[Note by Crosspatch] Character Sheet

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Character Sheet

Postby Magmo on November 23rd, 2013, 3:29 am

Name=Magmo
Race=Human
Age=31,
Birthday= 482,AV Season of Winter Day 24
Birthplace= Syliras
Skin Color= White
Eye color= Blue
Hair color =Brown
Height= 6,1 Feet

Humans= Is the only race that can breed with other races to create Mix Blood.Human

Lore's=
Lore of Syliras Geography
Lore of Syliran Culture

Appearance/History= Magmo is of a very big build,Helped dad in forge and wielding those heavy tools has caused him to build a fair amount of muscle over the years. Unlike his mom or dad or many of his friends and neighbors who all have brown eyes. Magmos has blue eyes they look like shards of ice. His dad was very tall and so is magmos with a height of 6.4 feet. His hair is brown like it is common for people in this area. As a child he loved to play with fire and help his dad in the forgers or watch him hammer the iron.

History= Magmo grew up in the area surrounding Syliras he still lives there today, But he likes to travel and explore the world. Even though tons of other mystical and mysterious races inhabit this world the humans have managed to survive and even thrive and they shall continue to do so. When he was a child he often helped his dad and uncle in the forge. They were both blacksmiths, and wielding those heavy tools has caused him to build a fair amount of muscle over the years. His mom didn't work but gathered herbs in the woods and made delicious stew for him and his dad. Sadly she died from an incurable disease when he was 6 years old. His dad died when he was 16. He went to the city to sell something but never came back.

Personality= Usually calm and quiet but if someone tries to hurt his family or someone he loves he gets mad real fast.(overprotective). Like Most humans he is very crafty and competitive. Opened Minded more then most races. Eager to learn new things and create new stuff.
Music= Likes the sailors songs. Tavern songs as well
does not like classical instrumental music a lot.

Religion= Humans are special in this field. They do not have a specific god they worship. They don't know who created them. Or where they came from. So Most Humans pick a good from a different race to worship. Magmos right now doesn't not worship any goods but know they exists and respects them.

Beliefs= In God
Saying/Motto= CantStopWontStop
Likes= Creating Stuff, metalworking, flames/fire, Likes listening to cool stories.
Dislikes=Ghosts[race] and tea,
Home=Syliras, lies on the western coast of Sylira and the eastern shores of The Suvan Sea. Newly built, Syliras is only approximately two hundred years old having been founded around an old coastal citadel of the Sylira Knights. It lies on the path of the The Kabrin Road between Taldera and Cyphrus, making it easily accessible by land or sea
Syliras
Small apartment [20x20]

Training to become a blacksmith

Languages= Fluent in Common
Languages= Ok in Isur
Languages= Poor in Nari

Family heirloom:
Blacksmith hammer passes down through family.

Equipment:
1 Flint and steel
1 Water skin
1 Eating knife
Basic Set of Clothing:
Wool Shirt
Flaxen Pants
Leather Coat
Simple Boots
Simple Undergarments
Food supplies for a week
and a BackPack Which contains
1 Wooden Brush
1 Wooden comb
A bit of Soap
1 Razor

Skills
Armorer 20
Blacksmithing 5
Weaponsmithing 5
Mining 15[racial Bonus]
Hunting 10
Construction 10

Money=100

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[srry if this is not the best description just got started and will get better hopefully.]
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Character Sheet

Postby Crosspatch on November 27th, 2013, 12:59 pm

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Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • The Character Sheet title must contain your Character’s name and nothing else.
  • Because the winter season has yet to come around, your character would currently be 30 not 31.
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB) throughout. This is to aid Storytellers in the future when grading threads to assist with differentiating the two.
  • Please lay out your ledger more clearly. A good example of a ledger is as so:
    ItemPriceMoney
    Starting Package+ 100 gm100gm
    Candle-1 gm99 gm
    Shirt-1 gm98gm

    Code: Select all
    [table]Item|Price|Money
    Starting Package|+ 100 gm|100gm
    Candle|-1 gm|99 gm
    Shirt|-1 gm|98gm[/table]
  • Mizahar is a dangerous world. The cities that exist do so because a large number of people have huddled together and carved out that existence with blood and sweat. Anything outside of those cities is in danger of being destroyed by predators, monsters, bandits, slavers, and the land itself. Because of this, there really aren't any villages or small settlements dotting the land. There aren't small towns ruled by Lords, and people don't live alone in cabins in the woods - if they did, they'd be killed very quickly. Please take this into consideration with your character's history.
  • Nari and Isurian are language that are not generally used (like Fratava or Common) and are incredibly difficult to learn without the aid of an already fluent speaker.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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