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[Rosela] Wherein the desert's children rule the day.

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Postby Tobias on September 13th, 2013, 8:15 pm

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On the 5th of Fall, 512 Years After the Valterrian.

The last notes of the music had faded slowly into the air as a candle cast shadows across a dark blue face, alien yet somehow feminine. She had been smiling, teeth startlingly white against her dark lips.

“Fair enough,” the akontak had laughed at last, and when he saw the silver crane glittering in her hand, Tobias had known the day had been won.

That had been twelve chimes ago. As the sun had risen, Tobias had won Aena’s favor with a Fratavan folk song and proven himself worthy of playing at the White Crane. It was a queer sort of establishment that made musicians try out for the honor of playing, but once he had stepped inside the White Crane and amanged to catch the ending of a flutist’s performance, he suddenly understood. The White Crane was no ordinary tavern, and many and more legendary musicians had graced its stage…it excited Tobias that he was now counted among such prestigious company, even if he wasn’t being paid.

The lute had not been Tobias’s first weapon. No, as a child he had feasted on legends and heroes and trained himself in arms and other skills long forgotten. It wasn’t until much later that Tobias had discovered he preferred the sound of music over battle.

Tobias didn’t oft think of his childhood. For him, golden Ahnatep hung over like a specter, and any good memories he would have of his ancestral home were drowned out by that single terrible night. Though Tobias tried to avoid it, that night, and the mistakes he had made…it troubled him. He would sit up at night, unable to sleep for the fear of nightmares to come, and it was only the pricking of soft strings, and music in the air, that would finally lure him into a deep, dreamless sleep.

But on that day Tobias was still flush with his morning victory, and any thoughts of the past had been banished. Though it was now the afternoon, at the White Crane the excitement was only beginning. Patrons filed in through the door and hailed for food and drink, all the while Tobias waited on stage, lute to hand and silver crane in his pocket. He was the first to play that evening.

He was so excited, in fact, that he hailed the oncoming patrons with a smile and asked: “What shall I play first, my friends?”
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Postby Rosela on September 19th, 2013, 1:01 pm

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The White Crane wasn't Rosela's usual bag, as she'd never had much of an ear for music. However, a deliciously muscled Akalak had been her last customer of the day prior and had convinced her, after she'd convinced him to give up skin tight silk shirts, to come out with him for his birthday. It had become a rare occurance to spend one of her precious days off away from the shop, as her inventory seemed to always fly off the shelves faster than she could put it back on, but it was hard to refuse a strong jawline and a pair of lovely biceps.

Perhaps it was the disaster of her own birthday last season that had a hand in convincing her; the sad, sad night she'd spent in the back of the shop with only the shadows for company. It had been her first birthday away from people of any kind, and only her second away from Ahnatep. The first hardly counted though: She'd been on the road at the time, and when the rest of the caravan had heard it was her birthday, they'd given her a few sweets they'd had between them. No, her birthday this year had fallen very short of the comfotable life she'd made here. As she left her house in the early evening, to meet her new muscle-bound friend, she couldn't help but be a little homesick for the marble floors and the gilded towers of her old home.

Burkun was his name, and he gave Rosela a very affectionate embrace as the met. It wasn't until they were nearly at the White Crane that she realized they were in fact meeting several of his other, equally bulky, buddies there. Beaming, Rosela enjoyed their shocked attentions and the group walked through the door together.

There was already a musician on stage, though not playing yet. The men, boisterous and already excited for the evening, ordered a platter of food and drinks. All heads turned to the musician as he called out his invitation and Burkun nudged Rosela jovially. "Go on, you have the first request."

"Oh, I don't really know-"

One of his friends chimed in with a laugh. "Don't be shy now! Pick anything you like!"

Feeling somewhat backed into a corner, Rosela turned to face the musician, only a few tables away on stage. Her request came out more as a challenge than a request, as she was counting on him to fail her and thus excuse her from being required to make future requests. "Know anything from Ahnatep?" The city came out with a strong Arumenic accent, which seemed to garner the attention of the table.

"Whoa, say that again!"

"Ahnatep."

A round of laughs went around. "That's crazy! What language is that?"

"Arumenic." Lifting her drink to her smiling lips, she looked back up at the musician, waiting for the inevitable 'Sorry'.


