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The Meat Of The Issue (Erikal)

Postby Colt on December 1st, 2015, 5:06 pm

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Erikal gave a brief, concise nod to acknowledge what Shahar had said and signal his understanding; the plan was set, their paths laid out, and so Erikal split and circled to the other side of the water.

When push came to shove and their quarry began to move, Erikal did not disappoint.

He burst against the herd’s movements with his spear raised, a thundering whoop upon his tongue. The deer immediately startled, hesitated, tried to double back before realizing that Shahar was blocking them, then turned and spilled out of the trees and into the open plains.

Tuka was no longer under Shahar’s control; with the deer running, the hunting cat sought no further prompting from her partner. She simply sprinted after them, eyes trained on some individual within their number. Snow, new to the game of hunting, charged after the smaller and much more agile Tuka, despite her drastically slower pace.

Tuka follow don’t know what action.

Follow, Shahar said, angling Akaidras to follow the herd onto the grasses. Tuka action, your action, do like her. Tuka was more than capable of chasing and bringing down a deer––if “bringing down” referred to her ability to trip the animal into falling and thereby removing it from its fellows. When it came to actually slaying larger animals, Tuka was less skilled; she was lean and light, and beyond that, she was fragile. Shahar had seen her do it before, but it had been neither easy nor painless for her. If Snow followed her to her fallen prey, then Snow’s larger size and weight would no doubt tip the odds in Tuka’s favor.

Shahar had another partner today.

Erikal continued to drive the herd onwards, waving about his spear and whooping madly. Shahar brought Akaidras to flank the other side of the stampede, sandwiching the herd between them. Shouting for Erikal’s attention, Shahar drew a javelin and signaled his readiness; the largest deer he could immediately see was a large buck, burdened by a massive set of antlers. The buck was towards the front of the herd, and Shahar gestured quickly at it. That one, he said. Separate him, get him away!
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The Meat Of The Issue (Erikal)

Postby Erikal on December 5th, 2015, 1:31 am


He spotted Shahar across the barren plain of dust, atop Akaidras, funneling the racing deer south over the long stretch of open grass. Erikal let out a joyous bellow to his comrade to signal the beginning of the hunt. Following the man's motion, his eyes widened on the proud buck he had seen earlier, while waiting for Shahar. Blue-gray eyes focused, breathing in the spectacular scene ahead of him. Perspiration coated the Drykas's forehead and brow. The air heavy and warm, he squinted through the haze of dust, past the herd of deer to the crowned leader at the fore. Erikal roared again and gave two quick pats to his strider's withers. It was time.

On setting the trap, Korvas had been like a streak of lightning across the golden terrain. But now he thundered ahead with a different purpose. Deer dodged out of the massive horse's path as he usurped a position closer and closer to the lead buck. Erikal caught something on his periphery, turned, and was shocked to see Shahar's hunting cat off to his right. The cat's speed was truly a spectacle to behold. He noticed the deer giving ground to the feline and saw in their wake a larger figure behind the cat trying to keep up. His chuckles were snatched by the whip of wind upon vaguely making out the amicable dog-wolf.

The experience of animal companions only heightened his desire to have one of Caiyha's brave with him on the hunt to aid he and Korvas. He made a mental note to ask Shahar about such things, afterward. For now, he fixed his sights on the majestic elk. The gap had closed even more. Now only a few of the strongest and quickest of the herd remained betwixt he and their quarry.

Erikal could feel the echo of hooves and knew Shahar was closeby. He was glad for that, as the two of them and the animals could work as a team to bring the prince down. It was time for him to make his move. Erikal let out a war-cry and spurred Korvas forward. The few remaining deer veered away, leaving only one. Erikal herded the elk away from its companions by angling toward its flank. The buck thwarted in its straight-ahead flight, swerved away from the Drykas riders. Now it became imperative to work cooperatively with his friends to entrap the deer and slow it down just enough to land the killing blow.

Erikal peered to his right to notice Akaidras and Shahar edging closer. Cut him off. I will strike, he signed. If he missed this opportunity, it would be up to Shahar to engage the proud animal the second time around. His eyes narrowed against the sun's glare. He raised the spear aloft, the sunlight glinting off its tip.

Erikal grit his teeth and Korvas surged forward....

