Completed [The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Jorin Ertihan on December 29th, 2013, 5:16 pm

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Rinya's blush and behavior as she admitted she liked spending time with him as well reminded Jorin of the day they first met, how she was so shy and self-conscious, and how Jorin had so badly wanted to make her smile. It was one of those things he liked about his wife, the fact that despite them being married and how intimate they had become, she was still the shy, socially awkward girl he knew and loved. But the truth was, any time spent with Rinya was well worth the effort, at least as far as Jorin was concerned.

He somewhat groaned when Rinya confirmed his suspicions that the 'real' test was moving targets. And he thought he was doing well, too... it seemed he had a long way to go before he could consider himself even halfway good. Despite her not saying so, Jorin suspected that the shots he'd been missing were probably easy shots too; but then he hadn't exactly been practicing archery for years either.

And apparently, his shot had veered. Rinya had been nice and said it only veered a 'bit' but Jorin knew it must have veered a lot for it to have missed so completely and hit that tree behind it. "Well, given how little accuracy I had to begin with, I guess I'm not surprised," Jorin chuckled, giving Rinya a bright smile.

It wasn't really all that upsetting that he'd missed. He'd been training in the quarterstaff for a couple of seasons now and he still couldn't beat any of the people he sparred with at the Kendoka (though that might be because Sohryn kept deliberately matching him up against superior opponents). Rinya just commented that stance was important but that aim simply took time to learn.

That rather figured; each person was different, as she said. Different height, different eye-dominance, different ways of judging distance and wind and all the other factors that could prevent an arrow from reaching its intended target. Jorin figured he'd have to simply feel the shot. He'd have to instinctively know how to aim those shots. It likely wasn't anything Rinya could actually teach, more something he'd have to feel out over the course of several (hundred) shots.

But he knew by now that Rinya never resisted any of his kisses. He'd been so afraid the first time he initiated this. Was worried that she'd think he was too forward to simply kiss her because he could, because he wanted to and loved her. He knew she'd feel his love for her, and hoped that would help convince her to let him, but the truth was the first time he did it, Jorin thought there was a chance she'd recoil or push him away.

Over time, he'd realized just how silly that fear was. Rinya was many things. Independent, beautiful, loving. But she was also honest and sometimes shockingly blunt, and for all that his beloved wife changed over the seasons, she was still the same blunt girl he'd always known. If she didn't like his kisses she'd tell him on no uncertain terms, quite like she did to that understudy during the afterparty.

But Rinya's instant reaction to his touch and kiss told him without words that she'd accepted that he loved her. Not that he had any doubts, but every single time he did this, it just reaffirmed and validated his choice. Rinya had expressed in the past that she thought she wasn't the best choice for a mate. Jorin couldn't understand that. As far as he was concerned, she was the only choice.

Despite the tender nature of the contact, Rinya's hand on his heart would find that it had sped up as he kissed her. It was an automatic reaction to their intimacy; no matter the circumstance Jorin would always be excited and happy for the contact. Rinya's groan just caused his heart to beat even faster, and despite the fact that he knew they had plenty of time, the kiss was just too enjoyable for him to stop.

Jorin could feel Rinya's slight disappointment when the kiss ended, and truth was so was he. When he embraced her, she continued to stroke the back of his neck gently, and Jorin enjoyed the feeling as she did so. Rinya perhaps did not realize that her touch was just as calming to him as his was for her. In fact, Jorin seriously felt he couldn't get a good night's sleep without it. Just the scent wasn't enough; he needed her person there, all of her, before sleep would come.

With a nod, Jorin acknowledged his understanding as Rinya explained the rapid fire technique in a bit more detail after their hug ended. It was certainly a very interesting technique, and clearly a quite difficult one. Jorin was actually very proud of his wife for having been able to utilize it to the extent that she did, even if it was only a stationary target. In his mind at least it was an impressive accomplishment.

Her own quick kiss made Jorin flush a bit. It wasn't that he was embarrassed or shy, in fact he was extremely happy. Rinya had reached a point, it seemed, where she was no longer hesitant to simply kiss him as well, and that pleased Jorin to no end. Despite the fact that it was short, as usual it held the same amount of intimacy and love all their kisses had, and he made sure to return it before her lips disengaged from his.

Leaning back, Jorin watched Rinya's lithe form take her position again. Whether she knew it or not, she was quite good at distracting him as well, even unintentionally, simply by being herself. Jorin found himself paying more attention to her form than to her stance as he watched her get into her element. Even despite the heavy cloak he could still see the hints of her toned muscles underneath, and the soft and smooth skin that he knew so well.

Jorin gave himself a slight mental shake. Now was not the time to be thinking of that. He could admire his wife when they got back home. Jorin redoubled his efforts to pay closer attention. Rinya's stance, as far as he could tell, was as close to perfect as Jorin was likely to see. And despite the fact that he figured everyone's stance is subtly different, it was still good to at least copy the basics from someone who at least knew what they were doing.

Rinya's technique, however, seemed a bit different from last time. Instead of holding the arrows in her bow hand and transferring it into her firing hand one-by-one she opted instead to simply grab the arrows from the quiver one after the other, firing them and then almost immediately retrieving another. Jorin did note that this strategy, while probably better for aiming because the bow was no longer burdened by the extra weight of the subsequent arrows, was a bit slower than the other since she had to reach all the way to the quiver to get the next projectile.

It only actually took around a chime or two for her to fire off ten arrows, but to Jorin it seemed like it took only a few ticks. As always, Jorin was very impressed by what he saw, though he could tell from the rolling of her shoulders and the small wince she gave that the technique had put quite a strain on her muscles. She tossed him a weak grin, and Jorin tried to encourage it by smiling warmly back at her.

"Well, I still think it was extremely impressive," Jorin insisted, walking over to Rinya after she'd retrieved her arrows. He honestly had no idea what he was doing, but he knew her muscles must be very sore at that point and he wanted to help. Rinya had walked over to him and handed him an arrow, which he took and carefully set aside.

Walking around behind his wife, Jorin gently placed his hands on her shoulders and rubbed gently, working his thumbs a bit to try to give her as good a massage as he was capable of. He'd seen this done once or twice at the Moonstone, though he never really paid all that much attention and had never had it done to him. But he'd often done this to his own shoulder when he'd had a few sharp blows at the Kendoka. Sohryn had said once that there was a difference between stoic-ness and stupidity, and then insisted he learned basic techniques for relieving sore muscles. A sore warrior was simply less effective than a fresh one.

"Someday maybe I should learn how to do this for real," Jorin mused, as he continued to rub Rinya's shoulders. "I know it's supposed to be done to... ah... bare skin," Jorin confessed, turning a bit pink at the admission. With a slight cough he continued.

"But even through clothing, I hope it helps a little. I know how difficult it can be to deal with sore muscles. I just hope I'm doing this right..." It wasn't really even strictly a massage, more just rubbing her sore shoulder muscles to try to relieve tension. Nonetheless, if her muscles were as sore as his had become after his own attempt at rapid fire, she'd need to relief.

After a few chimes, Jorin stepped away, snagging the arrow Rinya had offered him as well as his bow. Break time, as Rinya had so succinctly put it, was over. Taking a breath, he gave her his most confident look. He couldn't say he wasn't confident. After all, he had Rinya there and her very presence often gave him a boost he otherwise wouldn't have. Still, of all the shots he'd fired in his entire life, he'd only really hit once.

Taking up his stance, Jorin tried to adjust it as Rinya had suggested. Now no longer pointing his toe directly at the target, he found that his waist did not twist nearly as much. Leaning forward had been a bit distracting as it somewhat threw off his aim, so for the time being he kept his back as straight as he could, almost unconsciously trying to mimic his wife.

He fingered the fletching of the arrow, glancing down as he observed the guide fletch then ran his thumb over it. He closed his eyes briefly and continued to rub the guide fletch, then ran his fingers over the rest of the fletching. He knew he was looking a bit strange so he opened his eyes and gave Rinya an apologetic smile.

"Just trying to memorize the different feeling of the fletching," he explained sheepishly. "I don't want to have to look down every time I nock an arrow..."

Which was exactly what he ended up doing anyway. He just wasn't confident enough in his ability to tell the difference by touch alone. He figured with enough practice he would but for the time being he wanted to make sure the arrow nocked properly.

Taking a deep breath, Jorin lifted the bow, setting his right shoulder and squeezing shut his left eye. He drew the arrow back to the corner of his mouth as he lined up the shot. Before, he'd hiked up the bow a little too much, and he knew the higher up he aimed, the more severe the arc of the shot.

He figured for very long distances, aiming quite high would be required in order to achieve the necessary arc. But this wasn't such a distance, so he decided to aim a bit lower this time. Just a tad; he figured if he treated the arc as essentially straight he'd probably undershoot by a fair margin like before. His muscles had recovered some during their little break, and despite the burn in his shoulders, chest and core, Jorin was able to hold the bow steady with no shake or wobble.

With a whoosh of breath, Jorin released, watching the arrow sail across to the target. It landed with a small thunk, quite far from the bull's-eye and a bit far to the right, but nonetheless it hit. It seemed Jorin had difficulty with both precision and accuracy. Still, he was clearly improving as at least he was now hitting the target instead of trees or the grass.

"Well, it's harder than it looks, that's for sure," he mused as he walked over to retrieve his arrow. As he walked back, a sudden thought struck him. Looking over at Rinya's smiling form, he handed the arrow to her as he asked the question that had just occurred to him.

"I was just curious," he began, "Why did you choose the bow? I would have thought that your father would have probably wanted you to learn a sword of some sort, given that he was a wolf Kelvic..." Jorin shrugged. Truth was, he didn't actually know Rinya's father except through the things she'd told him about the man. From those stories he sounded a lot like Jorin's own father Rosik: hard, harsh, but still loving in their own unique way.

But a man like that would almost certainly favor some sort of close-up and personal weapon like a sword of some description. He couldn't imagine Rinya's father suggesting a distance weapon like the bow, so he wondered what made her choose it. Was it out of defiance to her father? Or was there some other purpose? Of course, Jorin realized it might be something Rinya might not want to talk about, so he hurried to add, "You don't have to tell me if you don't want to," even though he knew she knew that already.

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Rinya on December 29th, 2013, 6:32 pm

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Rinya did her best not to roll her eyes at her mate. It wasn’t so much the fact he thought it was impressive, but more the fact that she knew it wasn’t. It was a close range stationary target and given the style, the target would most certainly be moving—quite possible towards her. Which meant aim was actually quite important in the long run. However Rinya couldn’t bring herself to argue with him, seeing as there wasn’t anything to actually argue over other than her own point of view. If she considered his, then yes it probably was quite impressive.

But instead of taking the arrow and getting back into stance like she ‘ordered’, Jorin simply placed the arrow down before coming up around behind her. If it had been anyone else, Rinya was quite sure she would have been rather defensive. She hated it when people stood behind her as she could never sense their intentions. Her eyes were sharp—made to focus for the little ticks and twitches in the muscles. Not that it always gave her an advantage, but it certainly helped remove the surprise. However this was Jorin—her everything and self-proclaimed pacifist, if she expected violence out of him there was something clearly wrong with her.

She couldn’t help but jump slightly however as his fingers began to rub against the sore muscles of her shoulders. Rinya herself had only ever attempted such an act before and it had been very short—pressing against the back of his neck in very light circles. This was different and it caught her off guard. It felt too good however to actually complain about. Jorin didn’t press his fingers in too deep, but made sure the pressure worked across the muscles in an attempt to get them to release their tension. She had seen similar techniques before herself, but normally she just ignored them.

Rinya could barely nod in agreement as he stated that perhaps he should learn how to properly give her a massage. She of course couldn’t see the pink across his cheeks, but she could hear it in his voice and the cough he pulled in an attempt to hide it. Somehow Rinya knew that even this would lead to other things with them, and she could feel her own face heat once again. Today it seemed was a day for blushing. "I think perhaps we should both learn then. Seeing as we’ll be learning hand to hand together." It was likely something that would pay off between them, making sure the other remained uninjured and loose.

Rinya honestly had no idea if he was doing it right, but it certainly felt like it—considering the fact she couldn’t keep in the groans as he pressed against a particular muscle that was aching here or there. But none the less he couldn’t put off firing again, though he probably could have worked his way out of it if he tried. Jorin released her less tense shoulders to retrieve his arrow and Rinya rolled her shoulders again, finding them to be less troublesome than before. "Thank you Jorin." It was a soft spoken gratitude, but she smiled brightly at him. Perhaps she would get the chance to return the favor later for him. His muscles weren’t used to such activity with a bow.

Rinya cocked her head to the side as her husband closed his eyes and let his fingers wander across the fletchings of his arrow. After a tick or two he looked up at her, shooting her an apologetic smile—for what she didn’t know—and told her that he was trying to memorize the fletching so he didn’t have to look down at it. Rinya chuckled and shook her head, stepping up next to him. "You’re making it more difficult than it needs to be love." Reaching out Rinya took hold of the arrow with her left hand, and grabbed his right hand in hers and brought it to the fletching.

