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An Abstract Creation

Postby Lisana on May 29th, 2015, 2:36 am

74th of Spring, 515 AV
OOCI did a bad job of describing this. Think a bunch of 3D shapes thrown together in some sort of artistic, whimsical manner.

The spring sun outside was fairly bright, making its first steps towards the bright heat of summer. Inside the studio, it was noticeably dimmer. As she walked in, her eyes had to adjust quite a bit. But as she finally glanced around, the girl saw that it was quite empty, lacking many visitors and observers, who’d come only to pester the artists with questions and unnecessary complements, distracting them from their work. Lisana liked this, because she'd be able to concentrate on her art, rather than talking to visitors wanting to watch her sculpt. Although, the girl's mind was blank that day, lacking detailed inspiration. She'd been going for a more or less abstract design, but whether or not it would turn out to be abstract, the girl was unsure. She rolled the clay into a ball, before squeezing the ball, making the clay more malleable and easy to work with. She continued to knead the clay in this manner for a few minutes. As she did this, she began to come up with a design. Once this general concept was set in place, the girl began sculpting.

Lisana began with flattening it out, making sure it was generally circular, but not entirely perfect. It was cylindrical, but only about half an inch tall, making a sort of pedestal for her art. Using a sharper sculpting tool, Liz cut off a few pieces, making it even more oddly shaped. She set these pieces aside, planning to use these next.

Liz took one of these scraps, rolling it on the table, until it was long and skinny. The girl took it, shaping it into a spiral and setting it on the circle, not perfectly centered but near the middle. She was doing her best to smooth it out, making it seamlessly mold with the first circle of clay Lisana was using as her base. A few more little designs were added, of assorted shapes and sizes. The girl made a much smaller sphere from the clay, adding it to her design, along with another line of clay spiraling at the top of the sphere before snaking down to reach the previous spiral. She took another sculpting tool, beginning to carve into the surface of the clay. She added more spirals and sloping lines, this time into the surface of the small sphere. Lisana did her best to merge both the sphere and lines with the clay, once again, avoiding any out-of-place seams or cracks between the clay.

The girl then made an effort to shape a pyramid, although it was a bit off. This wasn't a problem, and Lisana concluded that she like how oddly-shaped it was. She instead made it even more lopsided and off-shaped, putting dents in the sides and corners. The girl attached this bit of clay to the base, once again smoothing out the seams. She then added another spiral, reaching from the corner, but this time, it was not circular in shape. Instead, the clay spiraled out in a square manner, before ending abruptly.

Lisana then used another it of clay to make an almost petal-like shape. It was nearly oval-shaped, but both ends came to a point. The girl made three of these, setting them on the base to that the tips touched. She then made the outer tips curve up, making a sort of concave bowl-ish shape, in which the edges of the "Petals" stuck up more than the center.

She then rolled another ball of clay. This one didn’t have to be perfectly round, because it was going to be shaped even more. Once it at least resembled a sphere, she set it in the palm of her hand. Liz took her other thumb and forefinger, beginning to pinch little spikes protruding from the surface of the clay. She rotated the ball, until half of the sphere was covered in these little unshaped spikes. Lisana then went and reshaped each spire, so they came to a point. When this was done, she squished the bottom of the sphere, the side without spikes, onto the base of the piece. In this way, it was squished, and the girl adjusted the spikes so that they looked a bit better, and sharper.
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An Abstract Creation

Postby Lisana on May 31st, 2015, 3:41 pm

She rolled a few more long, skinny lines of clay, making more swirls and wavy lines across the top of the pedestal. She added a few on the side, too, because the sides of the pedestal looked a bit bare.

Lisana took a step back to look at what she'd made. it wasn't yet finished, but the girl liked how nothing matched, yet at the same time, it all did.

But as she observed it's beauty, each flaw, or seam in the clay stood out like a sore thumb. Lisana sighed, bracing herself for the agonizing, detail-oriented work before her. Fixing the slightest of seams was harder than the initial design itself, and took a lot of concentration, so as not to mess something up all that badly.

The first was where the sphere met the base. Lisana added some more clay, trying to make each small crack in between the ball and the base disappear. She also did this with the assorted swirls dotted across the piece. The pyramid also had to be attached, not to mention the many seams on it's surface.

It took an entire bell to smooth out these seams, and Lisana was glad when they were finally done. She wrung her hands out, giving herself a short break before continuing on the piece. She gently smoothed out each spiral, and wavy line. The girl then took her thumb, pressing it at similar intervals on some of the lines, so there were dents in the spirals. She then took a clay carving tool, gently creating more spirals and lines in the base of the piece.

After many bells of work, Lisana took a break, deciding to ask Tain for advice. She went over to him, as he was working on the pottery wheel. “Um, Tain?” He paused at the wheel, turning to her. Lisana continued, hoping she didn’t disturb him. “I was.. uh, i was working on something, and was wondering if you could come over when you get the chance,” she paused. “Maybe to.. give me some advice.”

The man nodded, turning to his work. “Just give me a moment, I’d like to finish this.” he proceeded to work on the vase he was making.

Lisana gave a short nod. “O-of course,” before scurrying back to the table where she was working. Tain was nice enough, but he still made her a bit nervous. He was very much a perfectionist, and, as a result, wasn’t afraid to correct Lisana on any mistakes. While the constructive criticism was helpful, it made Lisana feel a bit embarrassed.

As she waited for Tain to come look at her work, Lisana continued to make small alterations. These would not be noticeable by anyone other than the artist herself, but they seemed relevant. As she waited for Tain, every flaw seemed to appear, and she realized she was nowhere near finished. She quickly made an effort to smooth out more seams and out-of-place corners, before hearing Tain’s voice behind her. “Alright, lets have a look.”

The girl stepped out of the way, letting him study the piece. He squinted, studying the piece carefully. It took two or three chimes before Lisana finally interrupted the silence. “What do you think?” she blurted, “It was meant to be abstract, but it kinda looks silly.”

She immediately regretted interrupting Tain, and her cheeks grew red with embarrassment. Can’t you keep your mouth shut?! she scolded herself. But the man didn’t reply for another chime.

“I like it. It does look a bit strange, but its very original.” He gave her a soft smile. “There are still a few parts where it looks a little sloppy. You might want to revisit that.” He gestured to a few parts on the piece, before giving the girl a slight nod. Tain then made his way back to the pottery wheel.

She went to smooth out the seams, spending another half-bell on this.

Finally, Lisana was finished with the piece, which was very abstract, and odd. It was pretty much just a bunch of shapes thrown together, but it was almost whimsical, artistic. Lisana concluded that she liked how it turned out, no matter how strange it must be. The girl just hoped her piece could be taken seriously, because it looked a bit silly.
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An Abstract Creation

Postby Neologism on October 19th, 2015, 4:25 pm

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