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Postby Colt on January 2nd, 2016, 5:27 pm

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Once they were free of the trees and stretched over the open plains, Erikal whooped again, loud and joyous. Shahar looked over and witnessed the flaxen-haired Drykas risen in his yvas, eyes on fire, entirely focused on their quarry. The whoop didn’t appear to signal anything actually wrong; if anything, Erikal seemed to be yelling for the sheer joy of it.

It was a very Drykas thing to do.

Erikal roared again––he certainly did like doing that––and plunged deeper into the herd, which was slowly but surely spreading out to avoid the two riders. The horses had the advantage of the Web, and of the magic in their hooves; although it wasn’t easy, they were faster than the deer and could overcome them.

Erikal and his Korvas were muscling their way through most, edging closer to the leader of the herd with the massive rack––the one Shahar had pointed out. Akaidras, not one to be outdone, kept up with Korvas and came to flank the other side. Tuka had disappeared from his peripherals, as had the telltale white flash of Snow; upon reaching out for her, the she-wolf informed him that there was prey, wounded; Tuka had managed to snare one, and the two hunters were currently puzzling out how to kill it. They were not in danger, yet.

Shahar could focus entirely on what lay in front of him.

Hyperaware of his hunting partner, Shahar caught the quick string of signs calling for herding and cutting. Shahar acknowledged and moved to carry out, putting a hand on his strider’s neck and asking for more speed. Faster. Overtake that one.

Akaidras snorted, switched leads mid-step, and put his head down to barrel into the wind. He pulled at the Web, accessing every last bit of speed he could muster, and he pulled ahead of Korvas and Erikal. It wouldn’t be instant, but it would be enough; if the two of them could get abreast of the buck, they could force it to angle sideways––an angle that would cost it precious speed, and therefore bring it into reach of Erikal’s spear.


Almost. Agonizing moments, and they were aligned with the buck’s flank.

Almost. They were reaching its shoulder.

Just shy of it. They were at the neck.

Finally. They reached the head.

Shahar leaned in and Akaidras followed. They moved closer to the buck, crowding him, pushing him sideways. The curve in the path was gentle, but it was working; the buck was slowing down to compensate for the angle, and he was bringing himself closer to Erikal.

Shahar signalled to his teammate. Now!
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Postby Erikal on January 3rd, 2016, 3:47 pm


The stampede. The chase. The entire thing was exhilrating for the young Drykas. If he had to describe it in words he would probably fail miserably to accurately portray how it made him feel. Perhaps like the dive off a cliff into a lake, but even that was a mere shadow when put side by side with the hunt. Erikal's attention was fixed on the majestic buck ahead. The time was nearly ripe for a strike.

Shahar and Akaidras had come and it nearly took Erikal's breath away to see his fellow Drykas put wind to his strider's hooves, overtaking his own position in order to carry out their herding and cutting maneuver. Even the swift prince could not match Akaidras's speed for long and soon the mighty bay had edged just ahead and forced the deer into a less than ideal flight path. One that would put the deer at his mercy.

It was his time. Shahar had given the signal. The spear already raised, shot back even more as he raised up in his yvas in order to achieve a position ideal for thrusting. Erikal saw the flank of the beautiful buck open up to him. He did not wish to fail his brother on what was their first hunt together. Such a thing would be an embarassment. It was his opportunity to gain respect of his fellow and reap the reward given by Caiyha.

As his muscles tensed for the violent action, he found a piece of his mind stalling. Reluctance now? It was insanity. What was he doing? Kill it now! He urged himself. It was almost as if he could hear the prince talking inside his head. Those large dark pools begged for mercy. All he had to do was lower his spear and give the signal to Shahar to halt. So very easy to save one of the kindred....

But just before the moment of danger came where the two striders would cinch the wedge tight and risk crashing, Erikal let out a primal scream. It was a scream of joy and loss. Of release and torment. The spear jerked forward swiftly to pierce through the prince's side. The impact numbed his arm and he lost hold of his spear. Korvas didn't need to be given the command to slow, bringing his charge to a more easy canter.

Erikal realized tears stung his eyes, gazing ahead he saw Shahar commencing with the finishing touches. The proud prince still ran, even with his spear jutting from its side. But its pace had slowed considerably, legs became wobblly, unable to carry itself for very much longer. Erikal wiped at his eyes, breathing hard. He had done the right thing.

