Timmslin

[Timmslin]

Timmslin Appearance Race: Human Gender: male Age: 18 Birthday: Day 28,Season of spring, 497 AV Starting City: Lhavit Birthplace: Lhavit Appearance: brown hair,five o´clock shadow,green eyes Character History The name is Timmslin i am nothing more then a nobody. Abandoned at birth i know not where i am from fore i have no family. but i grew up on the streets and stole to live. and along the way i found a mother dog giving birth to pups and i was the only one who could help, and after a whole hour of labor the pups were born. but only one survived so i promised to take care of them both, but after the mom died... only me and spike were left. now we seek a way out of poverty. Language Fluent Language: common Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Acrobatics # 16 sp #16 Novice Brawling # 16 sp #16 Novice Escape Artist # 16 sp #16 Novice Stealth # 15 rp, # 2 sp #17 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of Lhavit Streetplan Lore of Lhavit Factions Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Shirt -Pants -Simple Undergarments -Cloak -Boots, High 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack -1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap) -Food for a week -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel Heirloom: dog,companion Housing Location: Lhavit House: 1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Kina 100 Kina Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Neologism]

Hey Tim! I just have a few things I noticed wrong with your CS. If you would please fix these and get back to me, I will take off this intervention.

qqqq1. Please write your character concept.
qqqq2. Please write in third person, as per the rules of the game.
qqqq3. You cannot have less than 5 SP or RB per skill and no more than 15 RB (for humans) or 30 SP per skill. There cannot be more than 30 points per skill total.
qqqq4. You cannot live in poverty in Lhavit, and must find a job or a source of income to live off of.