Zachary Omago

[Zachary Omago]

Zachary Omago Physical Description Race: Kelvic Gender: Male Age: 3 'young adult' ( appears between 16-20 human years) Birthday: 7 Winter, 509AV Height: 5'10" Weight: 155lbs Human Appearance: Zachary is short for a Kelvic male being only 5'10" tall. This does not take away from his athletic build and tough physique however. His skin and hair tone/color are very similar to the Vantha in that he has olive skin with jet black hair. Being a Kelvic he has some defining features that make him stick out, the most prominent of these being his longer, sharper k-9 teeth and long pointed finger nails(longer than normal but not absurd). Aside from these he has short well kept hair that he wears in a 'just woke up' style and a dark stubble giving him an animalistic look. His eyes are a deep blue with a ring of gold around the pupil. His eyes give a strange glint in the right light, a less noticeable feature of his animal half. Animal Appearance: When Zachary is in his animal form he is a Timber Wolf. His coat of fur is a brilliant white that is uninterrupted except for a patch of grey on his back. The grey resembles a sun and crescent moon(the crescent moon wraps halfway around a slightly smaller circle with a ring of white fur between the two. Off the circle and opposite the crescent shape are four evenly spaced gray streaks that resemble the idea of sun rays. There is also a ring of white between the 'rays' and the circle, with white between each 'ray' as well). Also when Zachary is in his wolf form his eyes change color slightly, rather than blue with a gold ring, they are gold with a blue ring. Other than these defining features anyone who doesn't know Zachary to be a Kelvic would not know he is any different from a common Wolf. Character Concept Personality: Zachary is an independent person. He is not particularly hostile but won't turn down a fight. He keeps to himself and doesn't tend to seek companionship, however, being Kelvic he grows attached very quickly If someone seeks him out and he won't turn them down. Zachary is not afraid to speak his mind. He is fairly outgoing but shy to approach others. He often catches himself staring blankly at others when in public. Ethics: Zachary fends for himself and only himself. He has regard for civility and rules but will commit any socially unacceptable crime to survive. If he has to steal food to eat for a night he will, if he has to hurt or kill someone because they refuse to leave him be like he requested he will. Likes: The forest, solitude and music of the Vantha. Dislikes: Large populated areas, people who are confrontational for pleasure, talking about his past. Character History As a child Zachary was left in the Kalea mountains (bordering Taldera) under a large tree, he was wrapped in a very large white cloak and was tied snugly inside by a belt with the name 'Zachary Omago' on it. A few nights went by before he was found by a young Vantha couple living out of a tent in the mountains. This family raised Zachary as their own. Being Vantha raised in the Kalea Mountains themselves, did not understand at first as to why Zachary was growing so fast. Then it dawned on his adoptive father, he was a Kelvic, a natural and born shifter. Zachary had only shifted a few times since he was found. This frightened his parents so they decided they would leave. It was just under Zachary's two year birthday and he had grown into a teenage boy by this point. He Was unsure of his growth rate let alone that he was a Kelvic. It was late at night the day before his birthday when his parents packed their things and left. They left Zachary a note that read: "Zachary, We have left and are never returning, we are sorry to do this to you but we do not know how we can raise you as our own when we don't know what you are. All we know is that you are a Kelvic, a natural shifter, and one day soon you will find out the potential of your animal form. We did not want us to come to harm so we left. In your pack we left you: -Comb (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Hunting knife -Flint & Steel -1 Waterskin we also left you 600 gold Mizas and a map of the Taldera region. We wish you luck in your life and we hope you have what you need to make it to the great city of Avanthal. The people there accept your kind as their own. Sincerely, Your Foster Parents." After reading this note Zachary was outraged and shifted for the first time in over a year. Luckily he had just awoken and only had ruined his undergarments and pants. His undergarments tore slightly but were still usable, his pants tore as well but had ripped so much that when he shifted back he repaired them by making them into shorts. After he regained his thoughts Zachary gathered his things looked at his map and made way for Avanthal. As he came down the mountain the temperature around him cooled as he entered the Taldera region, Though the air was cold and dry he did not feel a need to bundle warmer. His animal being a wolf seemed to keep him warm. It took him a few days to travel through the Northern Reaches to the City of Avanthal. Zachary arrived at the gates and went in search of a place to gather some equipment. Zachary found a small shop that specialized in Hunting equipment and there he bought himself some Arrows to fill a quiver, a composite short bow and a short sword. For the next year Zachary went between town, for supplies, and the forests of The Northern Reaches, to hunt and live. When he was in town he enjoyed the music and stories the Vantha people played and shared with each other. He spent so much time listening that he began to learn the language and soon was able to communicate on a basic level with citizens of Avanthal in their native tongue. Throughout his time in this region Zachary came to know the people, the way of the Northern Reaches and the wildlife that lived there, and the supplies he needed to live outside the city for longer periods of time. [Start Life in Mizahar Here]   Clothing -Simple Shirt(white,plain) -Simple Pants(black, shorts, plain) -Simple Undergarments (plain, black) -Simple Cloak (white, oversized, whitefur lining) -Simple Shoes (black, loosely laced) -Simple Gloves (black, fingerless) -Bracers (black, leather)   Backpack -1 Waterskin -Comb (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 Eating knife -Hunting knife (place of brush) -Flint & Steel *Note: Backpack is black leather with 'Zachary Omago' embroidered on it with a single oversized strap.   Weapons -Short bow, Composite -Short bow, Arrows (100) -Sword, Short   Heirloom -Cloak with belt (name embroidered on belt)   Housing -Bedroll -Blanket Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 0 SM 0CM 100 GM 0 SM 0 CM Housing +500 GM 0 SM 0 CM 600 GM 0 SM 0 CM Short bow, Composite -75 GM 0 SM 0 CM 525 GM 0 SM 0 CM Short bow, Arrows (100) -5 GM 0 SM 0 CM 520 GM 0 SM 0 CM Sword, Short (Great Quality) -20 GM 0 SM 0 CM 500 GM 0 SM 0 CM Quiver Bracers Gloves   Skills and Magic >Wilderness Survival - 30/100 (30sp) >Hunting - 10/100 (10sp) >Unarmed Fighting - 10/100 (10rb) >Weaponry (Short bow, Composite) - 5/100 5(sp) >Weaponry (Sword, Short) - 5/100 (5sp)   Lores >Lore of Northern Reaches Geography (sp) >Lore of Northern Reaches Wildlife (sp)   Gnosis Fluent Language: Common (Canine:Wild) Basic Language: Vani Poor Language: Undetermined Thread List   Winter Year 512 Quest for a Chest - 48 of Winter, 512   Spring   Summer   Fall

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Good work on your character sheet, Zachary! I enjoyed reading about your wolf kelvic. The Northern Reaches will be a great place for him to start off in-game! Now, I just have some notes for you to address before continuing on.

• Thread Title: If you could adjust your thread title so it's simply your account name ("Zachary Omago"), that would be wonderful.
• Gender: While it may seem obvious, we do ask that you explicitly state your PC's gender in your character sheet.
• Birthday: Please remove the December birthday from your character sheet, since real life months and years don't exist in Mizahar and would be irrelevant.
• Kelvic Shifting: I believe kelvics should be able to shift from birth. Zachary would have been able to shift much earlier than second year, and he would have been innately aware of his kelvic nature - though he may not have known it by name. I would recommend adjusting your history to reflect this.
• Possessions: Since the simple gloves and bracers you've included in your possessions do not come with the starting package, you will need to purchase them from the price list and deduct them from your ledger.
• Heirloom: You may only have one heirloom. You've currently listed two - an arrow quiver on belt and a cloak. Please remove one and deduct the second from your ledger.
• Housing: You've listed several items from the tent housing package as your housing, but then you've also cashed in your housing. You may not split up the housing cash in. You may either take the tent package or take the mizas. However! If you choose to take the mizas (all 500 GM), you can then purchase the tent, tarp, bedroll, blanket, and rope from the price list. Please be sure to make this adjustment and deduct the cost of these items from your ledger.
• Lore: You may only begin the game with two lore. Rather than sticking your Wilderness Survival terrains in your lore, I would recommend putting them in parentheses or in a foot note with your skills so that they're easier to access.
• Language: You do not need to split your PC's knowledge of Canine into multiple levels. One Canine language at fluent is all you need.

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken