[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Dariel on November 14th, 2012, 6:24 am

If it was up to me I'd probably tweak and change things until the end of time. But I feel my CS is finally ready to be checked for holes if someone would be so kind.

Please?

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic27341.html

(FYI I still keep it as a WIP because some of the descriptive sections still need adding to pending approval. But all the technical stuff should be done.)
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Torchlight on November 14th, 2012, 8:38 pm

Hi Dariel!

You are allowed to go back and add to your history whenever you like, but please remove the WIP from your CS title if you intend to do RP threads. You can even leave notes in your history and other sections such as [Will be expanded later], or whatever sort of notation you prefer, as these sections are optional anyway. The topic title though must be only your name if the CS is ready for play. :)

Your CS is fine. I've verified it, as you clearly seem to know what you're doing, but I still have one small note. Your ledger is blank, which can lead to some confusion. Please put at least your current balance of 100 kina in some fashion. I know it's in your inventory as well, but your ledger itself is more like a written account of your current wealth.

The rest of it is perfect (and quite aesthetically pleasing)!

Also, please put a link to your CS in your account profile.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Bear on November 14th, 2012, 8:54 pm

Hi! Can you review my alt's CS? It's not grand with pictures or code but hopefully everything is correct.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Vivian Whitevine on November 14th, 2012, 11:12 pm

Hiya~
Did a complete overhaul of my CS, requesting new feedback:
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post213298.html
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Luca Darkstrider on November 15th, 2012, 7:38 am

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Sentinel on November 15th, 2012, 7:16 pm

Bear-

Verified

Vivian-

Note on your CS

Luca-

Verified, but I send you a PM
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Amelia Cross on November 15th, 2012, 8:28 pm

Please review my character sheet. Thanks.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Sshanivenzafir on November 15th, 2012, 8:36 pm

If you could review my character sheet? Please and thank you! :)
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Torchlight on November 15th, 2012, 11:36 pm

Thanks for submitting your CSes!

Amelia Cross - Gorgeous CS. You're all set.
Shanivenzafir - Did I spell that right? You are also good to go! I sent a PM about a small detail. :)
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Ricky Maze on November 16th, 2012, 3:39 am

Remodel is done! There is always more room for improvement I say, but as for now I'll take it as it is.:)

Please review, and enjoy, my cs.:)
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