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A brief run

Postby Quint Caravel on November 22nd, 2013, 8:10 am

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46th day of Summer, 513 AV

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Not long before the current season ended, Quint was reminded of a time near the middle of last season where he had realized that he was rather out of shape and needed to do something about it.

The moment that led to this realization was rather humiliating to talk about or remember and so he decided not to dwell on such things. Instead he simply thought back to the 46th day of last summer, back when he was still living in the city of Syliran Knights.

Back then, when he was safe and sound in the walls of the city, an embarrassing moment happened to him which involved losing a foot race with a little teenage girl half his age, a friend of his sisters. His face had turned red and the breath had left him before he had gone very far, and with moments he had developed a stitch in his side and an ache in his lungs.

He had ended up with his hands on his thighs as he leaned forward, face bent down and mouth open as he panted like a dog, everyone laughing at him.

Deciding that he did not enjoy such a sensation at all, he decided to do something about it. And so, safely inside the walls of the city, he found a safe area where he could run without being bothered, and he ran along the inside perimeter of the walls. For a minute or two. Then he found himself unable to continue, as he was already exhausted and out of breath.

Too tired to do anything else, he went home.

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A brief run

Postby Quint Caravel on November 23rd, 2013, 10:04 am

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Some bells and chimes later, he decided to try again. He had wanted to go home and take a nap but this entire season he was plagued with strange dreams. Odd and unusual images, phantasms and nightmares were plaguing his mind and preventing him from getting any real rest and relaxation. Having run around a bit earlier had exhausted him and finally allowed him some mental peace and quiet, and as he rather enjoyed having a brief moment of sleep where he wasn't grinding his sleep and tossing and turning, Quint decided to go out and run around again until he was once more exhausted.

Well, at least that was the decision. A decision that was easier said than done. First of all, Quint had very little will power and discipline. He had never needed or wanted any, so sometimes he would make a goal and then not follow through on it, no matter how desirous he was of succeeding. Sometimes he even had the willpower but simply lacked the passion and enthusiasm, so he would find some reason to procrastinate. For example he had always meant to learn something about magic but to this day had yet to ever sit down with anyone who knew something about it. Once he had been in a bar and a wizard had been there, or at least someone wearing a long robe; that person might have been anything from a cleric to a man who just liked wearing a dress. Quint never found out because just as he was about to saunter over there, a buxom brunette crossed his path and Quint ended up taking her home for the evening. And so it can be seen that he often had good intentions but he had very little in the way of follow-through.

Another time he had been interested in becoming a farmer-- a decision inspired by the fact that he was dating a farmgirl who made the whole thing sound very appealing-- and he was actually very keen on the idea of it. He spent a week or two even helping the girl out, no matter how rough or tough the chore: bailing hay, cleaning up after horses, wiping down chickens in the morning: he didn't mind any of it. But he couldn't adjust to waking up so early when he was used to waking up after the middle of the day, and so they eventually broke up and he went on his own way.

It was a shame, he thought. He rather liked her. But they had incompatible sleeping rhythms. He was just simply too much the night person.

Another time he was going to be a famous bard, having sat in a tavern one day and listened to a girl in a jester's outfit entertain the crowd. It seemed easy enough and he had a minor talent for acting and seduction and a few various other skills that would be useful for a performer. He was quite enthused with the idea and he might have been very good at it. But when it came time to sit down and create his own material, he was simply stumped. He had no training and knew of no one looking to take a young bard under his or her wing. And so the dream had died an early death.

His entire life could be seen as one broken relationship or aborted job after another. He meant well, and often actually tried his best, but he seemed to be lacking something vital that prevented him for ever sticking to something long enough to accomplish anything with it. Running was another good example.

He had set out today with the best of intentions to go out and improve himself physically, to perhaps increase his stamina or endurance, maybe work off his latest heavy meal, maybe get his legs a bit toned. But instead he had done nothing but stand around and ponder on all these various incidents and anecdotes.

When he finally did get around to running, his heart was no longer in it. He ran up and down the interior perimeter of the walls of Stormhold Castle (any place that was open and accessible and which would not look like he was running from the scene of a crime) but once again-- as had happened before-- he quickly got tired and winded and was useless on his feet for a very short while.

He did try his best, but he knew nothing about warm-up exercises or how to stretch himself or how to properly drink (or not drink) water beforehand. He did everything wrong and was rather lucky he didn't kick himself in the rear or trip over his own two feet. He simply did the bare minimum required to get himself winded and then he immediately stopped and called it quits again.

