Completed Weapons of Choice [Flashback]

Kaie's childhood spars end abruptly with a long desired training session.

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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Weapons of Choice [Flashback]

Postby Kaie on May 17th, 2013, 3:29 am

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54th Day of Spring
Year 503



It was a Falyndar spring like any other. Hot and humid. The kind where it seemed like the jungle shade was the only refuge from the heat if one wasn't native to such a climate. The morning sun's rays had already begun to beat down upon the city of Taloba. Merchants, warriors, and the like bustled about the spacey city in their usual morning rituals. Soldiers manned their positions with pride and the prayers to Myri were audibly heard if one passed by the temple. Yet it wasn't in this lively tribal metropolis Kaie was found, and she surely wasn't being cooped up inside a longhouse.

Dueling was a common practice among her peers, the great mock sword fights children often played. Six of them had joined her today, most of them the usual group of playmates. Each brandished their own wooden staff. A simple, long tree branch they envisioned as a great spear, was something they were all equipped with. Although some did choose to break theirs down into a shorter ranged weapon for a more sword-like approach. She was sporting the traditional loincloth and cotton shirt that day, no shoes on her feet. It was far too hot to wear anything heavier and footwear was unthinkable. Tall and lanky back then too. She hadn't matured quite enough for muscle to start to build due to her activities. Even at the age of seven, Kaie's hair held its deep brown color and natural waves and curls. Usually she might've let it hang over her shoulders proudly, but today it was pulled back into a high ponytail for the games she was partaking in.

Keikyo, a distant cousin from her clan, had stepped up to be her opponent on the battlefield today. His black hair was cropped close to his head and his grey eyes had Kaie locked in their merciless sights. He smirked in a superior manner at her, confident in his stocky build and age advantage. He didn't care they were only two years apart. Other Myrian children crouched in a loose circle a good distance away from the pair, anxiously waiting for someone to move first. She could hear them beginning to chirp now, their spectators cheering on their picks to win. Keikyo sure did have the better odds with his natural strength and size. Not to mention the fact he was going straight into training for the service first chance he had, learning a few tricks from his own father. The stick he held in his tanned hands was a thick child's replica of a sword, an attempt to triumph over Kaie's choice of a longer branch. They had begun to circle one another in a slow dance of combat, waiting to see who would strike first.

"Come now, Cousin. Just surrender your weapon now so I don't have to do it for you," Keikyo sneered, twirling the wood between his hands with a glimmer in his dark eyes. Kaie's narrowed brown eyes seemed almost amber in the bright sun, a trick of the natural light unique to her. Nonetheless, their effect suited the situation perfectly in the way they mirrored her emotions. She adjusted her grip on her dull pointed spear, amber eyes seeming to become set ablaze as she circled into the sunlight. The fires lit in her eyes flickered like dancers performing their synchronized choreography about her irises. God did she love a challenge. Trash talk was just a bonus.


"What's the matter, Keikyo? Too proud to let me embarrass you in front of your friends?" She returned in mock pity, a teasing sort of grin finding its way up the right side of her face. Keikyo laughed darkly, quitting his circling to stalk forward head on.

"Let the games begin," she thought to herself with amusement.

Hands in an alternating grip that left most of the weapon in front of her, Kaie thrust the end forward at the chest of her opponent. Keikyo had anticipated the action long before she made it, quickly bringing his weapon down upon hers just as he side stepped right out of the way. Completely focused now, she used her back hand to pull her weapon's back end toward her upon feeling the contact.

He had that big, stupid grin on his face. Arrogant as ever with his weapon length's advantages, Keikyo didn't hesitate a moment to counter. Driving forward like an enraged Tskanna, he had his armament raised above his head prepared to slash downward upon her. Instinctively, Kaie changed her grip on her spear-branch, a fluid, half rotation that returned the long end behind her. Indeed, a shorter weapon made it easier for him to maneuver around her. Unfortunately for him though, he didn't anticipate how deceptive a longer branch was. Not to mention her observation for a weapon's dexterity.

Her cousin's eyes widened just then as he brought down his arm, realizing his mistake far too late. Kaie stepped back with her right foot, simultaneously swinging the long, back end of her spear into his ribs. She knew it was a cruel hit. He hadn't a prayer in the world to avoid her own counter in time. Her cousin keeled over like she had struck him dead. Keikyo hit the ground with a dull thud, a surprised gasp coming from him like she knocked the wind from his lungs. Oops. The successful strike earned her several cheers from their audience at least.


"Aw. Did I cause you to lose your footing?" She asked with false pity saturating her voice, sarcastic as always.

Keikyo grunted and rolled onto his feet again after a few breaths. His brow was mashed together in what looked like confusion and anger. His free hand wrapped tight against his side while he began to right himself once more. His knuckles were almost turning white from his new found clutch on his stick. Her cousin seemed to be struggling, surely still regaining oxygen lost. She couldn't lie, she was pretty pleased with herself for those short lived moments. What a little sadist she was becoming. That is until a booming voice caught her off guard, almost making her jump right out of her skin. Kaie spun on her heels, swinging her spear with her in alarm. Thud. The end of her pointless staff had found its mark upon the center of her father's leather chest piece.

