Character Sheet Help 2.0

by **Anselm** on April 23rd, 2012, 1:41 am

Minerva - Zeltiva or Sahova. You probably want Zeltiva.

by **Sarafine Grey** on April 26th, 2012, 4:38 pm

i have done roleplay befor2, but this type is completely new to me and i have absolutely no idea what i'm doing. here is the link to my CS. if u could look at it and give me some advice id apreciate it because i'm sure i did it completely wrong. thanks

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic20895.html

by **Masaiken** on April 27th, 2012, 5:44 am

Hey guys, how are you?

So, I've completed a character sheet. Here's the link: My PC

Please go over it slowly and carefully when you've got the time. I want my character to be PERFECT when I show him to a storyteller. That being said, be as harsh as you want in nitpicking the hell out of it, please. I can take it. ^^

A few concerns:
-- I'm not sure if I got the Starting Package down correctly. I did my best, but let me know if I need to deduct something from my starting 100gm, and why, too.
-- My SP skills are set exactly as I'd think they be given my character's Pre-Creation history (it's long, but a good read, hopefully). However, I'm not sure if I broke any rules regarding using skills as a new PC.
-- My character, Saivone Masaiken, is linked to another PC: Osaleni. He'll post his request here in a second, I reckon, but I just wanted you all to know that these two c-sheets kinda go together.
-- I tried to be as faithful to the Chaktawe lore and race as possible, whilst still being unique and creative as I can be. Let me know if I need to change something, please. ^^; Because I don't want to mess up on the race part.

Thank you very much, I look forward to your reviews and suggestions. =)

by **Osaleni** on April 27th, 2012, 5:45 am

My character Maahleosaleni is in need of reviewing if such is necessary ^^. She is a dhani traveler and is along side her slave -seen above haha-. If nothing needs changing GREAT, but I'd still love a nice review or impression on the profile

. Thanks, Sincerely...me.

by **Casa** on May 12th, 2012, 12:47 am

My character is ready for review when someone gets a chance.

by **Malice** on May 13th, 2012, 7:13 pm

I am ready for someone to review my CS. Also I have some question about being a mixed race that is human and Zith.

1. I read that Zith have shorter lifespans than most mortals on Mizahar. What would be the lifespan of mix between Zith and human?

2. Would a Zith mother raise half Zith son like a normal ZIth?

3. Also in his appearance I gave him claws on his hands what other Zith physical traits can he have other than claws if he is a mixed race?

by **Scratch** on May 18th, 2012, 10:51 pm

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic15384.html

This character is a re-invention of an old character that didn't work out so well. I wanted to make sure there are no egregious problems with my backstory before I start playing. Also, there's an old intervention from back when the backstory didn't make sense, from a mod who's retired now. Could I get that removed? (Even if it's replaced by a shiny new one

)

Thanks!

by **Talia Iceglaze** on May 24th, 2012, 5:58 am

Hello. As a newbie I want to make absolutely certain that I am within my bounds. As such, I'm humbly requesting that my character sheet be reviewed.

My Character Sheet

Please and thank you.

by **Anjali Adhetra** on May 26th, 2012, 3:42 am

ok where do i post my CS?

by **Anjali Adhetra** on May 26th, 2012, 3:52 am

im ready for some one to reveiw my , i hope i posted it right :/
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic21793.html