Eilea
Kitchi
The Order of the Phoenix
Award
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Observation | 3 |
| Socialization | 5 |
| Interrogation | 1 |
| Storytelling | 2 |
| • | Lores Earned |
| • | Working to the point of collapse |
| • | Tarot Cards: They tell the future |
| • | The awkward beginnings of a friendship |
| • | Learning Kitchi's Past |
Kitchi
Award
| Skill | XP Earned |
| Observation | 3 |
| Socialization | 5 |
| Storytelling | 1 |
| Teaching | 2 |
| • | Lores Earned |
| • | Tarot in the Cherry Grove |
| • | Teaching Eilea Tarot |
| • | Learning Eilea's past |
The Order of the Phoenix
This was a cute little post! I liked it a lot!
If I had to give a suggestion, it would be to Kitchi: It can get very confusing if you repeat everyones dialogue. You have to think that the reader just read Eilea's post and they know what she said. I strongly suggest breaking the habit of repeating everyone elses dialogue
If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out.
If I had to give a suggestion, it would be to Kitchi: It can get very confusing if you repeat everyones dialogue. You have to think that the reader just read Eilea's post and they know what she said. I strongly suggest breaking the habit of repeating everyone elses dialogue
If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out.
