[Issues found by Nemesis] Syndre

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Syndre

Postby Syndre on January 31st, 2011, 7:23 pm

Mojo :

Info :
Name: Syndre
Race: Human
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 155 lbs
Age: 66th of Winter, 490 A.V. (24)
Gender: Male
Region: Sylira
City: Ravok

Appearance :

Short dark locks, black as his selfish heart, reach down
far enough to gently caress the center of his defined
cheeks. In contrast to the ebon shaded mess atop of his
head, two tenacious braids slither in a spiraling descent
toward the slight swell of his rounded chest. Together
the tightly woven braids create a thin frame around his
handsome countenance, the unique style passed down
traditionally by the men of his family. Peering beneath
the slivered separation of his inky strands, a pair of
almond shaped voids burn bright with an effervescent
blue. That alluring cobalt stare could melt the defenses
of many a passing woman, just as easily as it could
intimidate the soul of a strong willed man. A malicious
mixture of ill intentions and misguided mischief was
ever present in that azure gaze, leaving those that
dared to search its wicked depth to wonder about their
immediate safety. Taller than the average human male,
his lengthy six feet of height towered over the
majority of citizens that happened to tread beside him.
His lean structure was normally adorned in clothing as
black as the shadows he hid within, the expensive
material a mere facade that disguised his lack of
steady income. A pair of leather strapped bracers
conceal the expanse of his slender forearms, the upper
surface of either guard littered with miniature
metallic teeth. Buckle covered boots and sleek leather
gloves shroud his feet and hands, completing the
rogue's caliginous attire. Upon first glance a passerby
would have trouble discerning whether this wicked man
was indeed armed, but truth be told his limber
physique held many a hidden weapon.

Character Concept :
Syndre is a cunning street rogue residing in Ravok. Though just a novice compared to the master thieves, he knows well the flow of crime that takes place on the streets and water ways of this city. A witful personality and charming facade are incorporated into his unlawful dealings, making the actual danger of his "occupation" seem distant. Always in a slight intoxication, his addiction to special Sylrian herbs may be holding him back from his true potential as a thief... but he has fun regardless. Stealing from the people of Ravok isn't personal, it's a necessity. Taking their hard earned coin was what he was taught and what he was good at. Everyone wants to live a comfortable life.. Syndre just doesn't want to work for it.

Skills :
Acrobatics 3
Acting 3
Balance 1
Boating 2
Brawling 3
Busking 5 {5 SP}
Climbing 7 {5 SP}
Dagger 14 {5 SP}
Disguise 1
Escape Artist 6 {5 SP}
Fortunetelling 3
Interrogation 2
Intimidation 4
Larceny 24 {5 SP} {15 RB}
Leadership 3
Manipulation 4
Massaging 2
Mathematics 6 {5 SP}
Meditation 1
Observation 7
Persuasion 3
Rhetoric 8
Running 10 {5 SP}
Seduction 6
Sleight of Hand 1
Stealth 10 {5 SP}
Subterfuge 2
Tactics 1
Unarmed Combat 8 {5 SP}
Whip 10 {5 SP}

Lore :
-Ravok Street Crime {SP}
-Sylira Herbs {SP}
-Getting High
-Feeling REALLY Good
-Stealing a Boat
-Stealing a Pipe
-Being a Clever Trickster
-Ravok Canals
-Ravok Bazaar
-How to Change Appearances (Basic)
-Kicking the Kickball
-Kicking the OTHER Balls
-Running as Fast as You Can
-Pretty Girls
-What Butterflies Feel Like
-How it Feels to be a Good Guy
-Judging Distances
-Tricking the Naive
-Remembering a Face
-Lying through your Teeth
-How to put on an Act
-How to take Advantage
-Realizing how Pretty Nyd Is
-Fortune-telling with Cards (what it is)
-Fortune-telling with Cards (how to do it)
-How to Bluff and Bluff Well
-How to be a Charming Flirt
-How to Tell when Nyd is Checking You Out.
-Chair Acrobatics
-Defeating an Army of Sticks
-Not Your Typical Childhood
-Survival of the Fittest
-Proper Running Form
-Teamwork
-Frozen by Fear
-Paying for Your Sins
-Losing Your Parents
-Cassandra's True Form
-Cassandra's Heartless Murder
-Robert Carries A Lot of Weapons
-How to Haggle
-How to Convince Someone to Your Side
-Basics of Simple Leadership
-Basics of Blackmailing
-Basics of Intimidation
-Cassandra is a Stubborn Bit..
-Cassandra is a Sexy Sl..
-Operating a Small Drug Ring
-Chained Ones
-The Shrill Shrieking of a Woman
-Silent Signals for Robert
-How to Easily Agitate a Woman
-How to Use Others as an Advantage
-Simple Street Tactics
-Delivering Killing Blows
-Using Rain and Darkness for Stealth
-What Yukmen Look Like
-Feeling Concern for a Friend
-Avoiding the Light
-Sharing a Smoke
-Guiding to One's Intentions
-Controlling the High
-Toasting Friendship
-Lore of Wasting Cake (Basic)
-Sharing a Kiss
-Avoiding an Answer
-Shot Down
-Giving a Massage
-Getting What You Want
-Picking a Simple Lock
-Forcing a Woman into Submission