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A brief run

Postby Quint Caravel on November 23rd, 2013, 9:57 pm

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Feeling rather exhausted, he went off and got something to eat, then took a little nap. It wasn't a happy moment. It never was when he closed his eyes. He saw faces from his past, of course, but also faces that he did not know. Men and women that he had never met before, and creatures that defied imagination. Impossible races: women that had wings and some kind of mermaid or fish bottoms; a man that looked like a statue, another man with a discolored arm, a red-haired woman on an eagle, a woman that looked like she might have been part spider or snake-- and all were dancing at some sort of party that he was throwing. A masquerade ball of some sort, in a fancy mansion that he had never seen before. It was bigger than Stormhold Castle. It might have been bigger than any place since the fall of Suva City 500 or so years ago. Quint really had no idea. But it was a magical place filled with people from all over the world, from provinces he had never heard of and with races his waking eyes had never seen before. Some people were heroes and some were villains. Some were knights and fighters and some were tricksters and magicians. There was definitely some sort of magic in the air, of that he was certain, but his waking mind lacked any context to put it into proper perspective and understanding. His conscious mind had no concept of Djed or Personal Magic or Overgiving or anything of the sort. He had no idea about ghosts and Nuits and the various forms of undead. And there were monsters in his dream, some in the shape of mankind.

As usual he woke up from his nap worse off than when he went to bed. He felt a little better physically but he was mentally exhausted and his heart was racing and he was sweating. He needed to get up and get away. For once the concept of some physical exercise appealed to him, and he decided to once more attempt going for a run.

This time he didn't care that he did not know what he was doing. He didn't care that he didn't know to breath or pace himself. He didn't care that he did not know how to warm-up or stretch. He really didn't care about any of it. Quint simply paused for a moment to leave a note for his, to let his sister know (one she found the note) that he was going out for a bit, and then he took off.

He ran. He ran like he had never run before. He ran like he had been running forevr, and that his life depended on it. This wasn't about getting into shape, getting physical exercise or working on tone and physique. This wasn't about seeing how fast or how far he could run, or trying to beat yesterday's time or mileage.

No. This was more than all of that. He was running away from the nightmares in his own mind. He simply took off, one leg in front of the other, hands pumping at his side, instinctively dashing as far and as fast as he could go. This time he didn't care that his legs got tired or that he felt aches in his muscles. He simply had to go and then keep going.

When his body told him that it wanted to stop he simply shifted his focus outward and paid attention to his surroundings. Well, it wasn't simple and it wasn't easy-- as previously remembered earlier, he had very little discipline and willpower... but he tried. He would look at the legs of women as he passed, even the ones wearing shiny plate armor. He would look into the eyes of people, looking at blue eyes, green eyes, brown eyes and even one man with children who looked like he might be blind. Quint observed that the children did not look like him, so he must have been their stepfather or uncle or something.

And he did not just watch. As he ran, he listened. He heard the sound of horses going back and forth, Syliran Knights riding or marching around, a woman calling out her wares, a man looking for his pet (well the name sounded like the name of a pet), a little girl laughing like she was being tickled, a squire yelling at a page to keep up with some buckets he was carrying.

Quint used anything he could to help him focus on running when he kept telling himself he surely must need to stop. Not just sights and sounds, but also smells and feelings. He noticed a woman that he passed wearing too much perfume, another woman with fragrant heather flowers, and a third with freshly baked bread. And he paid attention to the different textures under his feet and to the changes in breeze on his hands and face.
He lacked the ability to make any progress with the latter two senses, but he filed the knowledge away for a future date: someday he might be better at paying attention than he currently was.

And just as listening wasn't the same thing as hearing, looking wasn't the same thing as seeing. He noticed a great deal, but he lacked any sort of skill or ability in filtering it, so he could not tell what was important and what was not, or what was out of place and what was not. Trying wasn't the same as succeeding, and in many ways he was still rather oblivious to his surroundings. But he kept looking, as it kept his mind off his legs and feet.

He did make one astonishing observation about himself, however: his legs and feet weren't as tired as he thought they were. Or he would in fact have physically stopped already, or collapsed, or fainted. He was aware now that his lungs were aching and that he was becoming out of breath, but he would not have even gotten this far if he had simply quit on himself like he had done earlier. Apparently he could do more than he was capable of doing if he simply got out of his own way and let go of his assumptions of what he could and could not do. He was a man, not more than that, so there were some limits: he could not breathe underwater or fly in the sky. But accepting those exceptions, he really needed to stop limiting himself with self-doubt about what he could do on land.

By his reckoning, he had just ran 1120 paces. And that was not bad at all.

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A brief run

Postby Quint Caravel on November 25th, 2013, 2:00 am

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The next day, Quint decided to do a bit more running. His calves ached a bit but he felt like he could still manage a brief run. Nothing too substantial as there were other things he wanted to do. Not that he had the greatest time-management skills in the world-- he was always bells and chimes later than he should be for stuff-- but still, he had plans, regardless of the number of times he failed at following through at them, and so he decided it was best to get the exercise and running out of the way as soon as possible.

