L'amore

[L'amore]

Name: L'amore (acceptable to change)
Race: Kelvic
Birthday: Unknown
Age: 20
Gender: Female

Physical Description:

L'amore is 5'4" and weighs 135 lbs. Right handed. She has straight medium/long dark brown hair that shimmers with red and gold highlights when exposed to the sunlight. She has faint freckles on her face. Her nose is not big and long, indicating her beak, it is a regular nose. Her eyes are a golden brown in her animal form, but in her human form her eyes are a vibrant brown with a green hue closer to the pupil. They are rather larger than normal. Her body build is hourglass shaped and lean.

Character Concept:
Unlike most Kelvics, L'amore can read and write; however, not as well as most other races. She is so to herself that sometimes people mistake her for being mute. She expresses her feelings more by actions than doing it verbally. Once she gets to know someone new, she will eventually open up. At that point she becomes more talkative. She believes in individualism and that people should express their feelings more openly. (Even though she is not good at dong it herself) She is a very passionate lover and will do anything to see fit her significant other's happiness. That is what she seeks most: a lover who will treat her as an equal. L'amore loves nature and observing different styles of art. She dislikes anyone who treats her lower than that of a slave. Indeed she is Kelvic, but since her old master opened her eyes to the liberalism that surrounds the city of Lhavit, she has become able to think with more of an open mind. Her mind is still quite simple like that of most Kelvics, but there are a few things that make her unique from the rest. L'amore is so easily influenced by her emotions, she tends to over think, which can either be good or bad depending on the situation. L'amore strays from any forms of religion. There is too much happening on in the world for her to fully understand the powers of any gods. Until she finds someone to bond with, she might then dig deeper into any ideas of religion being carried through out the city.

Ethics: She just wants to be with someone. Because of this she can become rather clingy to those around her.

Likes: Nature, plants, and any human interaction

Dislikes: Being abused and alone.

Pre- Creation: L'amore was found one day by an old weary traveler along a beaten forest path. He picked her up, wrapped his cloak around her naked body, and took her to his home. He took her in under his wing; teaching her to read, write, ride, cook, and all the other house jobs every woman should learn. Through much time and patience, he was able to help her become Bilingual; teaching her Common and Nari, the language of the famous Wind Reach. He did this for he realized that the woman he saved was a Kelvic who's animal form was that of a Falcon. He had a feeling that teaching her the Nari language could help her out one day. The old man named her L'amore because he believed that Love would be all she would seek and Love would be the only thing she would be without.

When the old man passed away, there were two things he left for her to keep: A hand crafted wooden anklet he made with her name engraved in it with wooden feathers on each end. The last thing was his Eyktolian Desertbred horse; in which he used to teach her how to ride. The old man had no other to give his horse to and he surely did not want some stranger to have it. These two gifts L'amore holds to her heart dearly. Though, with having to tend to the horse, it makes L'amore feel more "normal" in comparison to an actual Human.

Training & Skill Points
* 10+ Hunting, 10+ Riding, 10+ Cooking, 5+ Drawing,
5+ Play Musical Instrument (Violin), 10+ Land Navigation

* No Earned Skills

Equipment/Possessions

* 1 Set of Clothing
-Silken Shirt
-Silken Pants
-Silken Undergarments
-Silken Cloak/coat
-Simple Sandals
-1 Waterskin

1 Backpack which contains:

* 1 Set of Toiletries:
* Comb (bone)
* Brush (bone)
* Soap
* Food Package (a week's worth)
* 1 eating knife
* Flint & Steel
* 100 ft of rope
* Lantern
* 2 torches
* Bedroll
* Blanket

Possession(s):

*Family Heirloom: A hand crafted wooden anklet of the name "L'amore" with wooden feathers before the first letter of the name and after the last.

Ledger

* 100 gold Mizas

Housing: 1 large tent- with 1 saddle bag.

** Horse: Eyktolian Desertbred

Language(s):
Fluent: Common
Basic: Nari

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Great character, L'amore! I'm excited to see her in-game. There are just a few notes I'd like you to take a look at.

• Name: Unfortunately, French does not exist in Mizahar (c'est tres triste, non?). You state that your PC was named "L'amore" because it means "love," but this French word would have no meaning in Miz. Please choose another name, and adjust your PC's history accordingly (I've written the phrase below).
  
  Naming Phrase :

  The old man named her L'amore because he believed that Love would be all she would seek and Love would be the only thing she would be without.
• Birthday/Age: Even if your PC does not know her birthday, you'll still need to include one on your character sheet (with the exact date, season, and year). Please keep in mind that as a falcon Kelvic, your PC would very likely not live to be 20 years old. You're welcome to have your character look twenty years old, but you'll want to adjust her age to something more falcon-life-span appropriate.
• History: This is just a small observation. In your history, you mention that your PC is bilingual (Common and Nari), but list your languages as Fluent in Common and Basic in Nari. Please adjust your history to reflect your PC's actual language abilities.
• Skills: Please update your skills so that it is clear which ones are from your starting package (SP) and which are your racial bonus (RB). You're also allowed 10 more skill points in a starting package skill, so feel free to add those in!
  
  Proper Skill Setup :

  After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.
  
  Examples
  
  

  Skills	Exp	Total	Proficiency
  Auristics	15 SP, 72 XP	87	Master
  Seduction	18 SP, 3 XP	21	Novice
  Glassworking	10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP	57	Expert
  Intelligence	5 SP	5	Novice
  Sewing	13 XP	13	Novice
  Weapon: Javelin	1 XP	1	Novice
  Acrobatics	85 XP	85	Master

  
  
  SP = Starting Points
  RB = Racial Bonus Points
  XP = Earned Experience Points
  
  
  Example 2:
  
  Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
  Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
  Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
  Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
  Sewing: 13/100
  Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
  Acrobatics: 85/100
  
  
  Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
• Lores: You're missing two lores! Please add these in. You're welcome to check the CS templates for lore suggestions - here's the Lhavit template.
• Other Notes: I would recommend stating next to your race exactly what type of Kelvic your PC is (ie. falcon), just so that information is easy for other players to see.

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken