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A lawless town of anarchists, built on the ruins of an ancient mining city. [Lore]

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New Year, Old Crazy

Postby Konrad Venger on March 28th, 2016, 4:46 am

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Nice job! Your work has pleased The Sloth!

Fiachra

XP:
Observation - 4
Larceny - 1
Subterfuge - 1
Endurance - 1
Brawling - 2

Lore:
Sunberth Folk Like a Good Revel, Too!
The Joys of Sunberth Street Theater
Aquiras: God of... Travels?
Priskil: Our Lady of Hope
Sagallius: Usurper, Manipulator, Puppeteer
Location: The Drunken Fish
Skullcrows are Bad Omens
Good Tales Aren't for Sunberth
Spouting Navi to Keep People Back
Brawling: Still Gotta Know what You're Doing
When in Doubt, CHANGE!

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First off, careful with all the "I" and "I mean". Third-person past is how the site is meant to be read, and written, and that's kind of a solid rule...

... but aside from that, gah, I loved this! Such a departure from many threads, really delving into Sunberth street life and all the grimy wonders therein! But you also didn't shy away from how horrific it can be, how the whole city has an underlying sense of hopelessness and low-level evil hanging over it. No place for good stories, indeed.

Oh, and you lampshading all the usual sidekick tropes made me grin, so thanks for that. :D

In fact, you had a very wry and grounded tone here that I truly enjoyed. The frantic brawl at the end, not to mention you "winning" it by CHANGING SPECIES (gotta admit, it's pretty rare, even in Sunberth) was brilliant.

Oh, and please make sure you go back and edit your post in the Request Thread to reflect the fact this one is now done and dusted. PM me with any questions and later 'tater!

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