She could probably do this by simply pointing it out, but Rinya herself wasn’t bound to pass up an opportunity to be close to him—not matter how much time they spent together. "The notch in the arrow that the string falls into lines up with the lead fletching. Use your thumb to feel for notch and your index finger to feel whether the fletching is up or down." As Rinya explained it to him, she took his index finger to feel for the notch as it was vertical to his body, then led his finger upwards just slightly to feel for the feather just above the nock.

"The only thing you’ll have to learn later is how to easily twist the arrow between your fingers quickly. Don’t look down." Rinya ordered lightly and twisted the arrow in her hands before pressing the arrow back into his hand. The fletching was no longer in the correct station. "Try and feel it out hm?" She knew while the instruction seemed simple, it would still take time for it to become an unconscious motion, finding the nock and fletching on instinct.

As Jorin found the correct notch for the arrow, he took his stance. It looked very decent all things considered. It was also something that took time—getting comfortable in the stance. He wasn’t yet used to standing in it yet so it looked a little awkward, but he managed to hold the bow steady without the shakiness of his arms. Rinya couldn’t help the proud grin that crossed her face, even before he released the arrow and it landed with a solid thud into the target. It had been a wide shot, but he certainly managed to hit it. "Very good!" Rinya nearly crowed, beaming brightly up at him even as he mused that it was harder than it looked.

"Why I chose the bow?" Rinya blinked at Jorin. He was correct of course—her father had wanted her to pick a more offensive weapon with more choice of flexibility, but he had made one mistake and given her the option of picking out her own weapon. But Rinya could feel her cheeks redden—this time in embarrassment—as she remembered why she had chosen her weapon. From a child’s mind it seemed so simple, but there really wasn’t a reason why she couldn’t tell him.

"Well I was very young when my father wanted me to train in a weapon. He did want something a little more close combat but… I’m a bird. Generally flight is chosen over fight anyways, even for a bird of prey." Rinya hummed. "But… I kind of enjoyed the idea of arrows. They had their own wings. I could make them ‘fly’ just like me, an extension of my other self while in human form." Rinya tilted her head a little, a far look crossing her face as she thought back on it.

"Back then I was more comfortable being a bird. When I wasn’t training with my father… the kids didn’t really want anything to do with me. I was ‘weird’." Rinya sighed slightly. It really didn’t bother her so much anymore, but she could remember being lonely. In fact it was probably why the light bond to Nickolas had been solely harsh to break, not for the depth but simply because he had been one of the first people to not judge her for her—oddness. Blinking, Rinya shook her head and focused back on Jorin.

"Anyways, my father thought it was stupid, but he eventually gave in. He wasn’t one to go back on his word often either. If I wanted to learn bow, then by all means it was my job to learn it." Rinya hadn’t even realized it, but her fingers had unconsciously begun to twist around themselves. Her nervous habit though she had no idea why she was nervous. Probably thinking back on old memories and how she used to be, a rather sad lonely child that clung to her father.

If she let herself over think it, she could probably say the same about Jorin. Their bond had been instant and Rinya had barely let go of him since then. He didn’t seem to mind, but she partly wondered if she was just repeating old mistakes. Huffing inwardly, Rinya had to force herself out of her mind. She was still strong and independent, only now she wasn’t lonely either. And unless Jorin told her otherwise, she wasn’t bound to let go either—not so easily this time. Clearing her throat, Rinya glanced back at the target. "Did you want to shoot another or are you finished for now?"

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Jorin Ertihan on December 29th, 2013, 9:03 pm

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There was a sense of security and comfort that permeated the entire time that Jorin had been at the range with Rinya. He'd never experienced anything quite like it prior to meeting her. It was like they were cocooned in their own world, and he did not need to worry about anything, because she was there. Jorin noted that Rinya jumped slightly when he touched her, but soon she seemed to enjoy his impromptu massage, especially when he managed to press against an especially tight knot in her shoulders.

He really would have to learn how to do this. Rinya was right, if they were going to do hand-to-hand together, knowledge of how to relieve those muscles after a spar would be a good thing. He did not say it, but Jorin also wondered if massage could also relieve the sore muscles from their more... intimate activities. It was something to look into; Jorin loved being so close to his wife and any opportunity to get even closer was something he wanted to take.