"Anyone can swing a branch, Kaie." Her father said in his deep tone, brown eyes catching her own forcefully with their steely glare. He had that kind of voice that seemed to come from deep within his chest. A sound that resonated in the air it occupied, commanding attention and respect. Everyone had seemed to go quiet, but the city life continued on its habitual tempo. Every other Myrian too preoccupied with their own ideals to notice the sudden halt to the children's games. Kaie said nothing at first, responding only with her fierce amber gaze. Her silence didn't stick for long of course.


"Doesn't mean everyone knows how to use one."


Her father looked at her sternly, then reached up his left hand in a commanding sort of way to grip the middle of the shaft of the spear. He arched his brow at her, unimpressed. Her father didn't always appreciate her audaciousness, but it came anyhow. Reluctantly, Kaie released her grip of the spear, turning it over to her father. Keritan held the spear loosely in his left hand, dropping it to his side calmly.

He was no longer in Myri's ranks of Taloba, but a mercenary or assassin outside Falyndar. It was nothing against the goddess of course, The Cutthroat Shadow Clan absolutely adored her. Yet, some strive for a bit more adventure that couldn't quite be found in the homelands. It seemed he was gone most of the time, stopping home for only short periods before departing again. It was the surprise of his presence that had shocked Kaie initially. Truth be told, behind all her rash statements she loved her father. She envied his vast travels, his victories in service, and his skills.

It wasn't uncommon for her to almost implore him to teach her a thing or two, but rarely did he have time. Of course she could've asked her mother, Shantiwa, but she believed Kaie needed balance. "Victory comes only with Myri." Kaie could almost hear her now. The usual lecture before educating her on the vast histories of Myri and her people. It wasn't that Kaie didn't enjoy them. She really did. It was just that combat was far more exciting. That isn't to say Kaie didn't spend her fair share of time praising the goddess and dreaming about her coming of age ceremony.

"Come," Her father said flatly, turning from her and the group to walk away. He clearly wanted her to follow him. By the way he was moving, she could tell he wasn't going to wait up if she had asked. She lifted her foot to scuff at the dirt, a plume of light brown lifting from the ground, before starting to go after him.

He was acting oddly cold to her today. Not nearly as friendly as Kaie was used to. They were close on most days, sharing just about everything. Able to converse about anything. Not today though, he had made that very clear. Maybe she had swung unnecessarily hard at Keikyo, but wasn't that the Myrian way? Young warriors were never expected to go easy on one another, that would never prove helpful in training. It tended to be the beauty of her troublesome ways, the unknown cause. What could she have possibly managed to screw with this time?

"Hey," a voice said from behind her just as she started to walk away. She turned her head slowly, finding Keikyo stepping toward her with a softer expression. Kaie looked at him, waiting for him to finish what he had to say now that he had her attention. He had stopped holding his side, and she had noticed a nasty looking bruise was forming over where he had held it. He gave her a painful smile and punched playfully at her shoulder.

"It was a nice hit anyhow," He admitted with a gentle shrug, easy going nature back in him now that the fighting was over. She returned the smile and nodded her head in a thank you. Keritan was well ahead of her now and she would have plenty of time to rub her win in her cousin's face later.

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Postby Kaie on May 19th, 2013, 12:25 am

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The walk seemed to go on for eternity. Passing temples and training yards, Kaie wondered if her father would ever quit moving. They would have to stop at the wall, right? Several more paces led her to believe otherwise. Exiting the city, they were on their way deep into the jungle. A long trek into nowhere in particular it looked like. Was her punishment a march to her death in the jungle wilds? Taloba didn't have many laws against cruel and unusual punishment, so the scenario was plausible.

Finally, the tall man stopped dead in his tracks. They were in a small clearing, a zone of treeless space. Keritan's muscular frame took several steps forward from her before turning around to face her. Extending his index finger to the ground a little ways away from his feet, he spoke to her in a domineering manner. All business.

"Kaie. Come here."

Obeying, she gradually walked closer until she there was about a meter or two between them. Irritated he brought her so far out here without explanation, the only thing that kept her silent was her confusion. It was like all she could do was observe and obey. His eyes were dark, glaring at her as he did something unexpected. Suddenly, he dropped the long stick before his feet.

"Pick up your weapon."

She sighed, walking forward toward the wood as told, bending over in her reach to retrieve it from the dirt. Out of no where she was sent backward brutally, knocked off her own feet and into the dirt. Kaie looked up at the holes of light between the canopy above, eyes narrowing in anger. She sat up, getting to her feet again with a bit more purpose. Her father stared at her more intently, challenging her.

"I said pick up your weapon."

