Solo [The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Clyde meets with his unit for a bit of training.

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

[The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Postby Clyde Sullins on January 27th, 2018, 3:59 pm

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15 Winter 517


Since being promoted to Commander, Clyde hadn't spent much time in Ravok. Of late though he had been, so it made sense to better get to know the Ebonstryfe Unit under his command.

It also gave him a chance to better work on directing and leading his "people", and to see what they could do. If he wanted to some day lead more than a small unit such as this he'd need to work on his skills at leading people beyond the small ability he currently had.

At first glance they were normal enough, three men and two woman. One of the men was quite young, one closer to Clyde's age, and one much older. One of the woman looked a bit older, while the other somewhat smaller one looked comparable to his own. More by habit than anything else Clyde felt out through Cha with his aura sight, inspecting each of the 5 and the aural impressions laid bare before his sight.

While his main focus washed over the five in turn with magic, a bit on each with a greater focus sliding from one to the next in turn, Clyde took a deep calming breath and pushed off a smaller bit of his mind/focus into speaking with them. It was more of a mental/meditative tactic than an actual thing, but it seemed to work well enough for him. This smaller Clyde was in his mental space a younger version of himself, smaller and lesser akin to himself back in Syliras as a youth.

“So, as you all know, I am Clyde Sullins your commander. Mage of various skills. Lets get through the introductions, and we can get to the weaponless combat training for today. Name, rank, and focus.”

As each spoke Clyde turned his aural focus mainly onto them, examining their shifts and swirls of color as they spoke.

"Adam, Soldier, I prefer fighting with sword and shield." This was one of the youngest of the group, barely old enough perhaps to be a member. He spoke with a sincerity and conviction Clyde didn't quite display, as if every action he made as a solider was bringing glory to Rhysol and therefore of import.

"Bea, Soldier, I like to fight from a distance. Bows, throwing weapons, the like..." The next person, a woman, was older than Clyde but not by any means old. She also seemed a bit more well worn for this time. No less convicted than the first, but not so bright eyed and eager to earn glory at least.

The third person, another man though this one comparatively aged to Clyde, glanced a bit nervously at said commander before speaking. "Ch... Chris. Soldier. I'm a... Well mage as well, though not as compared to you sir."

Looking at the man, Clyde couldn't tell if his response was an affectation, or if he truly was intimidated by Clyde. Looking more closely at his aura, in time Clyde would find the tell-tale traces of djed. His djed traces were mainly focused around his hands and throat/mouth, common enough places for various magics though especially Reimancy. That however wasn't immediately apparent and still only told so much, nothing of his true power or level of skill really. Clyde waved to go on and the next man spoke in turn.

"Dan. Soldier. I know the wilds." The, by appearances, oldest member of the group. Dan did seem a bit rough. He was well enough fed and cleaned, but he had a atmosphere about him that reminded Clyde of the woods and of someone who looked more fitting stepping out from between two trees than a doorway.

Lastly was the other woman, in truth almost as old as Dan but not by appearances. "Eliza, soldier. Close combat."

Of the various people this one seemed to peak Clyde's interest the most. A bit mysterious, and with the hint of underlying layers. Once he'd had the chance to examine her aura he'd find djed traces as well, though snaking about most if not all of her limbs. Across her torso, arms, legs, her feet, fingers, basically all of her. This was of course much harder to figure out, as various magics involved similar locations and uses of magic across the body. The Flux, Morphing, Projection.

Everyone done with their introductions, Clyde nodded and turned to Eliza. A part of being a good leader, Clyde had come to understand, was using their underlings strengths appropriately. Delegating so to speak. He could do by not doing.

“Right, well Eliza, since your the resident expert on close combat, why don't you take the lead on instruction. Pair us off as best you can, and set us to training.”

WC: 783
Clydes Stuff

I am actually in RL a super intelligent hamster from Rhode Island, with a 7 year plan to take over the world.

Update 6/2/18- 1:10AM EST: His 7 year plan a success, and several weeks ahead of schedule, Clyde leaves to oversee the world he has taken over.

No new threads after end of Spring 518-Will still be checking for PM's occasionally, but focusing on a new character.

