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Pit Sweat

Postby Nathaniel Ankah on June 29th, 2014, 2:28 am

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21st Day of Spring, 509AV
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Sunberth throve on its anarchy. It was organic, in its way: the sheer gravity of the strong preying on the weak, the mood of The Mob holding the greater powers in check, the complete lack of regulation by anything less than brute force and wary alliances of opportunity... it all just worked. Many an economist had gone mad wondering how that was, but there it was, there it survived.

Al's Tankard was a good example.

Anywhere else in Syliras and it would have been reported, raided, shut down and (if the authorities were smart) burned down as an indelible stain best removed and forgotten. It's beer was either piss-weak or could blind you. The whores were past their prime or nothing more than bait for thieves. And the basement, well...

Al boasted that more cripples were made on his premises than in a leper colony. Yes, he was that kind of bastard.

Men and often women beat each other senseless or to death in the rough ring lined by spikes under the drinking floor. Fucking on top, boozing in the middle, battle in the bottom. That was what Al had set up. He put the word around that he'd host the fights; he had a couple of his kids work as bookies; he had local muscle work the door and everything... flowed.

No regulation, save for the weekly cut to whatever gang was lording over the neighborhood that season. Or week, as it was fast becoming after the Daggerhands fell apart. But that was just the price of doing business, and in return, Al got some extra clout just in case anyone wanted to welch on a debt or tear up his place.

Ruthless. Amoral. Unstructured. Profitable. Everything Sunberth was, encapsulated in one roaring, stinking shithole.

Nathaniel wasn't thinking along those lines when he walked in the door, though. His mind was focused on just one thing: doing what he had to do. The pace of the tavern barely slowed when he stepped in. A few halfway-familiar faces turned to him and offered a nod, or just a surprised eyebrow-raise. Six years, nearly. Six years since he left the ganger life behind.

And judging by the crude ink carved onto all the flesh around the place, Al's was still a good place to find wannabe street daemons.

Well, no shyke, with what goes on downstairs...

"Well, fuck me running..."

"I'd rather not, Al, but thanks for the offer."

Male pleasantries. Delicate flowers of conversation, aren't they?

Al scratched under his stubbly beard and shook Nate's hand after squashing some wriggling thing his fingers found. Hard brown eyes searched that stoic face for some reason for this appearance, unexpected and portentous after... well, years.

"What brings you back into my little paradise?"

"Paradise?" Nate said as a tankard was placed before him by a serving wench with eyes far too old for her face. "That what this is?"

Al hurumphed and gestured around with arms long run to wobbling fat, taking in all above and below in the gesture.

"You kiddin'? Gash, booze, dice and brawling, all under the same roof. There's peoples who'd think this was the fuckin' afterlife, boy."

"Name two."

"... you always were a smart cunt."

Nothing but a smirk greeted that challenge, and some nearby eavesdroppers were surprised... and disappointed. Nothing better than seeing a fight break out, and Nate used to be such a dead cert for seeing that. But he swallowed Al's bait without taking the hook, along with a mouthful of fucking awful booze... and shrugged.

"Feel like teaching me a lesson? Let me in the pit tonight."

Al blinked a few time. "You're serious?"

"When it comes to getting seven shades of shyke beaten out of me? Always."

Al settled back into his seat by the fire, eyebrows atop his brow, mouth a little open, like he'd been told the world was going to end tomorrow. "Well, dip me in sugar and throw me to the faggots... wonders never cease. What about you going all straight and narrow, hmm?"

"Needs must."

Al could tell the kid wasn't going to give him anymore than that... and he'd learned hard over the decades that the less questions a man asked in this own, the longer he lived. He sipped his own brew - actual ale, not the monkey piss he sold the punters - and savored it, thinking, plotting, planning...

"I might have an opening for you tonight."

"Gimme a shot to put some money on myself, same as in the past?"

"A'course, lad." The old man's face split into a leer, exposing holes and gaps and yellow and black and things that seemed to shrink from the light and hide in rotted gums. "I think this... is going to be very good for both of us..."

Oh. Well. That's reassuring.

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Pit Sweat

Postby Nathaniel Ankah on July 4th, 2014, 3:22 am

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There was none of the pantomime one would expect; none of the grandiosity. In such dank and dismal and banal settings, such a thing would have been unseemly even for Sunberth. Say what you will about the denizens of that blasted city - they were piratical, selfish, untrustworthy and fickle - but they always stared reality in the eye.