"Well, I remember them saying the Moonstone baths gives massages, but I'm wondering if they would also be willing to teach," he mused. The only other alternative was to either try to self-learn, or try to find a book. Jorin was not confident that massage was something he really wanted to learn via trial-and-error, and books were rare and difficult to find. And there was no guarantee the library would possess a book of this nature that would be of use.

"Guess it doesn't hurt to ask, anyway," he concluded. And truthfully, it would be yet another thing he could do with Rinya, which was always a good thing in Jorin's book. When she thanked him, he just smiled back at her and replied, "Anytime, my love." And he did not just mean the massage. Jorin wanted to help his wife any way he could, and if that meant rubbing her tired shoulders every so often he'd do it without a moment's hesitation.

It was rather embarrassing, how complicated he made finding the fletching on the bow. Jorin couldn't hide the gladness that spread through him as Rinya came up close to show him what to do. He rather liked it when she did that; even the gentlest touch from Rinya never failed to get a reaction from him. It wasn't always one of desire. Sometimes it was comfort, other times love. But always a reaction.

When Rinya moved his fingers to feel for the notch, he nodded as he rubbed it against the surface of the arrow, trying to remember it so that he wouldn't have to look down in order to find it. She led his finger up the shaft of the arrow further so that he could then feel the fletching just above the notch.

When Rinya mentioned twisting the arrow in his fingers, he briefly wondered if that was where she'd gotten into the habit of twirling an arrow between her fingers. Perhaps that was a way to learn the manual dexterity required to quickly twist the arrow in order to find and feel for the notch without losing time. Jorin realized that made Rinya's rapid fire even more impressive, at least in his eyes.

She must have had to find the notch every time by feeling, though he suspected for her that was now instinctual. At Rinya's suggestion, when she handed the arrow back to him he did not look down. Instead, he did his best to twist the projectile with his fingers, feeling for the notch. It was painfully slow, though Rinya seemed very patient with him as he struggled to find what he was looking for.

"If there was a lion charging at me, I'd be eaten by now, wouldn't I?" Jorin laughed as he continued to attempt to seek the notch. He finally found it, and with a bit of a grimace at how long he'd taken, Jorin sighed and placed it against the string, after first making sure the fletching was correct by moving his finger further up the arrow.

Technically, it would have taken less time if he'd just looked down, but he knew that would never work in the long run. None of the archers he'd ever seen ever looked down to nock their arrows, so even though this was painfully slow right now, Jorin knew it was absolutely necessary if he was ever to learn the art of archery.

Jorin beamed back at Rinya, as he could feel her pride in him for hitting the target twice in the same day. It was so different, being taught by his wife. The last time he'd had an actual teacher of any sort, it was his father, Rosik. And his teaching style was quite strict and laconic. He gave very little actual instruction and no praise whatsoever. It was his belief, apparently, that praise only encouraged laziness.

But Rinya was so different in how she taught him. Jorin wasn't sure if it was her natural teaching style, or if it was because she was specifically teaching him, but she was so gentle and patient and supportive. It made a big difference for him, because her positive reinforcement worked to encourage him to try harder. Rinya used her smile and happiness as a reward for his success, and Jorin couldn't imagine a more precious prize that those things.

When he'd asked her why she specifically chose a bow, Rinya's answer somewhat surprised him, and yet did not. He thought it was very appropriate when she mentioned that arrows had little wings of their own, and she could make them fly like she did. And it certainly comforted him knowing that his wife had chosen a weapon that put her as far from the action as possible.

"Well, I still think your wings are prettier," Jorin insisted with a smile. "But that is quite interesting. I'll admit I like the fact that the bow keeps you as far from danger as possible, though." Jorin never said so, but he knew his wife was well aware that he was not the biggest fan of her assassin's dagger.

It was a vicious little thing that could cause inordinate amounts of damage despite its small size. Practically the epitome of everything he didn't like about a weapon of its nature. It had a pointy end, sharp edges, and was clearly designed to maim and kill. And while Jorin would never tell his wife she couldn't have something, nor did he ever criticize her choice of weapon, he made a point of never touching her assassin's dagger if he could help it.

Jorin did not think less of Rinya for owning that weapon, but it did make him uncomfortable. And the bond told Rinya this fact, which was likely why she made an effort not to leave it around the house, opting to simply keep it near the door with her bow and quiver.

