Open New Year, Old Crazy

[Konrad Venger]

Nice job! Your work has pleased The Sloth! Fiachra XP: Observation - 4 Larceny - 1 Subterfuge - 1 Endurance - 1 Brawling - 2 Lore: Sunberth Folk Like a Good Revel, Too! The Joys of Sunberth Street Theater Aquiras: God of... Travels? Priskil: Our Lady of Hope Sagallius: Usurper, Manipulator, Puppeteer Location: The Drunken Fish Skullcrows are Bad Omens Good Tales Aren't for Sunberth Spouting Navi to Keep People Back Brawling: Still Gotta Know what You're Doing When in Doubt, CHANGE! Click Me! : First off, careful with all the "I" and "I mean". Third-person past is how the site is meant to be read, and written, and that's kind of a solid rule... ... but aside from that, gah, I loved this! Such a departure from many threads, really delving into Sunberth street life and all the grimy wonders therein! But you also didn't shy away from how horrific it can be, how the whole city has an underlying sense of hopelessness and low-level evil hanging over it. No place for good stories, indeed. Oh, and you lampshading all the usual sidekick tropes made me grin, so thanks for that. In fact, you had a very wry and grounded tone here that I truly enjoyed. The frantic brawl at the end, not to mention you "winning" it by CHANGING SPECIES (gotta admit, it's pretty rare, even in Sunberth) was brilliant. Oh, and please make sure you go back and edit your post in the Request Thread to reflect the fact this one is now done and dusted. PM me with any questions and later 'tater!