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Z'ily

Postby Z'ily on January 14th, 2018, 8:54 pm

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Z ' i l y

 
Race: Svefra  

Gender: Female 

Age: 16 
Birthday: 21st Summer 501av 

Height: 5'4" 
Weight: 131lbs 

Profession:   

Language: Common - Fluent
  Fratava - Basic 

 
Appearance

Deep chocolate eyes are set within high cheekbones, defined by an intense smattering of freckles. Her milky complexion is framed by long, flowing, fiery locks often salt caked and tangled. A life at sea has born a muscular, lusty frame; elegance is not within her nature. Her skin is sea-coarse and Syna-touched; her fingers calloused and tough from years of sailing.

Z'ily's sense of style is mimicked from her Svefra kin, mashing different colours and cultures together to form her own individual fashion. Favouring bare feet, Z'ily's toes are often sand or dirt crusted. Her ginger mane is often intertwined with shells or beads that she discovers on the beaches or "picks up" along her travels.


Birthmark Tattoos
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Scars

 
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 11:47 am

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Concept

ENFP (-A/-T) | Neutral Good

"It doesn’t interest me what you do for a living. I want to know what you ache for – and if you dare to dream of meeting your heart’s longing. It doesn’t interest me how old you are. I want to know if you will risk looking like a fool – for love – for your dreams – for the adventure of being alive."   ~ Oriah Mountain Dreamer

Whimsy. Intuitive. A Dreamer. An enthusiastic, free spirit fluttering from whichever notion strikes her in the moment. She is shifty and sometimes perceived as odd, bouncing from pillar to post and often without warning. She wears her heart on her sleeve; her emotions as turbulent as Laviku's oceans.

While strongly independent, she craves acceptance and family connection.
Deeply compassionate and social; she will help others realise their aspirations, yet be warned, she is somewhat selfish in life and will only help if it suits her whim in that moment- nothing will stop her from achieving her own dreams.


Aspirations


 
Short Term
 
Get Job
Explore Syka
Settle in independent life
Make friends
Learn how to survive
Learn how to defend herself
Try and fit in and be content on land


 
Long Term
 
Talk with Laviku
Gain Laviku's Grace [Gnosis]

Obtain a Tavan - by any means! [Familiary ??]

Gain Zulrav's favour [Gnosis]

* Gain Svefra Acceptance!!! *

 
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 2:11 pm

Faith


  Laviku
Image Z'ily desires nothing more than to elevate into Laviku's grace. Unmarked at birth, she feels rejected by her father. She strives to make him proud and do his will in the hopes that he will some day welcome her into his family with open arms. Despite this distance, she clings to his guidance and prays to him daily. Although he remains silent and distant from her, she does not let this taint her feelings towards him.


  Zulrav
Image Z'ily admires and respects Zulrav's power and influence in a fearful reverence. She knows his influence can result in either life or death. When at sea especially she prays to the God for favourable winds and safe passage.
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 2:57 pm

History

 
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A child born without Laviku's gift! The coupling of two Svefra has resulted in the birth of a child holding the gaze of the Earth - not the ocean from whence their kin came. As per their culture she was surely destined to be cast into the oceans - a gift returned to their father, Laviku. Despite missing Laviku's official Oceanus Mark upon birth; she did however bear a strange birthmark upon her shoulder that mysteriously resembled a splash of water. Was this a sign that she was indeed Svefra? But surely the lack of the ocean in her eyes spoke otherwise?

Debates of distaste were argued. It was finally settled by the Lia, that the child lacked Laviku's gift and should be returned to the ocean's grace.

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However, a merchant ship had been travelling alongside the Pod awhile. The Captain, half-Svefra himself, couldn't bear the thought of the loss of life of an infant.He rushed to steal the baby into his arms and declared his protection of her.He would raise her as his own, what would it matter to the Pod if he took her away? It took fierce arguing, but he convinced them to allow his adoption of Z'ily, whom he named that day.

Although her life had been saved, the Lia proclaimed that despite the blood of the Svefra running through her viens, she still lacked the ocean's grace and therefore could never be truly Svefra. She was to be disowned from her kin;
an outcast of society.

So, Z'ily was co-raised by the half-Svefra and his tightly knit crew upon his merchant ship. She lived a life of relative normality. She lived a life at sea; where her heart belongs. He taught her the ways of the Svefra, their culture; yet however close she felt to the Svefra, she was doomed to never truly be apart of their kin. At every interaction, they jeered that she did not belong on the oceans, that she belonged with the landlubbers. Self-doubt tugs at her;
are they right? Or is she willing to fight to prove she is Svefra?


 
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 3:20 pm

Skills

 
Novice
Fishing+10 [SP]10/100
Navigation: Sea+10 [SP]10/100
Sailing+10 [RB]10/100
Shipbuilding+5 [SP]5/100
Swimming+10 [SP]10/100
Wilderness Survival: Sea+15 [SP]15/100


 
Competent
   


 
Expert
   


 
Master
   


Lores

 
Zily
 


 
People
 


 
Races
Svefra:
Svefra Culture [SP]


 
Factions
 


 
Locations
 


 
Fauna
 


 
Flora
 


 
Religion
 


 
Skills
Sailing:
How to sail a Casinor [SP]


 
Magic
 


 
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 3:23 pm

Boe

Location: Syka


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Z'ily's personal casinor. A small, personal ship no longer than 30 feet with a single cabin. Capable of traversing inland seas and coastal areas, though it is unequipped to travel on the open ocean. Cargo is limited to 500 lbs. Crew: 1, Passengers: 5