The drunks and wretches and bloodlusters were there to see two men beat each other into oblivion, and that was what they got.

Al didn't even bother introducing Nate and his opponent when they leaped down into the pit, mindful to avoid the jagged spikes and nailed hammered into the walls. Maybe five yards wide and roughly circular, half-a-dozen could have fought in it comfortably. With just two, and under the harsh glare of mess of candles strewn over them, Nate felt like they were specimens under a doctor's glass.

Give the people a show, remember?

The big man turned his eyes from the braying rabble to the man opposite him. Younger, but almost as large. Muscles hewn from hard work and gouged with ganger ink. Some similar symbols were on a clutch of shouting fans behind him. His mates, most likely, pushing him on to victory.

Man fights harder when he thinks he'll looks bad in front of his mates.

Both were stripped down to their breeches and nothing else. Even tape over their knuckles was eschewed as foppery. Al promised blood, and that was best supplied with bare bone and splitting skin over them. Nate weighed the man with his eyes. The way he rolled his shoulders and his head on his neck; stretched his legs and gave the empty air a flurry of punches, a blur of violent flesh.

Tough one. Young and hungry. Like fighting your past.

He gave a grunt that was lost in the din. Found Al through the crowd, pen jabbing out to find gamblers and scribbling down wages, amounts, odds. Nate unlimbered his purse and tossed it up to him. It was quick work for the tavern keeper to count it up... twenty-five holds pieces... and then raise a questioning eyebrow.

Nate managed a smirk in the pit, enough for the answer Al wanted.

Who the petch do you think I'm putting it on?

"Allllllllll right!" Al's voice cracked as it rattled the wooden rafters, the stone and dirt of the basement. The crowd still for a few ticks, letting him do away with the unnecessaries. "Nate...?" Nathaniel nodded and that was enough for Al, who turned his gaze to the younger fighter. "Davey?"

Far more noise and acclaim for the sound his name. Obviously a popular fighter, most likely with wins under his belt. But Nate could see it hadn't yet gone to the lad's head. Davey acknowledged it with a raised fist and nothing more, not taking his frowning face from Nate's own.

Boy's serious about this.

The crowd roared, but they were far away. Nate was the same. He was there, but his hopes, his purpose, the drive to put his body through this... that was all with a woman who would hate to see him there. A woman growing weaker, dimmer, who could only be helped by money they did not have and could only be found here.

Nate drew on that as he filled his lungs. Tightened his fists until the knuckles whitened and clenched his jaw. He did not know what whim or necessity put Davey in his path; he only cared that he was, and he would be moved.

"GET TO IT!"

Davey closed the distance fast. No nonsense, no goading, just his guard up until he was close enough to-

-unleash a hurricane of punches that battered themselves against Nate's own forearms, staggering him on his feet-

Wait for it, he won't waste his energy for long.

-before pulling back and aiming a low, vicious uppercut under Nate's guard, hammering into his gut a tick after Nate tightened his stomach-

For all the good it did. Two steps back and his lunch ready to jump out of his throat, digestion be damned. Another one followed it, but now Nate's lowered guard took it, exposing his face-

-and he slid to his side, avoiding the haymaker that could have knocked him into darkness. Rudimentary tactics, maybe, but he had speed, and strength... and no hint of exhaustion wracked Davey's body. Nate, on the other hand?

Been too long out the pit. This is folly-

This is what's necessary.


Davey followed his haymaker up with a short jab and Nate turned it aside with his right, left jabbing out like a piston-

-once, twice, hammering into Davey's open face, crunching flesh and cartilage but annoying him more than hurting him. A snarl of rage split that youthful face and Nate backed away, point made, wisdom gleamed.

Got an ego in the brawl, though. Doesn't like being hurt... humiliated.

As expected, Davey went all out in retaliation. Jabs and hooks buffeted Nate like he was a ship on high wind, then knees, battering his stomach and ribs, a lucky kick rending his left thigh senseless, making Nate hobble away-

It'll numb up. Give it time. Survive until he opens up again.

Easier said than done.


Davey proved that was so moments later. He wasn't about to give Nate any room or chance to catch his breath. The old man had already proved he had some life; better finish him fast before he could up his game. He swung wide, a feint, forcing Nate back, but used the momentum from it to spin him around, leg coming up-

-slamming a perfect back kick into Nate's stomach.