Graders note: :
Please be aware Clyde is a master Magecrafter. He therefore should not be gaining full xp(or possibly shouldn't gain any at all) for simple tasks related to this magic, such as low level MC items, particularly for repetitions of creations he has done before. Feel free to contact me if unsure of a instance of his magic use compared to his skill level.
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[The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Postby Clyde Sullins on January 28th, 2018, 11:43 pm

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Eliza simply nodded, walking about and eying each of the group in turn before pointing out pairs. Adam with Eliza. Bea with Dan. Clyde with Chris, the two mages. Clyde of course pondered on her reasoning. Had she chosen at random, tried to match up comparable skills? For a moment he considered making her explain her choice, before deciding being a good leader meant to a degree at least trusting your people... And this wasn't really worth arguing over.

Clyde, quite reluctantly, set aside Cha as the training was meant to be unarmed. By then he'd gotten a good "feel" for each of the 5's auras, and without Cha in his hand he didn't feel comfortable continuing further. Just before setting her down against a wall Clyde pulled back in the tendrils of aura sight, settling his aura just before the familiar wood of her flesh left his palm.

He felt naked, but knew showing it would also not be good for his underlings to see. Instead he took in a deep breath and imagined the stress floating outward on the exhale, and presented a calmed flat demeanor. By his connection a small part of his mind was aware of Cha, where she was in relation to him, which kept him from racing back to pick her up.

Eliza circled once or twice before returning to her partner, were she gave the first set of instructions.

"Take turns giving a slow punch, aim at your opponents gut. The defender tries to redirect the blow away so it misses entirely. This isn't about punching, its about knowing how to redirect the punch. So don't worry about hitting something important when you aim right now, that'll be for later."

Nodding at Adam, Eliza took a stance to make it clear she wanted him to go first so the others could see. The youth came at her slowly, body tensed, and then popped forward with a light jab. Eliza moved her hand and arm in one smooth motion, the rest of her remaining still. Faster than Clyde could understand she pushed the thrown limb out of the way so that is whizzed by without even getting close.

"Again, slower." This time Eliza made her motion more slowly as well so all could see, a sideways push with the palm of her hand aimed at Adam's wrist. She effortlessly steered the slow blow out of the way, returning her arm back to the ready position.

Nodding to everyone, Eliza simply finished by stating "And now you."

The practical portion over apparently, the pairs broke up with free space around them to begin the training.

Clyde and Chris squared off, focused on each other. Clyde went first, a slow push and jab of his arm forward aimed at Chris' gut. Chris in turn slapped up a palm at his wrist, more swatting at it than redirecting it. It stung a bit, but didn't force it in a new direction, and the slow blow landed softly on his stomach.

When it was Clyde's turn next to give a push Chris reared back and threw his arm like he was trying to toss a rope over a log. Clyde did his best to replicate Eliza's move, opening a palm and thrusting at the wrist, but overcompensated and didn't release and nearly fell over in doing so.

"Terrible." Clyde and Chris both jerked their heads to see Eliza standing right by them. The other three had paired off as a trio, taking it in turns around the circle to do as they'd been instructed. All of them clearly had some level of skill, and weren't having any trouble with it.

"Just terrible... I assumed you two knew the basics at least... Looks like we'll need to start you off with the basics, like how to throw a proper punch." Chris' face reddened at the comment, and Clyde's likely would have as well if he'd not been calmed and centered at the moment.

WC: 664
Clydes Stuff

I am actually in RL a super intelligent hamster from Rhode Island, with a 7 year plan to take over the world.

Update 6/2/18- 1:10AM EST: His 7 year plan a success, and several weeks ahead of schedule, Clyde leaves to oversee the world he has taken over.

No new threads after end of Spring 518-Will still be checking for PM's occasionally, but focusing on a new character.

Graders note: :
Please be aware Clyde is a master Magecrafter. He therefore should not be gaining full xp(or possibly shouldn't gain any at all) for simple tasks related to this magic, such as low level MC items, particularly for repetitions of creations he has done before. Feel free to contact me if unsure of a instance of his magic use compared to his skill level.
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[The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Postby Clyde Sullins on February 24th, 2018, 2:27 pm

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Looking from one mage and then the other, Eliza shook her head before proceeding.

"Lesson one of punching, don't punch with your arm. Your arm is relatively small in comparison to the rest of you. Throwing it at someone by itself, that'll do relatively little. You punch with your entire body, your entire bodies power, your arm and hand are just the head of the attacking weapon."

