Closed [Tuvya Sasaran] Playing with the big boys (Vanator)

Orabelle tries to fight.

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[Tuvya Sasaran] Playing with the big boys (Vanator)

Postby Magpie on June 12th, 2014, 4:36 pm

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Orabelle :
XP:
Observation +2
Socialization +2
Unarmed Combat +2
Acrobatics +1
Medicine +1

Lores:
Tuvya Sasaran: Violent Place
Unarmed Combat: Learn by Looking
Unarmed Combat: Don’t Lock Your Legs
Unarmed Combat: Keep Your Weight on the Back Foot
Fight with the Intent to Win
Unarmed Combat: How to Dodge
Unarmed Combat: Flexibility Makes Dodging Easier
Drawing Confidence from Defending Yourself


Vanator :
If you decide to return to Mizahar, let me know and I'll add your grade here.


Notes :
I noticed a couple times here you switch tenses between past and present. You should pick one (past is most common) and try to stick to it.

I wish I could have given you more Unarmed points, but you didn’t physically do very much here… There was a lot of talking and a lot of reaction posts spacing the actual actions out.

Lastly, being that Vanator has left us, I skipped adding lores related to him. Let me know if you’d like me to add those in.


If you have any questions or concerns about what was awarded, please don't hesitate to PM me.
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