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Raven Seer

Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 1:20 am

Raven Seer

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"There are no secrets that times does not reveal. – Jean Racine"



The Vitals


Alternative Names: Shadow
Titles: N/A
Race: Kelvic - Common Raven
Gender: Female
Bonded?: Unbonded
Age: Two but appears to be around twenty years of age
DoB: Day 11, Winter, 514 AV
Height: 5'8
Hair Color: Raven Black
Hair Length: Long
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: Pale

Raven Length: 60cms
Wingspan: 115cms

Birthplace: Avanthal, Taldera Region
Location: Zeltiva, Sylira Region
Profession: Hunter
Housing: Blackwater Pavillion

Likes: Secrets, Flying, Fresh Meat, Silence, Shadows
Dislikes: Probing Individuals, Loud Mouths
Fears: N/A
Worships: Akajia
Aspirations: To unearth as many secrets as possible.

Fluent: Common & Bird
Basic: Vani
Poor: N/A

Theme: This Is The Hunt - Ruelle
Model: Emeraude Toubia
Secret :

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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 1:36 am

Character Concept

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"It is often in the darkest skies that we see the brightest stars..." - Unknown


The Exterior


Human Form:
Raven's human form is pale, this is mostly because she prefers to stalk her prey through the shadows regardless if it is day or night. Black locks tumble freely down her back and she never truly likes to cut it whenever the need is at hand. These black locks frame a pale slightly angular face which sets off the brown eyes. Such features reflect the bird within, but it isn't very noticeable unless someone observes quite closely and pays attention to her mannerism. Common clothes cover her form but all in the colour black, this is so then it is easier for the woman to blend into the shadows whenever the need arises. Other than that, there are no defining marks that mark her pale flesh, mostly because she hasn't yet felt drawn to a symbol that reflects her from within.


Raven Form:
Her animal form isn't considered to be a rather large build, in fact, she tends to think that for a raven, she is quite average in length and width. The kelvic is 60cms in length and when she stretches out her wings her wing span is 115cms. Brown beady eyes follow the movements of others, while sleek black feathers cover her body, which makes moving around in the dark fairly easy for the woman.


Injuries, Scars & Marks :
Current Injuries
N/A

Marks
N/A

Scars
N/A

Tattoos
N/A


The Interior

Sometimes, it's difficult to understand just as to what is going on within the woman's mind as she tries to keep her features rather neutral so not to give away her true intentions. Even she knows that the slightest cue in body language can give her away, but she has yet to learn the true knowledge of never giving away her intentions. Often she doesn't mind being alone, it is how she prefers to hunt, simply because there is no one else to give away her position to the prey. Other times though, she definitely doesn't mind being surrounded by others and can be seen to socialise amongst the crowd. Socialising, she has realised, is a very good tool, it especially helps to know whether someone is hiding something. Hiding a secret that she herself wants to know.

The woman is forever seeking, her curious mind is always questioning motives and wanting to know the secrets of the person in front of her. The drive to know such secrets has always been there and one could say that that it is this drive that aims for her to also chasing the hunt of a kill. Especially, the kill that she may one day complete.

Merits
Observant: One could say that she is observant. If anything, she tends to think of herself as the watcher. The kelvic is always looking for cues that might tell her that someone is hiding something that they do not want someone else to know, so she observes.

Patient: Raven is incredibly patient, for it is the only way to hunt for anything. Observation is one thing, but the kelvic's patience ties in with that. For someone needs to be patient in order to unearth the secrets of someone who would rather keep them hidden.

Confident: The kelvic is rather confident within her own skills, simply because she knows that if she exercises them more often, she would only grow more competent in her tasks. Someone else might see this as a flaw, but she sees it as merit. This is only because she believes that if someone isn't confident within their abilities, then they would only be second guessing themselves which isn't exactly the best thing to have happen.


Flaws
Distrustful: People may often see her as distrustful, which is the case, but while she may distrusts, she knows that she has to also appear that she trusts them. Deception is key in most things and she would rather appear trusting when really she distrusts them, only to learn to trust someone. It would give her time to work out their true motives, rather than be stabbed in the back from mis-placed trust.

Acting Alone: Raven would be considered as someone who isn't a team member. This is mostly due to the fact that she considers other people to be variables that she doesn't want to include. In her mind, too many variables could potentially screw up her hunt for a beast or a secret. For not everyone likes to slink around in the shadows like she does and not everyone has the same tactics like she does. Noisy variables are a problem in her books and not all variables move as slowly and cautiously like she does.

Flaw:


Aspirations
To gain as many secrets to arm her arsenal: While this isn't her ultimate goal, it is still a goal that she aims for every day. She seeks out secrets to arm herself with should they ever come in hand whenever she needs to get out of a tight spot.

To become the ultimate assassin: While this goal is probably her ultimate goal, she realises that it will take some time to reach this goal. It just doesn't mean that she cannot enjoy the journey to this ultimate goal.