But the great buck did not agree.

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Postby Colt on January 3rd, 2016, 4:38 pm

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Akaidras cornered, the buck turned, and Erikal came to match them. He spear was already ready, raised to the shoulder and waiting only for the perfect moment. The two striders continued to press their prey and come closer to one another, sandwiching the animal until their space was becoming precarious. Erikal saw the signal, rose up to make the strike…

… rose up to make the strike…

… rose up…

Why wasn’t he striking?

Shahar reached for one of his own javelins as the two horses came ever closer, to the point he feared they would collide; an act that would surely annoy the horses and spell the deer’s escape.

But then Erikal let out a piercing, blood-curdling scream, the likes of which Shahar had never heard a human make in his life. It rent through the air, so loud and so jagged that the clanless hunter was immediately worried that somehow, some way, Erikal had just been gravely injured.

From off in the distance, Snow stopped what she was doing and reached out for him with fear; even she had heard the scream, and she worried that something terrible had befallen them.

Fine, Shahar replied, albeit with some note of bemusement; this Erikal really liked to scream.

The deer staggered with a wheeze as the spear entered its side, spilling as much of its speed as it did blood. Akaidras knew this game well, and compensated for the unexpected stall and the unexpected scream; the pair slowed to match the buck, who was quickly coming to understand his fate. The blow Erikal had dealt seemed to have landed somewhere in the stomach, which would be a fatal blow––in an hour or so. When time was precious, it was best not to wait, and certainly not to pain the thing more than it had to be; Shahar hefted a javelin and brought Akaidras to bear on the right side, where the crippling strike would be just between the shoulder and the side, right over the elbow. When the deer slowed enough, Shahar buried his weapon there, where the tip could pierce the vital cluster of nerves and arteries that sat over the heart. It also was in the perfect position to stall the animal’s foreleg, and the deer tumbled as one foot was removed from the cadence of his run.

Akaidras overshot the fallen animal, and Shahar leaned in to bring him in a shallow loop back to their quarry.

Good hunt, he signaled to Erikal, who seemed to be getting something out of his eyes. Gratitude, exhilaration, pride, went as planned.
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Postby Erikal on January 6th, 2016, 3:23 pm


Erikal smiled to Shahar's signing of gratitude and pride. He dismounted by the fallen prince and offered the sign of victory. Despite his happiness and relief that the hunt was a success, the young Drykas was still reeling from what had happened earlier. What was going on with him? It was a very strange thing that he could not remember ever happening before. It was almost as if he communed with the animal just before dealing it the fatal blow. Was that even possible? Perhaps he had a soft place in his heart and his dreams of being a great hunter and warrior were wayward of his true purpose?

He shut his eyes tight and shook his wild mane. No, he could not believe that! There was something else going on. He just had to figure out what that something was before it put his next hunt in jeopardy, or maybe even his life.

Shahar looped Akaidras back to he and the fallen buck. Erikal lowered his gaze to the animal that now looked skyward, eyes unseeing. Dust and blood covered it. Erikal placed a hand on its head and voiced a prayer to Caiyha to give thanks for her gracious bounty. He pulled his spear loose with a heavy grunt.

"You did well brother," he said, without looking to him. "I could not have done it without you." Korvas blew out his nose nearby, gaining his attention. Erikal managed to slip out of the melancholy funk he had found himself at the sight of Korvas inspecting Akaidras. "Haha. I believe Kor wishes to also make a new friend today," said the Drykas with a grin to Shahar.

"We should skin the great buck and divide the meat. The scent may draw predators," he said, his eyes lifted to the horizon, spotting only a tiny dark mass far away to indicate the deer herd had ever been that way. Erikal moved to stand by Shahar and Akaidras, slipping his hand in a yvas pack to extricate his knife. "How did your animal friends fair?" he inquired, peering back over his shoulder from where they had come.



Story NoteI had a lot of fun with this one! Thanks a lot for sharing the story with Erikal. You can tie things up with your last post and we'll get it in for grading. I think it was excellent timing also since it gave us a good idea of how future hunts could go and the other thread they are currently in. Looking forward to it!

