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Postby Retired on August 11th, 2013, 12:20 am

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Postby Retired on August 11th, 2013, 1:24 am

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Ravianeira

Postby Crosspatch on June 23rd, 2015, 7:08 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • I would advise constructing a bare bones of your PC's history due to your character's racial makeup to cover points such as, where was she born, where did she grow up (with her Svefra side or the Benshira side), and how did she even get to Zeltiva in the first place. As a side note, if she was brought/born up among Svefra her eye colouration would also have to be blue (as Svefra throw children born without blue eyes overboard at birth). Think of this simply as an exercise to cover the bare basics of point A to B and build a light base to work from.
  • You cannot split your racial bonus across skills.
  • The skills lock picking and stealing would fall under the skill of Larceny.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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