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This lazy agricultural settlement rests on the swampy shores of the Middle Suvan at the delta of The Kenash River. The River's slow moving bayou waters have bred a different sort of people - rugged, cultured, and somewhat violent. Sprawling plantations of tobacco and cotton grow on the outskirts of the swamp in the rich Cyphrus soils, while the city itself curls around the bayou and spawns decadence and sins of all sorts. Life is slower in Kenash, but the lack of pace is made up for in the excesses of food and flesh in a city where drinking, debauchery, gambling, slavery, and overbearing plantation families dominate the landscape.

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To Butcher A Man's Soul

Postby Achenar on July 21st, 2015, 8:16 pm

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“Stop your petchin’ struggling boy,” a man’s harsh voice snapped in his direction. Maddoch felt himself being slung back onto his feet where he’d slipped on the compact dirt. He was thrashing in the bonds that held him, his vision obscured by the sack over his head, and his protests muffled by the gag in his mouth.

At one point, the ethaefal had managed to slip free from the brute’s grasp, his legs straining in exertion as he ran, blindly. Something blunt smashed into his back, and he sprawled. A heavy boot pressed against his neck in warning while a woman’s voice cackled in the background. The sack was promptly pulled from his head, and though he winced from the sudden intrusion of light, he met the man’s wicked grin.

“Cheer up, slave. It’s not the end of the world, but you’ll certainly see it from here.”

Maddoch yelled in a frantic, muffled protest, but his fist was swiftly brought down on the ethaefal’s head, and his world turned to darkness.

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Wake up.

Whispers flooded the black, formless chaos of his mind. It thrummed like the ripple of sound and water; he could see flashes of images and feel the weight of something around him, like a pressure that threatened to consume him.

Wake up, Achenar.

The darkness was dissipating, giving way to sensations; of cold and dampness. The weight felt more acute around his wrists and ankles and he could feel a biting hardness that brought back harrowing memories of someone he had hoped he’d never set eyes on again.

I know you missed me.

Maddoch’s eyes flickered open. The sparse lights that decorated the room created splotches of lights from his vision, and he shook his head with a heavy groan. His head throbbed painfully, and once his eyes began to focus, he noted the compact walls and wooden floors. Chains hung from the ceiling, and there were bars in some areas that appeared like cellars. The ethaefal’s breathing became sporadic. He jerked where he sat, only to feel the heavy weight of manacles bite into his wrist and ankles, limiting his movement.

“Were you dreaming of paradise, slave?”

There was a characteristic creak of the floorboards behind him, and a shiver ran down Maddoch’s stiffened spine. That was the voice that haunted his waking nightmares. The ethaefal squeezed his eyes shut and didn’t answer, lowering his head.

“No?” The Radacke approached methodically, his gloved hands trailing over the hard wooden table.

Maddoch’s breathing intensified; his eyes shut and sweat trickling down his brow. He had never felt such intense fear than at this moment. He felt a finger lift his chin, and the ethaefal jerked his head away. The defiance was ill received, and the dynast brutally gripped Maddoch’s jaw in one hand, forcing his gaze to meet his.

“Did you have fun on your five year excursion, pet?” Zaelsen Radacke questioned with a satisfied smirk, tracing the sigil of the Hammer on his captive’s temple. “In a way, you never truly escaped your place.” There was a smug undertone to his words as he shoved the captive’s head away.

Maddoch watched him with an intensity he’d never before had the willpower to muster. “Let me go.”

“Let you go?” Zaelsen laughed, walking toward the counter built against the wall, where he picked up what appeared to be a ring. “I do believe you don’t want to be let go, Achenar.” He lifted the jewelry, the very one that Maddoch had kept on his person for five years.

“Curious to find this among your possessions. My ring, of all things.” He approached the bound captive, holding it aloft in front of his face and idly turning it in his fingers. “A keepsake, perhaps? Whatever would an escaped slave do with such a thing?”

Maddoch didn’t answer.

“You could have sold it,” Zaelsen continued. “Or bartered it for freedom. But curiously enough, you didn’t. And why is that, Achenar?” His coal-black gaze lowered to bore into the ethaefal’s. Maddoch stared back at him, his jaw clenched tight. The Radacke’s smile was menacingly sweet. “I do believe you know the reason why.” He set the ring down on the table the ethaefal was bound to and turned his back to face the wall lined with what Maddoch finally realized were torture implements.