She came in quicker this time, aiming to slide in and out rapidly before he could stop her. Her strategy proved useless. Just before her hands clasped around the shaft of the stick, she saw Keritan lift his foot before she could move out of the way. He swiftly planted his foot into her right shoulder, extending with full force to kick her away from her target once again. Just as before, Kaie was kicked onto her back. She landed with a dull thud, the muscles lining her back irritated by the impact. The seven year old Myrian girl let out a feral growl, rolling back to her feet again. Keritan said nothing in response to her failure this time, just stared at her blankly without an ounce of remorse. The mock spear still sitting untouched at his feet. So this is how he wanted to play?

She lowered her body then, her knees bending to achieve her stance. Intelligent eyes locked on their target, formulating a plot to achieve their goal. She was determined not to fail again. She rushed at him again. Just before her father sent the same kick for a third time, Kaie faded right to avoid the strike. She then seized the opportunity, shooting forward like a viper striking its prey. Diving into the earth, her hands grasped the shaft of her weapon before she rolled away from her father. Escaping in the period it took him to adapt.

After one rotated, her feet pressed up off the ground to stand. She spun around rapidly, the spear cocked back ready to attack. Her father allowed a ghost of a satisfied smile. Her actions had impressed him, he had gotten the reaction he wanted.

"Good. You learned from your mistakes. Now attack!"

Now it was his turn to rush, moving to her far quicker than she had anticipated. The small space between hadn't helped either. Panicked not by fear but by the realization she lacked distance and time, Kaie brought down the spear in a downward strike for the head. Keritan was not phased by it. Without slowing down, Keritan reached up and grasped the end of the branch with two hands. Distance now his friend, he yanked the stick down and to his left side. The action forcing her body forward, still holding onto her weapon, Keritan removed her with a swift kick to her hips. It wasn't a cruel strike this time, more of a push that still did its job. Her hips shot back by force, Kaie had no choice but to relinquish her spear-like branch.

"No more weapon." Keritan said, chucking the branch far behind himself into the woods. He grinned entertained by whatever it was he had planned next.

"Defend yourself!"

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Postby Kaie on May 19th, 2013, 1:41 am

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Her father swung his arm in a right haymaker, the fist aimed directly at her head. Kaie grit her teeth, ducking beneath the strike just in time. Despite the fact she avoided a brutal hit, Keritan was furious.

"What are you doing?! You must move, Kaie!"

Without further explanation, her father returned again. Having missed the first swing, he simply brought it in reverse again but lower than before. Just before he destroyed her ribs, the fist turned to an open hand. A punch turned to a push. She stumbled a few steps to her left as a result, brow furrowed. Determined.

"Again!"

Same kind of strike only left handed. She ducked, but this time she side stepped outside his range. Her move landed her on her father's right where his missed swing left his side open. Quite pleased with herself, a smile started to cross her features. That is, until an elbow came to a halt right before reaching her face. Keritan's eyes were ablaze.

"No! Always counter! After you escape your opponent's attacks you must dole out your own! Again!"

No matter how many times she obeyed, she still seemed to somehow fail. Her blood was starting to boil. All of this was obvious! Seven or seventy, she should've known all of this and then some. These skills were invaluable and she'd be damned before she ruined the first training session her father granted her.

The same swing and defense came again, only this time upon stepping outside she aimed her counter. Without hesitation, Kaie shot her lead first forward to her father's rib cage. Keritan drop stepped out of the way nodding his approval at her, but not until he reversed his strike and she avoided it as well. So far she had learned the importance of not only avoiding, but movement and countering too. She was learning quickly.

Not a single hint given ahead of time, her father sent a straight kick toward her chest. It sent her reeling back on her feet, a frown settling on her features. Another failure. Lucky for her, none of his attacks were full force. Otherwise, he would've shattered the young girl by now.

"You must have more than one defense, daughter. See, you cannot always duck. Hands, feet, head, are all connected. All belonging to one body. You must read your opponent's body, it will tell you the future."


"But, Father, bodies don't tell the future."

Her question hung in the air, like a cloud of uncertainty was around her own knowledge. He seemed to stare at her with a knowing expression, raising an eyebrow questioningly.

"Can't it?"

Kaie looked at him as if he was losing it, but the idea he presented her was intriguing. It was a myth she wished had proven true, but she was skeptic.

"Strike me. Any strike you wish. Whether you swing legs or arms, it does not matter."

She stared at him with disbelief. Swing at him? This had to be some kind of test....

"Come now, daughter. I will not ask again."

A command. Fine. If he wanted her to break him, it would be his own damn fault if she succeeded. Hands at her sides, she simply stared at him blankly. Her stagnance was only to remove any hint of what she might do. Then like lightning, Kaie swung her fist straight for his stomach. Before she could even make her approach, her target was gone. Moved out of the way before she could even get her fist halfway there. All she caught was empty air. She turned her head after yanking her arm back, staring at him. How did he do that? There was hardly any space between them at all! Keritan seemed to see his confusion in his movements clearly.