Views


Life: The view that Raven takes is that life is precious, that it is to be experienced. To be felt like the wind underneath her wings. The kelvic views her own life as precious, but if she had to take someone else's life, she wouldn't grieve for they would be reincarnated. The person should have taken more care of their life if they wanted to keep it.

Death: Death is a fact of life, this is something that she has come to accept. If she grieved for every animal that she had killed in the past, then she would never be able to hunt because the guilt would eat at her.

Family: Raven has never had any brothers or sisters, at least none that she has ever known. The only family that she has ever had, has been her mother and father. Two people that she has loved and respected, for they have always taught her to follow where ever she thinks her path lies; to grow her passion of hunting and secrets. Family is one of the important things that she holds in high regard.

Religion: The kelvic isn't really religious, but she does pray to Akajia every now and then. Not to mention that she also like to speaks to the shadows, it's like a feeling that every time that she is able to successful move amongst the shadows, it is all thanks to Akajia.

Magic: Magic isn't something that she fully understands, but is often seeking the secrets to such thing. It is still a secret that she is constantly seeking out.

Law: Raven feels that the law is there to be a guide only, to make the sheep obey them even when it might not be for their own good. While she is visible by guard and those that uphold the law, she makes sure that she is seen to be abiding. However, whenever she is alone or no one can see her, she takes that opportunity to do whatever she wants to do.

Orientation: The woman never leans to evil or good. Instead, she leans towards whatever she find is best for herself. Evil and good is always in the eye of the beholder, a human thing to have been made up.
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 2:01 am

Character History

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"The greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places..." - Ronald Dahl


Memories of The Past


 
Beginnings
Raven didn't have a traumatic experience, nor did she have any bad experiences when she grew up. In fact, she had the ideal childhood when she grew up in Avanthal. The kelvic had loving parents that were both bonded to a human within Avanthal. It was the reason why both parents had settled down as companions to their humans.

As Raven grew up from chick to juvenile, her parents began to nurture her as best as they could but she had inherited her mother's adventurous spirit and looked to beyond the walls of Avanthal. So, her father taught her the ways to hunt with bow and arrow, as he was well aware that she wouldn't be able to hunt in raven form and didn't wish to see her scavenge. Upon her first birthday, he gave her a pair of curved silver daggers that she kept with her at all times. They were especially handy whenever she had to deal a final blow to one of her kills.

It had one of these hunting trips when her love and curiousity for secrets sparked. One of her arrow flew off course and she found herself trudging off to go find it. It was better to spend time finding an arrow rather than having to buy some more. It was a small lesson that her father had taught her when she had first started. Suddenly, she heard male voices and a woman's scream. A scream which was suddenly muffled and the kelvic found that she couldn't help herself.

Shirking her clothes she found herself shrouded by soft white light before she took flight on wings of midnight black. The bird flew towards the sound of men's voices and talons reached out to perch themselves upon a branch of a tree. Brown eyes watched as a pair of men assaulted a woman and the bird ruffled her feathers. "No one is going to know about this, you 'ear? Otherwise, I'll pay a visit to your daughter and kill your son," came the voice from below and the woman whimpered before giving a slow nod.

The bird wondered if the woman was widowed, and noted the black clothing of the woman. No rings graced her fingers that she could see, but regardless of that fact, Raven was sure that due to the man's threat, the woman would take this secret to her grave. A secret that she herself now possessed and could probably use against either the woman or the men. It felt... Inspiring. What other secrets were people hiding that no one else wanted them to know?

It was eventually her the adventurous spirit that she had inherited from her mother that saw her fly the coop. To seek new wonders and secrets that other wished to keep hidden.


[tab=N/A,#808080,#000000]To be completed in flashbacks.[/tab]
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 2:23 am

Character Relations

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"Very few of us are what we seem..." - Agatha Christie


Relationships


 
Segal Seer
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Name: Segal Seer
Relationship: Father
Race: Kelvic - Snow Leopard
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Status: Alive

The Relationship: Segal is a pride man, one that viewed every life as precious and nurtured it. It was only by chance when he had passed the aviary that he met Miska. Raven and her father have always been close. When she was a young chick, he had tried to teach her the ways of animal husbandry, but he soon quickly realised that it did not hold her attention. What did hold her attention were the secrets that the people of Avanthal held. He noticed how she loved to hunt them down and so drew her attention to hunting game instead. She learned on a borrowed bow and so the kelvic learned to hunt. However, he realised that she held an adventurous spirit much like her mother and so on her first birthday, he gave her a pair of curved silver daggers.