Something churned in his gut, like a primal fear the likes of which he’d never felt before.
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To Butcher A Man's Soul

Postby Achenar on July 23rd, 2015, 5:47 am

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Zaelsen trailed a hand over the various instruments displayed on the wall, his steps heavy and meticulous. “Do you remember these?” He paused in front of a snakeskin flogger, idly caressing the handle. “You used to love these,” the dynast smirked, “Oh how you would writhe beneath the lash. Can you feel it, Achenar--?”

“Maddoch.” The ethaefal’s word nearly came out a growl. Zaelsen turned his gaze slowly to look at his captive, the edge of his lips curled in amusement. “My name is Maddoch.”

“Is that an identity you made for yourself, slave?” The Radacke asked, perusing the rest of the implements in his arsenal. “So you could pretend you were a free man?”

Maddoch watched as he selected a heavy bullwhip, feeling its weight in his hands. He felt his heart beating at an erratic pace, but it was rage that boiled in his blood. His hands curled into tight fists, nails digging into his palm.

“You think you’ve fucking won?” The ethaefal hissed, as the dynast slowly stepped around the table with the whip in hand. “You will have to kill me before I ever bow to you again.”

Zaelsen’s laughter emanated like a menacing chorus in the stuffy room. He set the whip down on the table, and slowly began to undo each button on his coat. “An invitation to a challenge? You know me too well, Achenar.” The coat was folded and set aside, and the chains that bound his wrists to the table were unhooked and instead attached to a hook that hang to the ceiling with much resistance from the ethaefal. But in his bruised state, all he could muster was a vicious thrashing as the dynast raised the chain with a hand winch until he stood on his tip toes.

The dynast patted his cheek. “Now, now, stop thrashing so much. You’ll bruise yourself further before I get a chance to.”

Maddoch spat in his face and watched as Zaelsen calmly wiped the saliva from his cheek with a handkerchief. The vicious backhand that followed was abrupt, and the ethaefal’s vision whirled. He felt blood on his lips and the subsequent vise-like grip in his hair as the dynast forced his chin up to meet his gaze once more.

“You will bow to me, boy. And you will rue the day you stepped foot outside Kenash.”

The shirt he wore was promptly ripped apart by the scion’s bare hands, leaving the pieces to fall to the floor. With his chest bare, Maddoch watched as Zaelsen studied his flesh like a collector would a priceless artifact. Those dark eyes felt like they left traces under his skin. He felt a prickling sensation up his spine before the dynast picked up the whip and walked behind him. But where he’d expected a lash of pain, instead he felt icy water hit his back, and he arched in a heavy gasp. Water dripped down his torso and limbs, pooling at his feet.

“Comfy?” Came the pleasant question. Before he could formulate a seething response, the whip came down on the ethaefal’s drenched flesh, splitting it apart with the force of the blow. Maddoch’s yell tore from his throat before he had a chance to bite it back. It was a familiar pain that ignited his phantoms, and sent his body and mind in a state of panic.

The whip came down again, making another laceration down his spine. The chain swung where the ethaefal struggled, his cries stifled by the blood on his tongue where he’d bitten himself. He breathed through his nose like a bull. But he knew screaming would mean he’d won.

He couldn’t let him win.

“Do you remember that pain, Achenar?” He heard Zaelsen’s voice drift between them as another blow came to his back. His body jerked upright, where he struggled with flames that ignited in his searing wounds from the open air. “Do you feel it?”

Pain is pleasure.

Maddoch squeezed his eyes shut, the veins in his neck bulging. “NO,” he roared, twisting under the strain of the chains that held him. The brutal whip rended his flesh and sent agony throughout every nerve in his body. He couldn’t tell how much time had passed or how many lashes he received from the dynast. Sweat had trickled down into his eyes and his body slumped in the chains that held him aloft.

He was a mouse in a lion’s cage, and he knew that his self-preservation could only take him so far. Blood oozed down his chin as he sought to steady his trembling body enough to focus on his hearing. The floorboards creaked where Zaelsen stepped forward, and a new sort of pain erupted from the bloody chasms in his back. It stung and burned like he’d been set alight, but through his spastic breathing and strained yells, the ethaefal could feel hands on his back.