Personal Possessions

 
Ship
Fishing Net: (25 sq.ft) x1
Blanket: winter x1
Bedroll x1


 
Clothing
Main Attire:
Simple Shirt: white, cotton x1 [SP]
Simple Pants: brown, leather x1 [SP]
Simple undergarments: white, cotton x1 [SP]
Simple cloak: brown x1 [SP]
Simple boots: knee high, leather x1 [SP]
Belt x1
Pouch: belt x1

Wardrobe:
Dress: baby blue, cotton, lace trim x1
Bikini: coral, ramie x1
Undergarments: cotton x1


 
Hygenics
Soap x1 bar [SP]
Brush: wooden x1 [SP]
Razor x1 [SP]
Comb: wooden x1 [SP]
Toothbrush x1
Toothpowder x16oz
Washboard x1
Chamber Pot x1


 
Kitchenry
Utensils:
Eating Knife: x1 [SP]
Soup Spoon x2
Cooking Utensil x1

Crockery:
Cup: 8oz x2
Bowl: 16oz x2
Iron Kettle x1
Cooking Pot: gallon x1
Pan: 16" x1

Food Stores:
Balanced Rations: x1 weeks worth [SP]
Cheese: common x1lb
Bread: loaf x1
Tea Leaves x1lb
Salt x1lb


 
Tools
Water Skin: x1 [SP]
Backpack: x1 [SP]
Flint & Steel: x1 [SP]
Breath Bag x1
Fishing Pole x1
Rope, Hemp: (50ft) x1
Dice Set bone x1


 
Kits
Fishing Kit: x1
A kit of tackle, fishing cord and bait


 
Medicine
 


 
Weapons
Dagger x1
Scabbard: dagger x1


 
Heirloom
ImageThis bundle of multicoloured, tattered cloth swaddled Z'ily as an infant. It was the cloth she was nearly cast into the ocean with and is the only connection she has to her family and Svefran kin. She is rarely seen without it, often adorning it as a scarf in some fashion.


Zoic Possessions

 
Animals
   


 
Equipment
   

 
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Postby Z'ily on January 15th, 2018, 4:02 pm

Ledger

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517
Item:Debit:Total:Thread:
Starting+100GM100 GM SP
Dress: cotton, dyed, lace trim x1 - 5gm 4sm94gm 6sm 0cm SP
Bikini: ramie, dyed x1 - 6sm 5cm93gm 9sm 5cm SP
Undergarments, cotton x1 - 3sm 5cm93gm 6sm 0cm SP
Belt x1 - 2sm93gm 4sm 0cm SP
Pouch, Belt x1 - 1gm92gm 4sm 0cm SP
Toothbrush x1 - 3gm89gm 4sm 0cm SP
Tooth Powder x16oz - 1gm 2sm88gm 2sm 0cm SP
Cheese, common x1lb - 2sm88gm 0sm 0cm SP
Bread, loaf x1 - 2cm87gm 9sm 8cm SP
Tea leaves x1lb - 2sm87gm 7sm 8cm SP
Salt x1lb - 5gm82gm 7sm 8cm SP
Cup 8oz x2 - 1sm82gm 6sm 8cm SP
Bowl 16oz x2 - 6cm82gm 6sm 2cm SP
Soup Spoon x2 - 2cm82gm 6sm 0cm SP
Iron Kettle x1 - 8sm81gm 8sm 0cm SP
Cooking Utensil x1 - 2sm81gm 6sm 0cm SP
Cooking Pot, Gallon x1 - 3sm81gm 3sm 0cm SP
Pan, 16" x1 - 4cm81gm 2sm 6cm SP
Fishing Net (25sq.ft) x1 - 4gm77gm 2sm 6cm SP
Blanket, winter x1 - 5sm76gm 7sm 6cm SP
Bedroll x1 - 1sm76gm 6sm 6cm SP
Rope, Hemp (50ft) x1 - 1gm75gm 6sm 6cm SP
Washboard x1 - 1gm 2sm74gm 4sm 6cm SP
Chamber Pot x1 - 2sm74gm 2sm 6cm SP
Breath Bag x1 - 2gm72gm 2sm 6cm SP
Dice set, bone x1 - 5cm72gm 2sm 1cm SP
Fishing pole x1 - 1gm71gm 2sm 1cm SP
Dagger x1 - 2gm69gm 2sm 1cm SP
Scabbard, Dagger x1 - 2gm67gm 2sm 1cm SP
Fishing Kit x1 - 10gm57gm 2sm 1cm SP


Total: 57gm 2sm 1cm


* Common Expenses: 135 gm / Season

 
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Postby Z'ily on January 16th, 2018, 10:18 pm

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Postby Antipodes on January 18th, 2018, 3:03 am

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Hello there, it appears you are a bit lost! Please allow me to be your guide.


I'm Antipodes, a CS Liaison here on Miz, and I'm here to help you achieve the coveted green check mark. However, I need you to amend a few things first.

☉ Please change your race and starting package Your character is not Svefra, she's human. Please correct this in your control panel and CS and change your points to reflect the human RB. You also need to change your starting package to the standard housing package or the tent package since only Svefra can have a casnior.


Do let me know via pm once the necessary edits have been made. I welcome you to touch base with me if you have any and all questions about the issues listed above or about the site, in general. My job is to help, after all, and I will do what I can to assist you as best as I am able. Remember, don't get overwhelmed and enjoy! You'll be writing with the rest of us in no time :)
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