And so he said good bye to his grandfather, a man who used to work at the Mint before he retired, and he headed out and on his way.

He hadn't really thought much about his grandfather so he decided to do so, simply because he had been thinking about his family recently. He still knew very little about his father-- that was a conversation his grandfather refused to have about him, though it was clearly more because it simply hurt the old man to think about his son (and it truly did seem to pain him very much) more so than anything to do with Quint. That is to say that Quint did not get the impression that his grandfather was holding anything back from him or hiding anything from him; it was more a general impression that his grandfather now regretted whatever rift had happened between the man and Quint's father. He clearly regretted it very much and appeared to completely blame himself. At least he did now, though from what little Quint had heard about it from his mother twenty years ago, his grandfather had originally blamed Quint's father for something.

Maybe even for something that Quint's father had not done. Quint himself did not know: nobody was telling him anything about it. Though it was clear it was not some deep dark secret on anyone's behalf, it was simply a painful experience all around. Quint's family had been proud members of Syliras for generations, and many of there were minters or priests or squires and knights. All were pure human, with not a drop of any of the other races or even any of the other human cultures mixed in with them.

Quint had a tremendously large family in Syliras, but except for his father, none of them had ever really accepted him. He never felt connected to any of them or part of any of them. There were whispers that he was not a 'true' Caravel and would only bring shame and dishonor on the family, that he was not worthy of being a knight or even a squire and would only end up in jail one day, an infamous assassin or rogue.

He had been abused and beaten up by half-siblings and cousins, he had had Mizas taken from him, girlfriends stolen from him, and ... well, he could honestly say that while many in Syliras found it a wonderful city of law and order, he himself found it a place where people hid their condescending and patronizing attitudes towards him behind a veneer of civility and politeness. People hid insults inside of compliments; when he did succeed at something, it was always met with "Oh, you can do a bit of acting, can you? Who knew? Huh! Wow, that's suprising!" and never with applause and compliments.

Even his grandfather saw him as some sort of mongrel mistake that his son had made, but the old man was such a bastion of civility and hospitality that he was willing to take Quint in when, as a boy, Quint had nowhere to go.

Quint thought it was paternal love at the time, but looking back he realized the fellow simply had a soft spot for lost pets and orphans. Since Quint's grandmother had died, the man volunteered much of his time helping people find missing dogs and cats or reuniting children with relatives they did not know they had. Mizahar could be a cold and cruel place, even in and around Stormhold Castle, but old Bernie Caravel was a genuinely decent fellow.

And in time, he really did seem to care for his grand son. Quint wasn't quite sure that the two of them actually liked each other, or even that the man would have any more or less emotion for him depending on whether they were related or not, but he objectively found 'Grandpa Bernie' to be a decent enough fellow.

It made him wonder how he would have turned out if he had been born and raised in Syliras to a woman from one of the families here, as he knew his father had once been engaged to a woman named Lenaya Brock before his own mother came along. Quint had dark impulses in him, desires that would be considered indecent in Syliras, and a desire for fame and fortune totally out of character for his grandfather's family, many of whom were from good Syliras familes, and had lived there for generations.

He had spent time with his mother's family, and while he did not agree with her Pod on some basic ideas such as 'bartering' instead of using Mizas, he nevertheless realized that many of them might be considered rogues and brigands and pirates by Syliras standards. Which explained both his own impulses and why so many of his grandfather's cousins and nieces and nephews insisted on seeing him as a bad apple just waiting to spoil.

Thinking about all this, he continued to run. He found that he was able to go a bit longer today but he was actually going a bit slower: for long periods of time he had to rotate running with walking. For example, he would run ten paces then walk another ten, or he'd run twenty and then walk for five minutes. His lungs, heart, and leg muscles simply had not yet adapted to his new regimen, and there was nothing he could do about it. Out of necessity he found himself doing as much walking as running, and even then it was rather the human equivalent of a canter instead of a gallop. But still he tried. He kept going, legs pumping under him and arms windmilling at his sides.

(To Quint's eternal embarrassment, he would look back on these days later on and realize that he had not yet figured out how to pump his arms correctly and so they flailed around like a little girl. It was a bit natural looking, but might draw some howls of laughter from some of the more muscular athletes on his path.)

Still, he kept pace with what he did yesterday, subtracting out the walking he counted 1130 paces had actually ran (run?), so he was proud of that.

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A brief run

Postby Radiant on January 23rd, 2014, 6:26 pm

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Good solo, Quint. I hope things work out for him. :)

I have some advices for you, if the thread progresses to another day, you should give an update through a new timestamp.

Quint, Your current template is hard to read. I suggest altering your font colors to something darker as you have a white background.


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