[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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my character for review

Postby AlexanderShade on November 4th, 2012, 5:40 pm

Basic Information

Name: Alexander Shade
Race: Human
Birthday & Age : 23 years
Gender: Male



Physical Description

Alexander stands at around 6'0, weighing 140 pounds, long raven black hair which was tied back, sapphire blue eyes and a slight tan from walking in the sun alot



Character Concept

Alexander is a calculating, manipulative and cunning individual but with a strong sense of justice, despising corruption in all their forms, he also belives all sentient beings shouldnt be ostricized simply for being born a different race so would come to the aid of anyone who needs help despite their race


Character History

Alexander was born in a small town and came from a long line of wizards, though neither of their parents practised outside the home they were skilled, when he turned ten years old his parents began teaching him the art of magic weilding and initiated him into the art of reinamancy, hypnotism and morphing, when he turned 18 the townsfolk found out that his parents were magic users after saving the town from a maruding group of bandits and were subsequently killed for it, it was then that alexander grabbed a few things and run from the town before the people turned against him, making sure to take his family spell book, which was a collection of all the magical knowledge his family had learned over the years, he dreams of being a great wizard like his parents, but he has a long way to go

Training & Skill Points



hypnotism 30/100 - (30pts - starting package)
morphing 26/100 - (10pts - starting package plus racial bonus)
reinmancy 9/100 - (15pts - starting package)


Equipment/Possessions

simple shirt, plain trousers, sensible shoes, a tent, small backpack (Starting Package)
a book containing everything his family has learnt (hierloom)


Ledger

100 gold mizas (Starting coin)

((this is my first character and would very much appreciate any advice and aid anyone can give me, thank you and have a nice day))
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kraken on November 5th, 2012, 5:06 am

Alexander Shade - I've left a note for you on your character sheet. In future, you only need to link to your CS rather than post it here. :)
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Alin Smithe on November 6th, 2012, 6:20 am

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic27105.html

I've finished this draft. I eagerly await the approval.
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Postby Kraken on November 6th, 2012, 4:49 pm

Alin Smithe - Hi Alin! It looks like Sentinel has verified your CS. You're good to go!
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Rinstii on November 11th, 2012, 9:13 pm

Ready for a review, here is my Character Sheet: http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic27258.html
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Postby Torchlight on November 13th, 2012, 1:45 am

Hi Rinstii. :) Thanks for posting your CS. I've posted a note on yours!
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kenept on November 13th, 2012, 8:43 pm

Could you please review my CS?

Thanks,
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Postby Sentinel on November 13th, 2012, 9:13 pm

Kenept, you have a note :) Nothing too big. Was a nice CS overall!
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Karianor on November 14th, 2012, 12:50 am

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Postby Sentinel on November 14th, 2012, 4:35 am

Hey there Karianor, you have a little note :)
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