[Note by Luminescence] Aurelius Saltwind

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Aurelius Saltwind

Postby Aurelius Saltwind on July 2nd, 2019, 1:44 am

Aurelius Saltwind


Appearance

Race: Svefra
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Birthday: 14, Fall, 499.
Birthplace: The Suvan Sea near Syliras

Appearance: This tall Svefra stands at about 6'2, his peppered brown hair close scraggly beard showing off his young age. His lean swimmer's physique is typical to the Svefra lifestyle with little to distinguish him from others around him. What could likely be seen as atypical is the calm curiosity in his eyes, always looking, taking in everything around him, seeking as much information as possible for his enjoyment.

Character Concept

A man of the world, or at the very least, the sea. Aurelius is one to explore, to see sights, meet people, and to tell the tale of the sea. The way of his people is nomadic, life is quick and death even quicker. He learned this at an early age when his family's ship helped attack a pirate vessel that had been praying on the trade lanes between Kenash and Alvadas, and he saw men and women fight and die, their bodies thrown to the waters for animals to feed on. That horrible image never left his mind, and so when the chance came, he bid farewell to his family, his pod, and set out by himself, his mission clear, see as much as possible and document it all, into the largest chronical ever seen in Mizahar.

Character History

Saltwind never knew his mother, a few months after he'd been born she and many others were lost to a terrible storm. Still, for a child of the sea, this was not much of an issue, the Pod was his father, his mother, sister, brother, all in one. As he grew, Saltwind was raucous, brimming with energy, much like the other children of Laviku, he was swimming as soon as he was able. He learned the trade of his people quickly, as being quick and cunning was the only way to tame the sea. While he learned to pilot a boat and to be part of a crew, which was enough for his pod to survive, He was not much for fishing and hunting instead, becoming a record keeper of sorts, cataloging their essentials and counting their money. It was a chance meeting at Zaltiva that would eventually put him on the path he is currently on. At a cafe one of the customers had put down his book while Saltwind was walking by, without much thought, as the man no longer needed it, he picked up the book and began to read as he walked. That book would turn out to be none other than Kenabelle Wright's tale of circumnavigation. He was enamored with it instantly and read it from front to back, taking it with him to his ship and sailing away with the book in hand.

Language

Fluent Language: Fratava
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: None

Skills

Please list skills in alphabetical order by competency

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Sailing 10 RB, 16 SP 26 Competant
Swimming 24 SP 24 Novice
Writing 10 SP 10 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores:
Lore of History of Zeltiva
Lore of Religion: Laviku

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Kenabelle Wright's tale of circumnavigation

Housing

Location: The Docks

House: Casinor named The Wave Cutter

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


Thread List

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Last edited by Aurelius Saltwind on July 17th, 2019, 4:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Aurelius Saltwind

Postby Luminescence on July 5th, 2019, 2:35 am

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Welcome to Miz, Aurelius! Your CS looks good so far, there are just some details you need to fix before you continue.

*Your age: It's currently summer 519 AV, meaning fall 519 AV hasn't passed yet; because of that, Aurelius should only be 19. Please adjust either your age or birthdate.

*Your history: Your overall history is fine, but please keep in mind what you say in your history has to be reflected in your actual CS; saying he learned how to fish and hunt when you do not have those skills is discouraged. Also, you mention him finding and taking the book on Kenabelle Wright, but that's not listed as your heirloom.

If you don't want to adjust your skills, then please edit your history to avoid claiming skills you don't actually have. Also, unless you want to change your heirloom, even if you say Aurelius found the book you should pay for it; the lore page says it usually costs 20 GM. (Alternatively, you can take it as your heirloom, and pay for the necklace)

*Your housing: Please specify what city you're currently staying in (which I'm guessing is Zeltiva?).

*Reminders: If you haven't already, don't forget to apply in the HD for your gnosis mark from Laviku since all Svefra start with one. Also, you don't have a tavan! It's not necessary, but Svefra may start with a tavan, which is a marine or coastal animal companion. More information regarding tavan can be found on the Svefra lore page.

Once you've made the corrections above, PM me to let me know and I'll remove this intervention. Otherwise, if you have any questions, feel free to PM me or find me in chat!
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