[Note by Crosspatch] Anastasia Kelles

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Anastasia Kelles

Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:28 pm

Anastasia Kelles


Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Birthday: 3rd day of Fall in the Year 496 AV
Birthplace: Ravok
Current Location: Zeltiva

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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:29 pm

Anastasia Kelles' Appearance

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Having long blonde hair and light blue deep eyes, Anastasia attracts glances everywhere she goes. She is 1.60 meters tall and fairly lean for her age.
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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:40 pm

Anastasia Kelles' History


Despite it was heavy raining and she was 8 months pregnant, that morning like every other morning, Jennifer Kelles was boarding the Water Glider to reach the temple and pray for the safety of her little creature that was growing in her womb.

Jennifer was not part of any of the "elite" families of the city of Ravok, but it was well-known among the members of the Ebonstryfe that usually were on guard duty during the morning temple openings. For that reason, when her foot slipped on the dark marble of the templeyard, every temple-man nearby was ready to help her, but even a 1 second reflex could not save her from her death on the spot.

The only thing to do was saving the little girl in her womb and call her with the name that Jennifer repeated many times during her temple visits: Anastasia.

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Like every other girl of their age, Anastasia grow up in a wide family made of cousins, uncles and distant relatives that treated her like a daughter.

Despite this, Anastasia loved to escape his family to go to the Temple of the Black Sun where she passed the great majority of her daily time, because she had the feeling to be closer to her mom in that way.

Anastasia was also a very clever girl and she learned to read very soon, and very soon she read every book she could take her hands on.

With this habit, she became soon a very cultured person, despite of her not being part of a rich family, and she understood quite soon that a future about books was more fitted for her that any another manual activity.

After some year of work at his father's wood artisan activity, Anastasia earned enough money to pay for a difficult travel to the city of Zeltiva and she is just arrived to the city aiming to the university.
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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:41 pm

Anastasia Kelles' Personality


Anastasia inherited a great will from her mother, Jennifer: she is basically a good and gentle girl: intelligent, unselfish,and she is always ready to help anyone she met.

She loves life and for this reason she hates every form of slavery but she is clever enough to not show this feeling openly in a city that's owned by the Black Sun organization or elsewhere this practice is tolerated.

Anastasia is always looking for some activity that can make her useful for her community; she is not naive but her unconditional need to help people sometimes makes the wrong people to profit from the situation.

Because of this, Anastasia is slowly changing is tempered character and starting to asking herself if being gentle and helpful at any cost is worth, or if sometimes you have to make exceptions for the sake of a bigger objective.
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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:51 pm

Anastasia Kelles' Possessions


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Set of Clothing
Grey leather tail-coat splitted in two under the back with strings
Black boy shorts
Black boots

1 Waterskin

Backpack
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife
1 Flint & Steel

Family Heirloom
Gold Necklace with a pendant with the form of a little key, owned by Anastasia's mother and passed to her since her first days of life
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House
Anastasia lives in a small single room cottage a little far from the university with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table.
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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:52 pm

Anastasia Kelles' Skills


Study - 30
Anastasia has an innate talent at remembering things she read only few times
15 SP + 15 RB

Negotiation - 15
Anastasia is gentle but she also has a strong nature and stubbornness for achieving what she wants
15 SP

Woodworking - 10
Anastasia worked for years along with her carpenter father and she can make some useful tools from wood with the right...tools
10 SP

Herbalism - 5
Anastasia read some books about the herbs around her native city: not so much, but at least she knows some basics about it
5 SP

Medicine - 5
Anastasia read some books about basic medicine and she also learned some "heal tricks" while helping unfortunates in her city
5 SP
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Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 20th, 2015, 6:53 pm

Anastasia Kelles' Ledger

Owned: 100 GM
Start: +100 GM
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Anastasia Kelles

Postby Anastasia Kelles on September 21st, 2015, 11:59 am

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Anastasia Kelles

Postby Crosspatch on October 8th, 2015, 8:28 am

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • You appear to be missing your starting language options. At creation you must have one fluent language with the option for one basic and one poor language. Most players start out with "common tongue", and then take the other foreign languages with valid explanation on how they learned them in their history.
  • "Study" is not a valid skill in Mizahar and if anything is something related to a more individualistic talent built up of multiple skills - for example, organisation, planning, writing, intelligence and the field in question the individual is looking into.
  • "Woodworking" is not a valid skill, do you mean Carpentry?
  • You appear to be missing your two starting lores. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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