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Ayviss goes to the Dust Bed to mourn her mother.

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Postby Ayviss on October 31st, 2014, 10:10 pm

2nd of Fall, 514 AV
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It was the 2nd of Fall. The day brought many memories, most of them wonderful. But together, came a feeling of despair that was really hard to shake off. Usually, Dia would be with her. But now, for the first time, she was alone. Completely alone. It made her heart ache, it made her resolve falter, it made her want to turn and run towards Hollard and kill the man on the spot, revenge be damned.

But she wouldn't. Five years ago, her mother had died, by the hands of their owner. Twenty tree days before, Dia had died by the hand of the same man. Death was just too sweet for what he had done. She had spend twenty one days planning her revenge, and she would follow the plan until the very end, no matter how she felt on the way.

"Let's go." Hollard said, wiping his mouth on the napkin and pushing the plate away from him. Ayviss took it, automatically, her mind some place far away. "I have more important things to do than watch you cry at a grave that isn't even your mother's."

Ayviss controlled her wish to growl at him, and throw the plate on the ground. Instead, she simply took it to the kitchen, put it on the sink, and returned, quiet, watching as Hollard wore his coat and his hat, grey coat and black hat, like always. Ayviss closed her eyes for a second, took a deep breath, and followed him out of the house, not being able to bring herself to smile to him, like she had been doing the past few days. She never cried, despite what her owner said, but it was true that her mother didn't have a grave at the cemetery. In fact, Ayviss didn't know why she felt so compelled to go there, every day, to morn at a random grave. But it was something, one of the few things, she allowed herself to feel on the second day of Fall. Surprisingly, it was one of the few things Hollard allowed her, too. She doubted he would be so understanding when Dia's death birthday came but, hopefully, she wouldn't need to find out.

The woman followed her owner, slowly, towards the outside of Sunberth. The Dust Bed, the formal cemetery of the city, was far from flattering to the dead. It was just like the city, poor, not well kept, and with nothing really worth of note. Hollard stopped, and allowed Ayviss to enter the place first. She could feel his eyes on her back, watching, making sure she wouldn't try to escape. She wanted, and she could if she tried. The city was behind her, she could ran faster than Hollard, and there were plenty of places to hide. But she wouldn't.

Ayviss reached a random grave, one very simple, just a simply stone with a name carved on it. Alena Hillford. Ayviss ran her fingers on it, watching the imperfections of the stone, and just stayed there, kneeling on the dirty floor.

"Creep." Hollard buffed, and Ayviss didn't have to raise her head to know he was talking about Jebediah. The man that took care of the cemetery was truly creepy, in ways that Ayviss couldn't even begin to name, but still, it matter little to nothing to her.

Specially that day. She kept facing the stone, watching the grass that were around the grave, the lack of any flowers, or anything to mark the grave except for the name. At least it had a name. There were some that were forgotten by all, forever.

Like her own mother, whose body was probably burned and disposed off somewhere, somewhere Ayviss could never reach.
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Postby Ayviss on October 31st, 2014, 10:28 pm

She lost count of the time she just stood there, facing the stone, remembering the way her mother would put her hair behind her ear, or how she would try to sing a lullaby for her to sleep better. She was terrible at it, but the memories, now, still made Ayviss smile. However, she knew it had passed perhaps a bell, at most, before Hollard pressed his hands on her shoulder. It wasn't a nice gesture, it never was, but a warning, a sign that her time was up, and that they needed to leave, simply because he said so. Ayviss hated that hand.

When she got up, however, she furrowed her eyebrows, looking at the mist that was forming on the cemetery. This was new. Well, she didn't exactly came to the cemetery that often, but never before she had seen such a thick mist. It made her wonder how long had she truly stayed.

"Let's leave." Hollard commanded. His voice was firm, and his lips were pressed, the expression he wore when there could be no discussion, or someone was going to pay. But Ayviss was curious by the mist, so she simply fell to her knees again, burying her face on her hands. She wasn't truly crying, but Hollard would think so. She wanted to see if the mist would become thicker. There wasn't really a reason for it, other than it would annoy her owner. "Oh, shyke. Don't even think of that." he growled, and Ayviss felt the force of his slap on the side of her back. It would certainly give her a headache later. "You petching snake. Look at this!"

It was the anger on the voice of Hollard, together with the fact he had cursed twice in such a short while, that made Ayviss raise her head again. Her eyes widened, when she saw that the mist had covered everything as far as she could see, which wasn't that far. The mist was becoming thicker and thicker, and while it wasn't thickening that fast, she already couldn't see where the cemetery ended.

"For your own good" Hollard said, taking a step forward and facing her, his eyes sparking furiously. "You better know how to get out of here."

She didn't, but she couldn't say it out loud. Nodding, hesitantly, Ayviss took a step forward, and started to walk towards what she thought was the way they had come from.
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Postby Ayviss on November 1st, 2014, 12:03 pm

Ayviss didn't know how much they had walked, or how long they had stayed on the cemetery. The mist was getting thicker, although she could still see somethings, but not far. Not far enough for her to know where to go. They had been walking for a while now, and she was sure they should have already reached the end of the cemetery. And yet, she could see the shadows of the gravestones around them, everywhere. Ayviss wished she had paid attention to the land marks. Sure, she didn't know that they would become lost in a thick mist, but yet, she should have taken precautions. She was planning to escape, and if she couldn't manage something as trivial as this...

Her hand touched the dagger hidden in her pants, and stayed there for a moment, before returning to its original place. The dagger made her feel safer, as if the mist could actually hurt her, or be hurt by her. But she couldn't risk Hollard knowing. So much was at stake right then.

