[Note by Kraken] Caddy Twist (Incomplete)

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Caddy Twist (Incomplete)

Postby Caddy Twist on July 21st, 2012, 11:35 pm

Information
--Name--
-Caddy Finn Twist-
--Race--
-Human-
--Age--
-20-
--Birthday--
-492 AV, 2nd of Summer-
--Gender--
-Female-


Physical Description
Caddy is on the small side of the average height. She stands five feet, two
inches and is skinny, giving the illusion that she is taller than she is. One
immediately noticable thing is that her facial feature look young, around
fourteen or fifeteen years in age. Dont let it fool you. But the very first thing
people notice about Caddy is her eyes. With heterochromia iridum, Caddy has
one eye that is brown, and one that is green. Her hair falls mid-back when
worn down, though Caddy prefers to wear it in braids, or up in varioiusly
colored ties when in public. Yes, she still indulges in the vanity of pretty
things. As said, Caddy is small and skinny, but not weak. She is lean and well
built, even if it is not visible. Her body is all but flawless, having passed
the acne stage in life, if you disregard the small Pelican Tattoo,
inked on the outside of her right calve.


Character History
Caddy's mother died giving birth to her. Her father took her straight to her
Aunt's home and left Caddy in her care. Becuase her Aunt had eight
children of her own, Caddy was never given a name, or even paid
attention to. She was not bothered with until every one of her cousins was
cared for, which was very rare. As soon as Caddy could walk, she was
working around the house. At age seven Caddy would often wander the
streets at night, to escape her family. She continued until she was twelve
when she met am old Kelvic. Her name was Finn, and she was a Pelican.
Finn had lived wtih an even older Charoda, and when the Charoda passsed
away, Finn found her self in an old mining town. Caddy was soon named by
Finn, and started to hang out with her very often. While spending time
with Finn, Caddy was able to learn many things. Finn taught Caddy some
Char, and taught her how to just be quiet and observe the world around
her. They would often sit in the town center, and talk. At age fourteen,
Finn passed away and Caddy became lonely. She often would use what Finn
taught her to steal and cause trouble, in order to gain attention. Even if it
was bad attention. When Caddy turned twenty, she sold the few belongings
she had in order to accompany a traveling group. She didn't care where she
went as long as it was away from her family. And now she is in Ravok,
trying to start her new life.


Personality
Caddy is one of the quieter girls you'll meet, not because she is shy, but because she's always watching. She doesn't notice as much as you think she does, but her hands do. Start a conversation with her and you'll walk away with an empty wallet. Caddy's generally a lonely soul after her mentor and grandmother figure, Finn, passed away. She's looking for attention, without purposefully seeking anyone. But her distrust of people will keep her form making friends. She tries to act cold while she does things to earn your trust. Once you become her friend she will become very loyal, and very defensive over you. You've earn a life long friend and or a valuable ally if you manage to be her friend. But Caddy tends to loose control, give in to her greed, and her anger. Despite her hobby, Caddy has reasonably high moral standards, wandering in the shady sections of Ravok though, she doesn't have a problem with most of what goes on as long as she sees a valid reason for it. Overall Caddy will wants to know and care for someone, even though her temper and her general distrust gets in her way. She has no problem dipping her paws in danger, in fact she does it for fun.


Things to Know
As said in her personality and history, Caddy has been through a lot, and
took it hard. She is a stubborn, short-tempered, aggressive person, who desperately wants a friend. Preferably a friend that will stick through or take part in the trouble she gets in. So you should also note that she is very
selfconcious of her eyes, and the fact that she looks younger than she is.
Again, this was said previously in her physical description. So if your
willing to take her on as a friend she will be very loyal and trustworthy, a valuable companion or ally.


Posessions
-Sleevless Shirt-
-Grey Linen pants-
-White Lace Undergarmets-
-Black Leather Jacket-
-Leather Boots-
-Waterskin-
-Leather Pack(containing)-
-Wooden Comb[/url]-
-Soap-
-Balanced Rations-
-Water Skin-
-Eating Knife-
-Flint & Steel-
-Mizas (See Ledger)-
-Wooden Key Necklace (Heirloom)-
-Folding Knife-

--Housing--
N/A

--Ledger--
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
No Housing +500 600 GM



Skills, Lores, Languages, etc.
Caddy is a thief so she is good at observation, and stealth. Caddy hopes to
learn to Brawl though.
Skill Points Gained Total Proficiency
Stealth 30/100 SP30 Competent
Observation 15/100 SP15 Novice
Larceny 35/100 SP35 Competent


--Languages--
Knowledge Language
Fluent Common
Practiced Char


--Helpful Lores--
-Lore of Ravok Layout-
-Lore of Ravok Culture-
-Lore of Raenfae-
-A Deal with Raenfae-


--Threads List--

N/A[/center]
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I'm attempting to make amends and get everything back in order, please bear with me guys
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Caddy Twist

Postby Kraken on January 28th, 2013, 4:18 pm

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Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Thanks for messaging me about your character sheet, Caddy! It was a lot of fun to read. I love the two-coloured eyed! I think your PC will have a great time in Ravok. There are just a few notes for you to address before continuing on.

  • Heirloom: Is the "Wooden Key Necklace" your heirloom? If so, please be sure to explicitly state this.
  • Possessions: Please be sure to account for the Folding Knife in your PC's possession by deducting the price from your ledger.
  • Skills: Your skills don't seem to add up. Please be sure to state whether your skill points were obtained through the starting package (SP) or racial bonus (RB). When you're doing this, please note the exact number of points obtained from each. Remember - you can only begin the game with 50 points from the starting package and 15 from the human racial bonus. Each starting skill must have a minimum of 5XP and a maximum of 30XP.
    Proper Skill Setup :
    After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.

    Examples

    Skills Exp Total Proficiency
    Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master
    Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice
    Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert
    Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice
    Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice
    Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice
    Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master


    SP = Starting Points
    RB = Racial Bonus Points
    XP = Earned Experience Points


    Example 2:

    Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
    Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
    Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
    Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
    Sewing: 13/100
    Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
    Acrobatics: 85/100


    Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
  • Languages: Please state Char's language fluency as either "Basic" or "Poor," which adheres to Mizahar's language fluency system.
And that's it! Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!


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