"Everything is connected, daughter. You must watch how the body moves. It will tell you its next move."

She looked at her father where he stood, staring at him with a new understanding. Kaie watched him breathe, each intake of breath causing his chest to rise. Every exhale bringing on its fall. Changing her attention to her hands, she turned her palms up. The little girl flexed her hands, clenching and unclenching her fists. Tension. That was what she saw. The tightening and loosening of muscles and ligaments behind her skin. Just like the muscles in the shoulder and arm tense before the punch is actually thrown. Action and reaction. It was all coming together now.


"Show me more, Father."

With a small smile, Keritan nodded his agreement. He then moved back into a fighting position, ready for the next lesson.
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Postby Kaie on May 19th, 2013, 4:26 pm

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It continued like that for hours. Keritan making a move Kaie learned to react to, chastised if she had neglected to do something important. Gradually, he was encouraging her to develop her own style according to how she wished to retaliate. Ducking had become less frequent now that the little girl had realized it wasn't always the best defense. Valuable sometimes, but it didn't always set her up for her counters. Something she realized quickly and resented immediately. Now, she found it suited her to seize the moment and its opportunity. There were thousands of ways to defend a single action sometimes. She needed to choose the one she found most efficient to her needs. Kaie, finding her ever present confidence, found her rhythm. She was not one to back down or away from a brawl. She rushed head first right into it.

Keritan swung a right haymaker at her yet again, but she did not move away. Instead, she did what had become part of her as a fighter. She moved in. Before he could create contact off the quick swing, Kaie stepped forward. Lifting her arms, her elbows created imperfect ninety degree angles. She jammed her forehands into the swing, left at the wrist and right at the elbow. The strike stopped abruptly. She then slid her right hand along the track the paused arm made in a sideways strike. Pausing only when the outside of her fist was at her father's jugular. If she wasn't so focused now she might've grinned at her success.

"Yes! Very good! Now, our roles are reversed. You need to learn offense, my Little Tiger. Swing away." Her father said, a wide grin on his face after he backed away from her hold.

Kaie rearranged her stance to a proper fighting one. She clenched her fists, prepared to swing but she was stopped before she could get one off.

"For Myri's sake, Kaie..." Her father suddenly groaned, forgetting her ignorance in proper hand combat.

He walked closer to her shaking his head, a hand signalling her to stop. He looked her over from hands to feet, his disdain clear as day.

"Oh, come on. What did I manage to screw up this time?" She asked rather annoyed, exhaling an impatient breath.

"Always block your face. Never ever leave your face exposed. Guard up! Elbows close to your sides. Protect your ribs. Now, swing. Remember to step with it." Her father pointed his index finger in her face, then dragged it down to her torso as he spoke.

Kaie adjusted accordingly, lifting her guard and keeping her elbows in closer. She lowered her head slightly for added protection behind her fists, which earned a nod of approval from her father. Now to attack. Instantly, she swung a right haymaker at his skull like he had done to her numerous times, stepping forward with it. Keritan was furious, swinging his own arm into it before it made contact. Knocked it away. It seemed he hadn't even bothered to block it properly. Why couldn't she get this right?!

"No! Do not ever throw that kind of punch, Kaie. It's useless."

"You literally just threw that punch at me about a -"

"I threw that punch because that's what every inexperienced brawler throws! You must know better. If you ever wish to leave Taloba you must recognize this."

Vexed, she returned to her guard position again. So her progress was far more minuscule than she originally thought. All this time she was learning to counter inexperienced barbarian favorites. When she comes of age that might be helpful against a bar fight, but what about true warriors? Surely they won't be so foolish to throw inefficient strikes at her. They'll all be highly trained and practically salivating at the thought of her demise. The burning flame in her spirit glowed, the desire for knowledge intensifying. She made a promise to herself right then and there, she would not be defenseless. She would train daily. She, Kaie of the Cutthroat Shadows, would be one of the most lethal warriors in Falyndar. This little girl would no longer be an easy target. She would be a fearsome Myrian Tiger of these jungles. She would no longer fear.

Without warning, Kaie brought her lead hand in with a strong jab, her front foot stepping forward at the same time. Keritan reacted just in time, his hand deflecting it outside his body. Instinctively, Kaie then utilized her right hand that was left to guard her face. At the same time her left hand was returning to her guard, Kaie shifted her back foot forward to propel her right fist. It came in a low hook to her father's ribs, powerful and quick. Her index and middle fingers' knuckles impacted their target achieving the small surface area strike she desired. Kaie then retracted her hand back to defend her face, stepping back only to receive feedback. Keritan turned, a smile on his face as he looked upon his daughter. She had finally landed a strike, no longer stopping at one action. She was becoming a far more ambitious fighter.

"Excellent. I showed you a weakness and you exploited it. Learn from my example. Deflect away from your body every time you can. Don't be caught in a vulnerable position. Next time, do not stop attacking when you have an advantage."


"What if I the other person is armed? How will I win if I have no weapon?"

"Little Tiger, your body is a weapon. You are never unarmed." He replied with a small laugh, brown eyes looking down at her.

It was a weird thing to think about for her. That a man without a weapon could manage to defeat a man wielding iron. It seemed impossible. That is, until she remember what her father had said to her at the beginning of the training session. "Everything is connected, daughter." That's what he had told her. Wouldn't that mean the same for a sword? If the iron and the body were one, they would have to work as one. The movement of a sword jab wasn't so different from a jab punch, was it? All that was different was the sharper accessory and a little bit more range. Wouldn't that mean the exact same rules applied? It was all starting to come together. All was making sense now. She was growing far too eager to ever stop this lesson.


"Let's go again."
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Weapons of Choice

Postby Kaie on May 19th, 2013, 6:15 pm

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"Always moving!" Her father yelled while moving almost too quick for Kaie to comprehend.

She could hardly see what he was throwing at her, just trying to watch his body and avoid getting annihilated by one of the attacks. Observing during a battle seemed impossible and she hardly understood how it could be accomplished. So much movement and speed, she hardly had time to read it. Jabs, haymakers, hooks, all of it was coming at her full speed. Her own hands were moving in a fury to block and deflect, feet stepping this way and that to compensate. Kaie didn't even find time to counter, worried about maintaining her own health though retaliation was always on her mind. Patience. She wasn't so good at patience, but in order to succeed she had to force herself to wait. If an opportunity didn't come, she needed to make one.

Out of no where, Keritan changed the game on her. They hadn't necessarily capitalized on kicks exclusively, but it came anyways. A roundhouse aimed for her thigh, Kaie had no time to think. She could fight only with muscle memory. Before the kick nailed her, she swung her right elbow down across her body to meet it first. Keritan's shin swung into her boney elbow, causing him to grunt at the small discomfort. Honestly, it was a tap in comparison to the hits he'd taken. Not even on the radar and surely not enough to slow him down. All of which the seven year old girl knew well. Before he had a chance to bring his foot back down, Kaie went for what she saw. Without missing a beat, the little Myrian rocked the same elbow back to smash into Keritan's solar plexus. Of course, she wasn't done yet.

Involuntarily, the wind was forced from Keritan's lungs yet he did not fall. A gagging sound came but it stopped as soon as it was heard. Naturally, Kaie did feel a tinge of remorse for such a cruel strike on her own father. She did not show it though. Keritan had specifically told her to attack with full force, never going easy. The troops at training never went easy so she shouldn't slow herself down with him either. He was strong enough to take it, and if he chose to underestimate her, it was his own petching fault. Following his commands but more importantly her own gut, Kaie continued forward. Always moving forward.

Using the same arm she used for both strikes, she continued the movements. They were coming more and more fluid now. Natural. Clenching her fist tighter, she brought her arm toward her. Then, she lifted her arm and rotated her fist up past her face and down in a circle forward. The fist was aimed at his nose, but just as she anticipated, Keritan regathered himself in time to block it. He caught her wrist, pulling her toward him and then throwing her back swiftly. Unbeknownst to her, he had planted his foot behind her leg. Her balance destroyed, she had no control on where her body moved. Gently but quickly, her father sent her onto her back, never losing his grip on her wrist.

She landed with that dull thud against the jungle flora, the bright grass teasing on her skin through the cold dirt. Keritan loomed over her, pinning her arm to the ground. She mocked a knee kick and a cross body attack with her free hand. Exactly what he wanted. Smiling softly then, her father had returned to himself more completely. Gone was the cold, distant demeanor he held toward her. His grip on her wrist loosened and he moved his hand to grip hers. Straightening his legs, he pulled her to her feet with him. Upon standing he wrapped his arm across her shoulders smiling down at her.

"You have made me proud today, daughter." He admitted warmly, giving her a gentle shake.


"Does this mean you're going to actually teach me? Finally?"

He laughed, shaking his head at her zealous nature. They began to walk together through the forest. Keritan was silent for a few moments in thought before finally he nodded at her without making eye contact.

"Yes. I will train you until you're ready to go to the training grounds yourself. On one condition." He replied, always having that extra piece tied to his promises. He was good like that. Balanced.


"Fine. What is it?"

"Just... Don't tell your mother about it quite yet." He joked, ruffling her dark hair in good nature.

She couldn't help but laugh at him. Like any Myrian woman, her mother could be intense as the next. Clearly all Myrians pride in training their children to be soldiers, and her family was no different. His condition had a more serious meaning to it though. A promise she needed to make was actually there. Supportive of her husband's choice to begin training, Shantiwa would probably just encourage Kaie to balance between her warrior heart and her faith for Myri. Both the little fighter was happy to do. She would use her skills to bring honor to the goddess, to sacrifice her enemies in sweet victory. One day, she would take barbarian scalps and drink of their blood. She would gift Myri with their hearts and celebrate in their deaths at her hands. All would come in time, but Kaie was beginning to wonder if she could actually make herself wait that long. Already she was prepared to create her own war path.