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Postby Tobias on September 24th, 2013, 12:32 am

Ahnatep.

Three syllables, seven letters. A city of Eyktol, on the Sebakem Ocean. Home to eypharians and a few dhani too. Tobias tried to think of it like this, logically, and in definitions and terms that bore no chains, but somehow emotion leaked in and tainted the word with inexpressible fear.

He wanted to say no. Truly, he did. Tobias didn't know why the eypharian had requested a song from Ahnatep, but it seemed unlikely that she thought his response would be anything but negative. So why not confirm her in her prejudices? The word was on the tip of his tongue - no, and sorry too - but at the same time, his hands were moving to pick up his lute, and before he knew it, his tongue had betrayed him.

“I know of one.”

Why?!, the rational, thinking part of him asked. And a small part of himself responded with the words of his father: Conquer thyself.

Conquer thyself.

Moving stiffly, and with little of the good humor he had entered with, Tobias settled against his chair and drew his fingers across the strings. In truth, the song he knew was little more than a nursery rhyme, something a gilded mother might sing to her child at night. It translated fairly well into Common in the sense that the rhyming scheme remained intact, but Tobias sung it in Arumenic, and for the eypharian girl’s ears alone.

Oh, we are the children of gods
Born from dear Royet’s laud
Rulers of the desert and abroad
And we all feel the weight of glory.

Yes, we all feel the weight of glory.

Oh, the Pressorah high
queen of all under sky
whose very name is a rallying cry
She still feels the weight of glory.

Oh, the nobleman with gilded skin
he who wears clothes of silk and sin
the one who can spin gold with a grin
He still feels the weight of glory.

Oh, even that smallest four-armed beggar
so pitiful he receives nothing but a snigger
Despite his pain and his rigor
He still feels the weight of glory.

Oh yes, we all feel the weight of glory.

As the last note fell away, Tobias dared a look at she who had inflicted this upon him. Written across his face was nothing but pain.
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Postby Rosela on October 1st, 2013, 5:58 pm

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Rosela saw something undefinable pass over the musician's face, and took it for disappointment that he wouldn't be able to fulfill her request. Victorious, she turned back to her guffawing tablemates and shrugged, satisfied that she had gotten out of requests so easily.

The musician said something from the stage, and though she missed the words, she heard the traitorous flutter of strings. Her head whipped around to him when she heard the Arumenic.

"Hey, isn't that that lang-"

"Dude, ssh."

The muttering of the men at her table barely registered as she stared, shocked, at the stage. She knew that song. Her Nani used to sing it to her, far later into her childhood than she would ever admit. Memories flooded back, hot and painful.

"Hey are you-"

The touch on her shoulder brought her abruptly back to the present and she gasped shortly. She had been staring at the musician, who looked pained as well, sitting alone on the stage. When had the song ended?

"I-I don't..." Clearing her throat, she pushed the pain out of her face and looked around at the table. "Sorry...I just really don't like that song." The men were all looking at her, but not in a way she enjoyed. She didn't need their concern. "Let me just go talk to him. That wasn't really an appropriate song to be singing in here..." As she slid out of her seat, the men sniggered at each other, taking what they wanted from her words. "Not like that!" She smacked the nearest man's arm playfully. Every word drove the pain deeper and further away.

"Order me another glass of wine, okay?" She called back as she approached the stage, irritation now welling up where the hurt had been. The nerve of this guy, playing a nursery rhyme in a bar. He may be able to get away with that around people who didn't speak the language, but she was going to give him a piece of her mind.

"Yea, hi..." At the stage, she leaned her hip against it and crossed a pair of arms as she looked up at the young musician. She kept her face mildly pleasant, but couldn't keep the anger out of her voice. "Just what do you think you're doing, playing a song like that in here?"


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Postby Tobias on October 20th, 2013, 7:38 pm

Tobias hadn’t seen the woman approaching him. His eyes were clouded over by the miasma of recollection, and his ears filled with the dead noise of long lost days. He could feel the sun beating down on his skin and the scent of the desert, of creosote and sage, petrichor and sharp dry earth, filled his nose. Was this his imagination, or something else entirely? The memories were just there, right out of reach. If only he could reach them, then he could be step back through time, back to when he was happy...he needed to remember.

