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Achenar

Postby Achenar on February 10th, 2015, 11:15 am

Achenar
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Name: Achenar (Maddoch)
Race: Ethaefal Forsaken (Leth)
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2ft
Weight: 180lbs
Fell to Mizahar: 20th, Fall 500AV
Description: Being Forsaken, Maddoch is perpetually "stuck" in his Spring hues. His opalescent skin shimmers under moonlight, mirroring the tints of Leth's realm, but his hair remains onyx black, cropped short. His horns, which twist behind his head somewhat like a gazelle's, are the color of olives. His eyes are arguably his most prominent feature; intense and almost feline in quality, they are silver in color, and always trained on the next prize.

Maddoch is tall and statuesque like many of his brethren. He is lean in muscle and regal in stature.


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Mortal Seeming: Svefra
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 165lbs
Description: Thrust into a diurnal world, Maddoch's mortal form is by and large what people see the most. He is an average height Svefra, lean with clean cut muscles. His hair is a dark, nearly black chocolate, and his skin is tan with an olive undertone. He is perpetually unshaven, with a defined mustache he tends to curl out of habit. His skin is far from unmarred in this form. He has scars all along his back, thighs and arms, though these he has since covered up with a myriad of tattoos all over his body.

Maddoch's blue eyes and footloose demeanor can be attributed to his Svefra heritage.

On the corner of his eye, marring his temple, is a tattoo in the shape of the Radacke hammer. This tattoo persists through both forms.

Injuries (Acquired Summer 515AV): Bitten tongue
Open wounds across the back (more painful than usual)
Hole through right palm
Several bruises across entire body


Fluent: Common/Celestial | Basic: Fratava | Poor: N/AI've chosen not to have a poor language

Themes :




Personality
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Once, in years past, Maddoch had been a brighter soul, illuminated from within by his faith and his devotion to the gods. Subsequent years of slavery under the Radacke Dynasty has molded and forged Maddoch into a morbid comedian. He emerged a Forsaken; broken in faith to his god who remained silent throughout his ordeals. Maddoch adheres to the mantra of the Chaotic Neutral. He is utterly self-preserving and selfish, and somewhat of a narcissist. He presents himself as if he is of noble birth, though his tendencies to resort to sadistic humor would dispel such notions quickly. Maddoch longs for personal gain; be it material wealth or physical and magical prowess, largely due to his history of utter dependency and subservience to others. He has a lack of respect for authorities and rules, though he will begrudgingly follow them, at least as much as will keep the guardsmen off his tail.

What little left of his warmth, love and compassion has been locked behind a barrier, for protection, and preservation. Not once since his escape has he found himself close enough to call an acquaintance a true "friend" for loyalty is something that is not easily given. He will take what he wants from others with a coy smile, a knowing touch, a simple gesture, be it their trust or their coin purse.

Likes: Solitude, safety, knowledge, secrets, the arcane, personal grooming, hot baths, pears
Dislikes: Slavers, physical confrontations, attention, collars, stifling rules, Kenashian dynasts

Merits: perceptive, charismatic, loyal (once trust is earned), ambitious
Flaws: Selfish, dishonest, cynical, aggressive, self-preserving


History
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Maddoch emerged from the waters of Nyka, tangled in the net of a fisherman. In the beginning he knew to call himself Achenar, and though he suffered confusion at his fall and longing to return to his god's side, he was not steeled from life hardships. The fisherman proved to be a friendly face; a Nykan man named Rhythern who enjoyed the life of the wilds more than the confines of the city. He was stubborn and largely aggressive, but his passion was one lent by generosity. He took the ethaefal in, gave him food, mead and clothes, and traveled between Nyka and Syliras, citing the man's ranger blood and thirst for the next catch.

ImageIt was on a leisure excursion to the next fishing spot along a river to the south of Syliras, that the two were assaulted by a well-armed group of men. With his inexperience, Achenar was easily captured and bound by manacles and chains. The last he saw of Rhythern was the glint of the blades he wielded and the spray of blood.

Blindfolded on the long journey, the image of Kenash was the first sight the ethaefal absorbed. But it was short lived. His world became brick and wooden walls, cold chains and damp floorboards. He was taken to the Auction Hall and heavily advertised for his beauty and the rarity by which an Ethaefal was seen. It was not long before a scion of a Dynasty came along and subsequently purchased him. The years that followed under slavery and servitude brought nothing but pain. Physical and emotional pain, and pain in areas he would have never imagined. He was the play thing of many masters under the Caged Sun, and a canvas for his own master's sadistic propensity. Achenar was quickly becoming a repository of contempt. Not only to these people who kept him captive, but to his own god. His years of suffering were met only in silence.

His faith was severed during a fateful night, and a session of torture that broke his voice. Walls built up around his mind, walls that sought to protect and preserve. He had to notice things to do so, to perceive, to listen. For years he had drawn the eye of a girl who was madly in love with him. For his own purposes, he used her, just as they used him. Weeks and months of careful planning, prodding and positioning brought his position up from a common house slave to personal slave. But this was short lived. Achenar had no intention to remain, and his next errand to the city proper found him stowing on a carriage of a couple who took pity on him.

