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Sometimes a man just needs to get away from all his troubles and let loose a little.

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Sweet Release

Postby Elias Caldera on March 11th, 2018, 1:49 am

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9th Day of Spring, 518 AV


The southern outpost was the gateway to Ravok, the city’s will projected out beyond the waters that kept her guarded and unto the distant shores where the fires of industry burned day and night to keep Rhysol’s sanctum sanctorum running as perfectly as those who ran it wanted everyone to believe. While Ravok was paradise, the lakeshore was anything but. Fueled by the labor of those who tirelessly worked the lumber yards and lily pad fields, the usual rules and regulations that governed the holy city did not apply here quiet so strictly. That gave rise to opportunity for those who were more… enterprising that others.

Kale's tavern was a good example of what such enterprising souls could accomplish.

Anywhere else in Syliras and it would have been reported, raided, shut down and -if the authorities were smart- burned down as an indelible stain best removed and forgotten. It's beer was either piss-weak or was likely to blind you. The whores were past their prime or nothing more than bait for thieves. And the basement, well... Kale boasted that more cripples were made on his premises than in the the dungeons of the Black Sun, which told you a lot about the man himself.

Men and often women beat each other senseless in the rough ring lined by spikes under the drinking floor. Petching on top, boozing in the middle, battle in the bottom. That was what Kale had set up here in the little fiefdom he'd carved out for himself. He put the word around that he'd host the fights; he had a couple of his kids work as bookies; then he had some of the local lumberjacks work the door and everything just... flowed.

No regulation, save for the weekly cut to the Ebonstryfe of course, but that was just the price of doing business, and in return, Kale got some extra clout just in case anyone wanted to welsh on a debt or tear up his place.

Ruthless. Amoral. Unstructured. Everything the city of chaos wasn’t openly allowed to be, encapsulated in one roaring, stinking shykehole.

For Elias, sometimes a reprieve from the stifling facades and intrigue of his home was as much a necessity to him as it was to breath. Every once in a while, he had to come up for air. This was where he did it. The pace of the tavern barely slowed when he stepped in. A few halfway-familiar faces turned to him and offered a nod, mostly other stryfers off duty and trying to relax before the next patrol sent them into the wilds again. In a few weeks, he'd be out there with them again. In the time being though-

"Well look who it is!

"Kale, you fat petch, you miss me?

Kale scratched under his stubbly beard and shook Elias's hand after squashing some wriggling thing his fingers had found. Hard brown eyes seemed to be searching that familiar, scarred face for some reason, as if Elias was some long lost family member come looking for a handout. To the swordsman though, Kale was almost like family, as harrowing as that was to consider. He’d known this son of a bitch even before his exile. Years ago he'd been a two bit smuggler back on the east docks when the stryfer soldier had been just a stryfer apprentice working diligently to curtail the criminals that befouled their city. By curtail, he of course meant shake down and extort, and Kale had always been a loyal confident and snitch in those days. In fact, he’d made enough coin selling out his fellow ne’er-do-wells that he could have afforded himself a place in the noble district if he had wanted. Instead he had come out here and made… this.

"Missed you like a miss a hemorrhoid, lad. What brings you back into my little slice of paradise?"

"Paradise?" Elias said as a tankard was placed before him by a serving wench with eyes far too old for her face. "That what you call it?"

Kale harrumphed and gestured around with chunky arms long of wobbling fat, taking in all above and below in the swooshing gesture.

"You kiddin'? Gash, booze, dice and brawling, all under the same roof. There's folk who'd think this was the petching' afterlife, boy."

"God help us if you're right. If this is where we go after we die, i'd better start repenting for all my sins now.

"...you always were a clever cunt."

Nothing but a smirk greeted that challenge, and some nearby eavesdroppers were surprised... and disappointed. Nothing better than seeing a fight break out, and if ever there was a man more eager to have his pride wounded, it was Elias Caldera. Instead however, he swallowed Kale's bait without taking the hook, along with a mouthful of some of the worst petching booze he’d ever tasted... and shrugged.

