The Trials and Tribulations of Overland Travel (Closed)

A motley group from the Syliran host break away to recover a cart from the mud.

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While Sylira is by far the most civilized region of Mizahar, countless surprises and encounters await the traveler in its rural wilderness. Called the Wildlands, Syliran's wilderness is comprised of gradual rolling hills in the south that become deep wilderness in the north. Ruins abound throughout the wildlands, and only the well-marked roads are safe.

The Trials and Tribulations of Overland Travel (Closed)

Postby Eldritch on August 6th, 2013, 6:34 pm

Eridanus :
Bodybuilding +2
Auristics +2
Leadership +1
Reimancy +1
Duel Wield +3
Flux +3
Shielding +1

-Conserving Djed for greater threats
-Using reimancy in the heat of a surprise attack
-Slaughtering Yukmen
-Yukmen intelligence is more than it seems

Markus :
Riding +3
Bodybuilding +2
Leadership +4
Dagger +1
Tactics +2
Bastard Sword +3
Shield +2

-Struggling to free the wagon from the mud
-Taking charge of the battle
-Leading your brothers in arms against Yukmen
-Riding Imass' horse

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Wow, this was probably the longest thread I've graded and one of the more exciting. It gives one a good idea of what dangers lurk out in the wilderness and why travelling in a group is even dangerous. Nice job here. :)

If you have any comments/questions/concerns about your grade please PM me and we will work something out.

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The Trials and Tribulations of Overland Travel (Closed)

Postby Konrad Venger on March 14th, 2016, 3:19 am


Nice job! Your work has pleased The Sloth!


Leadership - 2
Bodybuilding - 1
Observation - 4
Endurance - 2
Riding - 3
Rhetoric - 2
Tactics - 1
Broadsword - 3
Shield - 2

Observation: Mundane Mud or Magic?
Observation: Signs of Being Watched
Tactics: Divide and Conquer
Yukmen: Numerous but Not Warriors
Broadsword: One Blow is Usually Enough
Shield: Also Useful for Striking
Markus: A True, Charging Knight!

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Fun to read as always, you big, brawling, boisterous bugger, you! I like how Imass got stuck in fast and didn't concern himself with much of the bigger picture, until it became clear there WAS one. Well played!

Oh, and please make sure you go back and edit your post in the Request Thread to reflect the fact this one is now done and dusted. PM me with any questions and later 'tater!

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