“Lime juice,” Zaelsen seemed to answer his unspoken question as the captive shook and twitched. “It’s rather effective for what it does.”

He came around to the front, observing the ethaefal's mangled state with an almost nonchalant gaze. Maddoch's head hung, but he could feel those eyes, like he felt hands on his chin. Those familiar lips, framed by a neatly trimmed beard, pressed against his ear. "This is just the beginning, boy."
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To Butcher A Man's Soul

Postby Achenar on July 24th, 2015, 7:31 am

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The dynast stepped toward the basin of water in the corner, sluicing his hands thoroughly. “I heard you were caught in Riverfall,” Zaelsen told him, with an undercurrent of amusement. “Had you become so complacent to assume that hunters were not scouring the blue city?” He turned to look at the captive as he slowly and methodically scrubbed his hands, leaving the basin’s water a diluted red from the blood.

Maddoch hung in the chains, his lungs shuddering from the effort to breathe. Every twitch his flesh made was a shock to his system, but he lifted his head with a defiant glint toward his former master. “I will never stop fighting you,” he hissed through bloody, chapped lips.

Zaelsen was silent for a chime as he dried his hands and set the towel aside neatly. “We’ll see.”

The winch was lowered and the chains loosened abruptly, causing the ethaefal to collapse with a heavy thud on the blood splattered floorboards. Maddoch let out a groan as blood dripped from his mouth, but before he could struggle to stand, he was subsequently lifted by his armpits and settled in the stool, his wrists secured on the edges of the table.

“You were quite an investment, Achenar,” Zaelsen told him, as the ethaefal’s ankles were firmly secured to chains on the floorboards. “It pains me to have to do this to you.”

At that proclamation, a bitter laugh rumbled through Maddoch’s throat. “You sick, manipulative motherfucker,” he breathed, his nails digging into the wooden surface of the table. “One day… you will have your throat cut in your sleep. And when that day comes, I will be standing over your filthy corpse, laughing.”

“Mm,” Zaelsen’s gaze idled on the table’s surface, tapping his fingers on the wood. “Brave words from a flayed man.” He stepped aside to grab a heavy dagger, bringing it back over to the table, where he circled his captive almost predatorily. “Some men have their hands severed for the punishment of theft,” the dynast said easily. “What do you think would be a suitable punishment for an escaped slave?”

Maddoch swallowed hard, and despite his attempts to keep his emotions contained, his jaw was quivering. He could feel the blade trailing against his open palm, leaving bloody welts. Every nerve in his body was screaming for him to obey, to lay down, to submit. But the dark passenger would not relent. He could not give in. He was not a slave.

“Well?” Zaelsen asked quietly.

“Go petch yourself,” Maddoch spat out.

“Mm. Wrong answer.”

There was an audible thunk as the dagger drove through the flesh of his right palm and embedded itself in the hard wood. Maddoch yelled in a rage and agony that filled his ears. For a fraction of a second, he couldn’t breathe. Each intake of air was ragged, as the sweat streamed down his face. Zaelsen watched his torment with a nonchalance that could have left the room frigid.

“I think you act in defiance because you enjoy this,” the dynast fingered the handle of the blade and suddenly twisted it, forcing the ethaefal to thrash in pain and protest.

“Am I correct, Achenar?” Zaelsen continued, his hand lingering on his captive’s arm, before slowly moving up his shoulder.

Maddoch’s entire body shook, his muscles tense to the point of straining.

”No”, he hissed.

A cold chuckle came from the man as he began to undo his vest, slipping it off and folding it aside. “You’ve been a very bad boy, slave,” he enunciated each word as he loosened the cuffs of his silken shirt. "You can ease any further suffering,” the shirt was removed, leaving his hard chest bare, “If you just submit.” Zaelsen moved behind the ethaefal and knocked the stool aside, forcing his legs out from under him. The pressure from the knife pinning his hand intensified, and he struggled to get his footing.

Never,” he choked out.

That response seemed to trigger something in the dynast. Maddoch felt the characteristic rip of fabric as his pants were sliced asunder by a knife. The ragged remains were tossed aside, and he was finally left exposed in his entirety.