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Postby Colt on January 6th, 2016, 4:24 pm

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Erikal was the first to halt by the buck’s side, sliding neatly out of his yvas and coming to rest on the ground. Shahar pulled up and did the same, slipping onto his own two feet to closer examine the creature.

It was almost dead, managing brief and weak twitches as blood seeped steadily from the oHpenings in its sides. Less than a minute, and it would be done, but time was precious out here. Kneeling, Shahar took out his hunting knife and quickly slit the deer’s throat, sending a violent final tremor through its body before it died.

Looking up, the clanless hunter came to see that Erikal appeared… uneasy. How or why, Shahar could not tell, but the blonde’s eyes were closed, until he shook his head and opened them––at which point the uneasiness was wiped away entirely.

Such a strange fellow, this Erikal was.

The Diamond warrior removed his spear, speaking words of gratitude and pride. Shahar acknowledged the various sentiments, but didn’t go in-depth; he now had a great big buck to deal with, and that buck needed to go to both of them.

Erikal chuckled suddenly and drew Shahar’s attention to their respective striders. Their two stallions were eyeing each other, gauging mood and potential interaction; there wasn’t any malice, though, and their natural caution was almost comedic when put into the concept of friendship. Shahar tilted his head and let out a low breath of amusement before the two hunters returned to the task at hand.

Skin, yes, Shahar agreed. But not here. Return, home, safe, skin there. He paused, considering the division of effort. I can skin. Maybe together, if you can skin. Quicker together, however not necessary. If Erikal could skin, then that was good. If not, that was alright. Once they got back to Endrykas, they could have the luxury of time; it had been a good hunt, and quite satisfactory for a single day’s work.

Shahar took the buck by the legs and hoisted it off of the ground, grunting under the weight. Akaidras was closer, so he would let him carry the animal back to the city. Korvas could carry Snow and Tuka’s kill when they retrieved it.

As if reading Shahar’s mind, Erikal asked after the well-being of his animal companions. Draping the buck over Akaidras’ back, the clanless hunter nodded with good. Them success, second prey, more meat; he could distantly feel Snow’s excitement as she continued battling her doe. If the animal wasn’t dead yet, it almost certainly would be by the time they got there.

It didn’t occur to Shahar that his answer could be taken as oddly specific---a little too specific, even, since the animals were both out of sight and out of earshot and therefore left no external means for Shahar to have come by the information that they were well and had downed a deer of their own. It didn’t occur to him, and he didn’t linger on it; killing the buck was only half the work.

Their journey back home took them past the scene of Snow and Tuka, alongside their mangled prey. The hide was too damaged to be of any real interest to even the cheapest tanner, but the hide wasn’t what the hunt had been for. It was more meat to be preserved, enough to make his family’s future all the more secure when winter was upon them.

He was grateful to Erikal for the help, as Erikal seemed to be to him; they had worked well together, and despite the excessive screaming, Shahar was coming to like the man.

He hoped they would cross paths in the future.

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The Meat Of The Issue (Erikal)

Postby Prophet on January 30th, 2016, 7:19 pm

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Wonderful thread, gentlemen. Enjoy the rewards and let me know if you need anything or have questions. I will divvy the spoils evenly. If the two of you decide it should be adjusted, send me a PM and I'll fix it for you. Well done!


 
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  • Animal Husbandry: +3
  • Tactics: +2
  • Planning: +3
  • Socialization: +4
  • Logic: +1
  • Leadership: +2
  • Riding – Horse: +4
  • Hunting: +2
  • Weapon – Javelin: +1
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  • Shahar: A patient tactician
  • Erikal: A happy young man
  • Tactics: Making the most of available resources
  • Erikal Sunspear: A chipper diamond
  • Hunting: Pairs offer many advantages
  • Erikal: A loud Drykas
  • Shahar: Not one to let an animal suffer
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  • 140# Deer meat
  • Buck pelt - suitable for tanning
  • Mangled doe pelt - suitable for glue


 
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  • Socialization: +5
  • Observation: +5
  • Riding – Horse: +5
  • Hunting: +2
  • Weapon – Spear: +1
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  • Erikal: A natural spearman
  • Shahar: Formidable man; formidable animals
  • Erikal: A willing pupil
  • Korvas: One big strider
  • Hunting: Easier with animal companions
  • Hunting: The mental weight of killing
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