"Feel like teaching me a lesson? Let me in the pit tonight."

Kale blinked a few time. "You serious?"

"What, you worried my pretty face might get banged up?

Kale settled back into his seat by the fire, eyebrows atop his brow, mouth a little open, like he'd been told the world was going to end tomorrow. "Well, dip me in honey and throw me to the bears. Will wonders never cease. You’ve always just watched the fights before. Hell, watching is all you ever seem to do seein’ as you won’t even stoop to plowing one of my girls for petch sake, why the sudden excitement to get your hands dirty now?"

"I find myself in need of… release."

Kale could tell the kid wasn't going to give him anymore than that... and he'd learned hard over the decades that the less questions a man asked in this own, the longer he lived. He sipped his own brew -actual ale, not the horse shyke he sold the others- and savored it, thinking, plotting, planning...

"I might have an opening for you tonight."

"Don't play coy with me, you cheeky old tease, you'll get me a fight, you’ll let me put some money on myself to boot, are we clear?

The old man's face split into a leer, exposing holes and gaps and yellow, blackish and things that seemed to shrink from the light and hide in rotted gums. Elias realized with a start that the sound the wretch was making behind them was actually laughter.

"Oh ho ho ho! I’m going to enjoy watching you get your ass beat to a pulp, Caldera. We all will."
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Sweet Release

Postby Elias Caldera on March 11th, 2018, 1:49 am

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There was none of the pantomime one would expect, none of the grandiosity. In such dank, dismal and banal settings, such a thing would have been unseemly. There was a clear divide between the citizens upon the lake and those that toiled to serve them, but say what you will about the denizens of the shoreline, they, more than any other, were ruled by their practicality.

The drunks and wretches and blood lusters were there to see two men beat each other into oblivion, and that was what they'd get.

Kale didn't even bother introducing Elias and his opponent when they leaped down into the pit, mindful to avoid the jagged spikes and nails hammered into the walls. Maybe five yards wide and roughly circular, half-a-dozen could have fought in it comfortably. With just two, and under the harsh glare of a mess of candles strewn over them, Elias felt like they were specimens under a KRI researcher’s glass.

Give the people a show, remember?

The pale ravokian turned his eyes from the braying rabble to the fellow opposite him. Younger, but almost as large. Muscles hewn from hard work and gouged with dark ink. Some similar symbols were on a clutch of shouting fans behind him. His mates, most likely, goading him on to victory.

Man fights harder when he thinks he'll looks bad in front of his mates. Elias mused. He wondered if there were any sons of the stryfe watching him now, cheering him on. The ridiculous thought cut a sinister grin across his marred features.

Both were stripped down to their breeches and nothing else. Even tape over their knuckles was eschewed as foppery. Kale promised blood, and that was best supplied with bare knuckles and nothing else. Elias weighed the man across from him with his eyes. The way he rolled his shoulders and his neck, the manner in which he stretched his legs and gave the empty air a flurry of punches, a blur of violent flesh.

Tough one. Young and hungry.

He gave a grunt that was lost in the din, found Kale through the crowd, pen jabbing out to find gamblers and scribbling down wages, amounts, odds. Elias unlimbered his purse and tossed it up to him. It was quick work for the tavern keeper to count it up -fifty gold pieces- and then raise a questioning eyebrow.

Elias managed a smirk in the pit, enough for the answer Kale wanted.

Who the petch do you think I'm putting it on?

"All right!" Kale's voice cracked as it rattled the wooden rafters. The crowd stilled for a few ticks, letting him do away with the formalities. "Caldera?" Elias nodded and that was enough for Kale, who turned his gaze to the younger fighter next. "Davos?"