A hard hand gripped the ethaefal’s neck suddenly, and his head was slammed into the table. The weight of his captor pressed him against the surface of the table, and he felt the those lips close in on his ear.

“You are going to regret those words.”
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To Butcher A Man's Soul

Postby Achenar on July 25th, 2015, 11:25 am

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He was trapped between his captor and the hard wooden surface, kept pinned by his neck, his head plastered against the table. Lacerated, exposed and beaten, the ethaefal felt a sickening churning in his gut as the dynast’s free hand roamed his body in a proprietary way, coming to a rest on his most private of areas.

Close your eyes, he pleaded to himself. Close your eyes and forget.

There was a sharp inhale as he dug his nails into the wooden table. He could feel the slow, methodical stroking and the way it sent mixed signals into his brain. His nerves were becoming a chaotic cadence of pain and pleasure; agony and stimulation. But where his body could not help but to react in a primal instinct, his mind screamed that this was wrong. The rage shook him, and his breathing became ragged, guttural.

“Just do what you want, you petching bastard. Get it over with.” The ethaefals words escaped him in a hard, strained growl.

Zaelsen paused in his ministrations then, and Maddoch felt the weight lift off his neck and back. He stared at the table with a spark of uncertainty, until the Radacke’s hand slammed down on his head and jerked his hips upright. The searing pain that exploded from his backside sent a shock through his system, and the ethaefal cried out.

“Scream,” the man hissed, gripping the ethaefal’s hair almost as viciously as he was violating him. Maddoch gasped for air, each jerk and slam against the table knocking what little air in his lungs that he had and irritated the knife that was still embedded in his palm. The captive couldn’t escape into his mind like he sought to. His world was agony and torment, and a ravaging that would leave him a husk. His yells intensified, but the dynast was not satisfied. He twisted the ethaefal’s hair in a vise-like grip, tugging his head up to press his mouth to his ear.

”Scream.”

Something tore inside him, and he felt a cascade of hot, stinging torment shoot up his spine. The ethaefal finally screamed. It was a never ending nightmare. His body no longer felt like his own. It was a vessel that held a butchered soul. He could not feel the hands the grabbed his throat, nor the mouth that left brutal bite marks on his flesh. It was an overload of his senses, and one by one, they numbed.

He didn’t know how long he’d been screaming, but soon even his voice cracked under the stress. His thoughts were warped, incoherent, and jumbled, as his mouth formulated nothing but the very moans that made Zaelsen Radacke smile in triumph.

“I wonder what that Lorak child would think of you now,” Zaelsen murmured against his flesh. “Broken… and moaning like a used whore.” He gave a hard shove for emphasis. “I know how fond of her you were, Achenar. But no respectable woman would ever fall for a broken slave.”

Verena. Maddoch felt something shatter in him, like those words had been a dagger aimed for his heart. And in that moment, he wished it was. He gave no answer save for the primal, guttural sounds forced from the Radacke’s ministrations. The tears fell from his cheeks and hit the surface of the table, and the ethaefal began to sob.

He was nothing. And no one. Zaelsen had won.

The dynast finished inside him and deftly extracted himself, watching the slave’s body shake in despair. He held no remorse in his gaze, only a stone cold stare. As Maddoch curled an arm around his heavy, throbbing head on the table, he felt an abrupt but gentle stroke of his hair. The stark change in such a touch ignited a yearning in the ethaefal. He craved it. He needed it. And through no conscious effort, the slave leaned into the touch. This made the Radacke smile.

“There, there, pet. You’re back where you belong.”
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To Butcher A Man's Soul

Postby Estrellir Konrath on September 21st, 2015, 3:03 pm

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Maddoch

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Zaelsen Radacke: Bends the truth
Maddoch: Free man?
Torture: Pain is pleasure
Torture: Pouring lime juice into wounds
Manipulation: Carrots and sticks
Achenar: Pet of Zaelsen Radacke
Sexual abuse as means of manipulation


Bitten tongue
Open wounds across the back (more painful than usual)
Hole through right palm
Several bruises across entire body

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Well, I already told you what I think of the thread… Hope I didn’t miss any of the injuries, haha. PM me with any questions or concerns!
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