his shoulders.

Of course, deep down he knew he shouldn't have even said that much, he should have gotten up the first time his master had demanded it. But his bruised and cold body just wouldn't permit him to do it alone. And of course, there was more than a little aggravation dancing through and without his mind, directed towards Zo'os's actions of only ticks ago, of which, had been the source of said chill.

"For how long has it been tradition, that the pupil rebuke the teacher?" if the aggravation in Zo'os's voice had been questionable earlier, it was all too obvious now. As he shoved Raien's blade into his hands forcefully, nearly sending him and his dazed limbs a few steps back.

Raien saw and heard the aggravation easily enough. He wanted to apologize, but his youthfull pride and his admiration for Zo'os forbade it. His master might take it as weakness, he couldn't be sure, he couldn't risk it. Couldn't risk losing his standing with one of only two people to ever treat him, and make him feel like he belonged. Instead, he simply dropped into a forward stance, steadying and readying himself for either offense or defense, as his sore and slightly numb arms raised his hefty blade right out in front of him, and up to nose level.

"Come now boy, you barely lasted two chimes when you weren't chilled to the bone and numb to your core," Zo'os said raising his eyebrow. Nevertheless Raien noted with sleight confusion, that his instructor's hand was drifting quite a bit closer to his blade's hilt.

"Better to warm yourself up and to drive the laxness from your muscles, indeed I want to see fifty push ups, Still even as he was spoke, the determination and aggravation in his voice was being replaced by something else.... Pride? Admiration? His hand was nearly touching his sword's pommel now, having inched closer when Raien gave no hints as to moving to obey.

It was all the approval Raien needed. Before he began to approach his master once more, each step serving to quell the aching in his legs as blood flowed anew through them, and bolster his determination. This time however, it was the Teacher's turn to strike first.

And as Zo'os ripped the massive blade from without his scabbard. He did just that, jumping quickly, and moving forward with impressive speed derived from his bristling muscles. Before swinging rapidly at Raien's left side.

The Half-Breed was quick to throw up a guard however, one aimed at deflecting the blow and providing room to counter. And yet, at the last moment Zo'os halted the blade unexpectedly, and instead redirected his momentum to spin and come around Raien's back end and straight into his blind spot. And promptly, and before he even had a chance to widen his eyes, Zo'os slammed the face of his sword against the back of Raien's knee, essentially flipping him.... again.

"One hundred push ups," Was all Zo'os said as he sheathed his blade, and turned to face away from a sprawling Raien. Disapproval seemingly plain in his voice. And yet, the young Half-Breed was almost sure he caught the faintest hint of a curling smile on his teacher's face, as he began moving over to one of the stone benches nearby. And yet still, if there ever was one, it was gone by the time the blue-armed Isur turned back around to sit and take a rest, a rest which Raien would not be granted...

He shrugged mentally, as he began to flip over and 'ease' into push-up position. As, dismal aside, he swelled with pride, from a possibly imagined act.
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Strengthening the Body and Weakening the Arm

Postby Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 17th, 2014, 2:47 pm

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Regarding post LengthI'm going for a quick "training montage" feel, which is why I'm diverging so drastically from my usual 800-1,000+ word count quota.

"Still ninety-eight Raien, that one doesn't count!" Zo'os bellowed, pushing his foot and digging it down even harder into Raien's back. The overwhelming soreness that consequently ripped through his arms and shoulder blades, nearly toppling him.

"Believe it or not," the Half-Isur gasped, lungs heaving under the pressure of simply breathing, let alone speaking. As he attempted to bend his shaking arms once more, at his master's behest.

"-I think you've put on weight," harmless, and joking sarcasm was more than evident in his voice. As his now glistening arms straightened, and his shaking elbows locked audibly.

"Keep the bend boy, keep the bend," was the only reply Zo'os gave, all but ignoring his pupil's jest-filled rebuke. Instead, deigning to increase the weight he was applying to Raien's back. This time, actually sending the boy flat into the stone, his arms flailing out to the side as he was pushed down. Withdrawing a resounding "ughmph" from the Half-Isur.

"Maybe hardass was an understatement," Raien thought, as Zo'os tucked his foot underneath his bruised ribs, and flipped him over to lay on his back. "A big one."
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Strengthening the Body and Weakening the Arm

Postby Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 17th, 2014, 9:44 pm

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"Down!" Raien maneuvered the overly cumbersome sword in a powerful arc, to collide with the dummy's head. Determination and exhaustion all too plain on his hot, soaked face, as he breathed out. The hand-and-a-half bounced off the bucket that stood in place of a skull easily.

"Left!" the blade moved over to the side, Raien catching it mid-bounce, and then thundered down clumsily in a diagonal swathe, ripping free select pieces, of the cloth sack that made up the target's 'torso'.

