[Note by Kraken] Shadow Friend

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Shadow Friend

Postby Bastella on January 2nd, 2013, 8:33 am

Character Sheet
Physical Description
Name: Bastella
Race: Kelvic - Lynx
Age: 15
Birthday: Born the first day of April
Bastella stands at five foot five inches, weighing 136lbs, and has light ivory skin. Her hair falls to her waist and is a mixed shade of black and gold. As well, her eyes are a bright gold with slivered black pupils and long black eyelashes. Her lips are a lights, very subtle pink and her body is curved in an hourglass shape. Her broad shoulders and wide chest are traits from her Kelvic animal form.

Character Concept
Bastella is known to be fairly high tempered, never letting anyone have the last word but herself. She can hold a conversation, yet prefers to stay to the shadows where speaking is unnecessary. Her shy disposition causes her to mostly maintain her Kevlic animal form. She is more comfortable in said form for the lack of words she must use and the lack of people she must encounter. Bastella is strong willed and will stand her ground no matter what the cost. She has no fears except for the fear of losing people she loves. Because of this she will avoid people and emotional connection.

Character History
Bastella's parents were in her life up until the age three. She does not know the story of how her parents died, but she knows that they did. And when they did she was left on her own. With no friends or family, she kept to the shadows and hid where she could. Bastella kept out of sight of the others and showed her face only when necessary. Because of her need to hide, Bastella mostly kept to her Kelvic animal form of a lynx.She lived her life mostly as a feline and only recently began to come out of hiding in her maturing years. Her loneliness left her with many hours to herself and much time to learn and practice skills she thought worthy for life. She trained with a bow and arrows mostly, but also in unarmed combat and combat with a dagger. She learned thieving young and acquired the ability to go unseen. Because of her parents untimely death she knows nothing of her past or her purpose nor of her family lineage.

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak/coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom: (50gm Worth)
100 Gold Mizas or 100 Nilos

Housing:
No housing, Keeps mostly to the woods and stays in a small cave most nights.


Ledger
Purchase
Cost
Total
Starting
+100 GM
100 GM



Skills, Lores, Magics, Gnosis, Languages

Common Skills:
Trade skills related to Teaching, Magics, Shipworking, Merchants, Scribes

Skill
EXP
Total

Unarmerd combat
25
#

Acrobatics
15
#

Singing
20
#



Practiced Languages:
Common


Recommended Lores: (Pick 2)
Lore of Zeltiva Streetplan
Lore of Zeltivan Culture
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Shadow Friend

Postby Kraken on January 3rd, 2013, 9:43 pm

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Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Lovely work on your CS, Bastella. I just have some notes for you to address before continuing on.

  • Thread Title: We do ask that the thread title of your character sheet match your account name. Please change "Shadow Friend" to "Bastella."
  • Gender: While it may seem obvious, we do ask that you explicitly include your PC's gender in your character sheet.
  • Birthday: The calendar in Mizahar is different from the one in real life. There are four seasons (Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter) and each season has 91 days, except for Winter which has 92. Please adjust your birthday accordingly. As well, please be sure to include a year of birth.
  • Age: Please note that your PC's age should mirror the age of the lynx. On average, the lynx's lifespan tends to be from 10-20 years. Your PC, at 15, would currently look quite old in human form. Please adjust this to a younger age if you would like your PC to look like a teenager in human form.
  • Possessions: Please choose either a cloak or a coat.
    • As well, please state whether you'll be keeping your money as Gold Mizas or as Nilos.
  • Heirloom: You seem to be missing your heirloom! Every PC begins the game with an heirloom item from the price list, worth 50GM or less. Please feel free to add yours in.
  • Languages: Please state on your CS that Common is "Fluent" proficiency.
  • Ledger: I would recommend either rewriting your ledger so that it is easier to read, or putting your ledger into table form. I'm posting a template for you to use in the spoiler below.
    Secret :
    Purchase Cost Total
    Starting +100 GM 100 GM
    Income/Expense Name +/- # GM # GM
    Income/Expense Name +/- # GM # GM

    Code: Select all
    [table][b]Purchase[/b] | [b]Cost[/b] | [b]Total[/b]
    Starting | +100 GM | 100 GM
    Income/Expense Name | +/- # GM | # GM
    Income/Expense Name | +/- # GM | # GM[/table]

    • As well, since you are not taking a housing package, you are entitled to an additional 500GM. Please feel free to add this into your ledger.
  • Skills: Please state whether your skills came from the starting package (SP) or your kelvic racial bonus (RB).
    Proper Skill Setup :
    After a recent meeting with several of the Storyteller Staff and Founders, we have decided to Officially Change a policy regarding Skill Points in the Character Sheets. You must now display all Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Points separately from one another. Storytellers and Liaisons will now be Intervening on Character Sheets that fail to make this change.

    Examples

    Skills Exp Total Proficiency
    Auristics 15 SP, 72 XP 87 Master
    Seduction 18 SP, 3 XP 21 Novice
    Glassworking 10 RB, 12 SP, 35 XP 57 Expert
    Intelligence 5 SP 5 Novice
    Sewing 13 XP 13 Novice
    Weapon: Javelin 1 XP 1 Novice
    Acrobatics 85 XP 85 Master


    SP = Starting Points
    RB = Racial Bonus Points
    XP = Earned Experience Points


    Example 2:

    Auristics: 87/100 (15 SP)
    Seduction: 21/100 (18 SP)
    Glassworking: 57/100 (10 RB) (12 SP)
    Intelligence: 5/100 (5 SP)
    Sewing: 13/100
    Weapon, Javelin: 1/100
    Acrobatics: 85/100


    Notice how the Starting Points, Racial Bonus Points, and Earned Experience Points are all notated differently. This allows Storytellers and other staff to review your Character Sheet more accurately, and ensure that everything is accurate and up to date.

    • You seem to be missing your racial bonus. Kelvics get a +10 racial bonus in Hunting. Feel free to add this in.
    • You also seem to have 10 points too many in your starting package. Players can only begin the game with 50 SP, and you currently have 60. Please remove 10 of these points.
Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!


Kraken
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