Much to her surprise, Keritan released her for a moment to crouch against the jungle floor. Standing back up again, he held out in his hand her fake spear she used in her childhood spars. Thanking him, she took her weapon in her hand and then continued their walk through the forest.


"One day will you take me with you when you leave?" The seven year old asked suddenly to her dad, looking up at him. Her father was silent for a while looking down at the ground. She was starting to understand the answer was clearly going to be a no.

"When you are ready, I will take you. I will tell you when I believe you are ready. Have patience." He said simply with a nod of his head, letting her know his judgement was not up for debate. All she could do was trust him.

It was only then she truly noticed the depth of his decoration. The way the black ink danced about his tall, muscular frame in a vast array of designs. Piercings were there too. A small, decorative lip plug was there. It resembled a tiger lunging forward. Obsidian pieces of different sizes lined his ears. A two short tiger fangs stuck went through the bridge of his nose, appearing as one long piece. To an outsider, he probably looked like the most ferocious warrior they had laid eyes upon. Little did they know, off the battlefield he was kind hearted.



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Weapons of Choice

Postby Kaie on May 20th, 2013, 1:10 am

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"Has your mother ever taken you around out here?" Her father suddenly asked randomly, looking straight ahead like the idea had come from something he had seen.

"No. She's only brought me out here to show me poisonous plants. Why?" Kaie asked skeptically, not entirely sure where he was taking the conversation. She wasn't positive she liked it either.

"You know that I'll need to leave again soon. If your mother is right about one thing, you need to know about more than combat. Fighting alone will not save you all the time."


"Like what? Hunting? How hard can it be? All you do is set traps and take down what you want. Right?"

Her father smiled and ruffled her hair again at how simplistic she saw the world at that age. Ignorance is bliss.

"Trapping and killing, yes. But do you know how to do any of that? Tell me, Kaie. If it's so easy, how do you find your prey?" He looked at her expectantly, questioning her knowledge he knew well enough wasn't there.

The little girl thought for a moment, thought long and hard. Yet she struggled with a good answer. She opened her mouth to dish out some far fetched rationality but her father raised a hand to stop her.

"Tracking. Come with me, I'll show you." He said beckoning her to follow him through the thick foliage he was nearing.

Kaie didn't think too much about it, shrugging her small shoulders she followed. It wasn't fighting, but she loved the jungles more than she loved being in the city most of the time. She loved the challenge that survival skills presented her, their value precious in her mind. All else seemed trivial in comparison to these skills and Myri. Weaving through the greens, Kaie kept close to her father's heels like a loyal canine, determined to keep up. After a short walk he stopped and crouched down near the soil, gesturing for her to do the same. Quietly, Kaie obeyed, doing her best to keep away from the mud at his feet.

"To track well, you must cover your scent. Animals see with their noses just as well as their eyes. You must fool both. If you don't smell Myrian, the animal thinks you are something else, but you still look like one." Keritan began carefully, looking her straight in the eyes. He then swiped his fingers through the dark muck, lifting it almost to her eye level.


"How do I not look Myrian if I am Myrian? That doesn't make sense. Do I wear animal skins?"


"No. Just listen to me. Camouflage is the best weapon against sight. Its purpose is to help you blend, so all you use must work with the colors around you. Darks and lights all together." He continued, bringing the mud towards Kaie's face much to her disdain. She didn't enjoy getting dirty, but she wasn't turned off by doing it. She just wanted to know what the purpose of rubbing mud all over her face was. How would that mask her from anything? Now she'd just be a dark brown face.

"If your face does not look like a face, your enemy's eye will not recognize you. Always look opposite of what you are. Where light is drawn to your face, you mask that area with darkness. Where your face is shadowed, you bring in lighter tones." He explained while pressing the cool, dark mud onto her skin.

Keritan remained silent for a small time then, working the mud like an artist about her. He rubbed it heavily across her forehead, cheeks, chin, nose, and brow. She could feel it weighing on her skin, but she didn't mind much. The cold substance was a nice contrast to the always hot climate around these jungles. Her father then switched gears, finding lighter silt and mixing it with small amounts of mud to water it down. With the lighter contrast, Keritan filled in the gaps around her eyes, temples, mouth, and edges of her head. He sat farther back staring at her, looking much like a skilled painter look at a canvas to critiquing his own work. He then grinned, taking the excess material and coating her exposed limbs. He blended both colors together to break up her silhouette, describing what he was doing and why the entire time.

"Weapon." He said rather bluntly, withdrawing one of his own hunting knives. Taking the branch from her yet again, he steadied it on his knee.

He then began sliding his knife down along the skin of the branch. Bark was shred like skin with every stroke, strands of wood dropping. He moved quickly as if he had done it a hundred times before, creating a good point quickly on the wood. He told her it would be best to use iron or flint on the end, but wooden points would work for now. Finished, he put away his knife and returned her weapon to her, no longer a mock spear. It was real.

"Now, you hunt."


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Weapons of Choice

Postby Kaie on May 20th, 2013, 3:31 am

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She moved through the forest like a Chavos, zipping through the foliage without a sound. Her bare feet hit the ground softly, hardly kicking up any soil with speed. She stopped. Tired, her small chest heaved in search of oxygen. Where the hell had he run off to? Kaie turned her head this way and that but found nothing. Keritan was somewhere deeper in the woods. Why did he always have to make everything so hard?

So that's what he wanted then? A twisted game of hide and seek. She was the predator and he was the prey. The idea settled nicely with her mentality, causing her to grip her spear a little tighter. Tracking. It was a very mental sport. It required being observant and patient. Aware and knowledgeable. Keritan had given her a run down on how it all worked. Finding trails, runs, and tell tale signs of animal activity. She was a doer though, and she learned best by actually learning first hand.

Moving low and quietly, Kaie followed the direction she had last seen her father move in. She found no clear signs of him, so she decided to find a better vantage point. Turning her gaze to the trees, she found one mossy trunk in particular. The tree had grown at an angle, giving her a nice incline to scamper up. Remaining low, Kaie got onto the trunk and moved up along its length. Progressively, the climb was getting steeper and more difficult. Reaching a small hand up, the little girl gripped a sturdy branch and hoisted herself up. She then allowed her body to fall forward gently, bringing her into another branch a little ways from the last. Wedging the spear between one of her hands and the branch was tricky. Eventually, after some fiddling she felt confident enough to continue. Swinging her feet up, she wrapped around a branch higher still, releasing her hands. Her stomach dropped seeing the height she was at, dangling upside down over a long drop. Without waiting another moment, she continued the momentum and released her legs with hands out stretched.

Bringing her now to a tree opposite the one she started, her hands caught a cluster of large intertwined limbs. They were thick and strong, definitely suited to hold her up. Finally, she pulled herself up onto the long perch. Crouched , she turned to look behind her at the distance she cleared. Looking at the branches, she realized the spaces between were not as massive as she had thought. The height wasn't nearly so intimidating either. Regardless, she could see the forest floor below well now. Brown eyes scanned the terrain carefully and slowly. Looking for a single discrepancy. Kaie shifted the spear in her hand, waiting. Finally it came. The tiny crackle of wood beneath a foot. Her tell tale sign. Not too far away either. Immediately, she eased her way down the branch to dangle above the ground. Dropping then, she bent her knees deeply to avoid injury as she hit the ground. Balance not yet at its peak, she wobbled some. Righting herself with her free hand she was ready to move.

Kaie took off then, zigzagging through the flora with purpose. She would find her target. Noticing something ahead of her in the dirt, she chose to pause. Kneeling to the earth she saw something interesting. A small group of dirt had coagulated like mud. Could it be the result of the mud stuck to feet infecting the dry soil? She went with her gut and chose to take it as a yes. A grin spreading across her face, she knew she was getting close. She'd be upon him soon! He was making it far easier than she had expected.

Skidding to a halt, Kaie saw a figure half crouching in the shadows of the foliage. She grinned in a sinister fashion. Victory was hers. She lifted her spear directing the end outward, preparing to jam it into Keritan's back in a mock kill. Only a few feet away then, the seven year old stopped in confusion. It was not bent over at all. In fact it wasn't even her father. The thing almost looked to be sleeping. It was at least a foot shorter with a dirtier tint to its cracked skin. And was that... Rocks or soil in its exterior? Without warning, the monster turned around sharply to face her. A screech rocked her being. Open mouth of the monster revealed an ugly display of sharp, crooked teeth. It looked like a Myrian man gone horribly wrong. The proportions were all off in such a way that made one uncomfortable to even look at. The bottom jaw was far too large for the face, arms hung at different lengths. The chest bulged out farther than any creator intended. Kaie didn't get to stand and judge the monster for long though. It ambushed her before she could even turn to run let alone scream.

Two backward steps were all Kaie got off before the Yukman leaped upon her. She placed her spear in both hands as she was tackled. Hitting the ground, the Myrian girl let out a groan of pain. It was a brutal fall. Nothing like the gentle drop her father allowed her earlier. Her hands held tight to the spear shaft, the only thing keeping the monster back. It lifted its dirty fist to pummel her face, but Kaie was quicker to react. She sent a kick straight into its chest as hard as she could. The Yukman dropped back earning her distance but not for long.