Eliza paused, taking on a stance with her knees a bit bent and her body turned slightly away, before twisting at the hips and pushing forward with one leg without either foot leaving the ground. As she did her right arm came forward in a punch powered by the twisting.

"Punch from the legs, using your entire body. Power the punch by that motion of the legs and body and torso, and you are swinging your entire body behind the head of your punch not just tossing a limb. That, is a punch. Oh and don't lock your elbow, twist your arm if you have to but don't lock your elbow straight."

Eliza paused again as she spoke, showing what she meant by locking ones elbow. She bent her arm at 90 degrees and then flattened it, showing the limb fully extended. Then she did the same but twisting the limb so that when she was done her elbow wasn't fully extended.

"Now, you two try."

Clyde and Chris turned to each other, squaring off as best they could. Clyde went first, doing his best to mimic the actions he'd seen Eliza do. He rooted his feet at an off angle, then turned his body at the waist and torso while pushing into a punch. His form perhaps wasn't as good as Eliza's, but still it was better than his earlier attempts. Chris did the same, and likewise did better than the previous attempt. They both did so slowly, focusing more on getting their form right than actually delivering a strong punch. Eliza simply nodded after they were done and moved back to the others.

Letting out a sigh Clyde turned back to Chris, returning to their first lesson. This time he also focused on the action of his punch and not just on avoiding the blow when it was his turn. He threw another punch at Chris, twist and turn of the hips, and Chris this time managed to avoid it with a thrust. As he did Clyde felt a small ache from his elbow as his punch came to a stop and his arm fully extended. It was then he understood what Eliza had meant earlier about twisting the arm to avoid just that.

When it was his turn Clyde waited for the punch to come, swinging up and arm and pushing at the wrist as he'd seen before. He mostly managed to do it properly, pushing the half speed punch out of the way to avoid hitting him.

WC: 488
Last edited by Clyde Sullins on February 25th, 2018, 7:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Clydes Stuff

I am actually in RL a super intelligent hamster from Rhode Island, with a 7 year plan to take over the world.

Update 6/2/18- 1:10AM EST: His 7 year plan a success, and several weeks ahead of schedule, Clyde leaves to oversee the world he has taken over.

No new threads after end of Spring 518-Will still be checking for PM's occasionally, but focusing on a new character.

Graders note: :
Please be aware Clyde is a master Magecrafter. He therefore should not be gaining full xp(or possibly shouldn't gain any at all) for simple tasks related to this magic, such as low level MC items, particularly for repetitions of creations he has done before. Feel free to contact me if unsure of a instance of his magic use compared to his skill level.
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[The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Postby Clyde Sullins on February 25th, 2018, 7:27 pm

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After another ten chimes of trading blows, Clyde's arms began to tire. Punching and reacting was a new thing to him, and so each time he did so he had to focus his full attention on the actions. Twist turn body, throw punch behind body... Hand up out, push and guide blow away. Of course all was at half speed, focusing on technique and form rather than actually doing damage.

Still Clyde began to grow tired, his breath becoming uneven and a trickle of sweat on his neck.

"Alright, lets switch things up, everyone new partners." Eliza's voice cut the air, distracting Clyde and resulting in him getting a half speed punch to the chest.

The next chime was a bit of small confusion as everyone tried to switch up without ending with the same person. Clyde savored the small break, refusing to quite just yet but considering calling it a break for their first meeting and lesson. In the end he was matched with Eliza. She seemed as fresh as someone who'd just walked into the room, not someone who had broken a sweat let alone done any training. Looking about Clyde quickly noticed that only himself and Chris seemed tired.

As they began Eliza met his eyes, not bothering to look at the blow but reacting all the same as if it was displayed in flaming red outlines as it came at her. Clyde did his best to imitate her technique, but couldn't even fully grasp it let alone be able to copy it fully. His punch came at her and veered off and around her like djed at his mage's cube he'd made on Sahova.

"So, commander Sullins... You are to be in charge of our unit?" Clyde let out a huff of air and waited for a pause between blows before responding in as short of a reply as possible.

“Yes... ”

Eliza let a small smile cross her lips as she met Clyde's eyes, a humor filled grin finding humor in something Clyde didn't see.

"Yes, well your not my first commander. Just remember this. We are a unit. We work together as a whole to serve Ravok and Rhysol. But the parts matter too. Don't get us killed, and we'll probably follow you. Don't give us a reason not too, and we'll probably follow you. Your a mage, that is where your strength lies. But don't forget, we have our own strengths as well... And even a mage still needs to breath."

What happened next was, from Clyde's perspective, quite confusing. From his perspective he sent out a punch, only to feel a tingle of djed and end up several feet forward lying on his back with the air knocked out of him.

Later after asking some of the other members of his unit Clyde would be told that he'd gone to punch her, only to have Eliza dart forward and pivot underneath him. His forward motion was turned against him and he was launched off his feet into a forward flip where he then landed on his back in the spot Eliza had been standing moments before. A spot she'd somehow managed to vacate while using his own bodies power to perform an acrobatic feat he wasn't strictly speaking capable of.

WC: 548
Clydes Stuff

I am actually in RL a super intelligent hamster from Rhode Island, with a 7 year plan to take over the world.

Update 6/2/18- 1:10AM EST: His 7 year plan a success, and several weeks ahead of schedule, Clyde leaves to oversee the world he has taken over.

No new threads after end of Spring 518-Will still be checking for PM's occasionally, but focusing on a new character.

Graders note: :
Please be aware Clyde is a master Magecrafter. He therefore should not be gaining full xp(or possibly shouldn't gain any at all) for simple tasks related to this magic, such as low level MC items, particularly for repetitions of creations he has done before. Feel free to contact me if unsure of a instance of his magic use compared to his skill level.
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[The Vitrax]To Train a Unit

Postby Clyde Sullins on February 25th, 2018, 8:04 pm

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The next few Chimes Clyde focused on breathing, or trying to. Mostly this consisted of blinking and coughing, before he was finally able to pull in a ragged breath and then a few more increasingly regular ones. After three or four chimes he was finally able to get back to his feet however unsteadily. All the while Eliza stood non-nonchalantly inspecting her nails.

The rest of his unit had frozen when Clyde was flipped, unsure if the next thing to come was going to be fiery rage or an act of magic to strike Eliza from her feet. Clyde instead simply chuckled quietly as he got to his feet, smiling at Eliza. After a few moments Eliza looked up from her nails and met Clyde's gaze, a small smile on her lips as well. When nothing happened after a chime of this the other member of the unit seemed to un-tense, the moment having passed.

“Point taken. Just don't forget your point yourself. Everyone has their strength...”

"And everyone has their weaknesses..." Eliza finished for Clyde.

Clyde smiled and nodded, turning to the rest of the unit.

“Alright, that's enough for today. We'll meet back up tomorrow. Now... I give my word that I will do my best to keep you all alive, and to get our job done. I won't always tell you everything, but I'll do my best not to lie to you. In exchange, I expect you not to lie to me... To follow my orders when they are given... And to warn me if I'm about to step into a pit full of hungry bears, whether literally or metaphorically. I don't need a bunch of people too afraid to tell me a problem to my face, so much so that I go stepping into that pit unknowingly. I also give my word that if you give me a heads up or warning in good faith, even if that means me losing face, I won't turn around and throw you into the pit myself. I'd rather lose a bit of social face, than to lose something more important, like a leg or something. Alright?”

One by one Clyde met his units eyes as each nodded. Whether that was a nod of agreement or understanding of his words was unclear to Clyde, but either way he'd gotten his point across. Crossing the room Clyde picked up Cha and, done with his “motivating” speech, left to go and lie down for awhile.

WC: 413
Clydes Stuff

I am actually in RL a super intelligent hamster from Rhode Island, with a 7 year plan to take over the world.

Update 6/2/18- 1:10AM EST: His 7 year plan a success, and several weeks ahead of schedule, Clyde leaves to oversee the world he has taken over.

No new threads after end of Spring 518-Will still be checking for PM's occasionally, but focusing on a new character.

Graders note: :
Please be aware Clyde is a master Magecrafter. He therefore should not be gaining full xp(or possibly shouldn't gain any at all) for simple tasks related to this magic, such as low level MC items, particularly for repetitions of creations he has done before. Feel free to contact me if unsure of a instance of his magic use compared to his skill level.
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Posts: 2267
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Joined roleplay: June 18th, 2011, 1:14 am
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Medals: 5
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