But Jorin noted that Rinya had begun wringing her fingers as she spoke, and he felt an echo of loneliness across the bond. It wasn't something he often felt from Rinya; she was always so bright and happy and content when she was with him. He sensed that perhaps he'd caused her to remember something not entirely pleasant, so he took the opportunity to fire again when she offered.

Rubbing his own shoulder a few times, he gave her a quick nod. "I think I'm still good for at least another shot," he insisted, as he got back into his stance. The arrow he'd retrieved was still in his hand, so he tried finding the notch once again. This time at least he was not quite as completely clumsy as before, though it was still slow going.

"Sorry this is taking so long," he sighed, as he finally found the notch a few long ticks later. He really needed to do this faster, though he suspected the only way to get faster would be to do it repeatedly until it became second nature, rather like the stance he imagined.

"OK, here we go," he breathed as he nocked the arrow and drew it back. At least he was getting used to the stance now, it not taking him forever to get into it as his arm automatically set, but did not tense like it used to when he started doing this. It still took a chime or two for him to actually line up the shot, but it felt like bells.

Jorin couldn't imagine doing this in a matter of ticks; even at a few chimes worth of aiming he still couldn't reliably hit the target, and Rinya's bemusement seemed to imply that the target wasn't even considered all that far away. In any event, Jorin realized he was wasting time, so he took a breath, then released the air from his lungs as he loosed the arrow simultaneously.

This arrow sang just a bit too far to the left and barely missed the target, though it was so close the fletching caught the edge of the target and sent the projectile dovetailing into the grass. Jorin groaned; that really wasn't how he wanted his practice to end. But at least he'd been close; that was the one thing that he kept telling himself as he went to retrieve his arrow once again.

Trudging back, Jorin gave Rinya a tired shrug. "Better luck next time, I suppose," he sighed. "But I think I'm done for the day." At least there would be a next time. He knew now that Rinya greatly enjoyed these lessons. There was a different sort of intimacy here. Not the raw passion and desire that permeated during their coupling, nor the soft gentle love that existed when they were in bed and cuddled with one another.

Here, it was a sense of security. Like they were completely safe in each other's company. And yes, of course, there was love and even a bit of desire too, but it was that sense of safety that Jorin had never quite felt before that made these lessons so very valuable to him. He suspected it was because of the mutual trust he and his wife had in one another but in the end it didn't matter.

"How about you?" he decided to ask. "Will you be firing another few shots?" At the very least, Jorin thought, the strenuous physical exercise had banished the cold; he barely felt it now that the blood was pumping through his body. Still, both he and his wife were smart enough to know not to risk injury. If Rinya wanted a break, Jorin would be happy to do so.

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Rinya on December 30th, 2013, 12:15 am

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Rinya murmured nonsense in agreement with Jorin. It was hard to concentrate on while his fingers pressured the knots out of her shoulders, though she did get the gist of his idea. Asking the Moonstone if they could possible teach them even just the basics was probably as good idea as any. She could imagine that if performed incorrectly they could cause more damage than good and that wouldn’t do either of them any good. Though if that idea fell through she had no idea who else in the city would be able to teach them—there was a chance they would have to suck it up and simply pay if they’re muscles got stiff enough.

Jorin paid rapt attention as she did her best to explain to him just how to find the correct positioning of his arrows. Rinya kept quiet as he tried on his own however. It took him some time, but eventually he managed to get the arrow properly aligned with the string. "You would be surprised what kind of inspiration a lion would be in order to get something right." Rinya snarked lightly, shooting him a teasing smile as she rolled her eyes yet again. Chances were yes, he would have been eaten, but one arrow alone wasn’t likely to stop a lion either.

Rinya decided to leave that one little fact out of the equation, seeing as Jorin likely knew that too. It would have to be a perfect shot just to stop a lion—or several arrows. "Though I wouldn’t mind you knocking off a large cat." Rinya grumbled mostly to herself. Jorin understood her general hatred towards cats, though for the most part she was capable of putting up with them when she needed to. Either way, Rinya shifted her focus back to Jorin as he took his stance and prepared to fire.

Jorin simply insisted that he found her wings to be prettier than an arrow’s and Rinya’s face heated once more. "Well keeping as far away from danger rather appeals to me as well. That dagger…" Rinya twitched her nose slightly. She was right on key with his thinking. Jorin didn’t like the dagger anymore than she did, probably for different reasons. Jorin hated weapons that could cause major harm—it was amazing he was willing to pick up a bow in her honest opinion—but the dagger was much worse. Rinya could barely stomach the idea of having to be that close to danger to use it at all.

