GRADE AWARDS!
The black-haired woman smiled as she lazily regarded the brightly coloured inn that lay resplendent in front of her. The woman's long dark hair spun gently in the breeze, and minute silver flies blinked and winked as they hovered in front of her face for a fragment of time. The next tick she was masked as the silver specks landed on her face, the dark strands of her hair framing her face as she watched, hidden, through the eye-holes of the elegant mask. She had succeeded in remaining hidden, and had followed the two mysterious strangers as they wound their way through Alvadas. It was important, she found, to always investigate what looked ordinary. The tall man and the fragile girl had seemed to be almost like shy, newly-blossomed lovers, but there was something about the man's interactions with the ginger woman that had piqued her interest.
A stranger brushed past her and she broke from her reverie as a wolfish smile gradually graced her delicately made-up lips. Yes, this would be an interesting kind of season. A full chime later and there would be no presence at all of the black-haired woman on the street below.
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Well then! This was an interesting thread. It warms my heart to see Infilia so panicked, and Alex as the knightly hero come to save the day. We'll see how that pans out, yes?
Alex
Skills:
- XP
- XP
Lores:
- Lore
- Lore
Gained/Lost:
| + | - |
| Thing | Thing |
Notes:
Grades withheld due to retirement.
Infilia
Skills:
- Stealth: +1
- Observation: +2
- Cosmetology: +1
- Socialisation: +3
- Climbing: +1
Lores:
- Alvadas Location: The Stark Naked and Starstruck
- Stark Naked and Starstruck: Admission Prices
- Ethaefal: Beautiful and Horned
- Priskil: Goddess of Hope
- Alex: Carries a Necklace That Reminds Him
- Queen Morwen: Abandoned Her People
- Yahal: God of..?
- Alex: A Trustworthy Man With a Promise to Help
- Dream of a Mysterious Woman
Gained/Lost:
| + | - |
| 1 medium white linen shirt | - |
| 1 medium pair of black linen trousers | - |
Notes:
Another interesting thread. Infilia's struggle with her speech is still well-done, and I like how you portray her as quite fragile. It fits well with the season she's having, yes? One thing I would like to request though is that you remember to stick to 3rd person past tense. At times you vary a little and it makes reading it feel a little disjointed. Other than that, well done.
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