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Physical Description Name: Ameliaes Race: Zith Age: 19 Birthday: 493 AV Height: 5' 4" Weight: 120 lbs Skin/Fur color: Dark Brown Eye color: Amber almost golden
Character Concept Because she was raised with such ethics, Amelia is constantly fighting her nature and instincts. She is always cheerful and is a cup-half-full kind of person. Her strength is her unbiased way of looking at a situation, she is very logical. Her weakness is sometimes she will get completely caught up in her head and become too confidant in her abilities.
Character History She was born in the city of Xy, unfortunately 2 days after her birth, her parents were killed and she was taken in by a nomadic Konti named Eayda.
(Eayda)
The reason for her parents death is still unknown. At the age of 18, while traveling, she and Eayed ran into a band of savages and Eayda was gravely injured. No longer able to travel, Eayda remains near the city of Mura on a small island.
Possessions
1 set of clothing - Brown hooded cloak 1 Waterskin 1 Saddle bag which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Tent -Full set of tack -2 Blankets -1 lantern -1 tarp -Rations -Small knife -Flint & Steel -100 ft of rope -Long bow -10 wooden arrows Heirloom: a leather band neckless with a small stone tied to the front given to her by her adoptive mother, Eayda. (3 gm) 100 Golden Mizas
Housing: Permanent Housing: She has no permanent home. Currently she has a white Frostmarch named Fleet.
(Fleet)
Temporary Housing: N/A
Ledger
Purchase
Cost
Total
Starting
+100 GM
100 GM
Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages
Common Skills:
Skill
EXP
Total
Longbow
10
10
Bowing and fletching
5
5
Riding(horse)
10
10
Meditation
5
5
Logic/Psychology
20
20
Practiced Languages: Common Kontinese Zithinese
Lores: Lore of Culture and Philosophy Lore of Unconditional Love Towards Others
I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!
Good start on your character sheet, Ameliaes! I just have some notes for you to address before continuing on.
Gender: While it may seem obvious, we do ask that you explicitly include your PC's gender on your CS.
Skills: Please be sure to state whether your skill points came from the Starting Package (SP) or Racial Bonus (RB).
Proper Skill Setup :
After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.
Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.
You seem to be missing your PC's racial bonus! Zith get a racial bonus in +10 Detection.
Your skill in "Logic/Psychology" would not be a skill in Mizahar, more of a set of lores combined with a logical personality. You may want to adjust this to Rhetoric or Philosophy, or another skill of your choice.
Lores: Unfortunately, your "Lore of Culture and Philosopy" is too broad. A lore is a specific piece of knowledge about a certain subject. What specific piece of knowledge does your PC have of culture (and which culture) or of philosophy? For example, "Lore of Zith Culture" would work well.
Your "Lore of Unconditional Love Towards Others" is not necessarily a piece of knowledge or fact. Instead, it seems to be more of a character trait. You may want to consider ways in which your PC can recognize unconditional love from others or a way she shows unconditional love.
Language: Please be sure to note your language fluency. Which one is Fluent, which is Basic, and which is Poor?
Possessions: I see you have a cloak in your PC's possessions! You may be interested to note that the lore states, "Zith who associate with other races for purposes other than hunting or enslavement tend to fold their wings down and wrap them loosely around their bodies, thus creating the illusion of wearing a rather odd cloak." Since Zith tend to roam without clothing, feel free to remove the cloak from your PC's possession if you see it fit to.
If you could state that your PC's tent is a large 4-person tent, that her saddlebags are a "large set of saddlebags" & that her tarp is a large tarp (as per the Tent package), that would be wonderful.
You seem to be missing the two torches, bedroll, and fishing tackle & hooks from your Tent package. Feel free to add these in. You can also include an eating knife and backpack, as per the starting package.
Please deduct the price of the second blanket from your ledger, as the Tent package only include one blanket.
Please deduct the price of the longbow (75GM) from your character sheet.
"Wooden Arrows" don't exist on the Price List. You may want to change this to "20 Longbow Arrows", which cost 1GM for the group. You can also find a list of special arrows here.
Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.
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Ameliaes 
by Kraken on January 11th, 2013, 5:36 am 
