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November's Featured Thread

Postby Gossamer on November 1st, 2014, 4:06 pm

L'orlei has selected a featured thread!



Not a happy tale, but not a sad tale either, though I did feel a little sad near the end. This story features Yoona, the mistreated Chaktawe slave, and a drug addicted son of a mighty family, Lucillus Nitrozian, come together in a most unexpected of ways. An unlucky soldier gets a fist in the face, and a bored lawyer gets more excitement than he was expecting that day.. and a kick in the balls.

The thread has a lot of references to Ravokian culture, minor details that only somebody who is in love would Ravok would probably notice, but if I'm being honest with you all, that is what first drew me to the thread. It involves the Ebonstryfe, they actually ride on Ravosala's, and it mentions various location threads and other things familiar to local Ravok players.

Oh.. and the writing was good too.

No, seriously, I thought they both did a great job. The thread was well written and kept me engaged throughout it. The little hints of Luc's insanity, or addiction, or whatever was wrong with him, and the seething rage just below the surface of Yoona's skin. Oh, and the lies. You can't have a Ravok thread without lies. Anyway, this is a terrible review, and I am rambling.. and so, happy medal!

...The End?

Unless I keep rambling.

L'orlei


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Postby Yoona on November 1st, 2014, 6:41 pm

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *flail*

I never in a million years would've imagined I'd get a medal. And that review is marvelous! Thank you thank you thank you thank you!! 8D

And I think Luc's returned, sort of, but I'll screech thank you on his behalf, too! X3
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Postby Daegron on November 2nd, 2014, 4:35 am

Awesome work !

Excellent thread you guys ! Well deserved !

Now, let's drag Luc back in Ravok and make him suffer !

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It will fester in your mind, disfigure your body and blacken your soul.
And so on and so forth, through an endless chain of transformations till the time comes and you are everything...
Then you'll truly be nothing...

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Postby Inoadar on November 3rd, 2014, 10:23 pm

Gratz-a-mundo, Yoona! :D
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