[Note by Banshee] Blackfang

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Blackfang

Postby Blackfang on May 29th, 2013, 1:12 am

Blackfang


Appearance
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Race: Kelvic
Gender: Male
Age: Three years
Birthday: 26, Summer, 510
Birthplace: Sylira Wilds

Appearance:
In his human form, he has the apperance of a fairly wild and unkempt young man. His jaw is slightly angular, with a strong young chin hidden behind short, unshaven facial hair. His eyes are wide and strong, a light shade of silvery white, with a sense of strength can be felt when you look into them, and his true nature appears in his smile, when you can view his sharp, canine teeth. The hair atop his head is long, black, and often tied back with bits of twine or string into a make-shift ponytail. His overal facial features are lithe, but without prodominate and angled cheekbones poking out the sides of his face. He could be considered a rugged handsome young man, and his wide barrel chest and strong, but not overly-muscular arms and legs further his feral identity. His body is marked with patches of hair, short bits under each arm like most men have, and a noteable but not burly patch over his chest. Just below his belly, a trail of body hair travels down towards his pubic area, where it remains just as thin when you gaze upon his bare body.

In his wolven form, he stands almost two and a half feet tall from the tip of his ear to his feet. From nose to tail, he is almost four feet in length. His body is covered in midnight black fur, with silvery white eyes. He has no special features about him that set his appearance off from other black wolves at the moment.
Character Concept

Blackfang has a deep-seeded desire to find his bondmate, hopefully female whom he can fall in love with. He has always been a helpless romantic, enjoying the time he spends reading (A gift given to him by his mother, the one thing she taught him about human society) romance novels in human towns and villages. Although he can read, he still cannot right. He can read simple stories, anything over fifty pages looses his interest, and he gains a headache when reading.

Blackfang is strong, noble, and protective of his family and friends. He embodies the spirit and mind of the wolf, leading him to strive for companionship and the thrill of the hunt. Whether it's basking in the glow of a tavern, or charging through the wilds in his wolven form, hunting rabbits or other small game, Blackfang can find happiness wherever he goes. Though the one things that constantly aggs at the back of his mind, is the longing for a Bondmate, someone to live with and fight for. Somebody to give the lone wolf his purpose, and possibly his love.

Character History

Pre creation-
Born the son of two Kelvics, his father a Hare and his mother a Raven, he was raised mostly by his mother for the first few months of his life, before he was given to the wilds to learn how to survive on his own. He was able to quickly grasp upon his bestial nature, choosing to remain in his animal form when not among the public, and noting his stashes of clothing outside of the more recent towns he would visit. He travels alot around Sylira, never staying in one location for long. When traveling from one town to another, he would do so in human form, choosing not to bare the burden of buying new clothing in each town, even though travel in his animal form would be faster.

He longs for the companionship of a bondmate. Never truly accepted among other wolven packs, due to their close-nit family structure. He knows he will not find true happiness within one of these packs though, as the longing in his soul for a bondmate will leave him empty until the end of his days. The simple fact that even if he wished for a home among the beasts, it would never come for the lone wolf Blackfang.

Post creation-

Language

Fluent Language: -none-
Basic Language: Common Tongue.
Poor Language: -none-

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Hunting 10 RB, 15 SP 25/100 Novice
Tracking 10 SP 10/100 Novice
Wilderness Survival 5 SP 5/100 Novice
Foraging 10 RB, 0 SP 10/100 Novice
Unarmed 10 RB, 10 SP 10/100 Novice


Lores

Blackfang knows only what his mother had taught him. The two things he was taught most, were about his people and the religion of the world.

He was taught that his people come from old research done by two siblings many years ago. That their people are a mixture of both beast and human, though not entirely human at the same time. She told him that they were beasts first and foremost, and that they were given human form through spectral creatures known as Mimics. She taught Blackfang to fallow his animal instincts, and listen to the way the world moves.

The religion that he was taught was simple, but enough to get him through in life. He was taught that there were gods, both good and bad. These gods controlled specific aspects of the world they were assigned to upon creation. They were vulnerable to the emotions and weaknesses that humans have, and were not truly immortal. He was told of the astral world that the gods live in, and the world between that their hybrid half-god people wander. Other than this, he was informed naught of what else gods are. And remains fairly ignorant of any god that does not have to do with the forests or wildlife.

Possessions

1 Set of Partial Clothing
-Simple Pants
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
-Flint & Steel (Contained within Pockets)
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: None

Housing

Location: Nomad

House: -None-

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Blackfang

Postby Banshee on May 31st, 2013, 1:50 am

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Hello hello!

My name is Banshee, and I am here to help you with the daunting task of joining the Mizahar Community. It is my duty to assist you with your Character Sheet, so that you can get to writing quickly and properly.

And I've noticed several things that need addressed in your Character Sheet, that will need to be fixed before you can begin roleplaying here. You will need to read all of the tabs below, make the appropriate changes, then send me a Private Message. When that has all been done, I will remove this Intervention, and you can get back to roleplaying. Have a great day, and I can't wait to see more of your writing soon!

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Languages
Canine isn't an appropriate language. As a Wolf, your PC can understand other wolves, only when in wolf form. Thus making this language inherent and not to be included in this section.

Other Languages is not appropriate as there are many languages in Miz and you can only have one at each competency. Language

 
Skills
As a Kelvic you only get 50 Starting Package (SP) skill points and 10 Racial Bonus (RB) skill points (Unarmed Combat, Foraging, or Hunting Only) for a total of 60 points. You have 70 points, so please remove 10.

 
Lore
Your entire Lore section is highly inaccurate and inappropriate. We already have an established Kelvic lore. You cannot simply make it up. Please remove this entire section.

I noticed that you do not have your 2 Starting Lores. A Lore is a specific piece of knowledge your PC knows that cannot be improved upon, such as Lore of Layout of a Specific City or Lore of a Specific Recipe. Several examples are included in the CS Templates linked above.

 
Housing
You must indicate where your PC is living, be it in a house, an Inn, or with a traveling package. If you forgo owning a house, you get the 500gm cash in, but you still must list where they are staying.
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Blackfang

Postby Blackfang on May 31st, 2013, 4:04 pm

Oh, sorry. I wasn't entirely sure on the way it was supposed to be setup. I'll make the corrections now though.
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