Don't go back!

Doubled over to stop his reeling, Nate felt the longer spikes tickle his back as he finally managed to slow himself. Davey was on him again a second later, punches raining on him, forcing him low, protective, the jeers piled on him along with brutal, unyielding force-

Put him down.

-and he exploded out from his crouch with a roar, arms outstretched, tackling Davey down to the ground. The impact jarred them both but Davey got the worst of it, two hundred pounds of flying Nathaniel Ankah certainly counting for a lot-

Don't waste this.

Whatever reserves of wrath and brutality Nate had allowed to grow in those long years, he vented in that filthy damned pit. He reared up and pounded down, one fist after another, like a machine, one rising high as the other hammered down, then again, again-

-but Davey had some life to him, even straddled and stunned, putting up his guard as best he could-

-until Nate ripped one arm away and put his whole upper body behind a crushing elbow-

-that smashed into the side of Davey's head, just below the eye.

Nate felt something break under the impact. Blood and spittle soaked the sweat on his arm's hinge and Davey's scream trembled through his arm, body wriggling desperately under him-

He kept hitting. Kept punching. Davey swung blindly and Nate's jaw caught it... and he accepted it. Rolled off the battered, bleeding boy and came up a few yards away in a low crouch, panting through sweat and blood trickling into his mouth, teeth bared like an animal.

Davey was a while getting up. The honorable thing would have been to give him time; allow him to face Nate equally, even blind in one eye and wearied from that butchery he'd subjected him to.

Wrong city for that.

Nate darted in from Dave's blind side and swung his left leg into the side of Davey's leg. Another shout as he collapsed down to one knee, fear and pain now replacing everything else on that young face. His fellows... ah... fickle, as said before... now they jeered him and shook their heads, mocking him even as he was savaged for their approval.

Davey tried a backhand at Nate and the big man's right hand caught it at the wrist, freezing his arm in mid-air, straight and-

-vulnerable-

-to Nate's left forearm, swinging high and falling fast like an executioner's ax, the crowd holding their breath, savoring that sick, sweet, awful moment-

-before it smashed onto the top of Davey's elbow and broke it-

The boy screamed. His eyes popped open in agony, even the one that was crowded and closed by ruined flesh. Nate felt some traitorous mote of empathy in that moment, seeing all he had wrought for money-

For her. What you wrought for her.

Now end it.


He grabbed the back of Davey's head and pivoted his hips, jerking his knee up-

-into the back of Daveys head. The blow hurt him almost as bad as it did Davey, a heavy, meaty thwack! like a steak slapped onto a butcher's board. Davey spasmed once, his whole body, and then his face... peace overtook it... grateful and blessed, free from pain... and as he fell forward into the dirt, finally still, the crowd roared and clapped and gods how Nate hated them.

He had eyes only for Al, leering down at him as a man would at a purchase well made. Nate spat to the side and started to climb.

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Pit Sweat

Postby Nathaniel Ankah on July 6th, 2014, 12:55 am

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"Got another one in ya?"

"Peh... Petch do you... think?"

Al glanced up from his pile of profits and saw that Nate had a point. The rough, heady adrenaline that had powered his victory had seeped out of him by the time he'd staggered his way to the table, leaving in its wake a human-shaped mass of sores, welts, bruises and aching flesh.

"I... petching hate... getting old..."

He heard Al grunt but barely saw him, not with a cold, wadded towel pressed to one side of his face. The crowd had hardly dispersed, but it wasn't so focused now on the ring: now it was gossiping, boozing, arguing, eagerly flirting and grousing over debts to be paid and payers who needed to quit making excuses. Now and then there would be some titter or whispers and Nate knew that a few of his new fans had sidled over to gawp.

He didn't acknowledge them; turned away from them so only the towel was presented. Best they didn't remember him so well. The thought of some clucking hen bringing word to Kay about "her Nate" brawling again for a fistful of coins struck more fear into him that any opponent he could have faced in the ring.

Well, perhaps not any. There was that Akalak...

"Old? Ruros' balls, having a kid like you moan about age..." Al grunted again and bound up Nate's purse, sliding it across the table to him. "Makes me feel ill. You wait 'til you have to get up five times a night just to have one good piss."