"Yuk-Yuk!" Its yell was crude and sinister, mud colored creature staring at her with cruel black eyes. It's call was confusing, if not terrifying. It caused goosebumps on her skin, a crawling kind of fear racing along her body. Adrenaline. Kaie shifted her hold on her spear hesitantly, staring at the beast.

"Will you bleed when I finish poking holes through you?" She countered to trash talk and test if it actually spoke a familiar language at all. Quickly she understood this was not a creature who could converse with her. Eyes narrowed at her assailant, teeth gritting together in defiance. If she was going to be eaten alive, she might as well go down with a little bit of fire left in her.

The Yukman let out some sort of growl and ran towards her in a rush. This wasn't anything like training, this was a real situation. Life and death was hanging in the balance. Which would she earn for herself? Her grip on her weapon strengthened and she involuntarily closed her eyes just before she attacked. She drove the spear point forward at the Yukman but never made contact. In fact, it never came at all. Opening her eyes slowly, she looked down the end of her spear seeing the Yukman standing there. A soulless look in its dark eyes. Blood pouring like a river from its throat. Keritan stepped out from behind the monster grumbling something too low for her to hear. Driving a fist into its chest, her father caused the Yukman to drop onto its back. Its mouth moved while blood continued to flow, speaking without sound. Soon the lips stopped and the body went still. Dead.

"Vermin." Keritan growled before he moved to her. He wiped his hunting knife off on his leather chest piece before putting it away. He kneeled before her with concern in his brown eyes. He then scanned her.

"Are you hurt?"


"No, I'm okay." She reassured him. Clearly the gravity of the situation hadn't really sunk in. The fact she was practically shown her way out of the world, only for her father to slam the door shut. She had no idea how lucky she was. Although she could feel her heart still pounding in her chest.

"Their horde was supposed to be wiped out. Looks like we found one who somehow escaped. Quick, gather some tinder so I can burn the damn thing."

Kaie began to gather vast arrays of dry sticks and branches. Grasses and leaves. Anything that would burn nicely and fast. Keritan did the same and utilized up a flint and steel tool. He began clicking them together hard, creating sparks. After a few attempts, a spark ignited the body. Soon, the body would burn to nothing. Keritan grabbed his daughter's hand and began making a speedy escape from the scene. They weren't about to hang around and see what else appeared between the trees.

Entering the city, the sun was on its way down the horizon. Kaie had just then realized she had only eaten once that day. Her stomach growled its complaint. She didn't care though. The adrenaline overrode her hunger. Not everyday one's life is put in danger is it? Well, at least not at her age. Usually.


"Can't we come back later?" She pleaded, tugging on his hand as children do. Her steps had begun become heavy the farther they walked from the forest. A more reluctant pace.

Keritan let out a nervous laugh and smiled down at her. Obviously he was still a little shell shocked from the little mishap earlier. The idea of what could've happened. He took his hand and began to rub at the dried mud still covering her face. What a sight she must've been for any passerby. She bet she looked like some feral child, born and raised by the jungle wilds.

"That's more than enough for one day. Now go clean up before your mother kills us both." He replied, taking the spear away from her with a playful grin. She smirked and tried to get her hands on it, wrestling it out of his hands. He easily overtook her though and released her grip. Laughing then, he tapped her heels with one end. A silent code for her to run along. They parted ways then. Kaie ran off to make herself presentable again, Keritan returning to the barracks to report his findings in the forest. Certainly, it was the first of many lessons.


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Weapons of Choice

Postby Limey on May 22nd, 2013, 8:20 pm

Skill and Lore Rewards
Skills Lore
Observation 3 Taloba: Hot And Humid Yet Bustling
Spear 2 Rising To The Challenge
Unarmed Combat 4 Block And Counter
Acrobatics 2 Keritan: Merciless, Brutal... And Adored
Tracking 2 Always Retaliate
Camouflage 1 Everything Is Connected
Climbing 1 Don't Tell Mother!
Masking Your Scent
The Basics Of Camouflage
Tracking: Patience And Observation
Yukmen: Dirty, Foul And Vicious


Additional Notes :
I liked this nearly all the way to the end, and I'll tell you why I added that conditional in a moment. You have a good writing style, very evocative and fast-moving, but be careful about generalizing and, just as importantly, overstepping your skill level.

At a novice level, which is what you are in all but one thing, you wouldn't be able to "move without sound". Your fight against your larger, older cousin would probably have gone worse for you. And you could have made the point that you only managed to get a decent few hits on your father because he ALLOWED you to. Don't be afraid to get the crap beaten out of you or look bad, in other words. You'll get better as you do more, like everything else.

Now, regarding the Yukman. Most importantly, they can't talk. All they can do is scream and make those "yuk-yuk-yuk" sounds that they're named for. You will also NEVER find one alone. They're pack animals by nature, spawned and birthed and moving and fighting as a group. Finding a lone Yukman would mean that the rest of its horde had been wiped out, and if that was the case, your clan would have heard about it.

But aside from that... a very good start, love. Hope to see more of you. ;)


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