"Middle!" steel skirted across the middle of the dummy once more, but this time in a straight left-to-right manner, further wrecking the target. "Zo'os is going to have to replace this thing." Raien thought as he finished the swing.

"Keep your stance Raien," Zo'os thundered, fully into his relentless Master persona. As he kicked Raien's foot back with his own, nearly toppling the boy.

"Petch, can't he let up for one minute," the Half-Isur thought but didn't dare say, as he barely caught his burly blade. Bringing it back in front of him, before it could complete it's path off to the right of the dummy.

"Down!" Zo'os repeated, drawing a raised eyebrow from his pupil. They hadn't even finished half of the seven-angle cycle yet? And yet, hesitation aside, Raien maneuvered his weapon above his head, ready to follow his master's orders regardless of his own thoughts. Figuring, that the blue-armed instructor was probably just trying to make sure he was paying attention, rather than simply following muscle-memory alone.

The large sword began to thunder down in the all-too familiar pattern once more. As Raien took a small step forward with his lead foot, intent on cracking the bucket 'head' this time.

If he was looking for power, he most certainly got it, the blade was splitting the air around it as it neared the mid-way point in it's arc. Creating a distinct whistling sound as it flew down. Perhaps he had sacrificed some control, but that hardly mattered, not when the target wasn't sentient, and couldn't possibly retaliate. Besides he was enjoying this particular swing, eagerly anticipating the almost therapeutic reverberations, that would course through his sword and arms as it cracked against the hard helmet-like wood.

Indeed, he was so engrossed he hardly noticed the flicker of movement at his side. Hardly noticed anything besides him and his target.

"Block!!!" Zo'os stepped between him and the training post, moving as a deceptively quick blur, screaming the startlingly command straight into Raien's ear as he passed by it.

"By Izuridn's grace!" an overwhelming pang of anxiety, fear, confusion, and panic shot through, without, and up Raien's spine reaching the base of his skull in no time at all. Permeating his entire being mere half-ticks after, as he attempted to halt the blade, pulling back with both arms, and tilting his hands. Trying to slow a weapon that was already all-too set in it's course, one he knew he couldn't stop.

Though apparently, Zo'os wasn't all too sure he couldn't. As Raien was fruitlessly trying to stop his bastard sword. The blue-armed bladesman was already reaching out, grabbing his student's wrists, slowly the sword swing slightly. Before sending an eerily familiar kick into his chest.

Both Raien and the blade were sent flying in opposite directions. Him clumsily and helplessly back. The weapon cutting through the air aimlessly, flung past Zo'os's shoulders and over the dummy by gravity alone. Colliding with the stone floor, before even Raien had hit it, producing an audible series of clangs as it slide to a halt right in front of the east wall.

"Sloppy, lazy, and pointless. There's hardly any reason in training, if your not going to take it seriously! That swing would've gotten you killed against a skilled opponent... You'd be dead boy!" the man was borderline screaming now. Obviously angered by his pupil's violation of some unwritten rule of his training... But there was something else in his voice, something vaguely reminiscent of worry and sympathy.

Of course, Raien noticed none of it. Too occupied was he by feelings of shame and anger as he leaned himself up, too tired was he of being thrown to the floor every time he thought he was doing well. Too tired was he, of being made to look a fool in front of the only father-figure he'd ever truly had... Even worse was, it was by the hand of the very same figure, that he was made to look as such.

"I'm done." Raien stumbled to his feet. Walked gracelessly and slightly stooped over to, and out the stone archway that led up to the main parlor of his aunt's house, all the while holding the large bruise on his chest with his left hand. Barely making it up the stairs, before hurrying out into the dark streets of the Pitrus citadel. His master never moved to stop him, nor to follow him, in fact the man simply began to pick up the flung sword as the Half-Isur left.

"He's done too," Raien thought with a grimace, squinting in the dim light of the cold streets. As his boots found purchase against the hard stone. "At least for today..."
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Strengthening the Body and Weakening the Arm

Postby Brandon Blackwing on July 22nd, 2014, 11:26 am

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XP Award:
  • Endurance +1
  • Bastard Sword +3
  • Socialization +2
  • Observation +2


Lore:
  • Zo’os: Strict but fatherly Mentor
  • Being treated like an Isur also means training like an Isur
  • Push-up Punishment
  • Zo’os’s Training: Only for the Toughest to complete!
  • Bastard Sword: Basic Moves
  • Zo’os: Relentless Tutoring Machine
  • Zo’os’s “This-Is-Sultros!” –kick to the chest
  • Stop Flooring Me Yahal-damnit!

Notes:
Hahaha! Nice thread Raien, I loved how you portrayed Zo’os, his attitude and tutor-ism. Also, Raien’s annoyed thoughts in between were very amusing, in fact the whole thread was. Usually, the amount and strangeness/ creativity of the lores I give reflects the amount of fun I had while reading and grading, and I can assure you that I enjoyed this one! Great work!

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