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An undead citadel created before the cataclysm, Sahova is devoted to all kinds of magical research. The living may visit the island, if they are willing to obey its rules. [Lore]

In Shackles and Chains (Alva)

Postby Annalisa Marin on April 16th, 2014, 3:43 am

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Anna felt the shivers in her slave’s body and the muscles around her tongue reacted to the sorceress’ touch, bringing a smirk to her lips and encouraging her to keep going. She lapped at the sensitive flesh, brushing against that sensitive bit just above the core before plunging back in. Her taste was all around her tongue, the tall woman fancied that Alva tasted rather good all things considered. She explored deeper, feeling her own pleasure aching but pushing it aside in favor of keeping this going. Maybe owning a slave was a lot more convenient than she had first though, since Alva was a piece of property it meant no need to pay for her beyond the cost of her living. That concept was still a bit odd to her, but she was getting used to the idea slowly.

Alva didn’t last overly long, it wasn’t long before she reached her climax and her lust flowed over the sorceress’ waiting lips and was guzzled down the tall woman throat. Anna rose from her previous position and licked her lips, gathering the slave’s residual taste. The sorceress was pleased so far, now it was Alva’s turn to show that she had learned something from the tall woman. Her grey eyes gazed over the other woman’s naked form, climbing over to her slave’s face and lightly pecking her lips.

“Mmm… you tasted divine, slave. Did you like it? Do a good job today and maybe we’ll spend the rest of the day getting you… acclimatized to your new role.” Anna offered with a wink, rising to her feet.

“Now that you know what I want, you are going to reciprocate upon me. So let us see if you learned this task well enough.” Anna enticed, smiling seductively down at the slave.

The tall woman liked good investments so she figured that Alva, if she turned out to be a poor pleasure slave could at least service as a test subject. Anna always needed forms of a feminine variety to test out the designs of personal augmentation Glyphs, as well as the effects of certain reimantic elements. If nothing else she could just give her to Kouri as a present, the ghost did tend to run through the dolls in the Dungeons quickly. Perhaps having a personal doll like Alva would have her want to keep her alive… then again Kouri was the type of child that enjoyed popping the heads off of her toys.

The ache was there, a need that centered at her core and was building as arousal and passion set her senses on fire. One thing was for certain, today at least she’d be getting a good deal of use out of Alva as she was normally rather deprived of such pleasures upon Sahova. The undead weren’t exactly in need of pleasures of the flesh, those pulsers that were likely did as she was currently doing and purchased a slave if that was available. Or did as Darren did and accost potential apprentices, the petching hypnotist filth. Anna put him out of her mind and simply set her senses of preparing to enjoy the moment.
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In Shackles and Chains (Alva)

Postby Alva Marek on May 31st, 2014, 11:18 pm

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Alva was still enjoying the blissful yet unfamiliar pleasure she had just experienced, when her mistress stood before her, enticing Alva. Despite her intimidating demeanor, her mistress was a gorgeous woman. It was something that Alva would never admit out loud.

Alva carefully laid her mistress down, making sure she was comfortable, well, as comfortable as she could get in this mock room. She gently kissed Anna on the lips, her mind in a clouded daze of desire. Her eyes explored her mistress. A hunger seemed to take hold of her, one she had never felt before and could only picture as somewhat animalistic. She wanted more than to bring pleasure release to her new mistress. She wanted to ravage her. To taste her until she was drunk with her essence. To feel Anna squirm beneath her the way she made Alva squirm.

" I will please you my mistress. Please relax and allow me to do so." Alva spoke softly as she leaned over her mistress to carry out the command she was given.
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In Shackles and Chains (Alva)

Postby Ink on June 29th, 2014, 9:26 pm

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Let me see what you have done with your ink.

Annalisa
Skills

Flirting 1
Intimidation 2
Observation 3
Negotiation 1
Reimancy 3
Seduction 2
Subterfuge 1
Teaching 2

Lores

Auction block politics
Making a Bath with Reimancy
Alva: A New Slave
Alva: Violated in the Past
Making Reimantic Shackles
Alva’s Task is My Pleasure
General Layout of Sahova
Intimate with Alva


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Skills

Observation 4
Seduction 2

Lores

The Degradation of Slave Ships
Annalisa: My New Mistress
Annalisa: A Mage
Must Obey Fubuki Kouri Too
Following Mistress's Orders
Bathing With Annalisa
Alva: A Victim of Assault
General Layout of Sahova
Intimate with Annalisa

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Hello Alva,
I would really like to have awarded you more experience for your hard work but Alva mostly just followed orders. I'm going to leave you a few tips here on how to flesh out posts.

First, please recall that on Miza we aim for 400 word count minimum in each IC post. Most of your posts were less than 200. Adding more details can really help out, consider the environment around Alva and how this interacts with her. There's a whole world of things to describe and effect a PC in a post and they way they interact with each other can really enrich a post.

Now even though Alva's circumstances were such that she was forced to listen to Anna's instructions that doesn't mean she cannot internalize what she cannot physically do. She might be looking to plan an escape or wondering on the morality of obeying a mage. Alva was afraid of Anna's magic, but why? Because she has never seen magic before or because she has? This sort of introspective can really build a character. If you find your post is short, try asking why an action happened and then providing the explanation within the thread. What was the motivation for the PC to do this thing or, if that is immediately obvious, then maybe she recalls another time she was in a similar situation. A moment like when Alva had her flashback to her assault is a great example, more of this kind of thing!

If you have any more questions I am happy to answer them. :)

Also please note that you have a thread from Sunberth that is completed and graded but is not added anywhere on your CS not even in the skill section. Don't let your hard work go to waste! :)


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If there are any concerns or problems with my grading please feel free to toss me a PM. I am more than happy to explain my reasons or reevaluate them if you feel I've been unfair. Also please remember to edit your grade request as graded or delete it if possible.

Thank you,
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