 
Miska Seer
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Name:
Miska Seer
Relationship: Mother
Race: Kelvic - Snowy Owl
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Status: Alive

About: Miska loves the adventures that she sought upon the winds of Avanthal. Rarely did she venture out of the Taldera Region. Upon flying into Avanthal's Aviary she meet Segal and the two fell in love. Miska always encouraged Raven's spirit and encouraged her to go beyond lands that even she had not flown.
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 3:13 am

Character Skills

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"Curiousity is lying in wait for every secret..." - Unknown


Skills


 
Key
SP = Starting Package
RB = Racial Bonus
SX = Seasonal Experience
XP = Earned Experience

Physical
Unarmed Combat
Running
Endurance
BodyBuilding
Stealth
Weapon Skills: Punch Dagger

Mental
Observation
Investigation
Tactics
Detection
Interrogation
Deduction
Intelligence
Meditation
Logic
Planning

Social
Socialisation
Intimidation
Rhetoric
Negotiation
Seduction

Farce
Disguise
Storytelling
Escape Artist

Trade
Hunting
Wilderness Survival
Foraging
Tracking
Medicine
Scavenging
Reading
Larceny

Arcane
N/A


 
Physical
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency
Unarmed Combat 5[SP] 0 5/100 Novice
Weapon Skills: Longbow 10[SP] 0 10/100 Novice


 
Mental
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency
Observation N/A 0 0/100 Novice


 
Social
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency
Socialisation N/A 0 0/100 Competent
Intimidation 5[SP] 0 5/100 Novice


 
Farce
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency
- - - 0/100 Novice


 
Trade
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency
Hunting 20[SP], 10[RB] 0 30/100 Competent
Tracking 10[SP] 0 10/100 Novice


 
Arcane
Skill SP, RB, SX XP Total Proficiency


Skill earnings recorded in plotnotes.
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 3:30 am

Understanding

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"Secrets are the currency of intimacy..." - Frank Warren


Lore


CategoryPhysicalMentalSocialFarceArcanePhysicalTrade
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Physical
N/A


 
Mental
N/A


 
Social
N/A[/url]


 
Farce
N/A


 
Arcane
N/A


 
Physical
N/A


 
Trade
Hunting via Tracks


CategoryPersonalCloseFriends & EnemiesPeoplePlacesRacesFloralFauna
Count00000000


 
Personal
N/A


 
Close
N/A


 
Friends and Enemies
N/A


 
People
N/A


 
Places
N/A


 
Races
N/A


 
Floral
N/A


 
Fauna
N/A


CategoryCitiesPhilosophyDivineOtherTotal
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Cities
N/A


 
Philosophy
N/A


 
Divine
N/A


 
Other
Secrets Hide in Shadows
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 3:37 am

Possessions

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"I'm pretty good at keeping secrets. I like knowing things that no one else knows..." - Unknown


The Inventory


Equipment

 
Weapons
ItemQuantityConditionTimestampYearAcquisition
Longbow 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Longbow Arrows 100 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own


 
Armor
ItemQuantityConditionTimestampYearAcquisition
N/A N/A N/A N/A N/A N/A


Personal Belongings

 
Clothes
ItemQuantityConditionTimestampYearAcquisition
Black Cloak, Cotton 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Black Shirt, Cotton 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Black Pants, Cotton 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Common Black Boots 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Undergarments 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own


 
Items
ItemQuantityConditionTimestampYearAcquisition
Comb 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Eating Knife 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Flint & Steel 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own
Waterskin 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own


 
Misc
ItemQuantityConditionTimestampYearAcquisition
Quiver 1 Great Winter, 1 516 AV Own


 
Heirloom
Article: Assassin's Daggers - Steel
Value: 24GMs
History: Her father had saved up enough coins from his work within the aviary and bought a pair of steel daggers for her first birthday. This was only because he saw her interest in hunting rather than animal husbandry.
Description: Curved silver daggers and has engravings marked into the blade itself.
Extra: N/A

 
Housing
1 basic 20x20 single room cottage (400 sq feet) with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. - Located in the Old Quarter of Zeltiva
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 3:47 am

Investments

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"All secrets are deep. All secrets are dark. That's in the nature of secrets..."
- Cory Doctorovv


The Ledger


Current Money: 0 GM

Seasonal Income: Hunter:
 
Winter 516 AV
+/-CostTotalReasonTimestamp
N/A+100 GM100 GMStartingWinter 1
100 GM-75 GM25 GMLongbowWinter 1
25 GM-5 GM20 GMLongbow Arrows x5Winter 1
20 GM-20 GM0 GMQuiverWinter 1
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Postby Raven Seer on February 14th, 2017, 5:24 am

Memories

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"All women are natural born espionage agents..." - Eddie Cantor


The Memory Compendium


 
Winter, 516 AV
2nd Winter, 516 AV | Three Against One | Fallon | Incomplete


 
Flashbacks
Date | Thread Name & Link | Participants | Status
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Postby Astator on March 9th, 2017, 3:09 am

Welcome to Mizahar! THere are some issues with your character sheet/character. Please address:

1. There is no Blackwater Pavillion in Zeltiva. Only Housing is the World's End Grotto.
2. How did Raven learn Vani?
3. Your lores are not specific enough, they are quite vague. A lore is a piece of information that is specific. What about Hunting with Tracks? What kind of Secrets Hide in Shadows?
4. WITHOUT any money at the start of Spring your character is dead. Please reach out to the current Storyteller concerning this. It appears you have been active during the Winter season, but there is only one thread, a quick browsing of it, it does not appear to be a job thread? Also you have no job approved. No Job == no Money == Dead.

Once done please PM me.

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