The woman was a former Shinya, and after many nights of convincing, she conceded, and initiated him into Projection, mentioning that with proper meditation and care, he could protect himself from anyone else who wished to harm him again. Within the months that he stayed with the couple, he renamed himself Maddoch, shedding his old title.
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Achenar
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Race: Ethaefal
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Maddoch

Postby Achenar on February 13th, 2015, 12:49 pm

Knowledge
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Skills
Image Leadership 10(RB) 10 (Racial Bonus) Novice
Image Intelligence 30(SP) + 1 31 Competent
Image Cryptography 5(SP) 5 Novice
Image Impersonation 5(SP) 5 Novice
Image Projection 10(SP) + 2 12 Novice
xObservation 5 + 2 + 1 + 3 10 Novice
xSocialization 2 + 4 6 Novice
xHosting 2 2 Novice
xRhetoric 3 + 1 4 Novice
xLogic 1 1 Novice
xStorytelling 1 1 Novice
xOrganization 1 1 Novice
xStealth 1 1 Novice
xMeditation 2 2 Novice
xIntimidation 2 2 Novice
x Endurance 3 + 3 + 2 + 2 10 Novice
xPlanning 1 1 Novice
xEscape Artist 1 1 Novice
x Running 1 1 Novice
x Subterfuge 1 1 Novice
x Acting 1 1 Novice
x Weapon: Dagger 1 1 Novice
x Investigation 2 2 Novice
 
Lores
  • Lore of Radacke Brutality
  • Intelligence: Gathering Data Through Observation
  • Location: Whiplash Estate
  • Zaelsen: Enjoys his afternoon brandy
  • Estrellir: A Konti with dark, violet coloured eyes
  • Estrellir: Lady Konrath
  • Zaelsen: A wolf in sheep's clothing
  • Zaelsen Radacke's slaves are always trained
  • Logic: Everyone is capable of lying
  • Leth: An indifferent god
  • Avoid prying eyes when preforming magic
  • Meditation: an essential part of the magical practice.
  • An encounter with Bounty hunters
  • The Master comes to collect
  • Zaelsen Radacke: Bends the truth
  • Maddoch: Free man?
  • Torture: Pain is pleasure
  • Torture: Pouring lime juice into wounds
  • Manipulation: Carrots and sticks
  • Achenar: Pet of Zaelsen Radacke
  • Sexual abuse as means of manipulation
  • I Am A Pet, Nothing More
  • The Lorak: Healers but Still Dynasts
  • Why Would a Dynast Care for a Slave's Pain?
  • Verena Lorak: Exception to the Dynast Rule
  • Ethaefals: Ageless and Divine


Possessions
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Equipment
Image Backpack Starting Package
Image Comb Starting Package
Image Brush Starting Package
Image Razor Starting Package
Image Soap Starting Package
Image Eating Knife Starting Package
Image 1 Week Food Ration Starting Package
Image Flint and Steel Starting Package
Image Sap Pommel 1gm
Image Toilette Kit 25gm

 
Clothing
Image Simple Gloves Starting Package
Image Simple Shirt Starting Package
Image Simple Breeches Starting Package
Image Simple Boots Starting Package
Image Simple Coat Starting Package
Image Belt 2sm
Image Shirt, Dyed 2.5sm
Image Leather Pants 10sm
Image Vest 3sm
Image Boots, Leather 5sm
Image Scarf 1sm

 
Heirloom
A silver ring with the initials "Z.R." inscribed in it.

 
Housing
The Whiplash Estate, slave's quarters.


Ledger
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Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100gm 100gm
Cashed in Housing +500gm 600gm
Boots, low, leather -5sm 599gm 5sm
Scarf -1 sm 599gm 4sm
Vest -3sm 599gm 1sm
Leather, pants -10 sm 598gm 1sm
Dagger, Sap Pommel -1gm 597gm 1sm
Toilette Kit -25gm 572gm 1sm
Belt -2sm 571gm 9sm
Shirt, dyed -2.5sm 571gm 6.5sm
Living Expense (Spring/Common) -135gm 436 6.5sm
Living Expense (Summer/Common. Became a slave on the 76th) -112gm 324 6.5sm
Did not play during Fall x x
Did not play during Winter x x
Total 324gm 6.5sm (In game sum is 0 due to being a slave)



*Currently a slave under Zaelsen Radacke.
Last edited by Achenar on September 13th, 2016, 11:03 pm, edited 14 times in total.
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Achenar
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Achenar

Postby Achenar on April 10th, 2015, 9:28 pm

Thread List
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Flashback

Fall 20 500AV [Flashback]Night without a star (Balderdash)
Winter 21 510AV Map of the problematique (Verena)
Winter 67 510AV Gift of ruination (Verena)
Summer 70 511AV [Flashback]Tied in Chain and String (Estrellir)
Fall 11 511AV A Study in Decadence (Estrellir)
Winter 21st 511AV [Flashback]No time for caution (Elias)

Spring 515AV

15 Spring 515AV [Laviku's Tower] Like a Stone (Khida)
Early Spring 515AV [Alements] Having a Quiet Drink (Kavala)
Early Spring 515AV [Alements] Headlock (Caelum)
62 Spring 515AV [Amphitheatre] Pretend (Marion)

Summer 515AV

19th Summer 515AV A pair of gilded antlers
23rd Summer 515AV The door down (various)
40th Summer 515AV Baked Goods? (Sezkero)
55th Summer 515AV This broken road
76th Summer 515AV To Butcher a Man's Soul
76th Summer 515 AV The Broken One (Verena)

Spring 516AV

24th Spring 516AV Mercy (Valerius)
63rd Spring 516 Comfortably Numb (Konrad)
72nd Spring 516AV No Refunds


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