Laucian Xiloscent

[Laucian Xiloscent]

Race: Kelvic
Gender: Male
Age: 4
Birthday: 5 Winter, 510
Birthplace: Lhavit

Appearance:

Standing a solid 6'6" and appearing to weigh around 230 to 240 lbs of tanned, rippled, and toned muscle. Laucian's animalistic side has surely given his human side, the needed body. Bold bright dark blue eyes stare out, pupils widening out for a slightly more human look before thinning to that all too feline slit. Short, straight, dark blonde, messy hair sit atop his crown, while a dark blonde beard slips down his cheeks and encircle his mouth with a mustache, tuft combo.


Character Concept

Though feeling the abandonment, Laucian still seeks for a companion, someone to care for him but also, for him to care for. For him to protect, to serve(possibly).

Character History

Orphaned as an infant, Laucian knows very little to nothing of his blood family.

Language

Fluent Language: Common

Wilderness Suvrival
20 SP

Hunting
10 SP

Foraging
10 SP

Unarmed Combat
20 SP(+10 Racial Bonus)

Lore of Edible Plants
Lore of The Forest

Location: Forests outside Lhavit







Thread List

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[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• Because Winter 514AV has yet to come round, your PC would still presently be 3 years old.
• As a Kelvic you have both your human form and your animal form with the necessary statistics - however, this appears to be absent on your CS. Please add this.
• Your character's history is incredibly short, may I advise expanding upon it to help build up a picture of who Laucian is?
• It appears you have not listed any of the starter package items, this consist of: 1 waterskin, 1 backpack, 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap),
  Food for a week, Flint & Steel, a simple shirt, simple pants, simple boots, simple undergarments and a simple cloak or coat. Please add these to your CS.
• You appear to be missing an Heirloom. An Heirloom can be any one item as long as it is under the value of 50gm and is meaningful to the character.
• It appears you are missing a ledger. Any items brought must be listed in the character’s possessions and in the ledger along with their price. Several different items cannot be lumped together. A good example of a ledger is as so;

  Item	Price	Money
  Starting Package	+ 100 gm	100gm
  Candle	-1 gm	99 gm
  Shirt	-1 gm	98gm

• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• Your lores are too broad. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
• It appears you have not chosen a starter housing package. At creation you are only allowed only one of the starting housing options, which are either trading in the housing, have the starting apartment, having the boat starter package (in the case of Svefra) or have the tent package. Please pick one and clearly state it. Also as a note, the wilderness and wildlands of Mizahar are a dangerous place to be even with points in Wilderness Survival. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch