Completed "Unexpected", as Expected

[Zhol]

GRADE AWARDED!

Yisanareysin

 

Rewards

Experience

• +3 Socialization
• +2 Observation

Lores

• Aim Away From Face
• Special Delivery: Dead Body
• Phobius: Emergency Snack
• Phobius: Doesn't seem to handle stress well
• Kuvarakh: Impressive hypnotist

Other Rewards

• +300 Gold Mizas

 

Consequences

Injuries

• None (phew!)

Expenses

• None

 

Comments

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It's a shame that this was more of a talky thread: really enjoyed your characterisation of Mister Arbok Ekans, and it's a shame I didn't get to see him in action. Hopefully I'll get the chance to grade for you again in the future!

Please don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about your grade!

Kuvarakh

 

Rewards

Experience

• +3 Socialization
• +1 Hypnosis
• +1 Planning
• +2 Persuasion

Lores

• Nuit: Time for a new body
• Phobius: So that's where he was...
• Mister Ekans: Not exactly discreet
• Planning: Working out how to clean up their mess

Other Rewards

• A new body, with hands that work!

 

Consequences

Injuries

• None (phew!)

Expenses

• -600 Gold Mizas

 

Comments

Feedback
It's great how Kuvarakh always seems planning or scheming something. Loved seeing his hypnosis in action too: your magic descriptions continue to be fantastic.

Please delete/edit your grade request, and don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about your grade!

Phobius

 

Rewards

Experience

• +3 Socialization
• +1 Endurance

Lores

• Witness to an actual murder
• Mister Ekans: Scary and unnerving
• Mister Ekans: The Unconcerned Murderer
• Carrying a dead body
• Mister Ekans: Your Savior (apparently)
• Kuvarakh: Proud of you, my boy
• Memories altered by hypnotism
• Being a hero - feels strangely like a panic attack for some reason

Other Rewards

• +300 Gold Mizas

 

Consequences

Injuries

• I suspect his undergarments might need changing

Expenses

• None

 

Comments

Feedback
Oh poor, sweet, terrified Phobius! If there were a skill for grace under pressure, you would have earned negative points. Wonderful character, and fantastically written! Looking forward to having an excuse to grade for him again.

Please don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about your grade!