"Won't be too much... fun tomorrow, I think."

For a tick, there was a moment of brevity between the two men, or at least an ease of tension. Then Nate felt the weight of his winnings... and the towel dropped from his face. One eye was closed by bruises, Davey's barrage getting more than a few good blows in. His stomach was a vice that pressed on his guts whenever he breathed and his hands shook even as he hefted the bag-

Three times what it was. That's something like...

"Seventy-five? S'all I got? Three-to-one odds?"

Al's cold gaze held no sympathy, or curiosity, or mirth. Now it was business, pure and simple, and he wasn't in the habit of giving away more than that which made the wheels run right.

"You want higher than that, go to the Blood Pits, or Tall Johnny's. Haven't got the bank to make you rich after one fight, boy."

"Look at the petching state of me, Al. I fought hard-"

"And you fought fast, Nate." Now the barkeeper added a fat, accusing finger to his argument, unafraid of Nate both in his weakened state and... in general. Harming one such as him would cause more problems for a peon like Ankah than it would solve. "Barely a chime of good scrapping! People come here looking for a show, something that'll last more than the time it takes to shit out their dinner. If you'd dragged it out, given 'em a bit of... spectacle, I coulda' through you somethin' more. But now? Now I gotta have two more fights tonight, 'steada' just one, probably cost me more in pay outs instead."

"Still ain't right."

Al shook his head, just twice, left and right, and shrugged. "No. It's business. And you were down here long enough to know how that worked."

The two men duel with their glares for nearly a solid chime before Nate realizes it isn't going to help any. A couple of Al's floating bouncers drifted over out of instinct, flanking their boss, faces unreadable, bodies primed. He flicked a glance up at them. Fit and able and fresh, maybe he could have taken them, but now?

Now even taking a solid shit would be a challenge.

"... alright."

"Cheer up, Nate," Al said, shyke-eating smile plastered on his face as he bagged up the rest of the fight's profits, "Come back next week. I'll put you in with someone... a little more in your league."

Nate shot a glance his way that dripped venom, sure there was as much insult in his words as there was compliment. But he forced himself to nod tersely, and grunt out a reply.

"Yeah."

No. Never again.

Fine, so it was a lie instead, but he was far from caring. He'd be willing to bet that speaking untruths to something like Al didn't count as a sin in any religion he cared to think of.

The night air stank of sweat and steam but it was sweet respite compared to the choking humidity of the day. Nate filled his lungs again and again, emptying a short bottle of foul brown booze that Al had given him as "anesthetic". Nate wasn't about to argue: anything that dulled the grinding pain in his sore body was welcome.

He walked slowly, carefully, down the alley. Head high. Shoulders back. Looking wounded or weak in Sunberth at night was practically broadcasting your intentions to get mugged or worse. Nate would know: he used to be the one doing the mugging. As he walked out into the street, he saw a handful of figures walking the other way, two of them supporting a twisted and twitching figure that wouldn't fight again anytime soon.

Nate let his eyes linger on Davey for a little longer... then he turned and walked back to Kay's, every step jolting his battered ribs, but also reminding him of the extra weight on his hip.

By hook or crook, isn't that what you used to say, old girl? Well, we need money for meds, and if crook's how we get it...

Winnings :
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Pit Sweat

Postby Caela Dorin on July 26th, 2014, 11:45 am

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Endurance 2
Observation 3
Socialisation 1
Unarmed Combat 2


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Location: Al's Tankard
Fighting from necessity
Weighing up an opponent
Taking a beating
Dragging out a fight will yield a better pay out


Consequences :
Various bruises-Bruises on torso will take 13-16 days to fully heal. Bruises on face will take 7-9 days to fully heal.


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That was a really intense piece of writing. The fact that it's only three posts is amazing seeing how packed it is. The fighting was really well described. It can be a difficult to describe sometimes as it can come across as being fake but this definitely didn't. The pace was fantastic.

You should definitely do a write-up of the location and submit it for review as it would make an interesting addition to the Sunberth link map. Think about it.

Just a little note for future reference. Brawling is the use of your environment while fighting so if Nate had thrown Davey into the spiked wall you would have gotten points in that skill. Wrestling would be grappling with one another whereas unarmed combat is your stance and your defence as well as your hits. Just so you know!

Please edit or delete your grade request and PM me if you have any questions or concerns about your grade.

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