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Voss tells some stories in the Coil's Club

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Storytime 1

Postby Sarshassilivoss on November 30th, 2014, 11:46 pm

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65th of Fall, 514 A.V.

There was something strange about Voss's land dwelling Dhani brethren that he could not seem to place. Perhaps it was their comfortableness with their human forms, which he had yet to truly find, or the way they seemed content to lounge and languish. Voss had been brought up with the ideals that one worked for everything they got, and if the work was not put in, then one deserved nothing. Here it seemed females were deferred to for no particular reason apart from their gender, and power over one's fellows was gained through intrigue and manipulation. Ordinarily this might have disgusted the Iyvess thoroughly, as it was he just observed his surroundings with a lazy smile on his fine as he sat with a wooden cup of water, lounging in Dhani form on a series of cushions.

Though he was new to the Coil Club, and relatively inexperienced at his craft, his newness to Riverfall, and the strangeness of his form drew an audience to him even when he was trying to tell stories. This afternoon the group was entirely Dhani, and Voss adjusted his bright yellow underbelly, shifting into a position from which he could speak more easily, glad to see he could use his snake tongue without fear that the audience might not understand.

A half dozen serpents, a couple in human form, the others in Dhani assembled themselves, a few conversing politely with the Iyvess.

"My day hass been fine, yourss?" Voss nodded at the responses, giving polite responses to his question, then cracked his knuckles to get everyone's attention. "I have many sstoriess I am sssure you would love to hear, taless of the deepesst depthss of the ocean, of great huntss, of beautiful creaturess no land dweller hasss ever set eyesss upon. What might my beautiful brethren be in the mood for today?" Flattery, the perfect tactic to receive attentive interested listeners. Hisses of discussion were shared.

"I confesss I'd like to hear of more huntsss..."

"What of the fightsss between denss, Vosss sayss they often fought?!"

"I wish to hear more of Charbossi, it ssoundsss like a beautiful city..."

The Iyvess drew a clawed nail across his nose, then his long snout broke out into a deviously toothy smile. "How about a little of everything?" He leaned against the wall and folded his hands upon the point where his torso met his tail.

"Let'ss open with Charbossi, which is indeed a wondrouss city. Imagine buildings that withstand centuriess of ocean currentss, yet are made from a substance that you could crush between two fingers?" In a moment of brilliance Voss plucked a piece of ice from his cup and crushed it to great crackling effect in front of his audience.

"The colorss of the coral the Charodae usse for their buildingss are ass varied ass a rainbow, and they shape them with pure will, and connection with the ssubsstance."

He now took a measured sip of water, pondering where to go next. This story he was constructing he had decided would incorporate what everyone wanted, but he wanted to have fun, to make it up entirely, not something he did often. A fun challenge indeed.
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Postby Sarshassilivoss on January 14th, 2015, 1:37 am

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Voss stalled for a few moments. "There iss much infighting among the denss of the Iyvess beneath the Ssea, many dissagree about the ssnakelingss being raissed among the peaceful Charodae, thinking it will make uss ssoft, many fight over hunting groundsss, let me sssee what is a good one to..ah, of course." The Iyvess shifted his tail somewhat, the tip flicking back and forth in anticipation, the idea of a story was forming in his mind, something that tied together all of their requests into one tale.

"Charbossi iss a quiet city. There are many fish there, but very few that eat meat, it iss sheltered in a sort of valley, surrounded by the safety of high rock wallss, that allow the Iyvesss who guard it quite a lot of warning if any creaturess that might mean ill approach from above or the one open side of ocean that leadsss to the city. We keep our ssnakelings on the edge of the city in a ssmall cave complex, heavily guarded by the Iyvesss who live in Charbossi."

"Ussually when we were called to Great Huntss, it would take many weekss to reach the sspot in the ocean where a creature that needed to be brought down might be hiding, or hunting. When Laviku called out to 3 parties out far from the city on their routess, they were horrified to disscover that he requessted them to return to Charbossi, for he ssenssed a great entity approaching the city."

"Meanwhile, at the city the Iyvesss realized ssomething wass amiss when tremorss, greater than thosse that ssometimes shake the ocean, began to hit the city."

A few of the Dhani had been growing bored of Voss's long winded introduction, something he noted, but now everyone was back with him and his story.
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Postby Sarshassilivoss on January 14th, 2015, 5:02 am

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"The three Denss took longer than necessary returning to Charbossi, for upon their way they bickered and fought over who was to do what in the coming hunt. Though there iss honor to be had in participating, the individual who takess the final blow of one of the great Ssea leviathinss iss alwayss held in high regard, and it isss and honor which ssome Iyvess would kill for." He let that information sink in before proceeding.

"The beasst wass massive, and emerged from beneath the rockss jusst outsside of the city, with a great gaping maw that allowed it to chew through the earth like a Charoda through sseaweed. It headed sstraight for the city, and more than that, directly towardss the cavess containing the young Iyvesss ssnakelingss. The defenderss attacked, but itss hide was thick and it sseemed not to even notice. The ssnakelingsss were evacuated, but not all in time, and when the Denss arrived to back up their fellow huntersss, a ssorrow and rage had ssunk into the Iyvesss within the city."

"Though there had been fatalitiess, or perhapss becausse of them, the argumentss between the dens, and between thosse that had been trying to defend the city all along only increased. There wass no clear plan of attack, only chaoss in their rankss, each Iyvesss sseeking the glory and revenge upon the beasst that had killed their young." A few hisses of anger met this development in the story, and Voss nodded seriously.

"An entire day passed, in which the creature slowly ate its way through the city, the Charodae panicking, the Iyvesss tiring themsselvess uselessly upon the back of the creature before several young snakelingss, not yet having masstered their three forms, but grown and strong, had enough. They had seen the creature consume their friends with no qualmss, and had had enough of the mayhem caussed by it, ass well as the argumentss of the denss. They decided attacking the creature head on wass ridiculouss, and insstead sswam out behind it, finding the trail it had burrowed and finding tunnelss that it uncovered with itss digging. They ussed these tunnelss to swim down and underneath the creature, where they found that itss underbelly was soft and not covered by the thick armor exposed to their older, 'wiser' brethren."

"Together with spears, harpoons, the young Iyvesss tore the beastss sstomach open, rending itss innardss and killing it. But ass it died, itss massive body crushed them beneath it, killing the true hunterss and sending them into Dira'ss embrace. It was not until days later as the creature's body wass being harvessted that they were found and true reasson behind itss death disscovered."

Voss held out his hands, palms upward, and watched the reactions to his impromptu tale. There were mixtures of disbelief, disgust, and a general lack of amusement.

"What kind of sstory wasss that?"

"I cannot believe thosse denss, I bet one of the hunterss took credit for killing that monsster!"

"What sstupidity."

The Iyvess shrugged and shifted upright, his cup empty and in need of filling. "Most true taless do not end with happinesss." He smiled knowingly and slithered off.
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Postby Matthew on March 1st, 2015, 4:03 am

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I enjoyed the little details that you added when writing about a skill that can be mundane. This was a good read.


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