"Petching snake." Ayviss heard her owner curse behind her, and she could hear worry in voice. This would be very useful, if she herself wasn't worried too. Right then, her mind was running, trying to figure out how to get out of that place, her eyes watching, looking at every corner, trying to identify something.

Suddenly, she saw a shadow, moving on the mist. It was too thick to find out who it was, but it was a person. Ayviss had to force her hand to stay where it was, to not take the dagger out. She kept walking, keeping the shadow on the corner of her eye, watching it. Finally, the woman stopped. The shadow was moving too close.

"What is it?" Hollard growled, annoyed. "Why did you stop? You better..."

"Quiet." the word escaped before she could think, and even in the mist she could see her owner's face becoming red with anger.

"What did you..."

"Watch out!" she screamed, and pulled the man towards her, her other hand shielding his head. The tip of a knife or dagger she hadn't seen, but had known it was there when the shadow lunged forward, entered her skin, and she screamed in pain. She felt the tip being pulled out again, and tears of pain fell from her eyes.

As quickly as she could, she threw her owner back, her hand going to the dagger she had kept hidden and taking it, pointing the edge to the shadow's direction. With her hurt hand, she wiped the tears away, blood smearing on her face. Ayviss trembled. She knew next to nothing on how to use a dagger, and it would be quite useless in her hand. Better than nothing.

The shadow lunged forward again, and she noticed it wasn't an experienced fighter. Probably still better than her, but inexperienced nonetheless. Ayviss took a step back, getting out of range, and pointed her dagger up, thrusting with all her strength, two hands holding it. It was a clumsy movement, and when the shadow screamed, Ayviss couldn't tell if she had actually hit the target where she intended - their hand - or if it had just scratched the other. Growling, the shadow came at her again, and she felt a slash across her right cheek. Eyes widening in fear, she kept walking back, trying to get out of range.

And then she tripped on Hollard, falling backwards, her butt hitting the ground forcefully. With a groan, she watched as the assailant tripped on Hollard too, and quickly pointed the dagger up again. The shadow fell, on the dagger, although where exactly it had hit Ayviss wasn't sure. Groaning with pain, and indicating that it hadn't been a major wound, the shadow got up, and ran away, probably giving up on attacking them. Ayviss watched the shadow go, until it disappeared on the mist, and then, her mind snapped into place.

She got up, her hand closing around Hollard wrist and pulling her owner forcefully with her, while hiding the dagger with her other hand. Ayviss winced when she felt the sharp blade cut her skin a little, but she had other things to worry about. He followed, and she ran, finding it hard to breath, but she couldn't stop. She watched a glimpse of the shadow again, and ran towards it, her lungs protesting with pain, her hand throbbing from where she had been hit. But she pushed forward, pulling Hollard with her, until she could barely breath and her legs seemed ready to give up.

And then, they reached the end of the mist.
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Postby Ayviss on November 1st, 2014, 12:26 pm

The sun was pale, far from strong, but Ayviss could see the rocky terrain, and the fain contour of Sunberth's buildings. Their assailant was running towards the city, and when he turned, shooting both of them a look of anger, Ayviss could see a thin trail of blood on his face. He had run, but because he was scared he would end up getting hurt, not because he was hurt. The woman bit her lip for a second, making a note to train her skills with the dagger better. It would not do to wave it around and thrust it blindly like she had done.

Now, however, all she could think about was that she needed air, and she fell to the ground, puffing, trying to breath. She had never run so much before, maybe only when she and her mother tried to escape, but that had been a long, long time ago. Ayviss made a mental note to train more endurance too. But that was for later. She stayed on the ground, breathing, her eyes closed. When the air seemed to flow normally on her lungs again, she raised her hand, looking at the red dot on her skin. It had a lot of blood, but when she closed and opened her hand, all she felt was pain on the torn skin. The assailant hadn't hit anything important. With another deep breath, Ayviss raised her clean hand and touched the cut on her cheek. It was aching a lot, but her fingers didn't become as red as she expected. That cut had been superficial too.

Slowly, she got up, her legs protesting a little, but nothing she couldn't handle. She then turned, slowly, to her owner. If Hollard had seen the dagger, he would certainly take it from her, and she couldn't afford it right now.

"You saved me." he stated, his face looking haunted, as if it would have been better if Ayviss simply had left him to die. She thought it would, too, but her revenge wasn't anywhere near complete. She wouldn't just let him die like this.

And then, Hollard started to walk towards the city again, and Ayviss followed, surprised when she saw him stop for a moment. She stopped too, unsure, and when Hollard refused to move, she walked up to him. Her eyes widened when she noticed he was walking side by side with her, something that had never happened before. In fact, when she had tried it as a child, the only thing she accomplished was a punishment and a day without food.

But now... Ayviss smiled, and let Hollard see it. He could think whatever he wanted of that smile, but the truth was that, despite not having planned anything, her plan had been put into motion. He trusted her, if only a little bit, now that she had saved his life, and taken him with her when she ran. Just a tiny bit of trust, but it was all Ayviss needed right now.

In due time, she would win his heart.
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Postby Vanari on January 10th, 2015, 12:34 am

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Ayviss
Observation +4 XP
Intelligence +4 XP
Navigation +2 XP
Weapon: Dagger +1 XP
Leadership +1 XP
Running +1 XP
Endurance +1 XP

Lores :
  • Hollard: Allows Grave Visiting
  • Saving Hollard's Life
  • Walking by Hollard's Side Without Repercussions


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