Roseora (in progress)

[Roseora]

Name(s): Roseora (Robin, or just Ro)
Physical Information: 5'5, mottled forest green skin, 9 stone, thick long dorsal fins.
Race: Charoda
Birthday & Age: 17, 496 AV (I think)
Gender: Female

Physical Description: Shes a fairly average height, around 5'5. Shes slim and has a good body, however covers her figure up in baggy clothes. Her skin is a mottled forest green, and her dorsal fins are thick and long, hanging over her shoulders and in her face. Her eyes are slightly darker, with a hint of brown. She has a scar on her left shoulder from an old wound, that she tries to hide.

Character Concept:

Personality - Tomboyish, free-spirited, reckless and impulsive but also kind, hard working, caring and passionate. However her social anxiety often makes her appear cold, robotic or antisocial. She has very strong beliefs and opinions.

Ethics - Its a harsh world, so never be alone. She always likes to have somebody by her side to keep her company, preferably an animal. She sees animals as equals to people, and so will respect and treat them as such. Although she is vegetarian because she must be, she does not believe in killing animals, unless absolutely nessescary for survival. Shes a strong believer in nature and the natural way of things.

Likes - She has a natcho fetish, smothering the things in too much cheese, salt and sauce whenever she gets the chance to enjoy such delecacies. She likes her freedom over her comforts, giving up a comfortable home and even her own safety for the travellers lifestyle. She likes drawing and art, and any creative pursuits she is capable of. For this reason she has built up a large collection of handmade trinkets, jewellery, and old sheets of paper covered in doodles.

Dislikes - It may sound strange, with her being a free-spirited traveller drawn to exotic cities and locations, but she finds herself sweating, shaking and unable to speak whenever confronted with large groups of people she has to speak to or stands out from. She doesnt like being alone, and she most certianly doesnt like the feeling she gets when shes been out of water just a little too long. But alas, exploring the vast world above water, but sitll being a charoda has its downsides.

Character History:

Pre-Creation - Ro grew up in a small abode in the suvan sea with her family. She lived with her mother, her father and her sister. She would spend her days learning what she was taught, and in her free time would collect pieces of tack and junk, hoarding it away in her little room. Her father would teach her and her sister the ways of the sword, purely for fun. They would practice on the sandy shores most evenings until they were dry and tired. One day, they got home to find their mother had a gift for the two girls. Each was given a beautiful rapier, with a coral green hilt and a fine smooth blade.

Just weeks later, Ro and her sister went out scavenging, searching for anything interesting on the seabed, but they wandered a little too far from home and came across a group of less-friendly charoda people. Ro barely made it home alive, with a nasty stab wound in her left shoulder, but her sister wasnt so lucky. From then on she always kept both of the rapiers close, as if it symbolised that her and her sister could never really be parted.

When she reached the age of 16, she made the desiscion to leave home. It was an wmotional farewell, for her parents had lost one child and were watching another leave. She was excited to travel, and maybe put her sword skills to use in the real world as she had dreamt of for years. She still kept the swords close, but the bleeding wounds from losing a sister had faded into scars and mostly happy memories of their time together was left, however there still lay a small, painful reminder of that day. She found that that always made her suspicous of people, and scared of stepping out of her co fort zone. However, her determination and desire to explore and find adventure made her step out into the world.

Her parents gave her some money and basic supplies before she set out on an epic adventure to explore every nook and cranny the world had to offer, and experience as many different cultures as possible.

It wasnt long before she found her heart racing every time she spoke to new people for fear of being judged, making a terrible translation error or, her wlrst nightmare she did her best to surpress, a repeat of the events the last timeshe saw her sister. But still she kept travelling. It pretty much became her life entirely, and her visits home became less and less frequent as she travelled increasingly further from her old home. Living in her tent most of the time, her best friend is a mountain pony named Belle. Belle is loyal, playful and kind, sporting a chesnut coat with a little white stripe on her nose. They met, well, in the mountains and Ro took her on as her own.

Over time, Ro picked up words and phrases in the common tingue, coming to understand it well and speak it at a level she could say basic things and ask simple questions and be understood. During her childhood she had picked up a few words of fratava, the language of the svephra. She can barely understand a conversation, however.

Travelling and surviving in the wild with the extra challenge of always having to have water nearby for a quik pick-me-up made her tougher, so Ro learned to be resourceful. That meant using every last bit of everything nature gave you, not wasting a thing and making the best out of whatever situation you were placed in. In the wild survival was natural and somewhat primitive, but in towns and cities Ro would find herself selling her artwork, doing odd jobs andtaking casual jobs to earn themoney she needed to liveon.

Post Creation -

Training & Skill Points: (I hope I did this right... Its 50 skill points, amd then 10 for the race bonus, correct?)

Dual wield- 10
Art(drawing)- 15
Coral manipulation- 10
Riding- 10
Wilderness survival- 15

Earned Skill/Points-

Equipment/Possessions:

Supplies- Tent, tarpaulin, 100 ft rope, flint and steel, bedroll, old blanket, horse tack and saddle bags, approximatly a weeks supply of food/drinking water, a blunt knife for eating, (a waterskin? whats that?), her grey joggers, green tank top, khaki jacket, sturdy boots and camo-pattern hat.

Toiliteries- soap, sponge, small bottle of oil (to try keep the moisture in her skin as much as possible.) and a brush she uses for Belle.

Personal items- two rapiers (family heirloom), sketchbook and battered pencil tin.

(I substituted the comb and razor for a sponge and oil, if thats alright, and swapped the fishing stuff for some art stuff.)

Ledger (Required)
100 gold mizas

Thread List:

[Translucent]

Hiya! My name is Translucent and I was reading your CS and found some problems that need to be addressed.

1.Birthday, it needs to be in this format, Day-Season-Year. You need to add a day and a seaosn (1-91 for Spring, summer or fall, 1-92 for Winter)

2. History: Charoda are pacifists. They are not violent so Ro' and her sister would not have came upon a band of rogue Charoda that killed Ro's sister and injured her.

3. Languages you can start with a Fluent, Basic, and poor language. You need to detail which language you have.

4. Your training skill points, as Charoda being a pacifist you wouldn't have Dual Wield skill, so you need to find something else there. You also need to specify which points came from your Starting Package (SP) and which were Racial Bonus (RB) because as you Rp you will receive XP that you will have to record. Using tables is helpful like this

SKILL	XP TYPE	XP	PROFICIENCY
Drawing	15 (SP)	15	Novice
Coral Manipulation	10 (RB)	10	Novice
Riding	10(SP)	10	Novice
Wilderness Survival	15(sp)	15

Another thing on your skills is you have skills that in your history you don't specify how you learned them. For example Riding. how did your CHaroda learn Riding?

5- Supplies: You can't substitute Starting Package supplies. However you can buy a sponge and small vial of oil fairly cheaply with part of your 100 GM. Here is the Price List Record all deductions in your ledger.

6. Heirloom: Charoda are pacifists so rapiers would not be something you would have as an Heirloom. You also will need to explain why whatever your heirloom is, is important to your character. The Sketch book and Battered Pencil Tin needs to be put in your belongings an their price deducted from your Ledger unless you make them your heirloom (which would work)

7. You need to link your CS to your Profile, using the User Control Panel.



Once all this is fixed give me a PM and I will remove this intervention