Equipment :
-Clothing
(Commoner Outfit) {SP}
(Sash/Leather Gloves/Silk Nightshirt/Pocket Pants/Bladed Boots/Wool Cap)
-Waterskin {SP}
-Backpack {SP}
(Toiletries-Knife-Food-Flint/Steel) {SP}
-Cloth Mask
-Silver Holy Symbol of Akajia {Heirloom}
-Vial of Acid
-Sack (Caltrops)
-Sack (1/3 of Mizas)
-Thieves' Tools
-Average Lock
-Carved Tabacco Pipe
-3 Uncut Gems
-Compartment Book (1/3 of Mizas hidden)

Weapons :
-Cold Iron/Hollow Pommel Dagger
-Whip
-Teethed Gaunlets [Right with Blade Spring]
-Bladed Boots

Family Heirloom :
Silver Holy Symbol of Akajia

Languages :
Fluent- Common
Basic- Sign

Ledger :
44 gm 29 sm (Cashed in Housing SP)

(1/3 of Mizas locked in chest -Average Lock-)
(1/3 of Mizas hidden in compartment book)
(1/3 of Mizas in money pouch)

-45 gm Poor Living Conditions (Winter Season 510 AV)
-24 gm Tarsin's Boarding House
-2 sm Belt (cloth sash)
-5 sm Leather gloves
-6 gm Nightshirt, Silk
-3 sm Empty Sack (x3)
-5 gm Vial of Acid
-3 sm Cloth Mask
-30 gm Thieves' Tools
-8 sm Marbles (10 sq/ft)
-1 gm Caltrops
-40 gm Average Lock
-10 gm Compartment Book
-10 gm Teethed Gaunlets
-20 gm Bladed Boots
-1 gm Leather Whip
-1 sm Wool Cap
-1 sm [Vermin of Ravok Thread]
-4 gm Blade Spring (Underneath right Teethed Gaunlet)
-60 gm Cold Iron/Hollow Pommel Dagger
-45 gm Poor Living Conditions (Spring Season 511 AV)
-24 gm Tarsin's Boarding House
-45 gm Poor Living Conditions (Summer Season 511 AV)
-24 gm Tarsin's Boarding House
-45 gm Poor Living Conditions (Fall Season 511 AV)
-24 gm Tarsin's Boarding House
-45 gm Poor Living Conditions (Winter Season 511 AV)
-24 gm Tarsin's Boarding House
+5 gm [The Chained Ones.... Thread]

Last edited by Syndre on December 26th, 2014, 6:00 am, edited 10 times in total.
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Syndre

Postby Nemesis on December 1st, 2014, 8:07 pm

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Greetings! I'm Nemesis, the DS of Ravok. I've noticed a few problems with your Character Sheet that you should probably take a look at. Until these issues have been resolved, I'm afraid you cannot post IC in any of Mizahar's cities.

Note: I have no idea why this wasn't done long ago, so I apologise but I have to do it now and sort it out. You're past the 50 post mark but your CS has some serious errors in it and it needs to be sorted before you continue to play. As such, skills and whatnot cannot be changed, but you must list which are Starter items and which have been awarded in thread.

  • Please list which of your two Lores are Starter Package (SP)
  • Please list which of your Skills are Starter Package (SP) and which is Racial Bonus (RB)
  • Please list which equipment is part of your Starter Package (SP)
  • If you are renting accommodation, you must pay for it separately from expenses. It is not covered.
  • You do not have to pay expenses if you were not active for a particular season.
  • How do you have 50gm in wages when you have no Storyteller Secrets thread. Where did it come from?
  • If born in 490, your PC would now be turning 24 :)

Once you have fixed what I have asked you to, send me a PM and I will remove this Intervention.

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