Remembering is what’s killing you. The ghosts in his head countered.

And then all of a sudden she was there, one golden pair of arms crossed, with a voice like flint. It made him flinch, and his memories of Ahnatep faded under the harsh light of current events. Bleary eyes refocused and found themselves again.

“Excuse me?” Tobias asked, slowly comprehending the eypharian’s words. Damn her, she even had an Eyktoli accent. she hadn’t been there in a long time, but she had definitely been born there; the inflection of a homeland had a way of staying with you, even when the drawls of other lands had long since vanished. It was in Tobias’s voice as well.

At long last, however, the shock of her words gave way to meaning, and Tobias’s eyebrows jutted together in confusion and anger. He responded in kind, and the Arumenic he spoke in was low and lacking of undertones. To some, that might indicate a lack of familiarity with the language, but paired with Tobias’s fluency it was revealed as sheer resentment.

“I was doing exactly what you asked, my lady. ” As contrasted to Rosela’s voice of fire, Tobias’s was ice, cold and cutting. “You asked for a song from Ahnatep, and I gave you one. What exactly is the problem here?”
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Postby Rosela on November 1st, 2013, 4:07 pm

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Rosela didn't want to see the pain in his face, the way he flinched from her as though she snapped a whip. Did he have reason to fear her? Was she that fearsome when angry? Or had he learned to expect pain when he angered someone? Suspicion stirred in the back of her mind.

Who flinched at anger and knew only lullabies? Her Nani. Sweet as Nani had been, there was no denying what she was. A slave. Had a slave wormed its way out of Ahnatep and crept into Riverfall? Slaves that bought their way out were one thing; she knew Riverfall's notions of slavery were more about debt than being born into it, but she still inwardly balked at the idea of a slave masquerading as a common musician.

Or...she could be completely wrong. There were any number of reasons for his behavior, being secretly a slave just allowed her somewhat irrational anger to feel justified.

However, that he had no idea what she was upset about only served to irritate her further. She didn't want this to be a discussion; she wanted him "It's a lullaby," she enunciated, as though he wouldn't understand. "Nobody sings songs like that in bars. If that was the only thing you knew, you should have said so. I didn't even expect you to know any; it wouldn't have been a big deal if you'd just said no."

Part of her irritation, she admitted, was being up there in the first place. He wasn't supposed to know any Eyktolian songs, and she was supposed to be at her table, enjoying the company. She just couldn't let behavior like that go though, meaning she was stuck up by the stage, berating a lowly musician who probably still didn't understand the mechanics of choosing a song appropriate to the venue. This whole evening was rapidly unraveling.


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Postby Tobias on November 30th, 2013, 7:56 pm

Anger welled up in him. The slow, demeaning way she talked to him reminded him of his stepmother, and that in and of itself was enough to damn this girl. At the bard’s sides fingers clenched into fists. More than anything, Tobias wanted to respond with kind, to engage in the old dance of the court, but he could feel the eyes of the White Crane’s patrons on them. One of the blue-skinned men who had accompanied the eypharian lady here was standing up, one arm patting his hip in a warrior’s stance. The bar was silent, as all waited for the drama on the stage to unfold.

Attention was one thing Tobias certainly did not need. “You’re right.” He muttered at long last, slipping back into Common. “It was a bad choice of song. Sorry.” Every word was laced with viper’s venom.

From the back of the White Crane, someone laughed. And that was what inflamed him, more than anything. Red-faced, Tobias turned on his heel and left both the stage and the noblewoman behind.

Kur’va must be one of the gilded,” the remnants of his pride made him grumble as he left.

Tobias nearly fell off the stage, with eyes closed and his fingers pinching the bridge of his nose. He couldn’t believe it. This had been his moment, his triumph. This should have been his day. But that day was quickly unraveling. More than anything, he blamed himself. He should have never dared to respond.

Tobias needed a drink, and badly…
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Postby Rosela on January 7th, 2014, 8:44 pm

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What Rosela intended as a quick reprimand of the musician had clearly drawn much more attention than she wanted, but she held her ground and stared down the musician on stage. A small voice in the back of her mind wanted to pull off, apologize for creating a stir, and return to her party. It hadn’t been that big a deal that he’d played a child’s song at her request…

No.

She’d started this, and by Akajia, she’d finish it. After a tense moment, he backed down first, and the swell of victory drowned out the small voice crying for pity. The situation began to dissolve and as she turned, she had to bundle up her resolve not to go after him again for cursing her rank. The firm knowledge that she was right stayed with her all the way back to the table, where people were beginning to chatter again. One of her table mates was sinking back into his chair, apparently ready to defend her at a moment’s notice. She was flattered.

”Well,” she sighed dramatically as she slid into her seat. ”He was a little touchier than I expected.”

“What did he say? You need us to go talk to him?” One of the men jerked his chin at the musician now making his way toward the bar.

”No, no, that’s-” She turned back to look at him and that weak voice returned to the back of her mind. ”That’s okay.” Maybe, just maybe, she was a little harsher than she needed to be. It was still his own fault though, playing that stupid song… Rolling her eyes as she turned back around, she hopped back out of her seat, one hand slipping in and out of her purse as she moved. I’ll go talk to him. We need music of some kind, don’t we?”

She did her best to keep the annoyance out of her face as she came up behind him at the bar. The bartender was eying her carefully as he dried a glass, but she ignored him. Slumping against the bar next to him, she sighed with great drama. Instead of Arumenic, she decided on Common to better inform the clearly eavesdropping people around them. ”You need some thicker skin, honey. I take it you haven’t gotten a lot of criticism?”

One of her right hands slid over the bar in front of him, and when it retreated, three gold mizas winked up at him in the dim light. ”Do try again,” she said, sounding very put upon as she flipped a lock of hair over her shoulder. ”A nice bar song, if you don’t mind? It’s my friend’s birthday and I don’t want it turned maudlin by any more silly things.”


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Postby Tobias on January 9th, 2014, 6:12 am

Tobias laughed, but there was no humor in his voice. “Your kind are all the same.” He growled back, in Common. “So arrogant! It takes my breath away. Do you honestly believe I walked off because you criticized me, if you would call it that? I walked away because I didn’t want to cause a scene, honey.” Tobias’s gaze flickered uncomfortably to the bartender and the other patrons. “Like the one you are causing now.”

The bard’s voice just shifted back into Arumenic, and he leaned forward. “Just listen to me for a second, okay? I can’t be spotted talking to an eypharian, alright? If certain people in the Four Winds knew where I was - if they heard of a man who looked like a human but spoke the desert tongue like he was born with it - well - well, I just cannot have that happen. She cannot find me.” His voice trembled with the emphasis placed on those last words.

It was insanity what he was doing, Tobias realized. This girl right here might have been working for her all along, in which case Tobias might have just dug his own grave. But, for some inexplicable reason, Tobias thought not. He saw something in her, some quality they shared. What with the bizarre objection she had to the song…it was almost like she was avoiding something too.

“…So…so just go back to your table and fawn over those men, alright? I’ll play for you and your friend, I promise. Just forget about me like you do every other commoner.”

Tobias leaned back, licked his lips. There had been a feverish look in his eye, an obsessive paranoia, one that had been nursed so long it almost became instinct. The man was almost sweating. He had spoken in a whisper and tried so very hard to look casual. He almost succeeded. And that, right there, was the look of a fugitive.

Now, however, rationality seemed to be asserting itself once more. The countenance, once so volatile, was collecting itself, calming itself down. Tobias stood up abruptly, beer held close.

“Also, whatever thoughts you might have on my skin, I wasn’t going to slink away with my tail beneath his legs,” he grumbled. “I just needed to be drunk in order to continue dealing with the likes of you.” Tobias threw back the mizas, and then his beer, though in an altogether different sense. The mug smashed against the counter as he began his journey back to the stage.

At that point, Tobias was just justifying himself, but he didn’t much care.
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Postby Gossamer on June 13th, 2014, 6:58 am

XP AWARD!
Thanks for threading in Riverfall.


Character: Tobias
Experience: Singing +1, Observation +2, Rhetoric +1
Lore: Apologizing To Offended Patrons, Making Amends To Not Be Noticed

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Lore: Reprimanding Offensive Musicians, Interacting With Akalak Males Socially

Additional Note: Not much here to grade. I would have liked to see the thread go on a bit further. :)


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