Far more noise and acclaim for the sound his name. Obviously a popular fighter, most likely with a number of wins under his belt, but Elias could see it hadn't yet gone to the lad's head. Davos acknowledged it with a raised fist and nothing more, never once removing his grimacing attention from that of his opponent.

He’s serious about this...

The crowd roared, but they were far away. Elias was the same. He was there, but his hopes, his purpose, the drive to put his body through this ordeal, that was all he cared for. He needed this. He needed to unleash himself, to exercise these maddening thoughts and heinous delusions of murder and violence that had plagued his every waking moment since Shiress had been taken -Since she’d been stolen. Keeping still and placid while he remained incapable of mounting a reaction to the Lark's thievery -it just wansn't like him.

Elias drew on that rage as he filled his lungs, tightened his fists until the knuckles whitened, and clenched his jaw. He did not know what whim or necessity put Davos in his path, he only cared that he was there now, and his pain would serve a purpose.

"Fight!"

Davos closed the distance fast. No nonsense, no goading, just his guard up until he was close enough to unleash a hurricane of punches that battered themselves against Elias's own forearms, staggering the bigger man on his feet before pulling back and aiming a low, vicious uppercut under Elias's guard, hammering into his gut a tick after the pale fighter had girded his stomach against the blow.

It did him little good. He could feel Kale’s brew bubbling its way up his throat again and was more reviled at the thought of tasting it once more than he was of upchucking it all over himself.

Another strike followed quick, but now Elias's lowered guard took it, exposing his face in the process. He slid to his side, avoiding the well executed haymaker that could have knocked him into darkness that came next. Rudimentary tactics, maybe, but he had speed, and strength... and no hint of exhaustion wracked Davos's body. Elias, on the other hand?

How long has it been since I put my hands up like this?

The answer was obvious. He’d missed this thrill, this excitement, and now that he was back in, he was reminded of that. Reminded that this was normal… his nature.
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Sweet Release

Postby Elias Caldera on March 11th, 2018, 1:50 am

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Davos followed his haymaker up with a short jab, but Elias easily turned it aside with his right, his own left retaliating swiftly by snapping out like a piston -once, twice, three times hammering into Davos's open face, crunching flesh and cartilage in rapid succesion. It served more to annoy the kid more than actually harm him however. A snarl of rage split that youthful face and Elias backed away, point made, wisdom gleamed.

Got an ego on him. Doesn't like being hurt... humiliated. Good.

As expected, Davos went all out in retaliation. Jabs and hooks buffeted Elias like he was a ship on the high seas, then knees followed suites, battering his stomach and ribs, with one lucky kick rending his left thigh senseless, making Elias hobble away with a grunt of frustration.

It'll numb up. Give it time. Survive until he opens up again.

Davos proved that was so moments later. He wasn't about to give Elias any room or chance to catch his breath. The scarred stryfer had already revealed he had some life in him, better finish him fast before he could up his game anymore, the kid no doubt thought. He swung wide as a result, a feint, forcing Elias back, only use the momentum from it to spin him around, his leg coming up and slamming a perfect back kick into Elias's stomach.

Hold!

Doubled over to stop his reeling, Elias felt the longer spikes tickle his back as he finally managed to slow himself. Davos was on him again a tick later, punches raining down like a storm, forcing him low, and into a protective shell. The jeers and taunts of the crowd piled on from above along with brutal, unyielding force. Elias should have been furious that his assault was being blocked, stymied, and his energy all but wasted, but in truth the exhilaration was more than compensating his disappointment. If it was a true battlefield with his life in the balance, that might be different. But here? It was a contest.

And what value is a contest if your opponent is not worthy of you?

He was taking a beating now however, and if he had any hope of getting upright again, he was going to have to eat a punch on the ascent… that, or he could cheat like a motherpetcher.

The power welled within him at the though, churning like a river within his chest before its pull changed abruptly, surging forward through his limbs. The Flux had come alive, and his magic was working overtime to make up for its disuse so far.