Rinya grinned gratefully at Jorin as he agreed to take another shot. It was likely he could feel the small storm brewing across the bond, and it was easier to shift her mind with his help. He repeated his stance once again, and Rinya nodded partly to herself as she took it in. It was slow going, but every time he took the stance he improved ever so slightly. If he continued to practice like this, Rinya would guess he could possibly be a rather decent shot by the end of winter. Though with the cold weather slowly moving in, she wasn’t sure how much practice either of them were likely to land.

The arrow he released just barely missed the target, skimming right off the edge and landed in the grass. "Well it’s not a hit, but that was very close." Rinya nodded a little as Jorin mentioned he was done for the day. His muscles were probably sore, and while hers still ached a little she still had a few arrows left in her arms. "Yes actually, though I’ll need your help for this next attempt." There was no way she could pull off another set of rapid fire sets, but Rinya had every intention of practicing against a few moving targets.

Rinya walked over to a chest on the far side of the archery field, opening it up and rifling through it for a moment before she pulled three round targets around a foot in diameter each with a black center to mark the bull’s-eye. Rinya stepped back up to Jorin’s side and held out the targets for him to take. "When I give you a nod, I need you to toss one into the air with the target facing me. Make sure it will travel a distance from you however, I don’t want to hit you." Rinya grinned at him, before heading over to her bow and quiver, slinging it back across her shoulders and walking a good distance—probably seventy feet from him—before she turned back around to face him.

Adjusting her hold on her bow, Rinya reached behind her—gritting her teeth slightly as her muscles protested the movement—and drew an arrow from the quiver. Taking a deep breath, Rinya lifted the bow and nocked the arrow in a single movement, focusing her eyes on Jorin. With a quick nod, Rinya watched as he tossed the first target into the air. This was something that Rinya was more in her element. While a stationary target should have been easier to hit, she had an easier time following a moving one. Taking into account that she would need to lead her target, Rinya watched as the target sailed through the air before she jerked her bow to the left and let the arrow fly.

The arrow smacked the target with a heavy thud and sent it flying off course into the grass with the arrow sticking up near the center of the target. Rinya smirked slightly. "Try higher this time." Rinya drew another arrow from her quiver before giving a jerk of her head as she nocked the arrow and pulled it to her mouth. Lifting the bow higher as Jorin tossed the target into the air, Rinya waited until the target looked as if it was reaching it’s max height before she released the breath she was holding along with the arrow. Another twang echoed across the field as the second arrow hit the target—though this time she couldn’t see how close to the bull’s-eye she landed.

"One more time… surprise me." Rinya locked her eyes on the final target in his hands, not even glancing upwards at him as she refused to let him distract her from this shot. As Jorin tossed the target into the air—low and fast—Rinya drew the arrow from her quiver and nocked it quickly, eyes following the target the whole time. At the last second before it would be too difficult a shot to land, Rinya released the last arrow and watched it land on the far side of the target before it landed in the grass. Rinya hummed lightly as she moved to fetch the targets.

"Not perfect, but I did land all three." Over all Rinya was pleased. Pulling the arrows from the targets, she deposited them back into her quiver and put the targets back into their chest. "Think I’m pretty good to go. Ready?" Rinya tilted her head, holding out her left hand towards Jorin as an invitation.

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Jorin Ertihan on December 30th, 2013, 2:44 am

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Jorin laughed good-naturedly at Rinya's snarky comment about how an angry lion was an excellent motivator for getting the nocking of the arrow right. "Yeah, I should hope so," he chuckled, even as he raised an eyebrow at Rinya's mentioning her not minding him knocking off a large cat. His wife really didn't like cats.

Rinya had told him once before why she'd always been less-than-enthusiastic about them. That when she'd been very young, an alley cat tried to eat her, and that traumatic event had forever colored her opinion on felines forevermore.

Jorin could certainly understand her perspective, but of course himself never having almost been eaten by a cat when he was young, Jorin couldn't really share in her obvious dislike. In any event, Rinya moved on, mentioning the dagger and Jorin couldn't suppress a slight shudder. The less said about that particular weapon the better, since he always found it to be rather unnerving. Rinya, however, seemed to pick up that and moved on.

