Navaq Feather

[Navaq Feather]

Basic Information Race:Human Birthday & Age : 1 day of winter 595AV (16 years old) Gender:Female Languages Language 1: Fluent Common Language 2: Basic Tawna Language 3: Poor Kontinese Physical Description Navaq stands around 5'5" and wighs 98lbs. She appears very small and fragile looking. She has this soft, dollish beauty that makes her look very young. She has light blonde hair that goes little under her shoulders and bounces in big, soft curls. Her eyes are big and colored in shiny glass blue. Her skin is white and covered in little, almost invisible freckles. Her eyes are glowing with the soft innocence of a child. She has little silverish birth mark in the form of dragonfly, under the corner of her right eye. Character Concept Navaq is shy girl. She is innocent in that childish way, that makes her appear naive, but still she is very smart. She loves spending time in libraries and prefers staying alone, burried in books, than being around people. She doesn't like being in places with alot of people, because they make her nervous, but would love spending time with someone sharing her interests. At the beginning she barely talks but once she starts trusting you, she will unreveal to you the most magical and beautiful stories about the world. Navaq hold big passhion for fairytales and pretty much anything that has to do with books. Character History Navaq is born in Syliras, in a small appartment. Her parents were very fond of her and she grew as happy child. Unfortunately, when she was 13, her father passed away... A year later, she found her mother, poisoned on the floor of her parents room. She was heartbrocken... She loved her parents with her whole heart and never thought she may loose them... But she did... She cried for weeks, till her tears atlast ceased. She decided that she should move on, saving her pain deep inside her heart and never forgetting. She started work in her favorite library, where she alredy was spanding alot of time, and countinued living... Trying to start loving life like she once did... She is currently living in her parents' place Training & Skill Points Drawing 15/100 Intelligence 20/100 Writing 10/ 100 Harp 5/100 Phylosophy 15/100 Lore of literature of Syliras Lore of Myths of the Sylira region Equipment and Possessions Clothes (starting package) : Long black dress Bright red cloak with fur trim on the hood Knee high leather boots Other items: 1 Set Toiletries (comb-bone; brush-bone; razor;soap) 1 Eating Knife 1 waterskin Flint & Steel Heirloom: A old book with poetry... Ledger 100 GM [/color]

[Phoenix]

Moderator Note:

Hey there, Navaq

Just a few things.

First, you need to properly format your skills. To make it easier on ST's for when they are grading, we suggest that you use one of the formats found in this post.

You also don't have any housing listed. Please see the Starting package for more information on how the housing works. If you choose to have a house in Syliras, then please see the CS Templates for more information on the housing there.


Once you have addressed these issues, feel free to send a PM to myself or any of the CS liaisons in order to get this intervention removed!

Thanks,
-Phoenix.