Davos eye’s went wide as the scarred sorcerer caught his fist in mid air as if it with were nothing more than a buzzing gnat. The kid tried again with is free arm, but again his strike was captured, and now both his hands were prisoners. Elias could have snapped him in two then, used his power overwhelming to break bone and spirit alike, but instead, he took a step forward, and shoved Davos away with a single, mighty thrust.

Elias wasn’t above cheating to win, but neither was he going to cheat himself out of the satisfaction he’d come looking for.

There was a pause of course, as shock settled in. Above them the crowd was loving it, arms flailing, throats running raw as the the spectators shouted and threatened and cursed. Davos was oblivious to all of it, still picking himself off the ground where he'd been tossed like a ragdoll all the while eyeing his enemy with new found wariness and confusion.

Elias smiled mockingly, circling the boy, blood now glistening hotly upon his cheek.

Davos, still reeling from his manhandling, made the mistake of hesitating, and by the time boy had blinked once, the soldier was already upon him, hands raised, fierce and focused. Davos reacted like a veteran, his right arm lashing out, a broad and desperate punch. Too broad. Too desperate. It was a feint, masking the left uppercut that came slashing towards Elias. It took a concentrated effort to weave himself out of the way, avoiding the nasty hook altogether. The soldier swayed with the dodge, giving momentum to his lower body as his right foot swung out, aiming for Davos stomach in an attempt to repay the debt he owed the little shyke from earlier. He heard the smack of flesh before he’d really felt the impact of his attack, but by the look on his opponent’s face, it had been quite the opposite for him.

Good. He needed him to feel this. He needed him to feel all of it.
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Postby Elias Caldera on March 11th, 2018, 1:50 am

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Time to put you down.

The force of the kick had stunned Davos, and with the opening it presented, Elias exploded forward with a roar, arms outstretched, tackling the poor petch down to the ground. The impact jarred them both, but Davos had got the worst of it.

Whatever reserves of wrath and brutality Elias had allowed to grow over those long days, he vented in that damned, filthy pit. Like a machine, he reared up and pounded down, one fist after falling after the other, over and over and over again.

Yet Davos was not so easily felled, and even straddled and stunned, the shoresman raised his guard against the onslaught as best he could. It lasted perhaps a whole tick until Elias ripped one arm out of the way and put his whole upper body behind a crushing elbow that smashed into the side of Davos's head, just below the eye.

Elias felt something break under the impact. Blood and spittle soaked the sweat on his joint and Davos's scream trembled through his arm, body wriggling desperately under him.

He kept hitting. Kept punching. Davos swung blindly in his desperation to be freed and Elias's jaw caught it, and he accepted it, rolling off the battered, bleeding boy and came up a few yards away in a low crouch, panting through the sweat and the blood trickling into his mouth, his teeth bared like an animal.

Davos was a while getting up. The honorable thing would have been to give him time; allow him to face Elias equally, even blind in one eye and wearied from that butchery he'd subjected him to.

Elias had tasted blood now, there was no more patience left in him. He wanted more.

The Stryfer darted in from Davos's blind side and swung his left leg into the side of his opponent's. Another shout as the kid collapsed down to one knee, fear and pain now replacing everything else on that young face. His fellows, so fickle and fleeting, now jeered him and shook their heads from where once they had applauded and shouted words of encouragement. Now they mocked him even as he was savaged for their approval.

Davos tried a backhand at Elias and the pale man's right hand caught it at the wrist, freezing his arm in mid-air, straight and vulnerable. Like the fall of executioner’s axe, the crowd held their breath, savoring that sickly sweet and awful moment before Elias smashed hist fist into the exposed arm, snapping it like a twig.

The boy screamed.

His eyes popped open in agony, even the one that was crowded and closed by ruined flesh. Elias felt some traitorous mote of empathy in that moment, seeing all he had wrought for money…

For her.

End it.