Jorin felt a bit better when Rinya insisted that while his shot did not technically hit, it was very close. Jorin knew that Rinya was trying to make him feel better about his miss, and the surprising thing was, she was succeeding. For his part, Jorin knew what his father would have said. "There is no 'partial credit' in the real world, Jorin," Rosik's voice echoed in his head. "If you build a bridge with incorrect information and it falls down, you don't get 'partial credit' for that. You are either right, or you are wrong. There is no middle ground."

Jorin had been brought up to believe that one was either a one, or a zero. But being with his wife had taught him that you can always improve, and that nothing in life was ever that clear-cut. Rosik was a man of numbers. He saw the world in black and white and it seemed the only time shades of gray existed for him was when Jorin's mother came into the picture.

But still, Jorin banished these thoughts from his mind as he gave Rinya a quick grin, and was about to respond when she noted she needed his help with her next attempt. Jorin nodded and watched curiously as she went over to a chest on the far side of the field and retrieved some curious-looking round targets.

Rinya mentioned that she was going to shoot at these targets and wanted him to toss them in the air a fair distance so that she didn't accidentally hit him while shooting at them. Jorin just nodded in response with a small gulp. It would be a long time, he surmised, before he'd be able to shoot at these sorts of targets.

He just didn't trust his aim enough; that one arrow that went way far off... if Rinya hadn't been standing behind him it could very well have hit her, and that was something Jorin would never forgive himself for, even if Rinya would undoubtedly insist that it wasn't his fault.

Jorin noticed the slight grit of Rinya's teeth, and the small surge through the bond, that told him her muscles were straining at this point. He really did need to learn massage; his poor wife could definitely use the relief and he wanted to be the one to relieve her. After all, he felt it was his duty as husband to make her as comfortable as possible, and besides he was sure it could bring her beautiful smile back to her face.

At Rinya's nod, he tossed the first one into the air, not very high as he didn't know where exactly she wanted it to be. Rinya simply jerked her bow to the left and loosed, hitting the target squarely and sending it tumbling. She then suggested he try to throw the next one a bit higher, so at her next nod he did so.

Jorin's own muscles protested at the action, but probably not nearly as badly as Rinya's, though now that she was in her element she barely showed it. Not even slowing down, she fired off another arrow at the target, once more hitting it though this time only on the left of the bull's eye, sending the circular target spinning and tumbling to the ground.

For her final shot, Rinya told Jorin to surprise her. Shrugging and grinning, he decided to toss it low and fast, but Rinya's sharp eyes nonetheless were able to track it and she fired her last shot and nailed it at just the last tick. All in all it was a very impressive display, something Jorin was sure he'd not be able to replicate for a long time. Still, he was quite proud of his wife for her achievement and he made no effort to hide it.

"Well, I still think you're amazing," Jorin insisted, Rinya commented that the shots were not perfect but at least hit their marks. In truth, it was possible that his wife would always be a better archer than him. After all, her sharp eyes probably gave her an advantage Jorin would never have.

But that was never something that bothered him. In truth, his relationship with Rinya was quite unique. Things that might have bothered him before did not bother him when it came to his wife. He knew she made more money than he did at her job, but where he might have been intimidated by this fact with someone else, to Jorin it didn't matter. It wasn't her money or his, it was theirs.

And similarly, any achievement his wife made, Jorin was as proud of as though he himself made them. To him it wasn't a competition, and that made all the difference. He and Rinya were on the same team; her triumphs were his triumphs, and vice versa. When Rinya noted that she was done, and held out her hand, Jorin took it gratefully, with no hesitation.

"Sure, let's go home," he replied, as they both retrieved their things, and headed back.

~Fin~

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[The Stained Pelt] Hitting the Mark (Rinya)

Postby Translucent on January 1st, 2014, 5:51 am

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Congratulations On Your Hard Work!


Jorin Ertihan:
XP:+5 weapon: Long bow, +5 observation, +2 seduction, +3 socialization, +1 flirting, +1 rhetoric +1 massage
Lores: Longing to be with Rinya, no matter what they were doing. An attack on the Warren again, Rinya: Comparatively much better Archer

Rinya:
XP: +2 seduction, +2 socialization, +4 observation, +3 weapon: Long bow, +2 teaching
Lores: Coming to enjoy routines, Desire to learn Unarmed Combat, Teaching: Explaining the importance of accuracy

Notes: Jorin is so cute when he hits a target, I didn’t award you a + long bow point for your first shot Rinya because as a Competent user you would be used to that shot, so need to stretch your character a bit. You did get points for other more difficult shots.

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