He grabbed the back of Davos's head and pivoted his hips, rocketing his knee upwards until cracked against the boy’s face with a sickening thud. It was a heavy, meaty thwack! like a steak slapped onto a butcher's board. Davos spasmed once, his whole body going rigid and overwhelmed as a peace fell over his countenance, grateful and blessed to be free from the pain at last.

He fell forward into the dirt, finally still, and the crowd went ballistic.

Elias had eyes only for Kale however, the fat bastard leering down at him as a man would at a purchase well made. Elias spat to the side and started to climb.
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Postby Elias Caldera on March 11th, 2018, 1:50 am

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"Got a couple more in ya?"

"I think… not."

Kale glanced up from his pile of profits and saw that Elias had a point. The rough, heady adrenaline that had powered his victory had since seeped out of him by the time he'd staggered his way to the table, leaving in its wake a human-shaped mass of sores, welts, bruises and aching flesh.

"Petch. They grow ‘em tough out here on the shore… or maybe I’m just getting old.

He heard Kale grunt but barely saw him, not with a cold, wadded towel pressed to one side of his face. The crowd had hardly dispersed, but it wasn't so focused now on the ring; now it was gossiping, boozing, arguing, eagerly flirting and grousing over debts to be paid and payers who needed to quit making excuses. Now and then there would be some titter or whispers and Elias knew that a few of his new fans had sidled over to gawp.

He didn't acknowledge them, instead turned away from them so only the towel was presented. Best they didn't remember him so well…

"You’ve just been spoiled by all your fancy dinner parties and the ball room dances up there in Ravok. Comfort like that breeds weakness in a man. I remember, I once pined for nothing more." Kale grunted again and bound up Elias's purse, sliding it across the table to him. "And you’re not petching old, you little twerp. You wait 'til you have to get up five times a night just to have one good piss and then come talk to me about feeling your age."

"I don’t think I’ll be pissing for a while after that kidney shot."

For a tick, there was a moment of brevity between the two men, or at least an ease of tension. Then Elias felt the weight of his winnings and the towel dropped from his face. One eye was closed by bruises, Davos's barrage getting more than a few good blows in. His stomach was a vice that pressed on his guts whenever he breathed and his hands shook even as he hefted the bag. That was good money right there, and the soldier was having a hard time tearing his gaze away from it…

"Keep it."

Kale's cold gaze went wide for a while, then narrowed into something hard and harsh. It held no sympathy, or curiosity, or mirth. Now it was business, pure and simple, and he waited for the ‘why’ to finally drop.

Consider it the price of an introduction.” Elias finally said, revealing his intent as he slid the pouch back to the fat man with a noticeable degree of difficulty. He hoped it would just look like the strain of his injuries wearing on him.

Kale’s eyebrows peaked mischievously, and he shrugged. "Now, who I wonder do you think a bloke as lowly as I would know out here, eh? Who I wonder do you think is worth this much coin."

Elias forced a grin. “Take a few of those coins and buy me another round, and we’ll discuss it, old friend.

Kale hesitated for a moment, then forced a smile of his own as he gestured towards the stairs. "Then by all means, lets drink a toast together, like we did back in the day… old friend.
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Sweet Release

Postby Okara on July 26th, 2018, 12:43 pm

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Elias Caldera

Persuasion 2
Gambling 1
Unarmed Combat 3
Flux 2

Gambling: Betting on Yourself
The Thrill of the Fight
Elias: Not Above Cheating
Persuasion: The Price of an Introduction

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(-)Bruising along Elias’s body for two weeks
I couldn’t find any location in the linkmap that matched the place you described, if I missed something please PM me and I will add the location lore. Overall, this was a well done thread with a very engaging story. Elias seems to have a complicated emotional depth lurking beneath his cold surface and has no remorse for his lack of honor. I enjoyed getting to know Elias a little bit through this thread. Let me know if you have any issues with my grade.


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